NAME : NURUL AIN NAZIRAH BINTI MOHD ZAID INDEX NUMBER : 2023172310039 IC NUMBER : 040123101386 CLASS : PPT1S1-10 NAME OF LECTURER : MISS ANG CHING TING DATE OF SUBMISSION : 24 NOVEMBER 2023 INSTITUT PENDIDIKAN GURU KAMPUS ILMU KHAS TASK 3: DIGITAL PRODUCT GEEC 1052 EFFECTIVE COMMUNICATION IN ENGLISH
ESSAY PRE-WRITING DRAFTING REVISING EDITING PUBLISHING
WHAT’S THE PROBLEM WITH E-SPORTS -ONLINE POST-
PRE-WRITING Audience: Public Genre: Online post Purpose of text: Give information Topic of writing: Issues Regarding E-sport References: https://vulcanpost.com/650733/msia-esports-growthissues/ https://theconversation.com/the-problem-of-treating-play-likework-how-esports-can-harm-well-being-78366
PRE-WRITING Introduction: what is E-sport ? Main Idea 1: E-sport is more than just playing games, it can also make games. Supporting detail 1: make many people think that e-sports is just game that playing for fun. Supporting detail 2: many parents forbid their children from participating in e-sports because it is a waste of time. Supporting detail 3: ease more people who lack formal education Conclusion: help more people for example, asia ranked 22nd in estimated global gaming revenue for 2018 at US$633 million.
PRE-WRITING Main Idea 2: lack of convenience Supporting detail 1: poor internet performance. Supporting detail 2: no gadget or lack of time to go to place to play online games. Supporting detail 3: expensive for trainer payment Conclusion : there are too many restrictions that make a lack of people to participate in the e-sports game industry. Main Idea 3: training that affect health Supporting detail 1: very rigorous training Supporting detail 2: Lack of Social Activity Supporting detail 3: Lack of Physical Activity Conclusion: very strict training will make them neglect their health
DRAFTING Esports is short form for Electronic Sports, a terminology which is according to the British Esports Association, describes the competitive world of gaming. Esports players consist of groups who play games to compete against each other at a professional level to win large sums of money and trophies as prizes. The first isues is, E-sports is more than just playing games, it can also make games. Actually, the esports industry is a huge industry that has the potential to provide high quality jobs including software developers, engineers, graphic designers, illustrators, and even e-sports marketers and advertisers. Next, it’s also make many people think that e-sports is just game that playing for fun because they are play e-sports games just to relieve stress or fatigue. Then, many parents forbid their children from participating in e-sports because it is a waste of time. Many parents see e-sports games as just a game and have no future because most teenagers play these games to the point of neglecting their studies. Furthermore, its also ease more people who lack formal education. For instance, it helps people who are not excellent in studies to make money with this game like making games for example mobile legends. In conclusion, e-sports help more people to make some money. For example, asia ranked 22nd in estimated global gaming revenue for 2018 at US$633 million.
DRAFTING Other issues is lack of convenience. Frankly, Malaysia is a country that have poor internet performance . The average internet speed in Malaysia was 8.9 Mbps only. From this point, some of teenager have a problem like don’t have any gadget or lack of time to go to place to play online games especially for teenager who lives in village. They need to go to cyber cafe to play games. After that, expensive for trainer payment. The very high trainee fees cause teenagers to not be able to pay because they only have money given by their parents during schools. At last, there are too many restrictions that make a lack of people to participate in the e-sports game industry. Lastly, training that affect health. From my opinion, e-sport is a sport that have very rigorous training. Research have found that e-sports players train for 14 to 16 hours without adequate rest like a factory. Meanwhile, player lack of social activity. It is because after they training for 14 to 16 hours , they might be so tired, so they don’t have time to spend time with others which is their family or friends. Other than that, it’s also affect player health because lack of physical activity. They always focus in training and facing the pc without go out from their place. So that, they can’t do some exercise and ease to get sick. At last, very strict training will make them neglect their health such as not taking care of eating and sleeping time and doing less exercise. In conclusion, however, e-sports is not something harmful if an individual can organize their life well and e-sports can raise Malaysia on the world stage..
