积 尽量 的知 。毕业工 后，应努力工 并通过不同工 岗位
不同 社会背景的锤 获取 。我相 ， 有 此，我 才能
获人 成就。
范文点评
1. 扣题目 提纲 求，提出知 重 的观 。
2.进一步说 知 重 的。
3. 用承上启下之过渡 ， 出 二个观 ： 比知 重 。
4.分 重 的原 。
5. 提出自己的观 。
6. 议具 法， 述观 。
要点用法
mentally and physically 身
youngster n. 年轻人
accumulate v. 积
position n. 位，岗位
句法点评
1.I think both the first and second view above are
partially correct in that both knowledge and experience are
essential if you want to be successful.
in that 出原 的一种表达 ， 为“ 为”，这种句 主
为了说 一个比较长的原 ，比 because 句前后对称。
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2.For us youngsters, I suggest that we should study as
hard as possible at school so that we may accumulate as much
knowledge as possible.
过渡衔接句子， 加流畅自 。so that 导目的 从
句。
3.I believe that only by doing so will we achieve more
successes in our life.
only+介 短 放 宾 从句的句 ，句子 采用半 装 ，即
部分的 动 、 态动 助动 放 主 前 。 装句的采
用 章句 加 活 样。
Composition 89 兼职VS专注学习
CwrointceDeinarterscahttoiirontngse:osnsFaoSyrtuetdnhyti.istYlpoeaudrtsD,hooiyunolgud Paarret-atlilomweedJo3b0s VSminutes to
write at least 120 words
but no more than 180 words following the outline given below.
• Some hold the belief that doing part-time jobs offer
them real-life experiences.
• Others believe that one should cherish campus life and
focus on the study of their majors.
• What’s your opinion?
审题立意
1.导 读： 求以“兼 与专注学习”为题 一 短 。此
容贴近 学 活实际， 都有切身 会。
2. 章 ：学 兼 的确能获 真实 活 ，赚取 用钱，
轻 母 济 担， 学习仍 学 的主 务。 努力学习的
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下，利用 间适当兼 还 有必 的。
写作思路
1. 一段 述提纲 一 求，即一些同学 为从事兼 工 可
以获取真实社会 ，他 观 的主 据 兼 工 可以了
人、 业 社会，同 可以赚取一些酬劳， 轻 母 担。
2. 二段 述提纲 二 求，即另一些同学 为 学 光有
，应专注学习。打下良 的知 基础， 才能为毕业后工
。
3. 三段 述 个人观 。 为两 都有正确的一 ，关键
以学业为主， 学习之 兼 工 ，以丰富自己的社会 历，
为将 择业 。
参考范文
Doing Part-time Jobs VS Concentrating on Study
Some university students hold that they may get real-life
experiences by doing part-time jobs such as being tutor,
salesperson or waiter.1 They claim that by doing part-time
jobs, they may learn a lot about business environment,
humanity, and the society as a whole. Besides, they can make
some money to reduce the economic burden of their parents. 2
Others, however, believe that one should cherish the
campus life and focus on the study of their majors.3 Campus
time, as they see it, is very short and they should focus the
limited time on the study of their majors and the expansion
of their knowledge so as to be better prepared for their
future jobs.4
I would say both opinions are correct in a certain
sense.5 For me, I will try to study as hard as possible for
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most of time on campus. But I will also make full use of the
vacation to do some part-time jobs so that I may learn more
about the society and be prepared for jobs upon graduation.
