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Natdanai Panyapratheep 
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Outline
Main idea: What Makes My University a Good Place to Study this is topic
Supporting idea 1. Many educational service locations.
Supporting idea 2.There are scholarships for students.
Supporting idea 3.Professors are qualified personnel.
Conclusion: That’s the reason my university is a good place to study.
Purpose : แนะนำ มห วทิ ย ลัยผูท้ ่ีกำ ลังตอ้ งก รเข้ มห วทิ ย ลัย และทำ ให้เหน็ ด้ นดีเก่ียวกั บก รเรียนในมห วทิ ย ลัย
ของผม
Audience : คนท่ีตอ้ งก รจะศกึ ษ ตอ่ ในมห วทิ ย ลัย คนท่ีลังเลว่ ควรเข้ มห วทิ ย ลัยน้ี ดีไหม

What Makes My University a Good Place to Study

Kasetsart University, one of the top universities in Thailand, is a very good place to study
for many reasons. First, It is located in a location that is easy to travel. There is BTS named by
the name of the university and it is located at the university gate. Also can enter the university
from 3 roads: Vipavadee, Phaholyothin, and Ngamwongwan. Secondly, there are many
educational services at the university. KU library is very big and it has many studies zone. For
example, there is notebook and iPad to borrow, computer zone for study, seat for reading,
ebook on the KU library website, and so on. It also has a library for some major such as English
major has a library located in the Faculty of Humanities. Thirdly, Scholarships. There are
scholarships for students who have good grades or poor students. Last, Professors in the
university is qualified person. They have highly subject knowledge so they can teach the
students efficiency. Students can have good advice from professors. All of these make
Kasetsart University be a good place to study.

What Makes My University a Good Place to Study

Kasetsart University, one of the top universities in Thailand, is a very good place
to study for many reasons. First, It is located in a location that is easy to travel. There is
BTS named by the name of the university and it is located at the university gate. Also
can enter the university from 3 roads: Vipavadee, Phaholyothin, and Ngamwongwan.
Secondly, there are many educational services at the university. KU library is very big
and it has many studies zone. For example, there is notebook and iPad to borrow,
computer zone for study, seat for reading, ebook on the KU library website, and so on. It
also has a library for some major such as English major has a library located in the
Faculty of Humanities. Thirdly, Scholarships. There are scholarships for students who
have good grades or poor students. Last, Professors in the university are qualified
person. They have highly subject knowledge so they can teach the students efficiency.
Students can have good advice from professors. This place makes students easy to
learning. All of these make Kasetsart University be a good place to study.

Listing assignment final draft

Kasetsart University, one of the top universities in Thailand, is a very good place to study
for many reasons. First, It is located in a location that is easy to travel. There is BTS named by
the name of the university and it is located at the university gate. Also can enter the university
from 3 roads: Vipavadee, Phaholyothin, and Ngamwongwan. Secondly, there are many
educational services at the university. KU library is very big and it has many studies zone. For
example, there is notebook and iPad to borrow, computer zone for study, seat for reading, e-
book on the KU library website, and so on. It also has a library for some major such as English
major has a library located in the Faculty of Humanities. Thirdly, Scholarships. There are
scholarships for students who have good grades or poor students. Last, Professors in the
university are qualified person. They have highly subject knowledge so they can teach the
students efficiency. Students can have good advice from professors. These things make
students more comfortable in their studies. Cause effective learning. This is why Kasetsart
University is a good place to study.

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Peer-response Form for Writing assignments

Peer-Response Form for Author

Your name (Author): Natdanai Panyapratheep
Peer’s name: Petigorn Jariyaboon
Writing assignment # ___1____ (Listing, Sequence, Compare-contrast, Cause-effect)

PART ONE: QUANTITATIVE ASSESSMENT
Directions: ​Check one box with ✔ for each of these12 areas.

Cooperative Learning Skills: (peer) Strongly Agree Neutral Disagree Strongly
agree ✔ disagree
1. Gives constructive and useful feedback
for writing revision ✔ Neutral Disagree Strongly
ให้ขอ้ เสนอแนะแบบสร้างสรรค์ ชัดเจน มีประโยชน์ ✔ disagree
สามารถนําไปปรั บแกง้ านได้
2. Demonstrates a good balance of active ✔ ✔
listening and participation Neutral Disagree Strongly
มีความสมดุลในการเป็นผูฟ้ ั งและผูม้ ีสว่ นร่วมท่ีดี ✔
3. Asks useful questions disagree
ตัง้ คาํ ถามท่ีเป็นประโยชน์ตอ่ การปรั บแกง้ านเขียน Strongly Agree
4.Shares information and personal agree ✔
understanding ✔
แบง่ ปั นขอ้ มูลและแสดงความเขา้ ใจสว่ นบุคคล
5.Identifies references with relevant Strongly Agree
information or examples agree
ระบุขอ้ มูลอา้ งอิงตา่ งๆ ​ท่ีมีขอ้ มูลเช่ือมโยงหรือ ✔
ตัวอยา่ งประกอบ

Self-Directed Learning:

6. Is well prepared for peer-response
มีความพร้อมในการทาํ กิจกรรมเป็นทีม
7. Shows appropriate depth of knowledge
มีความรู้ในระดั บท่ีน่ าพึงพอใจ
8. Is clear when explaining things to others
อธิบายสงิ่ ตา่ งๆ ไ​ ดอ้ ยา่ งชัดเจน