Esports is short form for Electronic Sports, a terminology which is according to the British Esports Association, describes the competitive world of gaming. Esports players consist of groups who play games to compete against each other at a professional level to win large sums of money and trophies as prizes. REVISING The first isues is, E-sports is more than just playing games, it can also make games. Actually, the e-sports industry is a huge industry that has the potential to provide high quality jobs including software developers, engineers, graphic designers, illustrators, and even e-sports marketers and advertisers. Next, Furthermore, its also ease more people who lack formal education. For instance, it helps people who are not excellent in studies to make money with this game like making games for example mobile legends. Next, it’s also make many people think that e-sports is just game that playing for fun because they are play e-sports games just to relieve stress or fatigue. Then, many parents forbid their children from participating in e-sports because it is a waste of time. Many parents see e-sports games as just a game and have no future because most teenagers play these games to the point of neglecting their studies. In conclusion, e-sports enable more people to earn a living. With an expected US$633 million in gaming income for 2018, Asia, for instance, placed 22nd globally.
Lastly, lack of convenience. Frankly, Malaysia is a country that have poor internet performance . The average internet speed in Malaysia was 8.9 Mbps only. From this point, some of teenager have a problem like don’t have any gadget or lack of time to go to place to play online games especially for teenager who lives in village. They need to go to cyber cafe to play games. Following that, the cost of paying the trainer was high. Teens who only receive money from their parents at school are unable to pay the extremely high trainee fees. At last, there are too many restrictions that make a lack of people to participate in the e-sports game industry. REVISING Other issues is training that affect health. From my opinion, e-sport is a sport that have very rigorous training. Research have found that e-sports players train for 14 to 16 hours without adequate rest like a factory. The absence of social interaction among players in the interim. It's because they may be extremely exhausted after exercising for 14 to 16 hours, which leaves them with little time to spend with friends and family. Other than that, it’s also affect player health because lack of physical activity. They always focus in training and facing the pc without go out from their place. So that, they can’t do some exercise and ease to get sick. At last, very strict training will make them neglect their health such as not taking care of eating and sleeping time and doing less exercise. In conclusion, however, e-sports is not something harmful if an individual can organize their life well and e-sports can raise Malaysia on the world stage..
EDITING "Esports, " short for "Electronic Sports, " is defined by the British Esports Association as the competitive video game sector. Esports competitors are groups of gamers who compete professionally in video games in an attempt to win large sums of money and awards. The first peoblem is that although e-sports is a platform for gaming, it can also be utilised to create new games. There are some really good occupations in the e-sports sector, such as software developers, engineers, illustrators, graphic designers, marketers, and advertisers. This also makes life easier for the majority of those without a formal education. It makes it easier to make money from games like Mobile Legends. For example, for people who struggle in school. Furthermore, because players play these games to unwind or decompress, many people erroneously believe that e-sports are solely a recreational activity. Subsequently, many parents forbid their children from participating in e-sports, believing it to be wasted time. For many parents, e-sports are little more than a craze because their children play these games to the point where they neglect their education. In conclusion, e-sports enable more people to earn a living. With an expected US$633 million in gaming income for 2018, Asia, for instance, placed 22nd globally.
EDITING Training-related concerns are another problem. In my opinion, e-sports require really intense training for participation. E-sports athletes practise for 14–16 hours a day, seven days a week, without taking breaks, much like factories, according to research. The lack of interpersonal communication between participants in the interval. It's because they might not have had much time to spend with friends and family after working out for 14 or 16 hours. The players' health is also impacted by their inactivity. They never move, focusing solely on their programmed instruction. It's preventing them from exercising and increasing the likelihood that they may get sick. Eventually, a very strenuous training programme will force them to neglect their health, which includes cutting back on their food, sleep, and exercise. Lastly, convenience is lacking. To be quite honest, Malaysia has terrible internet connectivity. In Malaysia, 8.9 Mbps was the average internet speed. Teens who reside in rural areas particularly face issues such as not owning a device or not having the time to go to a location where they can play online games. For gaming, they must visit a cybercafe. After that, paying the trainer was very expensive. The astronomically high trainee fees are unaffordable for teenagers who only get money from their parents at school. Ultimately, there are too many limitations, which discourage people from entering the e-sports gaming industry. Nevertheless, e-sports can help Malaysia become more well-known globally and are not dangerous if a person can manage their life correctly.
