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ii Contents SPM Examination Format v Part 1: Short Communicative Message 1 • Introduction 2 • Format of an Email 2 • Useful Expressions to Ace the Email 3 • Email to Accept Invitation 4 • Email to Inform 6 • Email to Offer Help 8 • Email to Offer Advice 10 • Email to Offer Suggestions 11 • Email to Express Encouragement 12 • Email to Offer Suggestions 13 • Email to Share an Update 14 • Email to Offer Suggestions 15 • Email to Offer Suggestions 16 • Email to Accept Invitation 17 • Email to Offer Advice 18 • Email to Agree to a Suggestion 19 • Email to Respond to Enquiries 20 • Email to Offer Advice 21 Part 2: Guided Writing 22 • Introduction 23 • Format of an Essay 23 • Useful Expressions to Ace the Essay 24 • Earning Pocket Money 25 • Year-End Class Trip 27 • Ways to Improve Weak Subjects 29 • Visit to Kindness Orphanage 31 • Complaint about Night Market 32 • Social Media Usage Among Teenagers 33 • When Haze Hits Us 34 • Cyberbullying 35 • Safeguarding Our Environment 36 • Organising a Reading Campaign 37 • Students’ Involvement in Co-curricular Activities 38 • Online Games 39 • Students’ Lifestyle 40 • Organising a ‘Planting Trees’ Campaign 41 • Complaints about Restaurants at Housing Area 42 ii A Diag Writing SPM(Cont).indd 2 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:04 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
iii Part 3: Extended Writing 43 • Introduction 44 Articles 44 • Format of an Article 44 • Useful Expressions to Ace the Article 45 • Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers 46 • Night Market in My Area 48 • Dirty Eateries 50 • Give Your Body a Good Workout 52 • Students Working Part-time 53 • My Favourite Spot 54 • Balik Kampung Fever 55 • Ways to Beautify Our School 56 • Let’s Join the English Club 57 • Ways Parents Can Spend Quality Time with Their Children 58 • Interesting Destinations in Malaysia 59 • Ways to Save the Endangered Species 60 • Kidnappers – How to Save Ourselves from Them? 61 • Benefits of Joining the Drama Club 62 • How to Lose Weight the Healthy Way 63 Reviews 64 • Format of a Review 64 • Useful Expressions to Ace the Review of a Restaurant/Café 65 • A Review of a Café 66 • A Review of a Pastime 68 • A Review of a Tuition Centre 70 • A Review of a Holiday Resort 72 • A Review of a Restaurant 73 • A Review of a Mobile Phone 74 • A Review of a Jogging Area 75 • A Review of a Public Transport 76 • A Review of a Hospital 77 • A Review of a Book 78 • A Review of a Volleyball Training Centre 79 • A Review of a Petting Zoo 80 • A Review of a Bookshop 81 • A Review of a TV Series 82 • A Review of a Laptop 83 Reports 84 • Format of a Report 84 • Useful Expressions to Ace the Report 85 • Poor Attendance at Club Meetings 86 • Disciplinary Problems Faced by the School 88 • Visit to Taman Negara, Pahang 90 • Trip to Cameron Highlands 92 • PTA Get-Together 93 • Visit to an Old Folks’ Home 94 • Poor Conditions of an Apartment 95 • A Fire 97 • Performance of the English Paper in the Recent SPM Examination 99 • Minutes of the Cultural Club Meeting 100 • Teachers’ Day Celebration 101 • A Book Report 102 • Poor Conditions of the School Canteen 103 • Trip to Paya Indah Wetlands 104 • An Accident in Genting Highlands 105 A Diag Writing SPM(Cont).indd 3 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:04 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
iv Stories (Narrative Compositions) 106 • Format of a Story 106 • Useful Expressions to Ace the Essay 107 • It Began Just Like Any Normal Day 108 • Hope 110 • Save the Child 112 • My Greatest Joy 114 • A Miracle 115 • An Accident 116 • Lost in the Jungle 117 • An Unexpected Encounter 118 • A Narrow Escape 119 • Fighting for Her Life 120 • Reunited 121 • Going Home 122 • A Lesson Learnt 123 • A Surprise 124 • An Incident that Changed My Life 125 Other Types of Writing 126 Informal Letters 127 • Format of an Informal Letter 127 • Letter to Offer Advice 128 • Letter of Thanks 130 • Letter to Keep in Touch 132 • Letter to Express Encouragement 134 • Letter to Extend an Invitation 135 • Letter to Offer Advice 136 • Letter to Offer Congratulations 137 • Letter to Offer Consolation 138 Formal Letters 139 • Format of a Formal Letter 139 • Letter of Enquiry 140 • Letter of Excuse 142 • Letter of Enquiry 144 • Letter to Seek Permission 146 • Letter to Seek Permission 147 • Letter of Complaint 148 • Letter of Complaint 149 • Letter of Request 150 Speeches and Talks 151 • Format of a Speech/Talk 151 • Importance of Health Care and Personal Hygiene 152 • Tips on Attending Lectures at University or College 154 • Keeping Safe During the Haze 156 • Pathway to Success 158 • Farewell Speech 159 • Benefits of Exercise 160 • The Green Club 161 • How to Reduce Stress 162 SPM Model Test 1 163 SPM Model Test 2 165 Answers 167 A Diag Writing SPM(Cont).indd 4 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:04 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
1 Part 1: Short Communicative Message A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 1 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
2 Part 1 Short Communicative Message Introduction • This question is known as Part 1 for Paper 2 (Writing). • This question is mandatory for all students to answer in the SPM English 1119 paper. • For this task, students are required to respond to a short email or message from someone whom the writer knows in about 80 words. • The language, tone and style are informal and casual. • When writing, students should follow the specified format. Format of an Email ➊ Recipient To Recipient’s email address ❷ Brief subject that summarises the content of the email Subject Purpose of Writing the Email ❸ Salutation ❹ Body of the email ❺ Closing remark ❻ Signing off ❼ Sender’s name Hi Akasha, How are you? My class is planning a picnic on Bye. See you soon. Your friend, A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 2 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
