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SM, Michelle Tewsbury
ASM, Erin Patterson

Created by Erin Patterson

Line Notes Character Page Line Type
Actor Elliot 9 …so she crawls out of bed… Changed word
N. Jimenez Elliot 9 "That's how we ate them in Changed word
N. Jimenez Puerto Rico…"
10 …and I've been keeping my Changed word
L. Williams Yaz mouth closed.
10 I just need a John Hancock. Changed words
N. Jimenez Yaz 10 …and life is short, and you can Separted lineds
L. Williams Yaz only live in mediocrity so long.

N. Jimenez Elliot 10 You show all us cousins…is Changed and

posible. dropped words

I. McGee Aman 11 Get an authentic point of view. Dropped and

added words

I. McGee Aman 12 He needs a right-hand man, an Changed and

expert to help him. added words

N. Tomasik Orangutan 13 …and read every post I've ever Changed words

put in here…

I. Williams Chutes&Ladders 14 I'm like, this is it, I'm going to Changed word

meet my maker.

N. Jimenez Elliot 15 Listen, the delivery guy's out… Added words

N. Jimenez Elliot 15 Cool, sorry for the Changed words
L. Williams Yaz
N. Jimenez Elliot inconvenience.
L. Williams Yaz
L. Williams Yaz 15 It was called Free Jazz… Changed tense
N. Jimenez Elliot
16 All right, that'll be ready in Dropped words

fifteen minutes.

16 I saved up enough to find my Changed words

first music teacher -

16 He was old, he had jowls…go Changed words

home and write."

17 My mom's on a machine and Added word

you're dropping vocab words?!

N. Jimenez Fountainhead 18 ..it's less like getting high and Changed words
more like trying to build a time
machine.

B. Holleman Fountainhead 18 You meet with the school… Changed word

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B. Holleman Fountainhead 19 …she'd get suspicious if I were Changed words
at meetings all the time.

N. Tomasik Orangutan 20 The guy's a hoax. Changed word

I. Williams Chutes&Ladders 20 Damn straight I'll chase his ass Added words

out my forest.

I. Williams Chutes&Ladders 21 I'm sure your penis is as big as Changed words
that javelin you used to throw.

N. Tomasik Orangutan 21 …I'm about to go over to his Changed word

L. Williams Yaz house and start looking for one
L. Williams Yaz
N. Jimenez Elliot myself!
L. Williams Yaz
L. Williams Yaz 22 I'm like, damn, let Ginny be Changed words
N. Jimenez Yaz
L. Williams Yaz buried first.

22 I ruled out seven, you make the Dropped words

final call.

23 That looks like her garden. Dropped words

23 It was an elaborate bait and Dropped words

switch.

24 Ask him not to come to the Changed words

funeral.

24 You know, he's been to four Changed words

funerals...

24 …there was a part of him, Work

under it all, that was disgusted.

The open casket. The prayers.

L. Williams Yaz 24 For that big cheeseburger Dropped word
L. Williams Yaz
L. Williams Yaz smile?
L. Williams Yaz
L. Williams Yaz 25 What do you think it's like to be Changed words

L. Williams Yaz him?
L. Williams Yaz
25 I bet in his family funerals are Omitted line

rare occasions.

25 I was dyeing her hair…sure as Work

hell can't."

25 William told me every time I Changed and

went to North Philly…play added words

some Pictionary."

26 But Ginny grabbed the torch. Added word

26 You going with him? Added word

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L. Williams Yaz 26 …I may never step foot in North Changed words

Philly again.

L. Williams Yaz 26 Probably we should order some Added words

flowers first, though.

N. Tomasik Orangutan 27 What do you really really really Dropped word

want Chutes&Ladders?

N. Tomasik Orangutan 27 Do you have money? Changed words

B. Holleman Fountainhead 30 Last night we ran out of butter Changed words

while my wife was cooking…

B. Holleman Fountainhead 30 Chutes&Ladders, why do I get Changed words
the feeling you'd be the first in
line…cheering if I relapse?

B. Holleman Fountainhead 31 I have a problem. Changed words

S. West Odessa 32 I know you can do this… Called

B. Holleman Fountainhead 34 I put my son's picture on my Changed word

cell phone…

S. West Odessa 34 The Jersey Shore. Atlantic City. Order of words

The Philadelphia airport.

