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Chong YS
Audrey Lynn Raj
CONTENTS
Part 1: Short Communicative Message
A EMAILS C INFORMAL LETTERS
Introduction 3 Introduction 13
1 Online Classes 4 9 My Penpal 14
2 Family Outing 5 10 Join the Club 15
3 Class Party 6 11 Mom’s Birthday 16
4 I am Coming Home 7
D POSTCARDS
B MESSAGES/ NOTES
Introduction 17
Introduction 8 12 Lockdown Period 18
5 Stay Safe 9 13 Pen Pal 19
6 Movie Time 10 14 Thank You 20
7 Spend Time Together 11
8 Family Dinner 12
Part 2: Note Expansion
Tips & Techniques 22 Introduction – Charts and Graphs 38
Introduction – Speeches 23 Sample Exercise 39
Sample Exercise 23 Introduction – Descriptive/
Introduction – Opinions 25 Narrative Essays 41
Sample Exercise 25 Sample Exercise 41
Introduction – Formal Letters 27 Introduction – Pictorial Compositions 43
Sample Exercise 29 Sample Exercise 43
Introduction – Informal Letters 31
Sample Exercise 32
Introduction – Reports 34 A Theme: People
Sample Exercise 34 15 Covid-19 Pandemic 46
Introduction – Processes and Procedures 36 16 A Visit to a Rehabilitation Centre 48
Sample Exercise 36
17 Expressing Thanks for Support 50
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18 Congratulating Quiz Winners 51 44 An Impulsive Decision 100
19 Expression of Gratitude from a 45 Robbery in a Fast Food
Competition Winner 53 Restaurant 101
20 Voting Wisely for Student 46 Going on a Transfer 103
Leaders 55
47 Mother Teresa 104
21 Farewell Gathering 57
48 An Ungrateful Son 106
22 Welcoming Visitors 58
49 Greed Does Not Pay 108
23 Expressing Thanks to the Host 60
50 My Best Friend 109
24 Bidding Farewell to Friends
and Relatives 61
25 Choosing a Career 63 B Theme: Culture
26 Which is More Desirable, Working 51 Impact of the Covid-19 Pandemic 112
from Home or Working in
an Office? 65 52 Student Exchange Programme 114
27 Respect Has to Be Earned 67 53 Advantages of Studying Abroad 115
28 The Factors That Determine 54 Advantages of Studying Locally 117
Success 68 55 Advantages of Boarding School 119
29 Experience is the Best Teacher 70 56 Bidding Farewell to an
30 Application for the Position of Exchange Student 121
English Editor 72 57 Study Techniques 123
31 Invitation to Give a Talk 74 58 Changes to the Education Policy 125
32 Request for Sponsorship 76 59 Why Are School Holidays
33 Thank You Letter for a Gift Necessary? 127
Received 78 60 The Importance of Further
34 Expressing Sympathy for a Education 129
Friend’s Loss of Home 80 61 Studies Are the Only Priority
35 Advice to a Friend Who Has in a Student’s Life 131
Transferred to a New School 82 62 The Importance of School 133
36 Seeking Advice on a Problem 84 63 A Request for Accommodation
37 A Reply Letter to Give Advice 86 Overseas 135
38 A Weekend Camp 88 64 Giving Advice on a Scholarship
39 Report on English Campaign 90 Offer 136
65 Seeking Advice on How to
40 Report on Burglary 92 Organise a School Bazaar 138
41 Membership of Clubs in School 94 66 Advice to a Friend Studying at
42 Part-time Jobs Done by Students a Boarding School 140
during the School Holidays 96 67 First Week at University 142
43 A Story of Extraordinary Courage 98 68 Report by Head Prefect on
Disciplinary Problems 144
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69 Report on Bullying Incident 94 Should Cookery be Introduced as
Witnessed during Recess 146 a Subject in Schools? 196
70 How to Make Cupcakes 148 95 How Can an Individual Benefit
from Voluntary Work? 197
71 Programme for Prize Giving Day 151
96 Application for Part–Time Work 199
72 How to Create a Batik Collage 153
97 Visit to a Children’s Home 201
73 How to Create Your Own
Bathroom Decor 155 98 Hospitalised for a Sports Injury 203
74 How to Cook Spaghetti 157 99 Comforting a Friend Who is Ill 205
75 How to Make a Clay Coil Vase 159 100 Apology for a Last-minute
Cancellation of Plan 206
76 How to Make a Pizza 161
77 How to Make an Origami Hat 163 101 Eyewitness Report on Domestic 208
Violence
78 How to Make Pineapple Tarts 165 102 Report on Hit-and-run Accident 209
79 How to Make Bread Pudding 167 103 Newspaper Report on Road
80 How to Make Peanut Butter 169 Accident 211
81 How to Make a Mosaic Picture 171 104 Newspaper Report on Kidnapping 212
82 How to Prepare Baked Chicken 105 Death Toll of Motorists 214
Drumsticks 173
106 Tragic Day at the Adventure Park 216
83 Types of Movies Enjoyed by 107 Florence Nightingale 218
Students 175
108 A Diet Gone Awry 220
84 How Students Spent Their
Holidays 177 109 A Tragic Accident That Took
85 Amount of Time Spent on Reading My Brother’s Life 221
in a Week 179
86 National Day Community
Celebration 181 D Theme: Environment
87 A Family Day Carnival 182 110 Report on Students 223
111 Imported Waste 225
C Theme: Health 112 Earth Day Celebration 227
113 Replying to a Cousin Who Wishes
88 Covid-19 Quarantine 184 to Visit 228
89 Covid-19 Vaccination Programme 186 114 Newspaper Report on Floods 230
90 A Visit to a Soup Kitchen 188 115 Report on Abandoned House 232
91 Healthy Living 190 116 Report on Fire in National Park 233
92 Capital Punishment 192 117 Report on Improvement Needed
in Residential Area 235
93 How Can Teenagers Deal
with Their Emotions? 193 118 Report on Discovery of Rare
Python 237
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119 Report on Illegal Logging 142 How to Make Banana Milkshake 283
Activities 239 143 Popular Television Channels 285
120 Report on Excursion for School
Newsletter 240 144 Number of Vehicles on Jalan
Desa Utama 287
121 Newspaper Report on Bee Attack 242
145 Modes of Transport of Students 289
122 How to Make an Ornament
with Seashells 244 146 A Bicycle Accident 290
123 Itinerary for a Class Trip 246 147 An Amusing Incident You
Witnessed 292
124 How to Make Potpourri with 148 Stranger Danger on the Internet 294
Rose Petals 248
149 A False Accusation 296
125 How to Make a Centrepiece
with Eggshells 250 150 Directions to a Friend Who
126 Suggestions for Excursion 252 Is Visiting from Out of Town 298
151 Safety First 300
127 Suggestions for Improvement
in Neighbourhood 254 152 The Inconsiderate Driver 302
128 A Disappointing Visit to the Beach 256
129 An Expedition to Taman Negara 257
F Theme: Consumerism
130 A Holiday in Cameron Highlands 259
131 A Community Effort 261 153 Useful Apps 305
154 Follow SOP 306
155 Are We Becoming Increasingly
E Theme: Science & Technology Dependent on Foreign Maids? 308
156 Why Are International Schools
132 Online Classes 263 So Popular? 310
133 Faulty Speakers 265 157 Reporting a Lost Item 312
134 The Impact of Online Social 158 Complaint about Unnecessary
Media on Teenagers 267 Disconnection of Electricity
135 Cyberbullying 269 Supply 314
