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A frightening experience (Narrative essay)

Made with a stroke of good luck

EMIRA NABILA RAMLI NOV 08, 2020 07:30AM

ANONYMOUS NOV 09, 2020 06:06PM hovering in my mind .  I saw a man wearing a black hoodie and
black sunglasses who look like a creepy man want to come
arina closer to me .  I feel like my heart is beating fast for no reason .
Without wasting time , I quickly hit that creepy man repeatedly
As I was wondering what to do , I remember that my late with a hockey stick . I think ,if I do that,  I can run from that
grandfather bought me a long hockey stick .A long-handled stick creepy man  but I  was wrong because just a moment passed and
with one curved end that is used in hockey was placed behind the man held my wrist tightly. I just lost my mind. I can feel my
the wall .i planned to run as fast as possible to grabbing that death is in his hands because I could not escape from him. 
hockey stick and leave the place . but i heard someone's voice
and i cant do anything but hid myself like a coward . i was kicked ANONYMOUS NOV 10, 2020 02:27PM
myself . without looking , i do a drastic movement and grab the
hockey stick and hit the man who was stared at me . it's better Afiqah Azli
to be safe than sorry !
A man who was holding a long hockey stick and still in his grasp,
ANONYMOUS NOV 09, 2020 05:46PM the hockey stick already had a piece of blood still owing in the
stick. The hockey stick seems to have been worn for a long time
syazwani because there are many scratches and the surface of the hockey
stick has parts that have been torn off. I was scared when I saw
I just realized that the hockey stick that my father bought long ago, the blood because I had a phobia of blood when I was little. The
I grasp it and grab it carefully. As fast as lightning, I swing it criminal who wore all the black clothes was getting closer to me,
the criminal also dragged the hockey all the way to his place to
around in the dark room and it is never drawn on me to use it as a scare me. I remembered that I used to be a hockey player, so I
weapon to use it on a potential intruder. ― ANONYMOUS knew how to use a hockey stick well. I intend to snatch a hockey
stick from the criminal and use it to protect myself from the
ANONYMOUS NOV 09, 2020 05:46PM criminal. I let the criminal come close to me so I could grab the
hockey stick. After I managed to snatch the hockey stick from
aleeya the criminal, I hit the back of the criminal's head and ed with
the hockey stick. I was relieved to be able to escape from the
I hardly recall the last time I placed my wooden hockey stick and criminal, after a few minutes I walked inside the house, I still did
it situate at the store. I cautiously crawl inches from the place not nd the door that would lead me out of the creepy house. I
towards the store to grab it. According to my plan, that was the felt scared again because I took the time to nd a way out. I
only thing that I can think about to use as a potential weapon for know that the criminal was conscious after a few minutes I hit
my defense. Without inconsideration, I make quick movements him. Quickly I ran with the hockey stick to nd the door that
and hit the unknown man roughly using my trembling hands. As would take me out of this awful house. After half an hour of
he realised the pain, the man with the wicked face and muscular walking, I nally found the light that led me to the door and
body grabbed my tiny arm and throw me away. (aleeya) continued to open it.

ANONYMOUS NOV 09, 2020 07:00PM ANONYMOUS NOV 09, 2020 10:45PM

Nureen adlina

All of a sudden, I remembered that I had a long , wooden hockey Dig into the past, I realized that I have a shiny hockey stick in
stick at the corner of my house which seemed like it was calling brown color that my father bought for me when I was ve years
me to pick it up as soon as possible . I quickly went in that way old in the store at the backroom. I carefully exited my room and
silently . I walk like I have oil wells .I heard someone's footprints as quit as a mouse I tiptoe towards the back room to get the
when I ran to the corner of my house to grab that hockey stick . I hockey stick. I can sneak into the back room quietly and safely
felt useless at that time because I made some noises while taking because I know the architecture of my house. After I managed to
the hockey stick even though I thought that I was already pick up the hockey stick I continued towards the sound that
walking quietly. Suddenly , I have a lot of plans in my mind . 
According to my plan , I want to use that as my potential weapon
. Because I am used to being a hockey player in the past few
years , I think I can use it well . It gave me a slight advantage .
Then, I held the hockey with enthusiasm along with some plans

