G4L Realistic Fiction Anthology Yellow 2020-2021

YELLOW VOLUME 

 
 
Grade 4 authors studied how to write a realistic 
fiction story. They started with a quick character 
sketch, learning how to use “show not tell” in the 
form of dialogue and action to make their character 
realistic. Then they added in a “struggle” that would 
be realistic for their character. Finally they designed 
a story arc to plan their story events from beginning 
to end. In the revision stage, student authors 
focused on writing interesting beginnings that pull 
their reader into the story, adding vivid setting details 
to help the reader feel they are in the story, and 
satisfying endings that complete the story. As you 
read, notice how our authors have used these new 
writer’s craft moves to improve their stories. 

Horse crazy 

 by Anna  

 

One beautiful saturday Charli asked her coach if she could ride in the world 
championships for the english team. Her coach said yes! Charli screamed with 
joy and disbelef! Charli had been doubting that her coach would say yes and 
she did not even believe in herself! This was a huge risk.She almost fell off her 
black gilding thunder! he sidestep to save her from doing that. He had 
understood every word they said so thunder was as excited, happy and nervous 
as they were.  
“Ok” said Charlie's coach, “The Champs are two weeks away” 
“I know that we need to work really hard” Charli whispered  
Still unsure if her coach was joking or not. for she knew Charli did not 
believe in herself a lot but it seems like she was really serious. Charli took a 
deep breath and tried to focus. After that lesson Charli flow back home to tell 
her family the wonderful and nerve-wracking news. They were so incredibly 
pleased, nervous and happy for Charli! upfor the next two weeks Charli work 
to really hard and progresses a lot. How cold said she was totally ready for 
the championships!  

Charli was really pleased with herself. That weekend Charli, her coach with 
some of her family went to the championships. They went to Italy for a week 
because the championships were in Italy that year.  
 
As soon as they got to their hotel Charli her coach and family quickly 
unpacked and went to bed for it was 12:00 
  

 

 

 

The next morning was the competition! Charli and her coach woke up earlier 

than anyone else and went to the stables on the competition grounds. Charlie was 

overflowing with nerves! Thunder was put in the stables yesterday and he was 

quietly waiting in his stoll he was good at travelling also he was happy to see 

Charli.   

 

 
 
After the warm up all the riders went to the jujes to get their numbers. Charli 
was number 4 to compet. That met there was no time to see her family befor she 
went out into the arena.  
The first event was dressage, Charlis team (England) came second by only 1 
point Charli and Thundrer tried thier best! The next event was jumping, the 
jumps height was 1m 40cm and England Charlis team came first by 40 points! 
That was a huge success! The final event was cross-country which is like 
jumping but logs, tyres and stuff like that it is also outside. 
Charlis team won that two! And with that ….. 
 
THEY WON THE WHOLE COMPETION! 
 
 
 
Very proud by this win Charli and her fellows went back to Englanad. 

 
 
 
 
 
Charlis coach asked “well did you like the champs?” 

“OH YES!” Charli exclaimed, “and there was a lesson i lerned” 
“ what's that “ exclaimed her coach 
“That if i dont give up and try hard i get what i want and get it well!” 
 
 
 

The end 

Thank you for reading and hope you enjoyed it. 
 
 

 

The Argument

By Rafael Dayan

 

 
 
 

Chapter 1  

 
 
 

“Bo​ om crash,”  

“I will save you,”   
“ha, ha ,ha,” said an evil master.  
  

Freddy was on the couch watching TV.  
“Let’s go,” I shouted in a hopeful voice.  

 
I put my hands together and I froze.  

“You will never get me!” the good character said in an exhausted voice.  
 

I had such a big smile as bright as the sun. I heard rain outside as loud as a 
truck passing by. I heard the sound “Creek” coming out of the couch. I jumped up 
and down and I raised my eyebrows up. 
 

“Go, go, go!” I yelled. I puffed, and froze again. Why did the good not just jump 
and capture the bad, I thought.  
 

“Hopefully my brother does not disturb me,” I whispered to myself.  
  
  
 
 
 
 

Chapter 2  

 
 

“​ Ha​ , ha, ha!” the evil monster blurted.  

“Come on,” Freddy shouted as he stretched up and down.  
  