3 Useful Expressions to Ace the Email Salutation • Hello, • Hi, To greet/ opening remark • How are you? • How have you been? • Glad to hear from you. To suggest • I would suggest that … • It is a good idea that … • Why don’t you …? To advise • I feel that you should ... • It would be good if … • I think you need to … To give opinion • In my opinion … • I think … • I feel that … To agree • That is a good idea. • I agree with … • You have a good point … To justify • This is because … • That is a good idea because … • … due to … To close email/ closing remark • See you soon. • Write soon. • Goodbye! To sign off • Your friend, • Your cousin, • Best regards, A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 3 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
4 Sample Question 1 You received the following email from your cousin, Albert who has just moved to your hometown. Hi, Next Friday is a public holiday. Let’s meet up for lunch. Which restaurant would you recommend? I am still new here and would like to go around the town after lunch. Where can we go? What can we do there? I hope to hear from you soon. Bye! Write an email to your cousin in about 80 words. Point 1: Recommend a restaurant • Name of the restaurant • Popular • Speciality Point 2: Where can we go? • Botanical Garden • Newly opened Point 3: What can we do there? • Take a walk • Enjoy the greenery • Take photos Introduction • Salutation • Introduction – Great idea Email to Accept Invitation Body Closing • Closing remark – See you! A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 4 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
5 Sample Email 1 To: [email protected] Subject: Lunch on Friday Hi Albert, It’s nice to hear from you. It is a great idea to have lunch together on Friday. I would recommend The Buzz as it is a popular restaurant among young people. The Buzz serves the best pasta in town. After lunch, we can go to Botanical Garden. It is a newly opened park. We can take a walk around the garden and enjoy the scenery. We can take some photos there too. I am sure you will have a great time there. See you soon. ❺ Your cousin, ❻ Jasmine ❼ ❶ ❷ ❸ ❹ A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 5 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
6 You received the following email from Yiyun who is your classmate in school. Hi Nabila, I heard from Puan Leela that you are being quarantined at home with chickenpox. How are you feeling now? Who is taking care of you? The class is very quiet without you. Is there anything that I can take for you from school? Hope to hear from you soon. Take care. Write an email to your classmate in about 80 words. Point 1: Express feeling/condition • Fatigued and drowsy • Feverish • Itchiness frustrates me Point 2: Who is taking care of you? • Mother caring for me • Ensure medicine is taken Point 3: What can I take for you? • Science file • Need it to complete science project Introduction • Salutation • Introduction – Thank you for inquiring – Glad to hear from you Email to Inform Body Closing • Closing remark – See you soon Sample Question 2 A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 6 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
7 Sample Email 2 To: [email protected] Subject: Thanks for Your Concern Hi Yiyun, Thank you for inquiring about me. I am so glad to hear from you. I am fatigued and drowsy most of the time. Sometimes, I would feel feverish. The thing that frustrates me the most is the itchiness. My mother has been my Florence Nightingale. She takes care of me and makes sure I take my medication diligently. Thank you for offering to help me. Could you get my science file from Madam Lim? I need it to complete the science project. See you soon. ❺ Your friend, ❻ Nabila ❼ ❶ ❷ ❸ ❹ A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 7 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
8 You received the following email from Delilah who is your new neighbour. Hi Liana, I am thinking of going to the library this Friday. But I do not know where it is. Can you come along with me? I want to do my homework there. Can you help me with the homework too? Then, I’ll treat you to lunch. You can bring me to your favourite restaurant in town. See you. Bye! Write an email to Delilah in about 80 words. Point 1: Express agreement • Free on Friday • Can go along with you • Stone’s throw from school Point 2: Can you help me with the homework? • Sure • I have some homework too • Can do together Point 3: Bring to favourite restaurant • Mamak restaurant • Food delicious • Not pricey Introduction • Salutation • Introduction – Great to hear from you Email to Offer Help Body Closing • Closing remark – See you on Friday! Sample Question 3 A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 8 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
9 Sample Email 3 To: [email protected] Subject: Going to the Library Hello Delilah, It’s great to hear from you. I’m free on Friday, so I’ll be able to go along with you to the library. It’s just a stone’s throw from my school. Sure, I can help you with your homework. I have some homework to complete too. We can do them together. After that, we can go to a mamak restaurant. I hope you enjoy eating mamak food. The food is delicious and the best part is, the food is not pricey. See you on Friday! ❺ Your neighbour, ❻ Liana ❼ ❶ ❷ ❸ ❹ A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 9 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
10 You received an email from your brother who is studying in a boarding school in another state. Hello, How are you? My examination is coming very soon. I am feeling a bit anxious. What should I do? Do you think it will be good to buy extra revision books? What books should I buy? Looking forward to your reply. Write an email to your brother in about 80 words. Point 1: Feeling anxious • Don’t worry too much • Does not help • Learn to relax Point 2: Should I buy revision books? • Good idea • Can be a supplementary • Sufficient practice Point 3: What books should I buy? • Have ample practices and exercises • Come with concept map – easy revision Introduction • Salutation • Introduction – Fine – Doing well Email to Offer Advice Body Closing • Closing remark – All the best – See you soon MODEL 1 A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 10 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