兼职与专注学习
一些 学 为，从事包括家 、推销员 务员 兼 工 可
他 获 一些真实社会 。他 为，通过兼 ，他 可以了
有关 业环 、人 社会 的知 。同 ，他 也能
赚些 钱， 轻 母的 济 担。
另一些 学 为应 校 活，把 力集中用 专业学习
上。 他 看 ，校 光 短 ，应 把有 的 光用 专业 学习
拓展知 上，这样才能为未 工 的。
我 为两种观 种 义上都对。对我本人 说， 学校里的
部分 间，我会尽可能 努力学习。 我也会 分利用 间
些兼 工 ，以 可以 了 社会，为毕业后工 。
范文点评
1. 题目 提纲展 ， 出 一个观 ：兼 重 。
2. 述兼 重 的原 。
3.自 过渡，指出 二个观 ：专注学习重 。
4. 述专注学习重 的原 。
5.提出自己的观 并具 述。
要点用法
real-life experience 真实
tutor n. 家
business environment 业环
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be better prepared 的
in a certain sense 从 种 义上
句法点评
1.Some university students hold that they may get real-
life experiences by doing part-time jobs such as being tutor,
salesperson or waiter.
Some...hold that... 转述他人观 的一个常用句 ，that 导
宾 从句。such as...为 定短 ， 为“诸 ……之 ”。
2.Campus time, as they see it, is very short and they
should focus the limited time on the study of their majors
and the expansion of their knowledge so as to be better
prepared for their future jobs.
as they see it 插 ， 为“ 他 看 ”。so that 出目
的 从句。
Composition 90 坚持锻炼
Directions: For etnhtiistlpeadrtK,eeypouDoairnegaPlhlyowseidca3l0 Emxienructiesse.to
write a short essay
You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180
words following the outline given below.
• Why should we do physical exercise?
• What’s the point of keeping doing physical exercise?
审题立意
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1.导 读：锻 身 的重 性对每个人不 。这 短
求我 述锻 的原 持锻 的 。
2. 章 ：锻 对身 都有 ，还可帮助人承受压力。只有
持锻 ，才能喜欢锻 ，从 确 锻 的成 。 持锻 的人到了
年才会有 的 康 报。
写作思路
1. 一段 述为什么 锻 。
2. 二段 述 持锻 的 。 持锻 并不容 ， 持锻 才
能 锻 成为一种习 。 持锻 才能 年老后自己的身 受
益。
3. 三段 述自己 持锻 的。
参考范文
Keep Doing Physical Exercise
Undoubtedly, physical exercise is very important to every
individual.1 By doing physical exercises such as jogging,
running, playing balls and gym, not only can we make our body
fit but also improve our mentality and mood so as to be
better qualified for study or stressful jobs we will do in
the future.2
It is not difficult to do physical exercise once in a
while, but it is really a hard job to keep at it.3
Persistence is really very important. If we keep doing it
every day, we will be accustomed to physical exertion, which
in return will make it our hobby. Doing physical exercise
throughout life can be of great value especially when we
become old. By then we will find out the difference in terms
of physique and health between us and those who do not do or
keep doing physical exercise.
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I have been jogging about one hour each day for more than
five years. I really enjoy it because I believe I have
benefited a lot from this habit.4
坚持锻炼
毫 疑问，锻 身 对每个人都 重 。通过 、 步、打
练 操 ，不 可 身 康，还可 提 ，让我 有
力学习， 为我 将 从事有压力的工 打下基础。
偶尔锻 并不 ， 持锻 着实不 。 持锻 确实 重 。
若每天 持锻 ，我 就会习 于锻 ，反之，锻 也会成为我 的
一种 。终 锻 义 凡，当我 年老 尤其 此。到那 我
会发 现，与不锻 不 持锻 的人相比，不 格还 康
，我 都与他 不相同。
我本人每天 约一小 ，已 持五年 了。我的确喜
， 为我 为这种习 让我受益颇 。
范文点评
1. 指出锻 身 的重 性，直 主题。
2. 述锻 身 为 重 。
3. 述提纲 二 容： 持锻 的重 性。
4.用切身锻 历 为 ， 述 持锻 身 的重 性， 强
了 的说 力。
要点用法
undoubtedly adv. 毫 疑问
fit adj. 康的
qualified adj. 合格的；有资 的
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in return 为 报
hobby n.
be accustomed to 习 于
句法点评
1.If we keep doing it every day, we will be accustomed to
physical exertion, which in return will make it our hobby.