PUBLISHING "Esports, " short for "Electronic Sports, " is defined by the British Esports Association as the competitive video game sector. Esports competitors are groups of gamers who compete professionally in video games in an attempt to win large sums of money and awards. Although e-sports is a platform for gaming, it can also be utilised to create new games. There are some really good occupations in the e-sports sector, such as software developers, engineers, illustrators, graphic designers, marketers, and advertisers. This also makes life easier for the majority of those without a formal education. Its make more easier to make money from games like Mobile Legends. For example, people who struggle in school. Furthermore, because players play these games to unwind or decompress, many people erroneously believe that e-sports are solely a recreational activity. Subsequently, many parents forbid their children from participating in e-sports, believing it to be wasting time. For many parents, e-sports are little more than a craze because their children play these games to the point where they neglect their education. In conclusion, e-sports enable more people to earn a living. With an expected US$633 million in gaming income for 2018, Asia, for instance, placed 22nd globally. WHAT’S THE PROBLEM WITH E-SPORTS 1) Not Only For Gaming, But Also Can Create Games
PUBLISHING Training-related concerns are another problem. In my opinion, e-sports require really intense training for participation. E-sports athletes practise for 14–16 hours a day, seven days a week, without taking breaks, much like factories, according to research. The lack of interpersonal communication between participants in the interval. It's because they might not have had much time to spend with friends and family after working out for 14 or 16 hours. The players' health is also impacted by their inactivity. They never move, focusing solely on their programmed instruction. It's preventing them from exercising and increasing the likelihood that they may get sick. Eventually, a very strenuous training programme will force them to neglect their health, which includes cutting back on their food, sleep, and exercise. 2) Training-related Concerns
PUBLISHING Lastly, convenience is lacking. To be quite honest, Malaysia has terrible internet connectivity. In Malaysia, 8.9 Mbps was the average internet speed. Teens who reside in rural areas particularly face issues such as not owning a device or not having the time to go to a location where they can play online games. For gaming, they must visit a cybercafe. After that, paying the trainer was very expensive. The astronomically high trainee fees are unaffordable for teenagers who only get money from their parents at school. Ultimately, there are too many limitations, which discourage people from entering the e-sports gaming industry. Nevertheless, e-sports can help Malaysia become more well-known globally and are not dangerous if a person can manage their life correctly. 3) Lack of Convenience
REFERENCES: Justin Lee. (2018, November 7). Before we pump RM10 mil into the esports industry, let's fix these 4 issues first. Vulcan Post. https://vulcanpost.com/650733/msia-esports-growth-issues/ Tom Brock. (2017, May 26). The problem of treating play like work - how e-sports can harm well being. The Conversation. https://theconversation.com/the-problem-of-treating-play-like-workhow-esports-can-harm-well-being-78366
INSTITUT PENDIDIKAN GURU KAMPUS ILMU KHAS TASK 3: DIGITAL PRODUCT GEEC 1052 EFFECTIVE COMMUNICATION IN ENGLISH NAME : NURUL AIN NAZIRAH BINTI MOHD ZAID INDEX NUMBER : 2023172310039 IC NUMBER : 040123101386 CLASS : PPT1S1-10 NAME OF LECTURER : MISS ANG CHING TING DATE OF SUBMISSION : 24 NOVEMBER 2023
essay 5. Pre-writing Drafting Revising Editing Publishing 4. 3. 2. 1.
WHY STUDENTS ARE GETTING LAZIER TO STUDY -EMAIL-
PRE-WRITING Audience: Friend Genre: Email Purpose of text: give rensponse Topic of writing: why students are getting lazier to study. References: https://www.freelancehouse.co.uk/blog/reasons-of-studentslaziness/ https://resilienteducator.com/classroomresources/academic-procrastination-anxiety/
PRE-WRITING Introduction: greeting friend. Main Point 1: Students are tired and hungry. Supporting detail 1: tight schedule. Supporting detail 2: insufficient sleep. Supporting detail 3: irregular dining schedule. Conclusion: they will be easily sick and lazy to study. Main Point 2: Students lose their passion and are less motivated. Supporting detail 1: Results are not excellent. Supporting detail 2: peer influence. Supporting detail 3: unstable emotions. Conclusion: motivation in study is the most important thing to get success.
PRE-WRITING Main Point 3: have a relationship. Supporting detail 1: insufficient time. Supporting detail 2: personal problem. Supporting detail 3: a change of priority. Conclusion: A large number of students who have relationships experience declining results in academic.