11 You received an email from your sister who is studying in another town. Hello, How are you? My class is planning a trip for the weekend. I am put in charge of it. I was thinking of a camping trip. What do you think? What can we do there? And should we bring anything special? Please reply soon. Write an email to your sister in about 80 words. Point 1: Reasons for a camping trip • Good to spend time with nature – National Park, Pahang • Away from the hustle and bustle – city • Time to relax Point 2: What can they do there? • Participate in a lot of activities • Jungle trekking • Discover the flora and fauna • Visit Orang Asli settlement Point 3: What to bring along? • A good pair of trainers • Mosquito repellent • Some warm clothing – could be chilly at night Introduction • Salutation • Introduction – Fine – Feel great Email to Offer Suggestions Body Closing • Closing remark – Bye – Enjoy your trip MODEL 2 A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 11 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
12 You received an email from your cousin about a cooking competition. Hi, How’s life? I read an advertisement about a cooking competition. It is called Junior Dessert Chefz competition. I am not sure if I should participate. What do you think? What dessert do you suggest I prepare for the competition? Do you think my parents would allow me to take part? Hope to hear from you again. Write an email to your cousin in about 80 words. Point 1: Should I participate? • Should participate • Good in preparing desserts • Have confidence in you • Look forward – desserts Point 2: What dessert to prepare? • Signature dessert • Blueberry cheesecake • Baked – many times – easy Point 3: Do you think my parents would allow? • Very sure they would • Encourage you • Feel proud Introduction • Salutation • Introduction – Fine – Good opportunity Email to Express Encouragement Body Closing • Closing remark – Challenge yourself – See you soon MODEL 3 A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 12 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
13 You received an email from your friend, Martha who lives in Port Dickson. Hi, How are you? My parents have finally agreed to go for a trip abroad. The good news is that they let me choose where I want to go. Where would you suggest? And how long the trip should be? What are the attractions? Please write soon. Bye. Write an email to your friend in about 80 words. Point 1: Suggest a place abroad • Suggest to go to a hill resort • Different from where you live in Port Dickson • Chiang Mai – Thailand Point 2: Trip duration • Four days and three nights • Should be able to cover most of the interesting places Point 3: Attractions of the place • Definitely enjoy the stunning sunrise on the mountain top • The elephant shows • Visit the hill tribe villages Introduction • Salutation • Introduction – Fine – Happy to hear Email to Offer Suggestions Body Closing • Closing remark – Have fun – Write again soon MODEL 4 A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 13 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
14 You received an email from Joey, your ex-classmate, about your friends. Hi, How’s everyone? I have moved to the new town for two weeks and I am missing our neighbourhood. How is our park? Has the playground been upgraded? Do you think many people will go there now? Write to me soon. Write an email to your ex-classmate in about 80 words. Point 1: How is the park? • Track upgraded • Grass cut and trees trimmed • Place to chill Point 2: Has the playground been upgraded? • In good shape • Swings, slides and jungle gym finally repaired Point 3: Do you think many people will go there? • Safe to jog • Many parking spaces Introduction • Salutation • Introduction – Fine – How is the new place Email to Share an Update Body Closing • Closing remark – Take care of yourself – See you soon MODEL 5 A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 14 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
15 You received an email from your cousin, Tilaga who lives in Tampin. Hi Navin, I came across an advertisement calling for teenagers to offer volunteer services to the society. I’m interested to contribute. Can you suggest which service should I volunteer? Whom should I contact? How often should I volunteer my service? Please reply soon. Bye. Write an email to your cousin in about 80 words. Point 1: What services to volunteer? • Love animals – animal shelter • Kind and patient – serve meals to the homeless Point 2: Whom to contact? • Look up the relevant websites • Inquire for more information Point 3: How often to volunteer? • Still a student – volunteer – the weekend • During school holidays – can spend longer hours Introduction • Salutation • Introduction – Fine – Happy to hear Email to Offer Suggestions Body Closing • Closing remark – Eager – Write again soon MODEL 6 A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 15 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
16 You received an email from your friend, Yi Ting who is studying in a residential school. Hi Ryan, International Earth Day is around the corner. Miss Leena asked us to come up with a programme which involves the whole class. What programme do you suggest? How are we going to carry out the activity? Where can we carry out the activity? Hope to hear from you soon. Bye! Write an email to your friend in about 80 words. Point 1: Suggest a programme • 3R programme • Cut down amount of waste we throw away Point 2: How to carry out the programme? • Set a whole week – collect recyclable items • Prepare recycling bins • Sort the items • Send the items to a recycling centre Point 3: Where can we carry out the project? • In school – beside the recycling cabin Introduction • Salutation • Introduction – International Earth Day Email to Offer Suggestions Body Closing • Closing remark – Excited – Write again soon MODEL 7 A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 16 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