I looked at the window and saw the drops of water coming down. After a while I 
heard “thump, thump,” coming from the stairs. 
  

“Who is that?” Freddy asked himself.  
“Who is watching TV!” someone shouted… 

 
 

Then I saw my brother stomping to the ground and he looked like he could 
fly to the moon in seconds. 

“No good,” I murmured to myself.   
I wished I could put my hands in a cactus. 
  
 

“It’s my turn to go now!” my brother called out while stretching. “NO!” I 
blurted. 
 

Things happened quickly then, I clicked the red rough pause button of the 
TV.  
 

“You watched TV for the last ​40 MINUTES!”​  
 

  
 
 
 
“And...” I told my brother while rolling my eyes and I was about to click the red 
rough unpause button.   
 

I felt so exhausted and a little tired. 
 

My brother put his hands out on the soft couch and shouted  
“This is unfair! Let’s make a deal,” my brother said in a squeaky voice.  

“Ok, ok,” I said while rolling my eyes again.  
 
I looked at the kitchen and was getting a little hungry of the delicious 
strawberries.  
  

“Maybe we watch something we both like,” my brother suggested. 
“​NEVER!​ You only watch baby stuff!” I blurted while kicking the air and 
looking up at the ceiling. 
 

  ​ ​ ​ ​After a while...​ ☆​
 

​ ​☆ ​

 

 
 
 
“How a about 50 minutes you, 50 me,” my brother suggested 

“Ok,” I agreed  
“So ten more minutes for you but then you have to promise,” my brother said 
while making a cute face.  
 

This was a bad deal. Oh why did I take it? I felt unhappy and tired plus a little 
hungry. 
 
 
“Ok, ok,” Freddy said quietly. 
“Yay promise!” my brother said while showing a super cute adorable chubby face. 
 
“Then I will not be able to see the interesting part, but I promise!” I yelled.  
  
  

While I had 10 more minutes I continued watching. I would probably not be 
able to see the action part.  

“Why is this happening to me! I said in my mind. I took a deep breath and looked 
at the cactus. 
 

I saw the evil nearly captured the good and the bad laughed.  
“Ha, ha, ha”  
“Come on, fight the bad,'' I shouted. 
 

“You will make it,” I whispered to myself. “1, 2, 3”  
 
“The interesting part is now!” I shouted!!! 
 
 
 

 

Chapter 3 

 
 

“It​ ’s time,​ h​ ello my turn,” I heard. I saw a small red, about to explode fire face. I 

wished I could watch more, I thought.  
 

I knew that my brother would come down to annoy me, like always.  
“You watched 1 minute too much,” my brother shouted. 

“There , the remote,” I gave my brother. My brother smiled. I did not have a 
good feeling about this. 
“But only 50 minutes!” I shouted while walking away to the kitchen. 
“Ok,” I heard my brother say.  
 

Well, maybe I should watch less and my brother usually doesn't watch too 
much. Then I remembered that he had football today so he deserves it. Second of 
all I really want to eat something. I was not that sure that my sneaky brother 
would still hold the promise... 
 
 
  

 

​The End 

 

 

 

​ I​ almost killed earth 

 
 
 
 
 
 

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

By: Arlin DiPretoro 4L 

 

 

 

Chapter 1 

 
At school Atom and Charlie meet everyday at the massive and dry football pitch to 
discuss what their plans are, if they want to play after school. 
Sometimes it was a pain to walk on the football field because it was so dry. 
 
 
Today Atom meet Charlie at the football field, the ground made a giant crunching 
noise under their feet .Atom stopped and said “We need to work on my dad's 
experiment and Atom asks 
“Do you want to come over?” 
Charlie gasps and says “The teacher gave us homework to remember!” 
 
Atom rolls his eyes and whispers under his breath “Of course I just remembered it 
takes you hours to do your homework!” 
 
Charlie starts walking away pulling his heavy feet .  
Atom turned around and said “See you!” and he added “Text me when you finish.” 
Charlie quickly turned around and shouted at Atom in a sad way “I don't have a 
phone!”. Atom replied” Than come to my house when you are done.”. 
 
2 hours had gone by, Atom lying on his big double decker and dark blue bed, tired 
hears the doorbell ring.  