coming from the living room downstairs and I saw a glimpse like beating as fast as entering a car racing competition, she enhance
a man opening the drawers in the living room. I silently her spirit to go towards the shadow of the man which is hidden
approached towards the man and tried to hit him, by only relied in the crevice of the side of the room.
on the dim street lights I can't see clearly but he managed to
push away the hockey stick that I hold strongly. I struggled with IF MY MEMORY SERVES ME WELL, MY FATHER'S FAVOURITE
him grabbing the hockey stick but eventually he managed to CARBON FIBRE HOCKEY STICK WAS STORED NEATLY IN A
grab the hockey stick then thrown it aside and as fast as WOODEN CLOSET AS IF IT WAS CHANTING IN HER MIND,
lightning I was already in the man's arms and he pointed a gun at CALLING HER TO GRAB/SEIZE ITS MIGHTY BODY.
my temple, with a little source of light I could see the anger in
the man's eyes. He pushed me and tied me to a chair and pulled ― EMIRA NABILA RAMLI
out a sharp knife that shone when exposed to street light. In a
state of fear I tried to scream for help and at the same time I ANONYMOUS NOV 09, 2020 05:50PM
wanted to test the man's patience but everything gone wrong
when he expressed his anger and slit my arms without Azza
guiltiness. I was shocked to see the shining juicy red blood
I think of the wooden hockey stick placed somewhere in the
owing down from the wound that had just been slit by the man. room. I saunter inches from where I stand to the store to grab it.
Out of the blue, I felt like I was about to faint but I persevered to Following on my plan, the long hockey stick can be use as a
escape and made a wrong step and fell, I felt like my head did hit potential weapon to protect myself from the intruder. The
something and suddenly everything went dark. I woke up in a surrounding was pitch-dark and what I can see was a glimpse of
shocked situation and  saw my dead body in front of me, I’m a sturdy gure standing front of me and it make my blood run
really scared to see myself so I ran as far as I can until I saw a cold when I clearly saw him. Without a second thought, I swing
light at the end of the world. As I got closer to the light , I heard the wooden stick brutally to the unknown man since I was in
someone voice called my name then everything became dark all fear.
over again. When I opened my eyes I saw my mother in front of
me looking at me worriedly and I realized that what happened ANONYMOUS NOV 09, 2020 05:50PM
earlier was just a bad dreams.
NISA IRDINA
ANONYMOUS NOV 10, 2020 09:05AM
The last rays of the street lamp fell slanting through the window
Izzuddin yahaya whereas a long wooden hockey leaned on the wall. I grabbed it
quickly as I suddenly heard a strange footsteps came into my
When the sky turned dark as the moon rose,I started to house. (Searching for ideas, I will continue asap)
memorize about a wooden hockey stick that I used as my
weapon to protect myself from a despicable man who was coming into my house ― NISA IRDINA BINTI MOHD RADZI MOE
staring at me. I began my steps for a ran from that suspicious
stranger by making myself invisible into the shadow.Finally,I EMIRA NABILA RAMLI NOV 09, 2020 07:58AM
grabbed the wooden hockey stick but suddenly the room's lamps
started to glow up. FEAR EXPRESSIONS

ANONYMOUS NOV 09, 2020 12:18PM https://www.writerswrite.co.za/ways-to-write-about-fear/
(Luqman) ― ANONYMOUS
Afiqahjumat
SENT CHILLS DOWN MY SPINE ― EMIRA NABILA RAMLI
There was a long, metal hockey stick lying down on the oor at
the corner  in the living room. She quickly ran and grabbed the make your blood run cold ― ANONYMOUS
hockey stick to defend her self from the man. She tried to hit the
man that maked her blood ran cold, reling on the dim street jumped out of my skin (hanis) ― ANONYMOUS
lights but he was stronger. On his weather beaten skin she saw a
dragon tattoo on his arm. It gave her goosebumps. Even without make your blood run cold (haris) ― ANONYMOUS
a blood ow to back it up the skin was tanned.
https://www.bryndonovan.com/2019/07/31/master-list-of-
ANONYMOUS NOV 09, 2020 05:50PM ways-to-describe-fear/(luqman) ― ANONYMOUS

sofea moi

Her memory returned to her father's favorite hockey stick
stored neatly in the closet and as if there was a voice chanted
towards her. With a slow step, she headed for the hockey stick
even as sweat began to splash on her
 wrinkled forehead.She then seize the hockey stick. Although her
body shivered with fear as if to urinate and her heart was