17 You received an email from your friend, Jing Ru. Hi Elyani, I’m so glad that the final exam is over. Let’s have a movie night at my house this Saturday. What do you suggest we watch? Who else shall we invite? Let’s buy some snacks too. What do you think we should get? Please reply soon. Write an email to your friend in about 80 words. Point 1: Suggest a movie • Horror or comedy • Horror – fun – can be quite riveting – watching with friends • Comedy – distress after exam – need a good laugh Point 2: Who else to invite • Call few close friends • Good opportunity to bond Point 3: What snacks to get? • Tidbits and drinks • Prepare some finger food and fruits Introduction • Salutation • Introduction – Happy – exam is over Email to Accept Invitation Body Closing • Closing remark – Looking forward MODEL 8 A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 17 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
18 You received an email from your friend, Kate. Hi Lucas, Nice to see you the other day. How is your dog, Leo, doing? Guess what? I just got a new pet, a kitten. Do you want to name her? I have no experience with pets. Can you give me some advice? Looking forward to your reply. Write an email to your friend in about 80 words. Point 1: Explain how Joy is doing • Fine • Put on a bit of weight • Learnt a few new tricks Point 2: Suggest a name • Joy • It is a good name • It would bring joy to your life Point 3: Advice on how to take care of pets • Feed the kitten once or twice a day • Bathe the kitten once every 4 to 6 weeks • Never give your cat onions Introduction • Salutation • Introduction – Nice to see you too Email to Offer Advice Body Closing • Closing remark – Take care MODEL 9 A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 18 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
19 You received an email from your cousin, Sapura. Hello Saliha, How are you? Mum said hi. Would you like to do a duet with me in a singing competition? Mum said you have a good voice. Will you and your family come next month for the family gathering? What would your family bring? Miss you. Write an email to Sapura in about 80 words. Point 1: Respond to Sapura’s mum • Say ‘hi’ to Aunty Rogayah • Have not called her in a while • Miss her Point 2: Doing a duet • It is a good idea to do a duet • But nervous at the same time • Hope we win Point 3: Family gathering • Of course, we will come • We will bring food as planned • You and I are in charge of cooking the chicken Introduction • Salutation • Introduction – Doing fine Email to Agree to a Suggestion Body Closing • Closing remark – Miss you too MODEL 10 A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 19 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
20 You received an email from a new friend in school, Haslina. Hello Ervina, Remember me? We met yesterday at the canteen. Let’s meet during our break at the canteen tomorrow. Can you tell me which food is delicious? After that, could you show me around the school? Usually during breaks, what do you do? Looking forward to your reply. Write an email to your new friend in about 80 words. Point 1: Meet at the school canteen • Sure • Have to be there fast • Get a place Point 2: Suggest delicious food at the canteen • Nasi lemak and chicken rice • They are so delicious • Cheap Point 3: Show around school • Sure, I could show you around • There’s a herb garden behind the laboratory • Show you my favourite place Introduction • Salutation • Introduction – Of course, I remember you Email to Respond to Enquiries Body Closing • Closing remark – See you MODEL 11 A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 20 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
21 You received an email from a friend in school, Shoba. Hi Maggie, I heard you are not well. Are you getting better? I need your opinion. Susan and I are not in good terms. What should I do? I also have some problems with Maths. Maybe we can meet over lunch this weekend? You choose a place. Hope to hear from you soon! Write an email to Shoba in about 80 words. Point 1: Suggest ways to be friends with Susan again • Try talking to her • Apologise • Treat her lunch Point 2: Suggest solutions • Find out which part you do not understand • Ask teacher • Do a lot of exercises Point 3: Meeting up for lunch • Sure • Can catch up • Meet at Kinabalu Restaurant Introduction • Salutation • Introduction – I am fine – Just a mild fever Email to Offer Advice Body Closing • Closing remark – See you MODEL 12 A Diag Writing SPM(Part 1).indd 21 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:03 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
22 Part 2: Guided Writing A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 22 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
23 Part 2 Guided Writing Introduction • Part 2 of Paper 2 (Writing) consists of 1 question of guided writing. • It is a compulsory question and students are required to write the essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. • The tone, language and style used depend on the tasks. Format of an Essay ❶ Title ❷ Introduction Body ❸ Point 1 ❹ Point 2 ❺ Point 3 ❻ Conclusion/ Closing Earning Pocket Money Holidays are the time that all students look forward to There are several ways to supplement pocket money. I love babysitting as I have a knack in handling children However, the place where I can work is limited. I will save the money that I earn A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 23 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
24 Useful Expressions to Ace the Essay Introduction • first of all • to begin with Generalising • on the whole • in general • in most/many cases • as a rule Giving examples • for example / for instance • such as / including • what I mean is • in particular / particularly Making exceptions • apart from • except Giving reasons • because • as / since • because of • due to Consequences • therefore • hence • as a result • consequently Personal point of view • I think that • in my opinion • from my experience • I firmly believe • I am convinced that Summarising and drawing conclusion • finally • in conclusion / to conclude • in short • to sum up A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 24 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