 

 

Chapter 2 

 
Atom lifted his head up excitedly and sprinted the door and opened it. 
“Let’s hurry up!!!”Atom shouted, jumping up and down. 
They ran to the garage. Charlie could barely keep up 
When they got to the garage they saw a big white desk ,a rather old bike leaning 
against the wall and a big dusty shelf. 
Charlie was in pieces, he was sweaty. 
On the other hand Atom was as if he had done nothing. 
As they entered the garage, Atom was desperately scanning the garage, for a 
bottle or something unusual. 
 
 
Atom spotted something sticking out of a old style gold drawer, 
They quickly advanced to that drawer and slowly pulled it open. 
They found a reddish liquid in a little glass bottle. 
They slowly raised it up and walked toward the exit of the garage. 
 
 

At that same time heavy rain started pouring. 
Charlie got scared and accidentally pushed Atom. 
Atoms fell in the heavy mud. 
When he gets up he looks around for the bottle but unfortunately it is already sunk 
in the mud. 
Tears start rolling down Atom’s eyes, he scolds Charlie for pushing him. 
 
 
They walk all the way through the atom's giant and beautiful garden to the big and 
very impressive mansion. 
 
They tell the bad news to Atom’s mom. 
She said that it will do some effect on the ground but told them to find out by 
researching . 
 
They walked back to the garage disappointed. 
 
 
 

Chapter 3 

 

Atom thought it was all over… 
​But wanted to find out what it will do to earth. 
Once they got to the big and old garage. 
Atom opens up his computer that his dad made and started researching. 
 
 
 
2 hours had gone by without any progress. 
Atom desperatly wanted to take a break for dinner because he was tired, the rain 
stopped. 
As they left the garage they noticed something weird outside. 
 
 

 

Chapter 4 

 

When they opened, the door all of the beutiful plants that they had seen an hour a 
go where all black! 
Some had already started faling down to the ground. 
Atom thought “ Why is this happening?”  
“Something is wrong.” Atom says as he thought why did this happen?  
 
 

 
Atom shouted “ We need to stop this or my mom will be very very mad at me.” 
They run to the garage and start looking for a solution. 
 
 
A lttle while later… 
 
 
 
Atom shouts “I have a solution!” 
They run out of the garage and to the water house and pour it to the sprinkler 
sistem and they turn it on. 
 
The next morning everything is back to normal. 
 
 
 
But they still see some weird things happen once in a while. 
 
 

Hoo knows what will happen next? 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

THE END 

 

A Realistic Fiction Story
by Sasha Gabak

One time ago there was a boy named Lancer. one day he said to mom, “Where's my
work!!!!”
did you find it?”
“lancer shouted nooooo!”
Playing on his iphone on bed
“Then look for it!”
“Fine!”
Actually he stopped playing for a bit but still did not find so he had to get another one at
school it was rainy so he had to bring a warm coat to school he was angry to where it its
was big and uncomfy but was warm but his teacher suspected him playing on iphone at the
start of the lesson he had enemies that he liked to fight with them because they were little
and not strong he liked to get money from them and the way how you ask? Lets see from
this time...
“Hey kiddos”
In mind of charles
“ O Not him!”
“So a give me money and il go”
They all replied
Well never let this happen again! You lazy slug!”
“How dare you call me that?!?!”
Lancer said
“You asked for it!!!!“
At that moment Charles and his band thought it's the end but...
His father smashed the door and called lancer
“Lancer, how dare you punch those little kids you 12 days without an iphone!!!!!”
“bu...”
No but i said it's the rule and i'll tell our mom she will be mad at you!!!
Oh lancer had a big conflict with his dad that time no one knew he will learn too steal from
the teacher!that day it was sunny but i guess lancer didn't want it too be sunny for all
because we can understand it from the small conflict at his food time as usual he did not
say hello to his mom but mom got used too it
“Hey mom”
“What”
“Have a “good” day hahahahahahahahaha”
His mom understood that it was a bad joke after a while
Then on a school bus they ride to school on the ride lancer threw a paper airplane that had
love you from bonnie bonnie was his best friend but lancer liked too prank him and that girl
was the ugliest in whole school lancer giggled bonnie said whats the matter lancer stopped
giggling nothing

Realistic Fiction Story
by Alex Galus

BOoOom! ​Fill Is woken up from a bomb explosion.
Fill Quickly Ran out of bed and to the apartment
window. He saw the bank across the street burning
and 2 robbers entering the tall green building.