136 Have Computers Truly Enhanced 159 Order of T-Shirts 316
the Education Process? 271 160 Prize and Certificate for Essay
137 Request to Visit Cake and Writing Competition Not
Bread Factory 273 Delivered 318
138 Cautioning a Friend against 161 Complaint about Defective
Revealing Personal Information Product 320
on the Internet 275 162 Hawkers in Taman Puchong Indah 322
139 Report on Slogan Contest by 163 Enquiry about Swimming
Television Station 277 Lessons 324
140 How to Set Up an Aquarium 278 164 Wrong Delivery of Books 326
141 How Chocolate is Produced 281
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165 Illegal Food Stall in Neighbour’s 183 Appeal for Delay in Fee Payment 364
House 328 184 Sale of Revision Books 366
166 Complaint about Poor Internet 185 Change of Address 368
Service 330
167 Invitation to a Book Fair 332 186 Alerting a Friend to a Scam 370
187 Annual Report of the
168 Institutions Chosen for Tertiary
Education 334 Service Club 372
188 Minutes of English Language
169 Sales of Food at Canteen 336 Society Committee Meeting 374
170 Number of Visitors to Merdeka 189 Report on Jogathon 377
Theme Park 337
190 Choices of Houses of Working
171 A Case of Food Poisoning 339
Adults 379
172 A Treatment Gone Wrong 341 191 Monthly Expenditure of
173 A Misleading Advertisement 343 Mr. David 381
174 Honesty is the Best Policy 346 192 Mrs. Chan’s Monthly Expenditure
on Groceries 383
193 How the English Language
G Theme: Financial Awareness Society Spent Its Funds 385
194 How Amin Spends His Monthly
175 e-Wallets 349 Allowance 386
176 Honesty Pays 351 195 Contributions of Various Groups
177 The Brain Drain 352 towards School Hall Building
Fund 388
178 Rich People Are Happy People 354
179 Should Scholarships Be Awarded 196 A Scam 390
Based Solely on Academic
Achievements? 356 Common Mistakes in Writing 393
180 Enquiry about the Cost of a Trip 358
Phrasal Verbs 395
181 Accommodation for Youth Camp 360
182 Permission to Carry Out Commonly Misspelled Words 398
Fund-raising Activities 362
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Part 1
Short
Communicative
Message
PART 01 SUCCES ESSAY PT3 1P.indd 1 14/09/2021 2:47 PM
1. Short Communicative Message is tested in Part 1 of the Penulisan (Writing) paper.
2. A short text will be provided in the question and you need to respond to the text in approximately
80 words.
3. A total of 20 marks are allocated for this question and you should spend no longer than 25
minutes on this question.
4. There are 4 types of short communicative messages:
Messages/ Notes
SHORT
Emails COMMUNICATIVE Postcards
MESSAGE
Informal Letters
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A Emails
Introduction
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English PT3 Part 1 – Emails
Model
1 Online Classes
Model Question
Read the following email from your cousin, Samantha.
To: [email protected]
From: [email protected]
Subject: Lack of Motivation during Online Classes
Hi Samuel,
As you know, I have been having online classes at home since the Movement
Control Order (MCO) started. Lately, I am feeling very demotivated to study but
I don’t know how to overcome this problem. Should I talk to my parents, ask for
help from my teachers or just keep my feelings to myself? Do you have any other
suggestions for me?
Regards,
Samantha
In about 80 words, write an email to Samantha to give her some advice.
Model Answer
To: [email protected]
From: [email protected]
Subject: Do not bottle up your feelings!
Hi Samantha,
First of all, I want you to know that it is completely normal to feel demotivated.
However, you should try to talk to your parents about your feelings.
It is important for us to share our feelings with other people so that they can
help us find a solution to our problem. If you find it hard to talk about your feelings,
you can write down the things that you want to say on a piece of paper. The most
important thing is not to keep your feelings bottled up. I hope you will enjoy your
online classes.
Regards,
Samuel USEFUL TIP
When you offer a suggestion, you can give some
ideas on how your suggestion can be carried out.
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English PT3 Part 1 – Emails
Model
2 Family Outing
Model Question
Read the following email from your cousin, Mei Ling.
To: [email protected]
From: [email protected]
Subject: Family Outing
Hi Jun Hong,
My family and I would like to go for an outing this weekend. Where should we
go? Should we go to the zoo, the beach or the Science Centre? Do you know any
other place that is suitable for families to spend time?
Regards,
Mei Ling
In about 80 words, write an email to Mei Ling to give her some advice.
Model Answer
To: [email protected]
From: [email protected]
Subject: Family Outing
Hi Mei Ling,
A family outing during the weekend is a great idea! I wish to go on a trip too.
I think you and your family should go to the beach.
At the beach, there are many activities that you can do. You can go swimming
with your siblings. You can also build sandcastles or collect seashells. Once you are
tired from all the excitement, you can have a relaxing picnic with your family. I think
you and your family will have a blast at the beach!
Regards,
Jun Hong
USEFUL TIP
The subject of an email should briefly summarise what the email is mainly about.
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English PT3 Part 1 – Emails
Model
3 Class Party
Model Question
Read the following email from your class monitor, Fikri.
To: [email protected]
From: [email protected]
Subject: Class Party
Hi Cindy,
Friday is the last day of school. We are having a party to celebrate. Should I
prepare pizzas, sandwiches or fried chicken for the party? What other food and
drinks do you think I should prepare?
From,
Fikri
In about 80 words, write an email to Fikri to give him some advice.
Model Answer
To: [email protected]
From: [email protected]
Subject: Let’s have a pizza party!
Hi Fikri,
I am so excited for our class party! I can’t wait to play games and take pictures
with everyone. I think you should prepare pizzas for the party.
Pizzas come with many types of toppings so we can have a variety of flavours. It
is also a lot of fun to share a pizza with friends. Besides, pizzas are more convenient
as we can hold it with our hands. We do not need to prepare any plates or cutlery.
From,
Cindy
REMEMBER!
Your answer should be approximately 80 words long. Plan your essay before
you start writing to avoid going over the word limit.
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English PT3 Part 1 – Emails
Model
4 I am Coming Home
Model Question
Read the following email from your brother, Ashrul.