MY HAIR STOOD ON ITS END ― EMIRA NABILA RAMLI Story Time: My most frightening
experience
IT GAVE ME GOOSEBUMPS ― EMIRA NABILA RAMLI
It was an early Saturday morning and the
tremble like a leaf ― IZZAH ZAIDI sun was hidden behind dense clouds.
The weather was unusually pleasant and
https://englishbyday.com/idioms-for-scared-afraid/ my family decided to visit a haunted
house in the newly-constructed
― IZZAH ZAIDI amusement park in the city. We had read
amazing reviews about the new
Scare the hell out of me (hana) ― ANONYMOUS attraction in the city and so we thought
of visiting it.
He was paralyzed to the spot, the menacing aura holding him in a
tightening grip. [puteri] ― ANONYMOUS DAWN.COM

https://www.myenglishteacher.eu/blog/idioms-for-being-afraid/ EMIRA NABILA RAMLI NOV 09, 2020 07:59AM

― FIZZ Describe the physical qualities of a
criminal/robber/intruder
SHOOK TO ITS/THE CORE ― EMIRA NABILA RAMLI
(his eyes, his body)
IN TREPIDATION ― EMIRA NABILA RAMLI

FACE AS WHITE AS SHEET ― EMIRA NABILA RAMLI

ANONYMOUS NOV 09, 2020 05:50PM

Ain Nadhirah

A lengthy,wooden hockey stick was at the corner of a dark
staircase which seemed called me to come pick it up silently. I
looked down and tried to step out of the room and in a state of
fear i dared to pick up a hockey stick. Since i already wandering
every corner of the house,so I can walk even in the dark. With
trembling hands, I held a hockey stick while praying in my heart
to be given durability to hit the robber.  I see that the man was in
a state of groping the sofa to nd something. It maked my blood

ow very fast. My whole body was cold from fear of seeing the
man. Without wasting time, I ran and hit the man with all my
might. Even though I knew that the man was very strong and
had muscles, I  tried with all the clout I had. We jostle each other
until nally I was held so tightly and I even could not move. The
man pointed the gun at my head.

EMIRA NABILA RAMLI NOV 09, 2020 07:58AM VILLAINOUS, WICKED, BAD, ARMED ROBBER

EXAMPLE STORIES RELATED TO FEAR ― EMIRA NABILA RAMLI

Story Time: A frightening Lawbreaker,illegal ― ANONYMOUS
experience
It was a cold winter night and I was (Aysar) ― ANONYMOUS
sleeping in my warm and cosy bed. My
cousins had come to stay with me at my Psychopath ― ANONYMOUS
house. The sound of thunder could be
heard in the distance, but getting closer by each passing minute. (Aysar) ― ANONYMOUS

DAWN.COM THE PSYCHOPATH'S MUSCULAR BODY TOWERED OVER THE
TEENAGER'S PETITE AND VULNERABLE GIRL
https://www.google.com/amp/s/www.dailymail.co.uk/femail/art
icle-2655688/amp/The-heart-stopping-horror-waking-intruder- ― EMIRA NABILA RAMLI