25 Sample Question 1 Your friends have been discussing how to earn some pocket money during the school holidays and your teacher has asked you to write an essay about how you would earn your pocket money. In your essay, you should write about: • what you would like to do • reasons for your choice • the place where you can work Use all the notes above and give reasons for your point of view. Write your essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. Point 1: What I like to do • Babysitting children Point 2: Reasons for choice • Good in handling children • Love kids • Develop a sense of responsibility Point 3: Where I can work • Around the neighbourhood Introduction • Holidays • Time to earn pocket money Earning Pocket Money Body Closing • What I can do with the pocket money A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 25 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
26 Sample Essay 1 ❶ ❷ ❸ ❺ ❻ ❹ Earning Pocket Money Most students associate the holidays with celebrations and relaxation. However, it can also be a good time to make some money. There are several ways to earn pocket money such as doing a part-time job at a fast-food outlet or tutoring kids. As for me, I would choose to babysit children. I love babysitting as I have a knack in handling children. I love them. Besides that, babysitting helps me to develop a sense of responsibility. I would be accountable for their safety and well-being. However, I do not know how to drive. Hence, I can only take care of kids for families in my neighbourhood. I will save the money to buy a laptop when I go to college. I will also set aside a small amount for the things I like. In sum, earning my own pocket money gives me a sense of independence and freedom. A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 26 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
27 Sample Question 2 You and your friends have been discussing the end-of-year class trip and your teacher has asked you to write an essay about where you would prefer to go. In your essay, you should write about: • the date and duration • the activities planned • reasons for your choice Use all the notes above and give reasons for your point of view. Write your essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. Introduction • State place of preference – Kuala Gandah Elephant Sanctuary • Date and duration Closing • Proposed • Summarise reasons Year-End Class Trip Body Point 1: Activity 1 • Watch video – understanding the work conducted at the sanctuary • Abandoned and rescued wild elephants • Relocates – trains elephants Point 2: Activity 2 • Feed elephants • Watch staff groom elephants Point 3: Reasons • Never been • Better understanding • Good learning experience A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 27 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
28 ❶ ❷ ❸ ❹ ❺ ❻ Sample Essay 2 Year-End Class Trip I would prefer to visit the Kuala Gandah Elephant Sanctuary located in Lanchang, Pahang. This place is a popular tourist destination. 17 October is a suitable date as our examination would have ended. The duration should be 2 days and 1 night, enough time for us to explore the sanctuary. There will be some interesting activities such as a video presentation to give us a better understanding of work conducted at the sanctuary. Besides that, we will learn how the abandoned and rescued wild elephants are relocated and trained into working elephants. Another activity is to feed the elephants with peanuts and sugarcanes. Then, we will watch how the staff groom the elephants to get off mud and vermin. Most of us have never actually been to an elephant sanctuary. So, this would definitely be an enriching experience. Therefore, I would propose a trip to the Kuala Gandah Elephant Sanctuary. vermin – small animals and insects Vocabulary A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 28 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
29 Sample Question 3 Your friends have been discussing how to improve the subjects that they are weak in during online learning periods and your teacher has asked you to write an essay on how you can improve on the weak subjects. In your essay, you should write about: • what subjects you are weak in • why you are weak in those subjects • how to improve in the subjects Use all the notes above and give reasons for your point of view. Write your essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. Introduction • Contagious nature of Covid-19 • Online learning is introduced Closing • Hope scientists find a cure for Covid-19 • Go back to normal life Ways to Improve Weak Subjects Body Problems • Mathematics – needs a lot of explanation and practice • Science – needs us to do experiments • English – needs to be done in a real class Solutions • Adapt to the new way of learning • Do a lot of exercises • Always ask the teacher if we have problems A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 29 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
30 Sample Essay 3 Ways to Improve Weak Subjects Due to the contagious nature of Covid-19, our government has introduced online learning so that students can learn while staying at home. However, I have been weak in Mathematics, Science and English. With online learning, the situation gets worse. There are a few reasons why I am weak in these subjects. Mathematics needs a lot of explanation and practice, Science needs us to do experiments, and English needs to be done in a real class. Fortunately, there are a few ways to improve the situation. We can adapt to the new way of learning, do a lot of exercises and always ask the teacher if we have problems. I hope that the scientists would eventually find a cure for the disease so that all of us can go back to our normal lives and we can carry on with face-to-face learning without the fear of the disease. ❶ ❷ ❸ ❹ ❺ ❻ A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 30 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
31 The members of the school Interact Club have been planning to visit the Kindness Orphanage in Taiping and your teacher has asked you to write an essay about the plan. In your essay, you should write about: • the proposed date and time • things to bring and prepare • activities to do Use all the notes above and give your suggestions. Write your essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. MODEL 1 Introduction • Visiting Kindness Orphanage • Part of Interact Club’s programmes Visit to Kindness Orphanage Body Closing • Hope the preparation and the programme run smoothly Point 1: Proposed date and time • During the weekend • The date and time Point 2: Things to bring and prepare • Prepare lunch and tea • Buy essential groceries • Get some snacks • Gifts for games Point 3: Activities to do • Provide lunch and tea • Games • Storytelling and singalong A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 31 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
