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Title: ​Different of Gaming Platforms
Purpose:​ People who want to buy a platform for gaming
Audience:​ Present the strengths of each gaming platform.

Topic sentence: T​ here are different types of gaming platforms today. Which is divided into
3 main types; Gaming PC, Gaming Phone, and Gaming Consoles. Each of which has its
own strengths.

Gaming PC
A: T​ he ability to play a variety of games. Most games are imported from other

platforms to PC Because it's the easiest and most used platform
B: i​ t can be used to work, watch movies, listen to music as well.

Gaming Phone
A: M​ ost of the games are easy to play and are optimized for the phone. Mobile

games are optimized to use the least graphics for the best performance so the phone can
handle it.

B:​ There are very few games with high graphics. most games on the phone are
limited to FPS at 30-60 only.

Game consoles
A: M​ ade specifically for gaming. Most of its games are made for consoles only. It’s

easy to control as it is designed to play games.
B: ​Most consoles have a very long lifespan and are not released frequently.

Conclusion: A​ ll platforms are good. It depends on your preferences if you want to pick one.
If you like playing a variety of games, choose the PC. If you like comfortable gaming, play
anywhere, anytime, choose Phone. If you like playing games with nice graphics, affordable,
choose Consoles.



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Audience: P​ eople who want to buy a platform for gaming

Purpose: ​Present the strengths of each gaming platform.

Gaming Platforms

There are different types of gaming platforms today. Which is divided into 3 main
types; Gaming PC, Gaming Phone, and Gaming Consoles. Each of which has its own
strengths.

Gaming PC has the ability to play a variety of games. Most games are imported from
other platforms to PC Because it's the easiest and most used platform. In addition, It can be
upgraded It can be continuously upgraded to improve its performance instead of buying a
new one. Also, it comes with very good graphic quality.

Gaming Phone is quite a new platform, but there are also many games like the PC.
Most of the games are easy to play and are optimized for the phone. Mobile games are
optimized to use the least graphics for the best performance so the phone can handle it. If
there’re some games that your phone can’t run, it’s mean your phone is not good enough, so
you have to buy a new one. But don't worry, there are very few games with high graphics.
most games on the phone are limited to FPS at 30-60 only.

Game consoles were made specifically for gaming. Most of its games are made for
consoles only. Although there is less game than PC and Mobile, every game is high quality.
although many games are limited to 60 FPS, they have spectacular graphics.
And because it has an A4 paper size, it is portable.

All platforms are good. It depends on your preferences if you want to pick one.
If you like playing a variety of games,

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Audience: People who want to buy a platform for gaming

Purpose: Present the strengths of each gaming platform.

Gaming Platforms

There are different types of gaming platforms today. Which is divided into 3 main
types; Gaming PC, Gaming Phone, and Gaming Consoles. Each of which has its own streng
ths.

Gaming PC has the ability to play a variety of games. Most games are imported from
other platforms to PC Because it's the easiest and most used platform. In addition, It can be
upgraded It can be continuously upgraded to improve its performance instead of buying a ne
w one. Also, it comes with very good graphic quality. If you’re a fan of high FPS game, Pc is
a good choice. But it's hard to carry because it's big, heavy, and lots of wires.

Gaming Phone is quite a new platform, but there are also many games like the PC.
Most of the games are easy to play and are optimized for the phone. Mobile games are
optimized to use the least graphics for the best performance so the phone can handle it. If th
ere’re some games that your phone can’t run, it’s mean your phone is not good enough, so y
ou have to buy a new one. But don't worry, there are very few games with high graphics.
most games on the phone are limited to FPS at 30-60 only. Finally, the best thing about the
gaming phone is you can bring it everywhere because your game is on your phone.

Game consoles were made specifically for gaming. Most of its games are made for
consoles only. Although there is less game than PC and Mobile, every game is high quality.
Most consoles have a very long lifespan and are not released frequently. If you bought one c
onsole, you can use it for up to 3-5 years without buying a new one. although many games a
re limited to 60 FPS, they have spectacular graphics.
And because it has an A4 paper size, it is portable.

All platforms are good. It depends on your preferences if you want to pick one.
If you like playing a variety of games, choose the PC. If you like comfortable gaming, play
anywhere, anytime, choose Phone. If you like playing games with nice graphics, affordable,
choose Consoles.