Then Fill heard Sirens coming from police cars of the
New York cops. The police car stopped right in front
of the bank and an officer came out of the car taking
out his gun and screaming “Freeze”. One of the
robbers stopped immediately but the other continued
running. But then the police officer shot him twice
making sure he was dead.
The other robber dropped the money bags and put
his hand up.

Little later it was morning. Fill was at school. There
was a new kid called Bron.
He was really mean because his dad got arrested for
robbing the bank. Bron bullied Fill all day. Fill told the
teachers but they did nothing about it. Fill came
home and wanted to do something about Bron. The

next day Fill came up to Bron. “Hey bro, why are you
so mad?” said Fill. “Because I never got a friend,”
said Bron.
“So lets be friends”. Bron froze for a while.
“Ye y y ye yes”. Bron said finally. But After 2 weeks
Bron became meen again. This time his mom told
him to stop. Bron promised his dad that he would
always listen to his mom.”Okay” said Bron. His mom
took him away from the school and they moved to
Kentucky and Fill was left alone.

Logan and the Bully
by Borys Gladkyi

When I was walking home I saw a h​ uge g​ uy behind the school. He was
pulling out stuff from a smaller kid’s backpack. I was really scared that that
would happen to me. The next day he told his name, it was Jason. After
school Jason spotted me that I was scared of him and started to be mean
to me. When I told my parents what happened
they just said, “Stay out of his way” and nothing else because they were
still mad how I didn’t get good grades. I thought about telling the principal
but I decided to wait 1 more day. At the end I told Jason that,
“If you bullie somebody 1 more time I will tell the principal.”
I felt brave talking to a bully. I saw that Jason thought of himself like he
was some kind of mad man.

“Sorry, I was mean to some of you because my pet, dog died and for me,
it was your fault,” said Jason.
Then I stopped thinking about him and I could concentrate on my work. I
also got better grades and I was really close to getting a cat!
“That would be sooooo cool” I thought to myself.
“ You are very close and getting your very own pet.” said dad
After a while I was thinking of all kinds of cat’s like a small cat with a bit of
fur but with shining blue eyes and the color would be a bit brown. I thought
of gigantic cat’s 2 feet with green glistering eyes and a really beautiful fur
color. That would be the best day ever.​ ​.

Realistic Fiction Story
by Daniil Kozhevin

Hello my name is Deloy and I'm just a normal kid.
My story started of that my dad got a new job in another city ,my dad is really happy and I'm glad for him.I Will lose
all of my friends in school
Or everywhere.

We were driving to the place for 1 day and I was watching my ipad.
I was sleeping like 1 mill times and the chair was not conforteble if you were in one of those situation you would be
really tired,I was sleeping and then my dad yelled
‘’We are in the city‘’
I woke up and it was a beautiful city.
When I saw our new house I was really shocked for a minute then quietly walked in the house and I was even more
shocked .

With my dad he walked me to see the school I say its a normal school
’’this school really smells paint.’’

​The Next Day

Me with my dad packed up to school really long .Than we needed to walk to school for like 20 minutes.
I went to the gates of the school,it still smells paint next to the gates,were a person
That was in my class and he looked lonely really.
In the class with 7 girls and 19 boys not counting the bullis and the lonely guy person.
Then unexpectedly this lonely person came to me and said
‘’Hello,’’
It was really unexpectedly I said
‘’Hi what is your name’’
He said
‘’Matthew.’’
Then we really became best friends forever.
After school I told him that
‘’We moved to a new city and I did not have friends.’’

Matthew said ‘
‘’your just like menot long time ago I moved here with my family and I did not have friends too’’
Deloy said
‘’Lets go to my house ‘’
‘’I do not know ‘’
‘’I will ask my friend and neighbors if they want to come and my parents!’’
‘’I am going to meet you next to your door’’
‘’okey’’

‘’I going to come to my house and ask my mom if we can have friends
In the house or back yard’’
‘’momI found a friend to play and can you let my friend in the backyard,’’
‘’Wow you got a friend in a new city in just one day I am impressed and yes you can let him in the backyard to play.’’