To: [email protected]
From: [email protected]
Subject: I am coming home this weekend.
Hi Ashraf,
I am coming home from the university this weekend. But I don’t know if I
should take the bus, the train or take a flight back. What do you think?
Your brother,
Ashrul
In about 80 words, write an email to Ashrul to give him some advice.
Model Answer
To [email protected]
From [email protected]
Subject Trains are the best!
Hi Ashrul,
I am glad you are coming home. Let’s catch a movie together when you are
back. I think you should take the train.
The train is fast and comfortable. It will save you a lot of time as it only takes
2 hours to reach our town from your university. It is also much cheaper compared
to taking the plane. The train station is only a stone’s throw from our house so we
can meet you there when you arrive.
Your brother,
Ashraf
REMEMBER!
Arrange your points carefully. You can offer a suggestion in the first paragraph
and provide the justification for your choice in the second paragraph.
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B Messages/ Notes
Introduction
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English PT3 Part 1 – Messages/ Notes
Model
5 Note – Stay Safe
Model Question
Read the following note from your mother.
Lucas,
I hope your first day back in school after the Movement Control Order
(MCO) went well. Don’t forget to sanitise your school bag once you are home.
There is a sanitising spray and sanitising wipes in the cupboard next to the
door. Please let me know which type of sanitiser you prefer as I will be to the
supermarket after work.
Mom
In about 80 words, write a note to your mother to tell her your choice.
Model Answer
Mom,
I think I prefer to use a sanitising spray to sanitise my school bag and shoes
after school.
As my school bag is quite bulky, it is easier to use a spray. It is also more
economical since a single bottle of spray can last for a few weeks. On the
other hand, sanitising wipes have to be replaced regularly and they create a
lot of rubbish since we have to throw them away afterwards. Please buy more
sanitising sprays when you go to the supermarket later. I also need a bottle of
hand sanitiser to bring to school.
Lucas
USEFUL TIP
You can add extra examples of your own as long as they are related to the main
topic to make your answer more interesting.
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English PT3 Part 1 – Messages/ Notes
Model
6 Note – Movie Time
Model Question
Read the following note from your mother.
Tasha,
We are going out for a movie tonight. Would you like to watch a comedy,
a horror film or an action movie? Or would you like to watch something else?
Please let your Dad know so he can book the tickets.
Mom
In about 80 words, write a note to your Dad to tell him your choice.
Model Answer
Dad,
Please book the tickets for our movie date tonight. I would like to watch
the new action movie, Ending Game.
The movie is about a police officer whose children were kidnapped. I think
it will be full of action and very exciting. The main actor is also a very talented
actor. The movie was shot in Switzerland so it will be very scenic and different
from what we have seen before. I think you and Mom will really enjoy this
action movie.
Tasha
REMEMBER!
You must choose from one of the options given in the question or
suggest an idea of your own.
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English PT3 Part 1 – Messages/ Notes
Model
7 Message – Spend Time Together
Model Question
Read the following message from your friend, Suzy.
Lily,
I will come over at 11 a.m. tomorrow. Should we play board games, read
magazines or make some desserts? Or do you have something else in mind?
Let me know what you think so I can bring the things we need.
Suzy
In about 80 words, write a message to Suzy to tell her your choice.
Model Answer
Suzy,
Why don’t you come over at 10 a.m. instead? That way we can spend more
time together. I think we should make some desserts.
I recently found a new recipe for chocolate cupcakes. It is made from
dark chocolate instead of milk chocolate. I think it will be really delicious. We
can decorate the cupcakes with some sprinkles and give it to our parents as a
surprise. Don’t forget to bring your apron when you come over. I am sure our
dessert will be delicious!
Lily
USEFUL TIP
At the end of your answer, you can restate your choice
to give it more emphasis.
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English PT3 Part 1 – Messages/ Notes
Model
8 Note – Family Dinner
Model Question
Read the following note from your sister, Melissa.
Zachary,
Mom and Dad want to bring us out for dinner. Would you like to have
Western food, seafood or Chinese food? Or do you have another suggestion? I
want to make a reservation at the restaurant.
Melissa
In about 80 words, write a note to your sister to tell her your choice.
Model Answer
Melissa,
Let’s have an early dinner tonight. I have a test tomorrow and I need to
study for it. I would like to have Western food.
We just had seafood last weekend so I want to try something else. Besides,
my favourite food is pasta. The new restaurant is famous for their pasta dishes
so I really want to check it out. They are also having a promotion right now.
They have set meals for families which will be suitable for us.
Zachary
REMEMBER!
Provide a few reasons to support your answer. You can also talk about
why the other options are not suitable.
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C Informal Letters
Introduction
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English PT3 Part 1 – Informal Letters
Model
9 My Penpal
Model Question
Read the following letter from your penpal, Justin.
22 March 202_
Dear Darren,
As you know, the All England Open finals took place yesterday. Fortunately,
I managed to catch the live broadcast on TV. It was such an exciting match! As
an avid badminton player yourself, what do you think about the two finalists: our
national representative, Lee Zii Jia and the famous player from Denmark, Viktor
Axelsen?
From,
Justin
In about 80 words, write a letter to Justin to share with him your thoughts.
Model Answer
23 March 202_
Dear Justin,
Yes, I agree that it was indeed an exciting match especially during the final set!
Although they are both very talented players, my personal favourite is definitely
our very own, Lee Zii Jia!
His badminton skills are very good and he is only 23 years old. His young
age makes his achievements even more impressive. Did you know that he is from
Kedah? As a fellow Kedahan, I feel very proud that we have an international athlete
from our state. I look forward to his performance in the badminton world after this.
From,
Darren
USEFUL TIP
If you run out of ideas for your essay, you can try to relate the topic to your personal life or
feelings.
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English PT3 Part 1 – Informal Letters
Model
10 Join the Club
Model Question
Read the following letter from your friend, Sarah.
12 April 202_
Dear Iqbal,
I want to take part in some co-curricular activities. I am thinking of joining
either the Reading Club, Music Club or Nature Club.
Which club should I join? Or do you have any other suggestion for me?
From,
Sarah
In about 80 words, write a letter to Sarah to give her some advice.
Model Answer
13 April 202_
Dear Sarah,
How are you? It’s good that you want to take part in co-curricular activities.
I think you should join the Reading Club.
Reading is a very beneficial pastime. You can gain a lot of general knowledge
from reading. You can also improve your writing skills. By joining the Reading
Club, you can get to know other people who love reading too and meet people
who share the same interests as you. For example, you can share your favourite
books and discuss what you have read. I think you will really enjoy the Reading
Club. Take care.
Regards,
Iqbal
USEFUL TIP
Elaborate on your main points by providing some relevant examples.
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English PT3 Part 1 – Informal Letters
Model
11 Mom’s Birthday
Model Question
Read the following letter from your friend, Johan.