Hello Faleeq, I hope you are always doing well. I had received your email yesterday about why people are getting lazier to study. DRAFTING From my opinion, the first reason why students lazy to study because they are tired and hungry. From this point, we actually know that sometimes students have tight schedule. It is because normally students start their class 7.30 a.m and if they have tuition they will be home late. Additionally, students also get insufficient sleep. They will stay up at the night to finish their homework and do a revision. However, some students also like to playing game until midnight if they don’t have any homework to do. After that, irregular dining schedule. If they don’t get enough sleep. They will wake up late in the morning. So, they will skip breakfast. In conclusion, it this matter keep continues, they will be easily sick and lazy to study.
Another reason is students lose their passion and are less motivated. I believe that, mostly students will sad if their results that are not excellent because they will think that they have already been the best effort but not as successful as anyone else. Subsequently, peer influence. The surroundings will affect our thinking. If students are wrongly choosing friends, they will lose interest in study. Hence, unstable emotion. Unstable emotions will have a negative effect. For example if they stress they will lose focus. Lost focus will cause them to not be passionate to study. In conclusion, motivation in study is the most important thing to get success. So they need to find their motivation to keep focus to achieve their goals. DRAFTING
Lastly, have a relationship. I believe that, if students have a relationship, they will face insufficient time. The relationship will usually take a lot of time and attention. Therefore, students will neglect studies because of insufficient time. Next, students will not miss out on facing personal problems when in relationship. For example, when they are fighting for misunderstandings, they will be sad or stressful so that they do not have the time to study just to think about the problem they are facing. Then, a change of priority. Normal students have relationship, they are more busy prioritizing things in their relationships than studies. As such, their studies will get worse. In conclusion, Students who have a relationship during this study should be wise in balancing their personal and education affairs. DRAFTING In conclusion, not all students are lazy in their studies. To avoid this lazy happened, they must put in their minds what they want in the future. Indirectly, they will not easily give up in pursuit of their dreams.
Hello Faleeq, Hopefully, everything is going well for you. I had received your email yesterday about why people are getting lazier to study. REVISING From my opinion, the reason why students are lazier to study because students lose their passion and are less motivated. In my opinion, students are generally depressed when they receive subpar grades because they feel that, despite their best efforts, they have fallen short of everyone else's accomplishment. Subsequently, peer influence. The surroundings will affect our thinking. If students are wrongly choosing friends, they will lose interest in study. Hence, unstable emotion. Unstable emotions will have a negative effect. For example if they stress they will lose focus. Lost focus will cause them to not be passionate to study. In conclusion, motivation in study is the most important thing to get success. So they need to find their motivation to keep focus to achieve their goals.
Another reason is they are tired and hungry. From this point, we actually know that sometimes students have tight schedule. It's because classes often begin at 7:30 a.m., and students who owe tuition will arrive home later than expected. Additionally, students also get insufficient sleep. They will stay up at the night to finish their homework and do a revision. However, some students also like to playing game until midnight if they don’t have any homework to do. After that, irregular dining schedule. If they don’t get enough sleep. They will wake up late in the morning. So, they will skip breakfast. In conclusion, it this matter keep continues, they will be easily sick and lazy to study. REVISING
Lastly, have a relationship. I believe that, if students have a relationship, they will face insufficient time. The relationship will usually take a lot of time and attention. As a result of having little time, students would ignore their studies. Next, students will not miss out on facing personal problems when in relationship. For example, when they are fighting for misunderstandings, they will be sad or stressful so that they do not have the time to study just to think about the problem they are facing. Then, a change of priority. Normal students have relationship, they are more busy prioritizing things in their relationships than studies. As such, their studies will get worse. In conclusion, Students who have a relationship during this study should be wise in balancing their personal and education affairs. REVISING In conclusion, not all students are lazy in their studies. To avoid this lazy happened, they must put in their minds what they want in the future. Essentially, they won't give up easily on their aspirations. .
Hello Faleeq, Hopefully, everything is going well for you. You emailed me yesterday with your thoughts on why people are becoming lazier to studies. EDITING I believe that pupils get less driven and lose their passion for learning, which makes them lazier to study. In my opinion, students are generally depressed when they receive subpar grades because they feel that, despite their best efforts, they have fallen short of everyone else's accomplishment. Peer pressure follows. Thinking is influenced by the environment. Students will lose interest in studying if they make poor buddy choices. Therefore, erratic feeling. Feelings that are unstable will not be good. They will become distracted, for instance, if they are stressed. They will become unmotivated to learn if they lose focus. Let's sum up by saying that the key to success in the classroom is motivation. To accomplish their goals, people must so find the motivation to stay focused.