D​ ING DONG DING DONG

Oh he came that fast I should open the door to Matthew
‘’Hello’’
‘’Mom said we can play with you outside.’’
‘’Okay then what should we do in your backyard’’
‘’I do not know I guess we pass a soccer ball.’’

1​ Hour Latter

‘’It is getting dark I think you should go home’’
‘’okey than I will go, home to my famaly’’
Said Matthew.

The Next day in the morning

‘’Hey Matthew wait for me’’
‘’well hello there Losers are you going to school or are you going to skip classes,’’
‘’No we are not going to skip classes!!!’’

RING RING RING RING

‘’Hear the bell Deloy we need to go to class’’
Okey lets go to your class and also they are so wierd bullis’’
I said.
At math time Matthew whispered to me
I thought and want to be much cooler than bullis and let's meet after school in my house.’’

‘’Okey than do you have a plan to somehow be cooler than bullis’’
‘’Sorry I did not make a plan but I have a few Ideas,’’
Now I had an idea of your plan and Matthew had a plan. I let him share his idea.

‘’To put something fluffy under our shirts and look more stronger and beat up the bullis and be the coolest’’
I knew that was a horrible idea but it was a really good defense
from bullis and also it will look fat.
My Idea is more logical. It was to go to an after school activity and we will look stronger.

Matthew said
‘’What after school activity should we choose’’
‘’I think fitness will be the best ‘’
‘’Okey than.’’

The Next Day After School

I just started to work fitnes and I have mussels on my
arms in just one day I thought in a month we can fight and then.

​ A Month Letter

Everyone shouted
‘’Fight Fight FIght FIght’’
Matthew said
‘’Do you want to do this’’
The bullis awnsered
‘’Yes!”
‘’Okay then let's fight.‘’

BOOM SMACK BUSH
BOOM SMACK BUSH

“Now who is the coolest ones here you bullis
,Me Deloy and Matthew”
“Okay, okay, we understand, just do not hurt us anymore.”

That whole thing changed are whole entirely in my school life,
now we are the strongest and the coolest and that was our
Goal,we did it in a month.
In that time I could not believe that I did won the fight,
Also I was really shocked after the fight,just like about our new house.

The End

The fight
by Yeseniia Kyryllova

Raya is a new girl in town,she just moved into a little yellow house with two floors and circled little
windows.She lives with her mom,dad and little sister,Caroline.
They had to move because of her parents' work.
Raya already does not like it here in her new school,she remembered her first day in her old
school no enemies, lots of friends but hear she already has an enemy he embarrassed her in front
of the class on her first day of school,She changed her homework into a joke book!And her
teacher got mad at her and sent an email home.
This is how it went when school was over I dropped my back pack my backpack and the enemy
asked “can I help you”I mean I did not know that he was gonna be my enemy after all so I said
“yes,thanks”but actually he slipped my notebook out of it,and I guess he was working on it all
knite.
The next day he pushed me and my back pack fel he said “sorry” and lifted it but when he
kneeled down he slipped the joke book in and when I was reading it in class the teacher Did not let
me stop.
And after that I had to stay for detention after school.
Once in some time caroline Told the enemy Rayas biggest secret It was who she was in love
with,His name was James Dodger But he only liked cool girls and I was just a normal town girl.
So the next day when she came into class all the kids were laughing at her so right away I did not
even finish school I ran as out of school crying and even took the long way from school.Then the
real War started,Riya and her sister were fighting,shouting It was horrible And you won't believe
what happened on Rayas birthday Caroline was making pranks on her all day long.
Once all the family decided to go to the beach,The Beach was on a mountain.
As they were walking to a perfect place Carolines sandals slopped Then suddenly They heard a
loud “squake!” it was a seagull! Carling jumped-up and Raya started laughing “hahahaha scaredy
cat” Raya said caroline started chasing her And then when both girls were tired they started
laughing,But then they quickly stopped Because they were still mad.