bedroom.html ― ANONYMOUS

EMIRA NABILA RAMLI NOV 09, 2020 07:58AM

THE HAUNTED HOUSE

EMIRA NABILA RAMLI NOV 09, 2020 07:59AM ANONYMOUS NOV 10, 2020 08:57AM

The girl tried to search for her phone for Nurin Sofea
some light
A long wooden hockey stick with blood stain leaned at the
The girl tried grappling in the dark in search of her indispensable corner of the room.  It seem like it summoned  a person to strike
phone at such a critical time , wondering if she would ever be able their body. My whole body was shivering while my head reeling a
plan to get the hockey stick.The surrounding was pitch-black
to illuminate the dark house and free herself from the villainous and the only thing that I can see was a glimpse stood in front of
monster. Waves of emotions hit her and her heart was palpitating. me. I moved in a tip toed in hope the brawny guy didn't notice. It
gave me goosebumps as I made each step towards the bloody
― EMIRA NABILA RAMLI hockey stick. I felt a rough surface and immediately thought it
EMIRA NABILA RAMLI NOV 09, 2020 07:56AM was the hockey stick. I rubbed it up and down to making sure it
is before I continued my plan on beating him. I crawled and
Describe blood stood behind him as I swing the long hockey stick with the
target of his round head. I heard a roar sound escaping his
mouth. A sturdy man grabbing his head with his eyes glued on
me. With all my zest, I ran like I was in a battle to the immense
door  and  attempted on unlatched the door but failed. He lets
out a laugh and handlock me. I jostled to escape but I froze with
a sudden appearance of  a gun at my temple. His mysterious
eyes looked directly at me. I can't say a word. This wicked man
dragged me to sit on a rusty chair and tied both of my hands and
legs. He took out a blade then threaten to kill me if i'm not well
behaved.The words didn't affect me at all as I screamed my lungs
out.  A trust of the knife slicing my neck and the blood dripping
one by one made me lost my mind. This frightening situation
made me tremble like  a leaf. I can't stand the continuous blood
and passed out. 

EMIRA NABILA RAMLI NOV 09, 2020 07:48AM

Describe a dark room

gory (Pika azli) ― ANONYMOUS
his blood smelled like a smithy,like raw iron and earth

― ANONYMOUS

(pikaj) ― ANONYMOUS
dripping blood (aleeya) ― ANONYMOUS
bloodstained ― SYAZA HAZIRAH BINTI MUHAMAD SHAPEE MOE

Blood-soaked ― ANONYMOUS
blood injury (nureen) ― ANONYMOUS

Grisly(ain nad) ― ANONYMOUS
to scream bloody murder (sofea) ― ANONYMOUS

Wounded ― ANONYMOUS
shining juicy red blood ows (adlina) ― ANONYMOUS

the abhorrent and foul-smelling dark room caused her body to
shiver in fear ― ANONYMOUS

lonely (pika azli) ― ANONYMOUS

unlighted (azza) ― ANONYMOUS

inky (hadirah sofea) ― ANONYMOUS

dingy (hadirah sofea) ― ANONYMOUS

the dingy and ghastly room made her body shudder in fear

― ANONYMOUS

Sinister ― NISA IRDINA BINTI MOHD RADZI MOE EMIRA NABILA RAMLI NOV 08, 2020 05:36PM

the dreary and ghastly room made her body shudder in fear ( sofea The girl tried to reach for a hockey stick at
moi) ― ANONYMOUS the corner of her room

dull (hadirah sofea) ― ANONYMOUS

somber ― ANONYMOUS

Sunless(pikaj) ― ANONYMOUS

denuded (J) ― ANONYMOUS

https://www.rogerebert.com/reviews/sinister-2012

― EMIRA NABILA RAMLI

gloomy and stench (smell)- Haziq ― ANONYMOUS

EMIRA NABILA RAMLI NOV 09, 2020 07:35AM

Describe the qualities of a victim of a house
break-in

WEAK, FEEBLE, VULNERABLE , PETITE ― EMIRA NABILA RAMLI Because it is the sole thing for me to protect myself from that
culprit if he did something out of his mind (man) ― ANONYMOUS
suddenly defenseless (aleeya) ― ANONYMOUS
because the situation there was pitch-black and the shining
petri ed ― ANONYMOUS hockey stick was my sole saviour (hanis) ― ANONYMOUS

EMIRA NABILA RAMLI NOV 09, 2020 05:26AM because it could be the only weapon that I have to protect myself
(aliah) ― ANONYMOUS
The man pointed a gun at the girl's head
Because i can use it for protecting me from any bad situation will
Without the slightest hint of sorrow in his menacing eyes , the happen (hana) ― ANONYMOUS
perpetrator pointed his bronzy-metal unfathomable gun at my
innocent temple, making my adrenaline rush and leaving me because it was the only object I could reach out to that can rescue
trembling in utmost/extreme/ultimate fear. me in the darkness ― IZZAH ZAIDI

because my mind was as dark as the room I was in as I have to
depend solely on myself at the time and the disturbing thought
that no one was aware of the situation I was in didn't help me.