S. West Odessa 35 Most people lie at one time or Omitted

another on the site.

S. West Odessa 36 I have and it usually doesn't Changed words

end up so good.

S. West Odessa 36 Well, get it from Yaz's mom. Added word

S. West Odessa 37 …I ain't got no money. Changed words

B. Holleman Fountainhead 37 I thought this was going to be a Added words

private meeting.

S. West Odessa 37 She was my sister and you are Called

my son, too.

N. Jimenez Elliot 38 I looked at that chat room Added words

once…became such a saint?

N. Jimenez Elliot 38 I remember thinking, wow, this Work

is it…I stop remembering.

L. Williams Yaz 39 One time you came to babysit Changed word

me…

N. Jimenez Elliot 41 This isn't about the money. This Changed words

is shaking hands.

N. Jimenez Elliot 41 This is the bare minimum… Added and

dropped words

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L. Williams Yaz 41 I think legally that might be like Dropped word

breaking and entering.

L. Williams Yaz 41 You think Ginny would want Changed and

you acting this way? added words

L. Williams Yaz 42 I can search all the threads Changed and

right now. added words

N. Tomasik Orangutan 44 One day I'll win a Trivial Dropped word

Pursuit's wedge with that.

I. Williams Chutes&Ladders 44 Don't give yourself a reason to Dropped words

go back to the shadows.

N. Tomasik Orangutan 45 …the train ride, what the river Omitted

looks like.

N. Tomasik Orangutan 46 …I'll actually feel something? Order of words
N. Tomasik Orangutan 46
I'm getting on the train, I'm Changed word

going to see the house where I

was born.

L. Williams Yaz 48 Eugenia Ortiz Added and

N. Jimenez Elliot 50 change

L. Williams Yaz 50 Oh no. Oh no you fucking Added and
L. Williams Yaz 51
didn't! MOM!!! Get up! dropped words

33 Ontario street. Omitted

Mom? Call me back Added words

immediately, it's an emergency.

S. West Odessa 52 Looking for an owner. Changed word
L. Williams
I. Williams Orangutan 52 I'm very sorry. Omitted line

Chutes&Ladders 52 Come on, three days straight I Changed words

been worrying about you. I

have time-sensitive

information.

N. Tomasik Orangutan 53 Had my shit pegged. Added words
N. Tomasik Orangutan 53
Oy, and how the hell am I going Changed words

to get out of teaching that day?

L. Williams Yaz 55 Hello, I am Freedom&Noise. Changed words
L. Williams Yaz
L. Williams Yaz 56 …first rooting itself deep in my Dropped word
gut.
L. Williams Yaz
56 What did I do to earn all that I Changed words
have?

56 You know how Odessa got into Added words
haiku in the first place?

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L. Williams Yaz 56 I gave her a haiku collection for Changed words
L. Williams Yaz
Christmas.
L. Williams
56 Tenure, no questions. Waaaay Added words
L. Williams Yaz
L. Williams Yaz tenured, like by the age of

N. Tomasik Orangutan twenty-four.
N. Jimenez Elliot
L. Williams Yaz I wrote a list on a piece of

N. Jimenez Elliot paper…my list full of crumbs,

L. Williams Yaz decoys, and Band-Aids.
N. Jimenez Elliot
N. Jimenez Elliot 56 Ginny did things. Changed tense
N. Jimenez Elliot
N. Jimenez Elliot 57 …and most necessary seed in Dropped words

N. Jimenez Elliot the world and it's going to

N. Jimenez Elliot bloom!

58 Everyone got their luggage Added word

already.

60 …smuggled a coqui back with Dropped words

her kotex and got arrested.

59 She used to smuggle stuff back, Dropped words

too. She'd tuck it below her

boobs.

60 Yo, you think if I jumped off this Changed words

rock right now and dove into

that water, I'd survive?

60 …worth more than Ginny's Changed word

whole house.

60 You are one crazy Added word

motherfucking adjunct! before line

60 I'm not flying back with you. Changed words

61 This dream was different…it's Work details

Mami Ginny.

61 She puts on her glasses to see Work details

my face…into my fucking soul?

61 I wanted Mami Odessa to Work

relapse…take the bad fucking

mom?

61 You've got armor, you've got Order of lines

ideas…