At the beach there's a tiny bit of brass but it was very pretty he was green like a green Emerald
shining in the sun.
Then Caroline Slowly came up to the edge of the mountain and looked down into the water,then
suddenly she slipped. She thought it was the end of her life but someone grabbed her hand! It was
Raya.
On that moment Raya quietly came up to Caroline and was standing behind her,And when she
was falling Raya grabbed her hand.
Then Caroline Understood how lucky she was to have a sister.
The next day when Raya and Caroline came to school You won't believe what they did……..
The locked the enemy in his locker And after that everyone in the school was scared of Raya and
Caroline.

The Bullies Lesson 

by Daniela 

 

“Wake up, you're late again!” Daniela’s mom shouted from downstairs.  

But Daniela didn’t answer, she was too much into her dreams to answer. 

“Exuse me are you enoring your mom?!” Daniela’s mom shouted again in the hope Daniela would wake up. 

“Yes mom, did you say something?” Daniela asked thinking nothing happened. 

“Well guess what?” her mom said, sounding a little suspicious. 

“What?” answered nervously. 

“YOUR LATE AGAIN!” her mom answered. 

“Oh no!” Daniela shouted while running around the house looking for her horse riding clothes. 

“You know I meant the type of late that you have less time to get ready, right?” Daniela’s mom exclaimed smiling at how 

an 18 - 19 year old was running around the house. 

“Are you kidding me?! Now where are my clothes?” Daniela asked furiously. 

“No I am not Kidding and your clothes are in your room.” Daniela’s mom answered, still smiling. 

Daniela dashed back to her room embarrassed. Daniela quickly put on her clothes and dashed downstairs to eat her 

breakfast. “Yummy pancakes!” Daniela whispered to herself. 

When Daniela was done smudging the pancakes into her mouth, she went outside to step into the steaming hot car. 

“Ouch!!!” Daniela shouted thinking she burnt herself. 

“Honey you forgot to brush your teeth.” Daniela’s mom exclaimed disapointed. “Ugh, really mom?!” Daniela asked knowing 

the answer and walking back in relief that she didn’t need to step in the hot car now. 

When Daniela finished brushing her teeth she got ready to get into the car. Daniela stepped into the car in relief thet 

her mom had put on the A.C. in the car so it wasn’t so hot anymore. “Let’s go I wan’t to ride, mom.” Daniela shouted 

impatiently. “Daniela, first of all put on your seatbelt, second of all if you 

are not patient we will cancle it for today.” Daniela’s mom told her in reply.  

“Ok mom I put on my seatbelt, I am patient and I am calm now can we go already?” Daniela explained furious about 

what her mom said. “Ok, ok.” Daniela’s mom told Daniela, starting the car.  

 

The Car Was Off……   

 

They arrived at the horse riding centre. Imediently Daniela spotted her all time enemies ​The Bullies. ​Daniela regretted 

wanting to go to the horse riding centre so bad. Daniela hated the bullies. “Oh look your friends are here!” Daniela’s 

mom said thinking they were nice. 

“FRIENDS?!” Daniela shouted she thought the whole world heard her. 
“Be quiet, those innocent girls nearly heard you.” Daniela’s mom replied really disappointed. “INNOCENT?!” Daniela was 
so angry she nearly broke her helmet. Daniela stepped out of the car furious.  

 
 
A few minutes later Daniela was crying because the bullies were bullying her…………  
 
Charlie came runnning to her BFF. “What happened?!” Charlie asked Daniela woried.  
“Well the b..b..bullies were making fun of me because i was riding on a horse with PINK ponytails.” Daniela answered in 
a muffled voice. 
“THAT’S IT!!! We need to give those bullies payback or else this will never end.” Charlie answered trying to comfort her 
friend. 

 
 
When horse riding was over, Charlie went to Daniela’s house to make a GENIUS plan (​ that’s what they hope).​ “So look, 
first we do this and then this and that is where you come out ok?” Charlie explained confusingly. “No, before I come out 
we do this and THEN this. Get it?” Daniela added. “Well that seems more efficient so yeah.” Charlie agreed.  
 