― ANONYMOUS

^ puteri ― ANONYMOUS

Nice one, Puteri. ― ANONYMOUS

WOODEN, METAL, STURDY, LONG ― EMIRA NABILA RAMLI

EMIRA NABILA RAMLI NOV 08, 2020 05:26PM EMIRA NABILA RAMLI NOV 09, 2020 06:15PM

EXAMPLE OF A FULL PARAGRAPH WAKING UP TO FIND A BURGLAR IN YOUR
ROOM

The horror of waking up to find an
intruder in your bedroom
Waking up to find a burglar has left
Moira Petty afraid to be home alone One
in four victims of burglary are left
suffering from anxiety or depression
Two years on, Moira still panics when she hears a noise in the night
Undoubtedly, it's one of your worst fears.

MAIL ONLINE

ANONYMOUS NOV 10, 2020 09:01AM

Juwanda Erfan Mansor

   Out of nowhere, my eyes were caught by a long wooden
hockey stick that lay behind the door of my spacious bedroom
and immediately tiptoed to get the only weapon that I
encountered to save my life from being the predator of a vicious
man. As  I have always exhibited in coming up with resourceful
plans, I grew up supremely con dent in my brilliant skill in
which I was particularly talented in taekwondo. Besieged by the
knowledge and in the midst of recollection, I tried to visualize
the skills that my father had taught about self-defense whenever
I encountered anyone suspicious. I made a virtue of necessity
and without further ado, I boldly exited the room and raced
towards the front door. Suddenly, glaring lights blinded me as he
turned up with his cynical/wry and menacing smile that took
away my mobility to make any movements and even
run/paralyzed me in fear. Torn between the two for a very long
time I was trembling with fear and astounded enshrouding me. I
only had time to monologue with my creator to say “help me
god” before the evil assailant rammed into my little petite body.
At the crept night, just hot tears scalded my eyes as shock
caused my body frail. It was torrential rain outside, the piercing
sound of the imported glass shattering saturated with the air
when I roughly grabbed the small vase. What made him fuming
mad was when I tried to escape from him by kicking his belly
that plump and stout but unfortunately it might seem trivial as
he pulverized to a pulp and launched two severe punches to my
face due to my action of throwing the vase.
I was in a daze and feel my blood run cold

ANONYMOUS NOV 09, 2020 05:51PM ANONYMOUS NOV 10, 2020 07:38AM

SYARAH Juwanda Erfan

My eyes were darted on the sight of the long wooden hockey While at the same time he tried to wake me up as I shut my eyes,
stick at the corner of the room which was about three steps imagined myself to get far away from this maniac who was my
away from me. The hockey stick was supposedly hard enough to dad’s best friend. I gave my mind fully concentrated to ponder
make the assailant a bit dizzy so i can take a chance of survival and contemplated about how to escape from his tightly
although there was barely any chances for me to survive with my embraced. As I got caught by the lunatic, I was not allowed to
short legs and the fear inside of me which send shivers that stand up, therefore without any mercy he hauled me to the
might affect my moves. I made a long step towards the hockey tender couch and pointed a gun at my skinny neck, beckoned me
stick so that i did not have take too much time to grab it. I took a to shut my mouth. At that time, the situation was implacable and
strong grip upon it and smashed it towards the assailant's face. he could not unravel the knot of his anger towards me due to the
While he was screaming in pain, he shown a sign of anger when fact that he did not had a higher position in the company that
he was cursing and throwing bad words to me. I took a chance my dad worked.
to run for my life while he was still in pain.

NISA IRDINA BINTI MOHD RADZI MOE NOV 10, 2020 07:38AM prayers as I sauntered cautiously my way towards it. Stealing a
glance at my surroundings, the silhouette intruder suddenly
NISA'S VERSION 2 patted my shoulders from behind making my elemental surge of
adrenaline rush especially when he pointed a bronzy-metal
I had a vague recollection of placing my brother’s sturdy carbon unfathomable gun at my head. I began to shout at the top of my
bre hockey stick that my father bought for his past birthday lungs, more piercingly than I had ever thought possible. With
the energy I had, I grapple with the big-boned man in order to
gift. As soon as I casted my mind back, the intruder’s footsteps let myself out.
began to come closer to my hide spot, causing my whole body to
dispatch chills down my spine. The last rays of the street lamps
along my house fell slanting through the window whereas I
noticed a long-handled stick with one curved end that used in
hockey leaned on the wall. Like a rat up a drainpipe, I marched
warily through all the hazards to grab it, ceaselessly chanting my

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