Peer-response Form for Writing assignments

10. Is able to listen and understand what ✔
others are saying ​ฟั งและเขา้ ใจสงิ่ ท่ีผูอ้ ่ืนพูด ✔
11. Shows respect for the opinions and
feelings of others ✔
เคารพความคดิ เหน็ และความรู้สกึ ของผูอ้ ่ืน
12. Overall, both author and peer fully
accomplish the assignment
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PART TWO: QUALITATIVE ASSESSMENT
Directions: ​Please answer the following two questions and provide examples, evidence and suggestions
as necessary.

1) What is the most valuable contribution your peer makes to your writing?
The conclusion is too short.

2) What is the most important thing your peer could do to more effectively help you revise your
writing essay?
He gave me the advice to summarize my essay and help me correct the grammar.

Peer-response Form for Writing assignments

Peer-Response Form for Peer

Your Name: Prasittichok srirada
Author’s name: Natdanai Panyapratheep
Writing assignment # ___3____ (Listing, Sequence, Compare-contrast, Cause-effect)

PART ONE: QUANTITATIVE ASSESSMENT
Directions: ​Check one box with ✔ for each of these areas.

Cooperative Learning Skills: (You as a peer) Strongly Agree Neutral Disagree Strongly
agree disagree
1. Gives constructive and useful feedback ✔ ✔
for writing revision ✔
ให้ขอ้ เสนอแนะแบบสร้างสรรค์ ชัดเจน มีประโยชน์ ✔ ✔
สามารถนําไปปรั บแกง้ านได้
2. Demonstrates a good balance of active
listening and participation
มีความสมดุลในการเป็นผูฟ้ ั งและผูม้ ีสว่ นร่วมท่ีดี
3. Asks useful questions
ตัง้ คาํ ถามท่ีเป็นประโยชน์ตอ่ การปรั บแกง้ านเขียน

4.Shares information and personal
understanding
แบง่ ปั นขอ้ มูลและแสดงความเขา้ ใจสว่ นบุคคล
5.Identifies references with relevant
information or examples
ระบุขอ้ มูลอา้ งอิงตา่ งๆ ​ท่ีมีขอ้ มูลเช่ือมโยงหรือ
ตัวอยา่ งประกอบ

Interpersonal Skills: Strongly Agree Neutral Disagree Strongly
agree ✔ disagree
6. Accepts the author’s explanation ✔
ยอมรั บคาํ อธิลายของผูเ้ ขียน
7. Is able to listen and understand what ✔
others are saying ​ฟั งและเขา้ ใจสงิ่ ท่ีผูอ้ ่ืนพูด
8. Shows respect for the opinions and feelings ✔
of others
เคารพความคดิ เหน็ และความรู้สกึ ของผูอ้ ่ืน
9. Overall, both author and peer fully
accomplish the assignment
ทาํ หน้าท่ีท่ีไดร้ ั บมอบหมายไดล้ ุลว่ งอยา่ งสมบูรณ์

Peer-response Form for Writing assignments

PART TWO: QUALITATIVE ASSESSMENT
Directions: P​ lease answer the following two questions and provide examples, evidence and suggestions
as necessary.
1) What is the most valuable contribution you gave to the author?

Add the example of each paragraph and gives more information
2) What is the most important thing you have learned from your peer’s writing?

Writing the strengths of each gaming platform makes a clear difference.

Assignment Self-Assessment Form 2020

Name Natdanai Panyapratheep Assignment # 3

Course English Writing 01355231 Section 180 Date 2 November 2020

Short Description of Work:

The strengths of the gaming platform.

What have I learned from this work?

I learned to compare between things by using compare and contrast strategy.

What does this assignment show the writing skills I have learned? What are my strengths and weaknesses?

Show the difference between 3 gaming platforms. My strength is I can tell the different between 3 platforms

very well. My weakness is I can’t explain everything in one essay

What is/are the domain(s) that you did very well in this piece of writing? Rank 1 – 4 (1 = the most; 4 = the least)

__1___ Ideas and content ___3__ Organization

__2___ Voice __4___ Convention

What does this assignment show I need to improve? You can choose more than one.
⃞ Ideas and content: Explain _____________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________
⃞ Organization: Explain I didn’t organize it well so it’s too long
⃞ Voice: Explain _________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________

⃞ Convention:Explain _______________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

What activities help me improve my writing skills? You can choose more than one.

⃞ First drafting ⃞ Journal writing ⃞ Self-assessment

⃞ Peer response ⃞ Teacher-student conference

What am I going to do to improve my writing? (You can write more on the other site)
I’ll try to find more information about the things I write about

Expected score for this assignment: ______6.5________ Give reasons: I think my infomation is good
but not enough