32 Your friends staying in the same neighbourhood have been expressing their dissatisfaction with the night market in your housing area and your teacher has asked you to write an essay about the problems created by the night market. In your essay, you should write about: • the problems that arise • the inconveniences caused • suggestions to overcome the problems Use all the notes above and give reasons for your point of view. Write your essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. MODEL 2 Introduction Dissatisfaction and annoyance about the night market • Dissatisfaction and annoyance about the night market • Causes many problems and inconvenience Complaint about Night Market Body Closing • Hope the problems can be overcome – does not cause unpleasantness to the residents Problems • Many stalls along the main road – obstruct traffic – traffic comes to a standstill • Noise – loud music – vendors shouting • Dirty and smelly neighbourhood – irresponsible vendors and market goers – dispose of garbage indiscriminately Inconveniences • Traffic congestion – working parents reach home late • Noisy and boisterous crowd intolerable at night • Create eyesore and unbearable stench Suggestions • Relocate stalls • Advise hawkers to lower voice and music • Fine irresponsible vendors A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 32 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
33 You and your friends have been talking about teenagers and the use of social media and your teacher has asked you to write an essay on social media usage among teenagers. In your essay, you should write about: • social media sites • the reasons for using social media • how to stay safe on social media Use all the notes above and give reasons for your point of view. Write your essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. MODEL 3 Introduction • Today, most teenagers are on social media • Part of their life • Important to stay safe on social media Social Media Usage Among Teenagers Body Closing • May be the greatest platform to stay in touch and connected – practise caution • Better be safe than sorry Point 1: Social media sites • Instagram • TikTok • Facebook Point 2: Reasons for using social media • Strengthen friendship – interact and communicate with ease • Feel less isolated – have sense of belonging • Fun and creative Point 3: Stay safe on social media • Not reveal personal information – may be easier for hacker to use your information • Be selective with friend requests – beware of unknown requests or strangers • Be careful of what you share – anything you post can be shared A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 33 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
34 Your friends have been discussing how the haze hits us and your teacher has asked you to write about the haze. In your essay, you should write about: • the causes of haze • the effects on health • what to do during haze Use all the notes above and give reasons for your point of view. Write your essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. MODEL 4 Introduction • Definition: An atmospheric condition – particles, smoke, dust, moisture suspend in air • Decreases visibility – harmful to health When Haze Hits Us Body Closing • Haze hits us during drought season • Necessary to understand – dangers of haze • precaution – safeguard health Causes • Open burning – occurring in the country • Pollution from factory and smoke from industry • Forest fire – during drought season Effects • Affecting the respiratory tract and eyes • Throat irritation – sore throat • Conjunctivitis – irritation of the eyes • Lung tissue inflammation and scarring – cough – feel breathless What to do during haze • Cut down outdoor activities • Wear mask when outdoors • People with respiratory illness and heart disease – stay indoors • Drink lots of water – eat more vegetables and fruit A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 34 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
35 You and your friends have been talking about cyberbullying and your teacher has asked you to write an essay on cyberbullying. In your essay, you should write about: • examples of cyberbullying • the effects of cyberbullying • steps to stop cyberbullying Use all the notes above and give your suggestions. Write your essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. MODEL 5 Introduction • Common social issue • Happens everywhere and to anyone • Name calling, online harassment, threats, cruel messages Cyberbullying Body Closing • Difficult to stop • Not be discouraged • Able to deal – situation better Point 1: Effects of cyberbullying • Victims will feel scared • Are at a loss and helpless • Low self-esteem – dare not speak out • Suffered emotionally and mentally Point 2: Tips to stop cyberbullying • Talk to an adult – parents – teachers – aware – situation • Make a report – police – save the evidence Point 3: Tips to stop cyberbullying • Do not respond to the emails/posts • Ignore – not bothered • Discourage the bully • May leave you A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 35 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
36 You and your friends are discussing how we can safeguard our environment. Your teacher has asked you to write an essay on how you would help save the environment. In your essay, you should write about: • what is happening to our environment • how man has caused the destruction of our environment • what you would do to save the environment Use all the notes above and give reasons for your point of view. Write your essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. MODEL 6 Introduction • Environment is deteriorating – pollution rampant – haze – other environment disasters • Our responsibility – protect – preserve Safeguarding Our Environment Body Closing • Safeguarding – environment – requires commitment • Top priority – world better place – future generation Point 1: How man caused the destruction • Race of advancement – pollution – increase vehicles – factory fumes • Deforestation – large areas of forest – cut down indiscriminately • Slash and burn farming – contributed Point 2: What I can do to safeguard • Practise 3Rs – reduce, reuse, recycle • Reduce the amount of rubbish • Reduce the consumption of paper Point 3: What I can do to safeguard • Monitor the usage of water – electricity • Switch off – not in use • Use energy-saving bulbs – washing machines – full load A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 36 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