3 June 202_
Dear Hanif,
I want to buy a present for my mother for her birthday. I am thinking of
getting her either a book, a purse or a watch.
Which present do you think is the best? Or should I get her something else?
From,
Johan
In about 80 words, write a letter to Johan to give him some advice.
Model Answer
4 June 202_
Dear Johan,
I hope you are doing well. When is your mom’s birthday? Please convey my
heartfelt birthday wishes to her. I think you should get her a watch.
Your mom is a very punctual person. She will definitely appreciate having a
watch to tell the time. Besides, a watch is very practical as she can use it every
day. Whenever she looks at it, it will remind her of you. I think she would love to
receive a watch from you. Let me know how it goes.
From,
Hanif
USEFUL TIP
When writing to a friend, you can extend your well wishes to
their family members as well.
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D Postcards
Introduction
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English PT3 Part 1 – Postcards
Model
12 Lockdown Period
Model Question
Read the following postcard from your sister, Alia who lives in another state .
Hi Yana, Stamp
I am writing to let you know that I will not be coming
home for Hari Raya Aidilfitri this year. Please inform Dad
and Mom for me. As you know, due to the lockdown, I To:
am not allowed to travel interstate. Nevertheless, I hope Yana,
you will have a good celebration with our parents. Will No. 13, Lorong Asoka,
you visit our Grandpa and Grandma or just stay at home 34555 Muar, Johor.
for the holidays?
From,
Alia
In about 80 words, write a postcard to reply Alia.
Model Answer
Hi Alia, Stamp
Don’t worry, our parents will understand why you
cannot come home during the festive season. We must
adhere to the Standard Operating Procedures (SOP)
set up by the government so that everyone can stay safe
during the pandemic. To:
We are also planning to spend the holidays at home Alia,
this year. Even though Grandpa and Grandma live in the Lot 24, Jalan Indah,
same district as us, we want to avoid any unnecessary 78999 Seremban,
gatherings. This is because elderly folks and young Negeri Sembilan.
children are especially at risk of contracting the virus.
Take care and I hope we can see each other soon!
From,
Yana
REMEMBER!
If you use any abbreviations (shortforms) in your essay such as SOP or
MCO, always include the full phrase to avoid confusion
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English PT3 Part 1 – Postcards
Model
13 Pen pal
Model Question
Read the following postcard from your pen pal, Linda.
Dear Diana, Stamp
I just arrived in Seoul, South Korea. It is my first To:
time here. Should I go shopping for souvenirs, try the Diana,
local food or visit historical buildings first? Can you No. 46, Jalan Kasturi,
give me some suggestions? I really want to have a good 22344 Kuantan,
holiday. Help! Pahang.
Linda
In about 80 words, write a postcard to Linda to give her some advice.
Model Answer
1 Dear Linda, Stamp
2 I am glad you have arrived in Seoul safely. How
is the weather like over there?
3
I think you should visit the historical buildings
first. By visiting these ancient places, you can learn To:
more about the country and its culture. This will help Linda Hashim,
you to enjoy your trip more. Apart from that, you can Seoulmates Guesthouse,
4 Seoul, South Korea.
also take a lot of beautiful pictures at these places.
Then, you can upload the pictures onto your social
media and show them to your friends and family. 7
5 See you soon.
6 Diana
1 Greet your friend 5 Provide a simple closing statement
2 Start by referring to the information 6 Sign your name
given in the question 7 Write your friend’s name and address
3 Recommend a place to visit
4 Give good reasons to support your
recommendation
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English PT3 Part 1 – Postcards
Model
14 Thank You
Model Question
Read the following postcard from your neighbour, Daniel.
Dear Shafiq, Stamp
I am coming back from the village tomorrow. Would To:
you like some fresh fruits, traditional handicrafts or some
local snacks? Is there anything else that you want? Let Shafiq Farhain,
me know. I want to thank you for taking care of my cats Lot 80, Lorong Manggis,
while I was away. 66788 Ipoh,
Hope to hear from you soon. Perak.
Daniel
In about 80 words, write a postcard to Daniel to let him know what you want.
Model Answer
1 Dear Daniel, Stamp
2 It is my pleasure to take care of your cats. They are
so adorable and fun to play with.
3 Thank you for offering to bring me a gift from your
village. If it is not too much trouble, I would like to have To:
some fresh fruits. As you know, I love to eat local fruits Daniel Shah,
4
such as mangosteen and rambutan. I heard that your Kampung Delima,
village is famous for its big and sweet mangoes. Please Teluk Intan, 36000,
bring me some fresh fruits when you come back. I can Perak.
share them with my parents as they love to eat fruits
as well. 7
5 Well, take care and have a great time.
6 Daniel
1 Greet your friend 5 Provide a simple closing statement
2 Start by referring to the information 6 Sign your name
given in the question 7 Write your friend’s name and address
3 Suggest a souvenir REMEMBER!
4 Give good reasons to support your
recommendation A postcard is a short letter, so the rules for writing
letters also apply here.
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Model
110 Report on Students
Model Question
Report
As the Head Prefect, you noticed that some students in your school did not follow
the Standard Operating Procedures (SOP) set by the Ministry of Education. In about
120 words, write a report to your principal about the situation. You may use the
notes below to help you.
Current
situation in
school
Students did not Effects of
follow SOP the current
situation
Report on
students
Role played by Suggestions
Prefect Board to overcome
problem
Write your report.
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Introduction
• State the purpose of the report
Body
• Current situation in school – students dispose their used masks carelessly
• Effects of the current situation – unhygienic – troublesome for cleaners
• Suggestions to overcome problem – put up posters
Conclusion
• Explain the actions that will be taken by the Prefect Board
Model Answer
Report on Students’ Adherence to Standard Operating Procedures (SOP)
This is a report on the students of SMK Seri Harum who did not follow the
Standard Operating Procedures (SOP) set by the Ministry of Education. As we all
know, one of the most important SOP is wearing a face mask at all times when in
school.
Recently, a survey was carried out by the Prefect Board to see if students are
following the SOP. It was found that some students have not been disposing their
used masks properly. Students have been carelessly leaving their used masks on the
ground or in their desk drawers. The situation is especially bad after recess and right
before school ends.
It is important to not simply discard our used masks. Firstly, it pollutes the
environment. It is also very unhygienic. If the mask is contaminated, it will expose
other people to harmful bacteria and viruses. Moreover, it troubles the cleaning
workers who will have to pick up after these irresponsible students.
According to the SOP, used masks must be folded and tied with the earloops so
that they do not unravel. Then, they should be wrapped with a layer of tissue paper
before they are thrown into the dustbin. The school should put up posters about this
matter around the school. This will remind students to follow the SOP at all times.
Finally, the Prefect Board will also keep an eye on the students. Anyone who
does not follow the SOP will be directly reported to the Discipline Master. This will
ensure that the school remains safe during the pandemic.