EDITING Their hunger and exhaustion are further factors. As a result, we are aware that students occasionally have busy schedules. It's because classes often begin at 7:30 a.m., and students who owe tuition will arrive home later than expected. In addition, students also don't get enough sleep. In order to complete their schoolwork and make revisions, they will be up late at night. On the other hand, if they don't have any schoolwork to complete, someof them like playing games till midnight. Following that, a irregular meal plan. If their sleep is insufficient, they are going to wake up late. They'll skip breakfast as a result. In conclusion, students won't be motivated to study if this issue persists and they will become quickly unwell.
In summary, not every student is a sloth in the classroom. They need to decide what they want out of life in order to prevent this lazy behaviour. Essentially, they won't give up easily on their aspirations. EDITING Finally, establish a relationship. If students are in a relationship, I think they won't have enough time. It normally takes a lot of time and effort to maintain a connection. As a result of having little time, students would ignore their studies. Students will also be able to experience dealing with personal issues in relationships. For instance, when people are arguing over miscommunications, they get depressed or anxious and find it difficult to concentrate because they are preoccupied with their problems. Then, the order of importance changed. Regular students prioritise their relationships over their studies. As a result, their academic performance will suffer. In summary, students who are in a relationship throughout this study should exercise caution when juggling their personal and academic obligations. I believe that's all I have to write. See you afterwards. Goodbye.
PUBLISHING Hello Faleeq, Hopefully, everything is going well for you. You emailed me yesterday with your thoughts on why people are becoming lazier to studies. TO: [email protected] FROM: [email protected] SUBJECT: WHY STUDENTS ARE GETTING LAZIER TO STUDY I believe that pupils get less driven and lose their passion for learning, which makes them lazier to study. In my opinion, students are generally depressed when they receive subpar grades because they feel that, despite their best efforts, they have fallen short of everyone else's accomplishment. Peer pressure follows. Thinking is influenced by the environment. Students will lose interest in studying if they make poor buddy choices. Therefore, erratic feeling. Feelings that are unstable will not be good. They will become distracted, for instance, if they are stressed. They will become unmotivated to learn if they lose focus. Let's sum up by saying that the key to success in the classroom is motivation. To accomplish their goals, people must so find the motivation to stay focused.
PUBLISHING Their hunger and exhaustion are further factors. As a result, we are aware that students occasionally have busy schedules. It's because classes often begin at 7:30 a.m., and students who owe tuition will arrive home later than expected. In addition, students also don't get enough sleep. In order to complete their schoolwork and make revisions, they will be up late at night. On the other hand, if they don't have any schoolwork to complete, some of them like playing games till midnight. Following that, a irregular meal plan. If their sleep is insufficient, they are going to wake up late. As a result, they'll skip breakfast. In conclusion, students won't be motivated to study if this issue persists and they will become quickly unwell. Finally, establish a relationship. If students are in a relationship, I think they won't have enough time. It normally takes a lot of time and effort to maintain a connection. As a result of having little time, students would ignore their studies. Students will also be able to experience dealing with personal issues in relationships. For instance, when people are arguing over miscommunications, they get depressed or anxious and find it difficult to concentrate because they are preoccupied with their problems. Then, the order of importance changed. Regular students prioritise their relationships over their studies. As a result, their academic performance will suffer. In summary, students who are in a relationship throughout this study should exercise caution when juggling their personal and academic obligations.
PUBLISHING In summary, not every student is a sloth in the classroom. They need to decide what they want out of life in order to prevent this lazy behaviour. Essentially, they won't give up easily on their aspirations. I believe that's all I have to write. See you afterwards. Goodbye.
REFERENCES: Alejandra. (2018, April 13). The reasons of students’ laziness. Freelance House. https://www.freelancehouse. co.uk/blog/reasons-ofstudents-laziness/ Jennifer Gunn. (2019, March 5). is it student laziness or something more?. Resilient Educator. https://www.freelancehouse. co.uk/blog/reasons-ofstudents-laziness/
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