37 You and your friends are planning to organise a reading campaign in your school. Your teacher has asked you to write an essay about how you would prepare for the campaign. In your essay, you should write about: • where and when the campaign will be held • what preparation is needed • reasons for organising the reading campaign Use all the notes above and give reasons for your point of view. Write your essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. MODEL 7 Introduction • Not many students like to read • Find it a chore – boring • Need to instill – reading habit • Organise reading campaign – • In conjunction with World Reading Day Organising a Reading Campaign Body Closing • A good habit – many benefits • Hope campaign – help develop reading habit • Campaign will be a success Point 1: Preparations needed • Ask permission – organise campaign • Invite – well-known authors – guests • Prepare the venue • Task force team – oversee the organisation • Set up committee member • Promote the campaign Point 2: Reasons for campaign • A good habit – benefits • Help boost their language proficiency • Learn new vocabulary – structures • Help in the studies • Strengthen their language command Point 3: Reasons for campaign • Broaden their critical thinking skills • Discuss books with others – give opinions • Analyse the details and evaluate things better A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 37 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
38 You and your friends are discussing the co-curricular activities in your school. Your teacher has asked you to write an essay about the students’ involvement in co-curricular activities. In your essay, you should write about: • the types of co-curricular activities available in your school • which co-curricular activity you would join • the advantages of co-curricular activities Use all the notes above and give reasons for your point of view. Write your essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. MODEL 8 Introduction • Students – encouraged to be involved in co-curricular activities • School will be mundane • School life is not just about academic Students’ Involvement in Co-curricular Activities Body Closing • Indeed beneficial • Learn a lot of things • Build their characters – gain knowledge • Encourage to join co-curricular activities Point 1: Types of activities • Cater – for all students • Theory and practical • Three types – uniform bodies such as cadet police, scouts, etc. • Sports clubs – badminton, hockey, netball, etc. • Society clubs – chess, drama, Science, etc. Point 2: Activity I would join • I would like to join sports club • Enjoy, play and fun • Spend too much time studying • Relax and relieve stress Point 3: Advantages of co-curricular activities • Learn new skills – Not taught in classroom – More in detail such as photography • Interact with others – Make new friends – Widen social circle – Same interest A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 38 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
39 You and your friends have been talking about online games and your teacher has asked you to write an essay on online games. In your essay, you should write about: • examples of online games • effects of playing online games • ways to avoid online game addiction Use all the notes above and give your suggestions. Write your essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. MODEL 9 Introduction • Modern society – modern gadgets • A lot of technological advancement – games Online Games Body Closing • It takes all parties to stop online game addiction from happening • It takes a village to raise a child Point 1: Examples of online games • A lot of online games – free download and can be downloaded with a price • PUBG • Mobile Legends • Fortnight Point 2: Effects of playing online games • Addiction • Health at risk • Do not socialise Point 3: Ways to avoid online game addiction • Limit screen time • Parental involvement A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 39 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
40 You and your friends are discussing healthy lifestyle and your teacher has asked you to write an essay on students’ lifestyle. In your essay, you should write about: • students’ lifestyle nowadays • effects of unhealthy lifestyle • ways to have a healthy lifestyle Use all the notes above and give reasons for your point of view. Write your essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. MODEL 10 Introduction • Students nowadays are busy • School work, extra co-curricular activities and social media • Sometimes, they forget about their health and do not lead a healthy lifestyle Students’ Lifestyle Body Closing • Increase the awareness of leading a healthy lifestyle • Should have a balanced life although the students are busy Point 1: Students’ lifestyle nowadays • Lack of exercise • Too much time spent on screen • Not eating well Point 2: Effects of unhealthy lifestyle • Obesity • Eye problems • Easy to get diseases Point 3: Ways to have a healthy lifestyle • More exercise • Eat healthy foods • Have a balanced life – moderation in everything A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 40 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