WORDBank
adherence – following rules
discard – throw away
contaminated – not safe to be used anymore
unravel – become loose
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Model
111 Imported Waste
Model Question Article
Recently, the issue of imported waste has been making waves in our country. In about
120 words, write an article for your school magazine to talk about your opinion on
the issue. You may use the notes below to help you.
Downside of
recycling
Concept of Imported waste
recycling
Imported
waste
Proper waste Illegal recycling
management factories
Write your article.
Introduction
• Explain the concept of recycling
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Body
• Downside of recycling – incorrect way of recycling – risk of pollution
• Imported waste – from other countries – earn money
• Illegal recycling factories – not monitored – bigger chance of pollution
Conclusion
• Stress on the importance of proper waste management
Model Answer
Imported Waste
Recycling is the process of turning old unwanted materials into new materials
that can be reused. This way we will use less of the earth’s natural resources that
are depleting at a fast pace. Many types of materials can be recycled such as paper,
metals, glass and plastic.
However, there is also a downside to recycling. When it is not done correctly,
recycling can lead to pollution. For example, some materials are not suitable to be
recycled. These materials are often burned or buried in the ground. If they are
burned, the burning process will release dangerous chemicals into the air. If they are
buried into the ground, they will contaminate the soil.
Apart from that, there is the issue of imported waste. Imported waste is when
a country imports waste from another country for recycling. This is mostly done to
earn money from the recycling process. Malaysia is also involved in the business of
imported waste. In 2018, Malaysia imported more than 1 million tonnes of waste
from countries such as the US, the UK and South Korea.
However, much of the waste were imported through illegal means. The recycling
factories are operating without permission from the authorities. In other words, the
recycling process is not monitored. As a result, there is an even bigger chance of air
and soil pollution as well as other environmental damage.
In conclusion, proper waste management and recycling are important for Malaysia
to become a truly well-developed country. This includes the issue of imported waste
as we also do not want to become the rubbish bin of the world.
WORDBank
resources – materials that can be used
depleting – becoming less
damage – harm
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Model
112 Earth Day Celebration
Model Question Speech
You have been asked to deliver a speech in conjunction with Earth Day celebration
in your school. In about 120 words, write a speech. You may use the notes below
to help you.
Earth Day
– to make people aware of the importance
of keeping our planet healthy and clean
Learn more about an Cook a healthy Give away items that
environmental issue meal are no longer in use
Write your speech.
Introduction
• Brief history of Earth Day
• Purpose of speech – three activities to save the earth
Body
• Learn more about an environmental issue – share knowledge with classmates
• Cook a healthy meal – vegetables and beans – organic meat
• Give away items that are no longer of use – reuse and recycle
Conclusion
• Everyone can play a part in saving the earth
Model Answer
The very first Earth Day was celebrated on 22 April 1970. This day was created
by American Senator, Gaylord Nelson, to make people aware of the importance of
keeping our planet healthy and clean. Earth Day is a perfect time to reflect about what
you are doing to help protect the environment. Today, I would like to suggest three
simple activities that we can carry out to save the earth.
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The first activity is to learn more about the environment. Earth Day is a good
time to make a commitment to learn more about the environment and how we can
help to protect it. Read up on an issue such as pollution, endangered species, water
shortages, recycling and climate change. Alternatively, learn about a region you have
never encountered before, like the Arctic, the desert or the rainforest. Then give a
short presentation to your class to share what you have learnt.
The next activity is to cook a special Earth Day meal. Plan a menu that introduces
locally produced food which is healthy and has minimal impact on the environment.
Use vegetable and bean products as these use less resources to grow. If you would
like to eat meat, look for locally-produced organic meat.
Lastly, look into your closets and cupboards, and remove the things that are
no longer useful to you. By giving away your old toys to younger children, you will
learn two lessons. One is about giving to others and the second is about reusing and
recycling instead of discarding things. Encourage your parents to do the same with
their clothes, electrical appliances and books.
Every one of us can do something to help the planet on Earth Day. Although our
individual efforts may seem like a drop in the ocean, everything we do to help the
planet counts, such as opting to walk to school or helping to clean up litter from our
neighbourhood park! Thank you.
WORDBank IDIOMS
encountered – discovered or experienced a drop in the ocean – having a small
impact – the effect of something impact on an important issue
discarding – throwing away
INFO CORNER
Recycling one aluminium can saves enough energy to listen to a full album on your Ipod.
Recycling 100 cans could light your bedroom for two weeks.
Model
113 Replying to a Cousin Who Wishes to Visit
Model Question Informal letters
Your cousin has written to ask if she can visit you during the school holidays. In about
120 words, write her a reply to let her know that she is welcome to stay with you.
You may use the notes below to help you.
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• Mention the places of interest that you will be taking her to visit
• Ask if she would like other arrangements to be made
• Request that she forward her flight details so that you can greet her at the airport
• Express your delight that she will be visiting
Write your letter.
Introduction
• Express your pleasure that she is coming to visit
• Let her know that she is welcome to stay with you
Body
• She is coming at the right time – to witness the Harvest Festival
• Mention the places that you will be taking her to visit – Mount Kinabalu foothills, Poring
Hotsprings, island-hopping, etc
• Request that she forward her flight details so that you can greet her at the airport
• Ask if she would like other arrangements to be made
Conclusion
• Look forward to welcoming her to Kota Kinabalu
Model Answer
38 Jalan Penampang,
88300 Kota Kinabalu,
Sabah.
2 May 202_
Dear Cousin Meera,
How wonderful to hear that you are planning to come to Kota Kinabalu for a
visit. Of course you are most welcome to stay with me.
You are coming at the right time indeed. The month of May is very festive and
colourful as Sabahans celebrate the Harvest festival, or Pesta Kaamatan. The month-
long celebration culminates in a grand ceremony at the end of May. You will be just
in time to witness it.
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I would also like to show you around Kota Kinabalu. We must take a drive up to
the foothills of the majestic Mount Kinabalu. The Poring Hotsprings is nearby and
we can stop to take a dip in the water.
I will also arrange for us to go on an island-hopping trip. There are three islands
off the coast which are absolutely fabulous for snorkelling. I am sure you will enjoy
the clear blue water and the beautiful beaches.
Do let me know if you would like other arrangements to be made. Please forward
your flight details to me so that I can be at the airport to greet you. I am delighted that
you will be visiting and I look forward to welcoming you to the Land Below the Wind.
Your cousin,
Vanessa
WORDBank
culminates – to bring something to a dramatic end
witness – to experience an important event
majestic – impressive and grand
island-hopping – going from one island to another quickly
Model
114 Newspaper Report on Floods
Model Question Report
You are a reporter working for a newspaper. In about 120 words, write a report on
the flood situation in East Malaysia. You may use the notes below to help you.
Include the following details:
• Number of people affected
• Road closures
• Buildings affected
• Cause of floods – heavy and continuous rain, water overflow from river
• Report from Meteorological Department
Write your report.