 
The next day the girls arrived early at the horse riding centre to start their plan. “So you meant that place right?” 
Charlie asked claringfying herself. 
“Yeah right there behind THAT particular bush. Got it?” Daniela answered.  
“Got it.” Charlie replied. 
The girls went to hide behind the bush Daniela pointed at. “Look NOW!” Charlie screamed while Daniela stood up and 
ran to the bullies.  
“Hahahahahahahahaha look the bullies have a PINK doll and it has PINK ponytails” Daniela screamed. 
“Hahahahahaha I see that.” Charlie replied in a way that the plan recommended. 
The bullies felt really bad.  
“Were sorry for that we bullied you Daniela and Charlie, we really are.” Jessica, one of the bullies said. “Yes we really 
are.” The other bully named Mary said right after. 
“Apoligy accepted.” Daniela and Charlie answered at the exact same time.  
“I just got the idea that we could make a kind of group to prevent bullying.” Jessica suggested. 
“Well I don’t know if you guys do, but I think that is a GREAT idea!” Daniela answered in an excited voice. 
“Well I agree to that suggestion too.” Charlie said agreeing too. 
Mary on the other hand, just shrugged. They called the team: The Bullying Preventers. 
 

Together the group of four 19 year olds became the best riders in that whole horse riding centre. (​ they were even 
better than the coaches)   
 
They eventually competed in the championship. 
 

 

The End 

 

If you want to know how it went at the championship then keep reading… 

 
2 years after Jesica and Mary apolagized, the girls were getting ready for the championship that was in 3 days. “Guys 
what do you think about this outfit?” Daniela asked the girls. 
“It looks good on you, but you should take all the dog fur off first, haha.” Charlie answered smiling. 
“I know that Charlie, you don’t need to tell me that.” Daniela replied smiling a little bit too. 
Jesica and Mary started laughing too. Daniela went to her room to get a brush for all those dog hairs. “Woof woof!” 
Daniela’s dog, snoopy barked. “Hahahaha, you're not going to try to get more fur on me are you?!” Daniela lauphed 

worried.  
Snoopy jumped up onto Daniela. “Oof.” Daniela exclaimed. 
“Are you kidding me?!” Daniela shouted dissapointed.  
“Woof, Woof.” Snoopy barked, kind of doggy laughing. 
“Well I quess I need to start over.” Daniela whispered to snoopy.  
Daniela brought Snoopy downstairs so that he couldn’t get her full of fur again.  
 
When Daniela was done, she put on other clothes to prevent them from getting full of fur again. “Oh, there you are. 
What do you think of this?” Charlie asked Daniela.  
“It looks good on you, but you need to wash it before you go to the championship.” Daniela answered. 
“Well yeah, I know that.” Charlie said, going into the house to wash her clothes. 
 
When the championship was only five minutes away the girls went to see what number they were. “Oh look, I am 24. 
Charlie, you are 25.Jesica you are 26 and you Mary, are 27.” Daniela told the girls. 
 
“NUMBER 24. COME UP TO THE START PLEASE!” the loud speakers shouted. 
“Ok girls it’s my turn.” Daniela whispered nervously. 
“Good luck!” Charlie whispered back. 
“AND THE RESULT FOR NUMBER 24 IS… 0 FAULTS!’ The loud speaker shouted. 
“YES!!!” Daniela shouted. “You did really good!” Charlie exclaimed. 
“NUMBER 25 PLEASE GO UP TO THE START!” The loudspeaker shouted even louder then the first time. 

“Ok Charlie, now you go and try to get 0 faults just like me.” Daniela shouted as Charlie went up to the start. 
“AND THE RESULTS FOR NUMBER 25 IS 2 FAULTS!!” the loudspeaker exclaimed. 
“Well that didn’t really go so good as I expected.” Charlie whispered disappointedly.  
“Don’t essay that. YOU WERE AMAZING!!” Daniela shouted. 
“NUMBER 26 RESULTS ARE 3 FAULTS!!” the loudspeaker shouted. 
“AND LAST BUT NOT LEAST, NUMBER 27 RESULTS IS 1 FAULT!!!” the loudspeaker said extra loud so that everyone 
could hear it through all the applaus. “AND THE WINNER #24!!!”  
“YES, I WON!!!!!!!” Daniela shouted in excitement.  
“CONGRATULATIONS TO NUMBER 24!!!!!” The loudspeakers said fading away. 
 
 

To celebrate the big win, they went to a cafe and ate the most delicious and the 

most expensive ice cream of them all.