41 You and your friends are planning to organise a ‘Planting Trees’ campaign and your teacher has asked you to write an essay about how you would plan the campaign. In your essay, you should write about: • when and where the campaign will be held • what preparation is needed • reasons for organising the ‘Planting Trees’ campaign Use all the notes above and give reasons for your point of view. Write your essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. MODEL 11 Introduction • It is important to plant trees – reduce greenhouse effects • People are now busy with their life – forget to plant trees • In conjunction with Earth Green Day Organising a ‘Planting Trees’ Campaign Body Closing • All students, parents and teachers will participate • The campaign would be a great success • School’s environment will be greener and more beautiful Point 1: When and where the campaign will be held • 2 months’ time • School compound – each class will be given an area around the school to plant trees Point 2: What preparation is needed • Organise committee members – each will have a different task – Ask permission from school to carry out the campaign – Invite speakers – Allocate areas for each class – Prepare a budget to buy trees – Promote the campaign Point 3: Reasons for organising the campaign • To instill habit of planting trees among the students, parents and teachers • To make school compound greener A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 41 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
42 Your friends who are staying at the same area have been expressing their dissatisfaction with a few restaurants in the area and your teacher has asked you to write an essay about the problems arisen because of the restaurants. In your essay, you should write about: • the problems that arise • the inconveniences caused • suggestions to overcome the problems Use all the notes above and give your suggestions. Write your essay in 125 – 150 words in an appropriate style. MODEL 12 Introduction • Housing areas should be harmonious and peaceful • The restaurants have made residents’ lives miserable Complaints about Restaurants at Housing Area Body Closing • Hope – people and the restaurant owners could work this out • The situation – could be better and more comfortable to live in Problems • No parking space is provided – customers park wherever they want • Noisy – people yelling, karaoke session • Smelly • Dirty Inconveniences • Traffic congestion – slows down traffic – makes road users angry • Noisy – hard to sleep • Smelly – garbage is not disposed of according to SOP • Dirty – kitchen areas are not cleaned properly – rats everywhere Suggestions • Relocate the restaurants • No karaoke session • Restaurants should close as early as 10 p.m. • Fine irresponsible restaurant owners A Diag Writing SPM(Part 2).indd 42 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 5:00 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
43 Part 3: Extended Writing A Diag Writing SPM(Part 3).indd 43 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 4:59 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
44 Part 3 Extended Writing Introduction • In Part 3 of Paper 2 (Writing), the students must complete one of the three tasks given to them. • The possible text types consist of: – an article – a review – a report – a story • Each task contains about two or three prompts related to the topic. Candidates are expected to use all the prompts given and elaborate based on the given prompts. • Candidates are required to write the essay in 200 – 250 words in an appropriate style. • The tone, language and style used depend on the tasks. Articles • An article is a factual writing on a specific topic. It may appear in: – the newspaper – newsletter – magazines – the Internet – bulletin • An article is usually about current events, so the students must have good general knowledge. Students also may sometimes need to provide information or give suggestions to the reader. • Always use the present tense when writing an article and do not forget to use linkers where necessary. • When writing an article, the tone, language and style can be less formal. You can use ‘we’ and ‘us’ to make a connection with readers so that the readers may feel included in what you are writing about. Your article should be interesting and able to capture and sustain the readers’ interest. Format of an Article The Advantages of Computer Living in a technological world means we cannot escape from using computers. It is very easy for the students to do their assignments if they have a computer. Next, Lastly, In conclusion, it is evident that computers ❷ Introduction ❸ Body ❹ Conclusion ❶ Title of article Elaboration of points A Diag Writing SPM(Part 3).indd 44 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 4:59 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
45 Useful Expressions to Ace the Article Introduction • first of all • to begin with Generalising • on the whole • in general • in most / many cases • as a rule Giving examples • for example / for instance • such as / including • what I mean is • in particular / particularly Making exceptions • apart from • except Giving reasons • because • as / since • because of • due to Consequences • therefore • hence • as a result • consequently Linkers • firstly • secondly • lastly • another point is • in addition Summarising and drawing conclusion • finally • in conclusion / to conclude • in short • to sum up A Diag Writing SPM(Part 3).indd 45 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 4:59 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
46 Sample Question 1 Write your answer in 200 – 250 words in an appropriate style. Computers are a common device nowadays. You see this notice on the board outside the school library. Point 1: For assignments • Easy to do research • Attractive presentations Point 2: Gain knowledge • Surf the Internet – increase knowledge • Helps in studies – subjects taught in school Point 3: Addiction to pornography and online games • Pop-ups – exposed to pornography • Addicted to online games – neglect studies Conclusion • Computer – useful for students – many ways • Gold mine – information – entertainment – numerous uses • Be careful – never misuse Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers Body Introduction • Basic necessity for us • Do various things • Especially beneficial for students Articles wanted! Computers – Advantages and Disadvantages • What is your experience using it? • What are the advantages? • What are the disadvantages? The best article will be put up on our bulletin board. Write your article. A Diag Writing SPM(Part 3).indd 46 PENERBIT 17/03/2023 4:59 PM ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.