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Introduction
• 800 evacuees – shelter at relief centres – flood situation worsened
Body
• Rising water level – many residents – low-lying areas – trapped at home
• Main roads submerged, buildings and offices affected
• Heavy rain and flood waters from Upper Rejang River – above alert level
• Sibu outskirts – roads inaccessible to small vehicles
Conclusion
• Meteorological department – maintained orange-alert warning – rain clouds hovering
above affected areas
Model Answer
KUCHING, Mon. – Some 800 evacuees sought shelter at relief centres as the flood
situation in Sibu in central Sarawak worsened. Many residents in the low-lying areas
were trapped at home due to the rising water level.
Several main roads, including Jalan Nyabor and Jalan Central were submerged.
Among the affected buildings were the Sarawak House shopping complex, two hotels
and a petrol station.
Heavy rain and flood waters overflowing from the Upper Rejang River have
worsened the situation. An official at the state flood operations room said that the river
had remained above the alert level for the past three days.
She said that five roads in Sibu outskirts were under 0.5 metres of water and
inaccessible to small vehicles. These roads include Jalan Salim, Jalan Stabau and
Jalan Bawang Assan.
The Meteorological Department has maintained an orange-alert warning for all
surrounding areas due to rain clouds hovering above the affected areas.
WORDBank
evacuees – people who are taken from a dangerous place and sent to safety
submerged – to be under the surface of water
outskirts – areas far away from the town centre
inaccessible – difficult or impossible to travel to
hovering – floating in the air in the same spot
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Model
115 Report on Abandoned House
Model Question Report
You are a journalist working for a newspaper. In about 120 words, write a report
about an abandoned house in a housing area for the newspaper. You may use the
notes below to help you.
• Abandoned house in Taman Orkid – eyesore to residents
• Overgrown with weeds and strewn with rubbish
• House in filthy condition – stench of rubbish
• Hideout for drug addicts
• Petty thefts on the rise
• Home for stray dogs and cats
• Residents want authorities to take action against owner
• Statement from councillor – notice to the owner
Write your report.
Introduction
• Abandoned house in Taman Orkid – eyesore to residents
Body
• Corner lot – overgrown with weeds and strewn with rubbish
• House in filthy condition – past two years
• Hideout for drug addicts
• Petty thefts on the rise
• Home for stray dogs and cats – endure stench
• Residents want authorities to take action against owner
Conclusion
• Statement from councillor – notice to the owner – clean up within seven days –
otherwise – council will clean up – bill owner for costs
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Model Answer
An abandoned house at Jalan Anggerik 2/4, Taman Orkid, Shah Alam, has become
an eyesore to the residents of the area.
The house, which is situated at a corner lot, is overgrown with weeds and strewn
with rubbish. The house has been in this filthy condition for the past two years.
The Chairman of the Residents’ Association, Encik Rashid Abdullah, who
lives opposite the house, said that the house is a good hideout for drug addicts.
Coincidentally, the occurrences of petty thefts around the neighbourhood have also
been on the rise recently. His house has already been broken into twice and he says
that he fears for the safety of his family.
The house has also become home to stray dogs and cats which are a nuisance in
the area. Residents living nearby have to endure the stench emanating from the
house. A resident, who wished to remain anonymous, said the windows are so dirty
that even if he stands close to them, he will not be able to see the inside of the house.
He urged the Shah Alam City Council to take action against the owner.
Shah Alam Councillor Puan Ana Razak said that the council would send a notice
to the house owner, ordering him to clear the rubbish within seven days.
‘If the owner fails to do so, the council will clean up the house and bill the owner
for the costs of the clean-up,’ she added.
WORDBank
hideout – a place where somebody goes when they do not want anybody to find them
stench – a very strong, unpleasant smell
emanating from – coming from
anonymous – (of a person) with a name that is not known or made public
Model
116 Report on Fire in National Park
Model Question Report
You are a reporter working for a tabloid, The Penang News. In about 120 words,
write a report about a fire which broke out in the Penang National Park. You may
use the notes below to help you.
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Include the following details in your report:
• Eight hectares of forest affected
• Fire started at 3.00 p.m. – spread quickly
• Dry spell and strong winds
• Rescue personnel and fire engines – Teluk Bahang Fire Station
• Rescue efforts hampered by lack of water supply
• Firemen forced to use water from nearby lake
• Took four hours to bring blaze under control
• No reports of property damage
• Cause of fire unknown
Write your report.
Introduction
• Fire raged across eight hectares of forest – Penang National Park
Body
• Fire started at 3.00 p.m. – thick smoke – spread quickly – due to dry spell and strong
winds
• Twelve firemen and two fire engines – Teluk Bahang Fire Station – brought blaze under
control
• Statement from fire chief – rescue efforts hampered by lack of water supply
• Firemen forced to use water from nearby lake
• Took four hours to bring blaze under control
• No reports of property damage
Conclusion
• Park officials unable to identify cause of fire – declined further comment pending
investigations
Model Answer
PENANG, Tues. – Fire raged across eight hectares of forest in the Penang National
Park yesterday.
The fire brigade was called in at around 3.00 p.m. Thick smoke billowed as the
fire spread quickly due to the current dry spell and strong winds.
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Twelve firemen in two fire engines from the Teluk Bahang Fire Station brought
the blaze under control by 7.00 p.m.
Teluk Bahang Fire and Rescue Department Chief Samsul bin Zakaria said a lack
of water supply had hampered the firemen’s efforts to extinguish the blaze. Firemen
were forced to utilise water from a nearby lake to supplement the water supply.
As a result, he said, the firemen took close to four hours to bring the raging flames
under control in the hilly area.
There were no reports of property damage in the area. Park officials were unable
to identify the cause of the fire. The officials declined further comment pending
investigations.
WORDBank
billowed – the movement of smoke spiralling upwards
spell – a short period of time during which something lasts
hampered – made more difficult or complicated
supplement – adding to the existing supply
pending – until something happens
Model Report on Improvement Needed in
117 Residential Area
Model Question Report
You are the Chairman of the residents’ committee of your neighbourhood. In about
120 words, prepare a report for the town council on the improvements that are
needed in your neighbourhood. You may use the notes below to help you.
• Only one access road – flooded during heavy downpour
• Lack of public transport – nearest bus stop – 2 km away
• No telephone lines for six months – most people have their own mobile phones
– feeble excuse given by telephone company
• Traffic congestion caused by night market – dedicated space needed
Write your report.
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Introduction
• Improvements needed in Sunnyvale Park, PJ
Body
• Only one access road – flooded during heavy downpour
• Problem highlighted in newspaper – require an alternative road
• Lack of public transport – nearest bus stop – two kilometres away – inconvenient,
especially for senior citizens – extending bus route
• No telephone lines – own mobile phones – feeble excuse given by telephone company
– no Internet connection
• Traffic congestion caused by night market – require dedicated space for traders
Conclusion
• Hope town council will take action to remedy the problems immediately
Model Answer
IMPROVEMENTS NEEDED IN SUNNYVALE PARK, PETALING JAYA
The residents of Sunnyvale Park would like to highlight a few areas that require
improvement and upgrading in the neighbourhood and victiny.