Interpersonal Skills:

9. Accepts useful feedback from others
ยอมรั บความคดิ เหน็ ท่ีเป็นประโยชน์จากผูอ้ ่ืน

Peer-response Form for Writing assignments

10. Is able to listen and understand what ✔
others are saying ​ฟั งและเขา้ ใจสงิ่ ท่ีผูอ้ ่ืนพูด ✔
11. Shows respect for the opinions and
feelings of others ✔
เคารพความคดิ เหน็ และความรู้สกึ ของผูอ้ ่ืน
12. Overall, both author and peer fully
accomplish the assignment
ทาํ หน้าท่ีท่ีไดร้ ั บมอบหมายไดล้ ุลว่ งอยา่ งสมบูรณ์

PART TWO: QUALITATIVE ASSESSMENT
Directions: ​Please answer the following two questions and provide examples, evidence and suggestions
as necessary.

1) What is the most valuable contribution your peer makes to your writing?
The conclusion is too short.

2) What is the most important thing your peer could do to more effectively help you revise your
writing essay?
He gave me the advice to summarize my essay and help me correct the grammar.

Peer-response Form for Writing assignments

Peer-Response Form for Peer

Your Name: Petigorn Jariyaboon
Author’s name: Natdanai Panyapratheep
Writing assignment # ___1____ (Listing, Sequence, Compare-contrast, Cause-effect)

PART ONE: QUANTITATIVE ASSESSMENT
Directions: C​ heck one box with ✔ for each of these areas.

Cooperative Learning Skills: (You as a peer) Strongly Agree Neutral Disagree Strongly
agree disagree
1. Gives constructive and useful feedback ✔ ✔
for writing revision ✔
ให้ขอ้ เสนอแนะแบบสร้างสรรค์ ชัดเจน มีประโยชน์ ✔ ✔
สามารถนําไปปรั บแกง้ านได้
2. Demonstrates a good balance of active
listening and participation
มีความสมดุลในการเป็นผูฟ้ ั งและผูม้ ีสว่ นร่วมท่ีดี
3. Asks useful questions
ตัง้ คาํ ถามท่ีเป็นประโยชน์ตอ่ การปรั บแกง้ านเขียน

4.Shares information and personal
understanding
แบง่ ปั นขอ้ มูลและแสดงความเขา้ ใจสว่ นบุคคล
5.Identifies references with relevant
information or examples
ระบุขอ้ มูลอา้ งอิงตา่ งๆ ​ท่ีมีขอ้ มูลเช่ือมโยงหรือ
ตัวอยา่ งประกอบ

Interpersonal Skills: Strongly Agree Neutral Disagree Strongly
agree ✔ disagree
6. Accepts the author’s explanation ✔
ยอมรั บคาํ อธิลายของผูเ้ ขียน
7. Is able to listen and understand what ✔
others are saying ​ฟั งและเขา้ ใจสงิ่ ท่ีผูอ้ ่ืนพูด
8. Shows respect for the opinions and feelings ✔
of others
เคารพความคดิ เหน็ และความรู้สกึ ของผูอ้ ่ืน
9. Overall, both author and peer fully
accomplish the assignment
ทาํ หน้าท่ีท่ีไดร้ ั บมอบหมายไดล้ ุลว่ งอยา่ งสมบูรณ์

Peer-response Form for Writing assignments

PART TWO: QUALITATIVE ASSESSMENT
Directions: ​Please answer the following two questions and provide examples, evidence and suggestions
as necessary.
1) What is the most valuable contribution you gave to the author?

Add the content of the summary
2) What is the most important thing you have learned from your peer’s writing?

When the writer can give an example well, it makes the idea clear and easy to read

Assignment Self-Assessment Form 2020

Name Natdanai Panyapratheep Assignment # 1

Course English Writing 01355231 Section 180 Date 2 November 2020

Short Description of Work:

This work is to present why Kasetsart University is a good place to study

What have I learned from this work?

I learned to write an essay by listing, so I can list the benefits or something like that to make the reader

understand the essay easily

What does this assignment show the writing skills I have learned? What are my strengths and weaknesses?

I list the reasons why Kasetsart is a good place to study. My strength is I can list the good reason clearly and my
weakness is my convention is bad.

What is/are the domain(s) that you did very well in this piece of writing? Rank 1 – 4 (1 = the most; 4 = the least)

__1___ Ideas and content ___2__ Organization

__3___ Voice __4___ Convention

What does this assignment show I need to improve? You can choose more than one.
⃞ Ideas and content: Explain _____________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

⃞ Organization: Explain _________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

⃞ Voice: Explain _______________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

⃞ Convention: Explain I don’t know how to use the language well because this is my first assignment.

What activities help me improve my writing skills? You can choose more than one.

⃞ First drafting ⃞ Journal writing ⃞ Self-assessment

⃞ Peer response ⃞ Teacher-student conference

What am I going to do to improve my writing? (You can write more on the other site)
I’ll read more articles to write a better essay.

Expected score for this assignment: ______4________ Give reasons: I think my reason is good but i can’t write it
well, so the reader may not understand what I think.