Sad I Ams
By Trevor Millum
I am
the ring
from an empty Cola can
the scrapings
from an unwashed porridge pan
the severed arm
of last year’s Action man.
I am
the envelope
on which the gum is gone
the Sellotape
where you can’t find the end
the toothless stapler
springless bulldog clip
the dried up liquid paper
that mars instead of mends
the stamped addressed reply
that you forgot
to send.
I am
the battery in which no charge is left
the starter motor which remains inert
the tyre on which the tread is worn
the sparking plug which shows no sign of spark
the carburettor chocked by bits of dirt
the chromium trim from which the shine has gone.
I am
a garden
overgrown with weeds
a library book
that no one ever reads
a stray
which no one thinks to feed
the piece of good advice
which no one seems to need.
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stanza 2 stanza 4
SETTING : No specific time and place is mentioned.
PERSONA
PERSONA is the narrator of the character
The gender is not mentioned, It can be assumed that the persona is
an elderly person as he feels neglected and likens himself / herself to
various objects which has no use to anyone anymore.
TONE AND MOOD
It is gloomy and depressing.
The persona manages to evoke
a feeling of sympathy in the
reader for the persona as well as
the discarded things.
THEMES
1. Rejection
2. Being neglected
3. Being forgotten
4. Feeling of uselessness
MORAL VALUES
1. We should learn to appreciate people and things around
us
2. We should stay positive in life
3. We should learn to listen to people’ advice
4. We should be confident to ourselves
5. We should be grateful for what and who we have
6. We should take care the elders
METAPHOR
All the unwanted things the persona
liken himself/herself to.
IMAGERY
All the unwanted items describe
the unwanted things vividly
You’re not alone
Get up
Don’t give up
Be strong
Be positive
Be brave
Choose to be happy
Choose to be useful
Help others
THANK YOU