The first problem concerns the access road to Sunnyvale Park. At present, there
is only one main road servicing six residential areas, including Sunnyvale Park. When
it rains heavily, the road gets flooded, thus blocking off the only means of access for
residents. The problem has been highlighted in the newspaper many times, but nothing
has been done to solve the problem. The residents want another road to be built as
an alternative.
The second problem is the lack of public transportation servicing Sunnyvale
Park. The nearest bus stop is located some two kilometres from the entrance to our
neighbourhood. Not all residents have private vehicles and it is inconvenient and taxing
for residents, especially senior citizens, to walk that far. We would like the authorities
to consider extending the bus route to cover our area.
The residents have also been without telephone lines since we moved in six
months ago. When we contacted the service provider, we were told that there was no
urgency to install telephone lines as most people had their own mobile phones. We
feel that this is a feeble excuse. It has caused a lot of inconvenience to those who
cannot afford mobile phones.
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Lastly, we need a dedicated space for the night market, which is currently in
an inconvenient area and causes traffic congestion. The situation is worsening as the
number of stalls is on the increase.
There are many improvements that need to be carried out in Sunnyvale Park. It
is hoped that the town council will take the necessary steps to remedy the problems
as soon as possible.
Prepared by,
Rahman Yahya
(RAHMAN YAHYA)
Chairman
Sunnyvale Park Residents’ Association
WORDBank
taxing – needing a great amount of physical or mental effort
extending – making something longer or larger
urgency – the state of being important and needing to be dealt with immediately
feeble – not good or effective
dedicated – set aside for a specific purpose
remedy – a means of correcting or improving something
Model
118 Report on Discovery of Rare Python
Model Question Report
You are a reporter for a local daily. In about 120 words, write a report on the
discovery of a rare python. You may use the notes below to help you.
30kg python – also known as batik python – caught and released back
into the wild – caused a scare in village – villagers alerted Civil Defence
Unit – personnel saw snake heading towards thick bush – had to
wait an hour – professionals managed to capture snake – dangerous – can
swallow goat or child – villagers relieved – no casualties or property damage –
Officer advised villagers – not to attempt to catch snakes – call for professional help
Write your report.
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Introduction
• A rare four-metre long python discovered – Kampung Becah Keranji, Pasir Putih
Body
• 30-kilogramme python – also known as batik python
• Caught and released back into the wild
• Python caused a scare in village – villagers alerted Civil Defence Unit
• Personnel saw snake heading towards thick bush – had to wait an hour – professionals
managed to capture snake
• Professionals said snake had to be caught – dangerous – can swallow goat or child
• Villagers relieved – no casualties or property damage
Conclusion
• Officer advised villagers not to attempt to catch snakes on their own
• They should call for professionals and wait for help to arrive
Model Answer
KOTA BHARU, Mon. – A rare four-metre long python was caught by Civil Defence
personnel at Kampung Becah Keranji, Pasir Putih.
The 30-kg reticulated python, also known as the batik python because of its body
patterns, was later released back into the wild.
Civil Defence officer, Lt. Muda Karim Hussin said the villagers alerted the unit
after the snake caused a scare in the village on Sunday night.
He said it took about an hour for the personnel to capture the python.
‘When we arrived here, we saw the snake heading towards the thick bush. We
had to wait for an hour before our professionals managed to capture it,’ he added.
According to the professionals, the snake had to be captured as it was dangerous
and could swallow a goat or even a little child.
The villagers were relieved that the snake had been caught and that there were
no casualties or reports of property damage in the village.
Lt. Muda Karim advised local villagers who encounter such snakes not to try and
catch them on their own. They should instead call the professionals and monitor the
whereabouts of the snake while waiting for help to arrive.
WORDBank
reticulated – built, arranged or marked like a net, with many small squares
the wild – a natural environment that is not controlled by people
casualties – people who are killed or injured in a war or an accident
monitor – to check on something regularly
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Model
119 Report on Illegal Logging Activities
Model Question Report
You are a reporter working with a local daily. In about 120 words, write a report on
the illegal logging activities being carried out in a nearby area. You may use the notes
below to help you.
• Illegal logging still a rampant problem
• Based on tip-off from resident – news crew visited site in Selayang
• Saw evidence of logging tracks on hill
• Loggers adept at dodging the authorities – move to another site when one is
raided
• Timber transported at night through residential areas
• Lorries using a different route – evade the authorities
• Residents want the authorities to put a stop to illegal logging activities in the
area
Write your report.
Introduction
• Illegal logging is still a rampant problem
Body
• Tip-off received from resident – news crew visited site in Selayang
• Saw many logging tracks on hill
• Resident – claims illegal loggers very adept at dodging law enforcers – move to another
site when raided
• Timber transported at night through residential areas
• Another resident used to see timber lorries at night – emerging from jungle – now all
quiet – suspects lorries using a different route – evading the authorities
Conclusion
• Residents want authorities to put a stop to illegal logging activities in the area
Model Answer
REPORT ON ILLEGAL LOGGING ACTIVITIES IN SELAYANG
Although there have been concerted crackdowns on illegal logging over the past
few years, the problem is still rampant.
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Based on a tip-off from a resident, a team from the Daily News visited the site in
Selayang. We saw many logging tracks on the hill near Empangan Batu in Ulu Yam,
which can only be seen from the top of a hill in Taman Selayang Mulia.
According to a resident, illegal loggers seem very adept at dodging law enforcers
and they move to another site when one is raided. For example, lorries carrying timber
from an illegal logging area in Selayang Utara are sneaking out at night through the
residential areas to evade the authorities.
Another resident, who lives near the site, said he used to see huge 16-wheeler
lorries laden with timber emerging from the jungle at night opposite his house.
However, he said that now all is quiet. He suspects that the lorries are using a different
route and, as evidence, he pointed to the logging track visible on the hill.
The residents hope the Selangor Forestry Department and the Selayang Municipal
Council will put an immediate stop to the illegal logging activities in the area.
WORDBank
crackdowns – actions taken against an undesirable or illegal activity
rampant – happening frequently
adept – highly skilled
dodging – avoiding somebody or something, especially in a dishonest way
Model
120 Report on Excursion for School Newsletter
Model Question Report
The members of the Recreation Club of your school recently went on a three-day
excursion. In about 120 words, write a report on the trip for the school newsletter.
You may use the notes below to help you.
Include the following details in your report:
• 24 members participated
• Packed camping gear, food, first-aid kit, water
• 8.00 a.m. bus to Lumut, ferry to island
• Arrived 3.00 p.m., set up camp, swimming, built a campfire
• Next day – jungle trekking, picnic, swimming and beach volleyball
• Third day – packed – cleaned up campsite – headed home
Write your report.
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Introduction
• Merdeka weekend – Recreation Club – excursion to Pulau Pangkor
Body
• 24 members participated
• Packed camping gear, food, first-aid kit, plenty of water
• Left KL at 8.00 a.m., boarded bus to Lumut, boarded ferry to island arrived at 3.00
p.m.
• Set up camp – swimming in sea, campfire at night
• Next day – jungle trekking, picnic at waterfalls, evening – swimming and beach volleyball
• Third day – packed – cleaned up campsite – returned home
Conclusion
• Enjoyable trip – hope more members will participate in the next excursion
Model Answer
EXCURSION TO PULAU PANGKOR
During the Merdeka weekend, the members of the Recreation Club went on
a three-day excursion to Pulau Pangkor. There were altogether 24 members who
participated in the excursion.
We left Kuala Lumpur at 8.00 a.m., armed with our camping gear, food, a first-
aid kit and plenty of water. We took a bus to Lumut and then took the ferry across to
the island. We arrived at the island at 3.00 p.m.
Our team leader, Halim Radzi, instructed us to locate a suitable spot on the
beach to set up our camp. We spent two hours getting settled in and then spent the
rest of the evening swimming. In the evening we built a campfire and cooked dinner.
The next day, we all went jungle trekking and explored the island. We located a
waterfall where we decided to have a picnic. In the afternoon we slowly made our way
back to camp and spent the rest of the evening swimming and playing beach volleyball.
The next day, we woke up early and began packing. We made sure that we cleaned
up the campsite before leaving. We headed to the jetty and boarded the ferry to
Lumut. We then took the bus back to Kuala Lumpur.
It was indeed an enjoyable trip. It is hoped that more members will participate
in the next excursion organised by the club.
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WORDBank
excursion – a short journey or trip
gear – the equipment or clothing needed for a particular activity
locate – to find the exact position of something
jetty – a platform for boats to pick up and drop off passengers
Model
121 Newspaper Report on Bee Attack
Model Question Report
You are a journalist working for a local daily. In about 120 words, write a newspaper
report based on the following notes you made about a bee attack. You may use the
notes below to help you.
Victim in lorry with grandson – suddenly swarm of bees entered lorry – both
alighted – grandfather pushed grandson back into lorry – wound up windows –
grandson powerless to help – nearby residents heard shouts – man removed shirt
– set it on fire – bees flew away – victims rushed to hospital – died from allergic
reaction to bee venom
Write your report.
Introduction
• Sixty-year-old man died protecting grandson from swarm of bees
Body
• Victim in lorry with grandson
• Suddenly swarm of bees entered lorry
• Stopped lorry – both alighted
• Grandfather pushed grandson back into lorry – wound up windows
• Grandson powerless to help grandfather
• Nearby residents heard shouts – man removed shirt – set it on fire – bees flew away
• Victims rushed to hospital – dead on arrival – died from allergic reaction to bee venom
Conclusion
• Grandson – very sad – never forget grandfather’s sacrifice
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Model Answer
KLANG, Mon. – A sixty-year-old man died protecting his grandson from being
attacked by a swarm of bees in Hulu Langat.
V. Lingam, 60, and his grandson, M. Gunaseelan, 12, were in a lorry heading to
a temple in Section 2, South Estate, Carey Island, when the bees attacked them at
5.30 p.m. yesterday.
Gunaseelan said the windows of the lorry were wound down and the bees suddenly
flew in.
‘When we saw the swarm of bees enter the lorry, my grandfather stopped the
lorry and we both hastily got out.’
‘My grandfather grabbed me and shoved me back into the lorry, and I wound up
the windows,’ he added.
Gunaseelan said he saw the bees attacking his grandfather, but he was powerless
to do anything.
He said that some nearby residents heard their shouts and a man took off his shirt
and set it on fire, causing the bees to fly away.
Both Lingam and Gunaseelan suffered stings on their bodies and were rushed to
the Tengku Ampuan Rahimah Hospital in Klang. Lingam was pronounced dead on
arrival. He died from allergic reaction to bee venom. Gunaseelan is reported to be
in stable condition after treatment.
When interviewed, Gunaseelan expressed great sadness at the loss of his
grandfather.
‘I will never forget how he sacrificed his life for me,’ he said.
WORDBank
pronounced – said something officially or publicly
allergic – caused by a medical condition that makes you react badly or feel ill when
you eat or touch a particular substance
venom – a poisonous liquid that some snakes, spiders, etc. release when biting or stinging
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Model
122 How to Make an Ornament with Seashells
Model Question Processes and Procedures
Your cousin has just returned from a seaside holiday with an impressive collection
of seashells. In about 120 words, explain to her how a decorative ornament can be
made with seashells. You may use the notes and pictures below to help you.
1. 2.
Glue
Cut cardboard into shape of a Use a brush – spread glue all over
heart – punch a hole at the top cardboard
3. 4.
Glue Glue
Glue on seashells one by one – Use coloured beads or sand to fill
avoid the punched hole gaps – allow to dry
5. 6.
Glue
Repeat process on other side Slip a ribbon through the hole
7.
Hang ornament in a suitable place
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Write your essay.
Introduction
• Many decorative ornaments can be made with seashells – a simple one – heart-shaped
hanging ornament
• Items needed – heavy cardboard, strong glue, coloured beads and seashells
Body
• Cut cardboard into shape of a heart – punch a hole at the top of cardboard – use a
brush and spread glue all over cardboard
• Glue on seashells one by one – arrange carefully – minimal gaps in between seashells
– avoid the punched hole on the cardboard
• Use coloured beads or sand to fill gaps – allow to dry – repeat process on other side
of cardboard
Conclusion
• Once ornament is completely dry – slip a ribbon through hole – hang in a suitable
place
Model Answer
There are many decorative ornaments that can be made with seashells. A simple
one would be a heart-shaped hanging ornament. The items you will need are heavy
cardboard, strong glue, coloured beads and of course your collection of seashells.
First, cut the cardboard into the shape of a heart. Then, punch a hole at the top
of the cardboard. Next, use a brush and spread glue all over the cardboard. Allow the
cardboard to dry completely.
Next, glue on your seashells one by one on the cardboard. Arrange them carefully
to ensure that there are minimal gaps in between the seashells. Take care not to cover
the punched hole on the cardboard. Once you have covered the entire cardboard with
seashells, use the coloured beads to fill in the gaps in between the seashells so that the
cardboard is completely covered. You may also use sand to give it a more natural look.
Allow your ornament to dry for at least a day. You may choose to repeat the process
on the other side of the cardboard.
Once the ornament is completely dry, slip a ribbon through the hole and hang it
on a suitable place.
WORDBank
minimal – the very least possible
slip – to put something somewhere quickly
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