该句包含if 导的 件 从句，其主句中又包含which 导的
制性定 从句，which指代前 we will be accustomed to
physical exertion这个句子的 容。in return本 为“ 为
报”， 此 为“反过 ，反之”。
2.I have been jogging about one hour each day for more
than five years.
杂 间 的 用， 注 间的排 顺 ， 本句中两个
间 ：about one hour each day表示 ，for more than five
years表示 间的 ，两 句子的 动 jogging之间存 饰
的先后 逻辑关 ，这种 下，应先说 ，再说 间的 性。
Composition 91 不要熬夜
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to
Don’ t Stay Up Late.write a short essay entitled You
should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words
following the outline given below.
• Staying up late will do harm to your health.
• It is wise to develop a daily routine.
审题立意
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1.导 读：本 求以“不 ”为题 一 短 ， 述
的危害
培养 康的 息习 。
2. 章 ： 不 ，不 里？ 重 说 。另 ，说说
培养 的 活习 。这两 这 的主 容。
写作思路
1. 一段 门见山，指出没有人能否 对身 康有害。科
。
学家的研究表 会损 身 ， 低 工
2. 二段 述 养成良 的 活习 。重 说说 培养良
的 息习 ，包括按 起 、每天 持 。
3. 三段再次指出 于利。
参考范文
Don’t Stay Up Late
No one can deny the fact that staying up late will do
harm to your health.1 Relevant researches have proved that
those who often stay up late will develop diseases such as
high blood pressure, diabetes, and even cancers, making it
difficult for them to tackle their daily work efficiently. I
find that some of my classmates who often stay up late do not
enjoy good academic or physical performance at all.2
Now that staying up late is no good to one’s health, we,
as students, should try to develop a good daily life
routine.3 We’d better go to bed no later than 10:30 in the
evening and get up before 7:00 in the morning not only from
Monday to Friday but also on weekend. Actually, if we follow
this routine, we will find that we are more efficient at work
and enjoy a better mood, which will lead to better academic
or work performance.4
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To sum up, pulling an all-nighter does more harm than
good to your body. Moreover, it may not prove to be a source
of productivity.5
不要熬夜
没人能否 对身 康有害。有关研究已表 ， 常
可能会 上 血压、 尿病， 至癌症 疾病，且 每天 工
。我发现，一些 常 的同学学习成绩 身 都不 。
对身 康有害， 为学 ，我 应 力培养良 的日
常 活习 。最 上 10 半之前上 睡 ，早上7 之前起 ，
不仅周一到周五 此，周末也应该这样。事实上，若每天遵 这种
活习 ，我 就会发现，我 的工 将 加 ， 加舒畅，
其 就 学习 工 加出色。
之， 对身 于利。再说， 也未必能提
产。
范文点评
1. 题目 提纲展 ， 指出 具有危害性。
2.通过相关的研究 活实 述 的危害性。
3.自 过渡， 有害，就 培养良 的 活习 ，就此
出 章 述的 二 。
4. 述 培养良 的 活习 。
5. ，重申观 。
要点用法
stay up late
do harm to 对……有害
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blood pressure 血压 ，车
diabetes n. 尿病
performance n. 表现
pull an all-nighter
句法点评
1.Relevant researches have proved that those who often
stay up late will develop diseases such as high blood
pressure, diabetes, and even cancers, making it difficult for
them to tackle their daily work efficiently.
这 一个长句及 汇有 合的范 。该句包含一个定 从
句。blood pressure、diabetes、 cancer 医学 的 用表 了
较 的 汇量。当 中， 没有记住这 专业 汇，
可用泛指的名 代替。
2.Actually, if we follow this routine, we will find that
we are more efficient at work and enjoy a better mood, which
will lead to better academic or work performance.
that 出的 一个宾 从句，后 的which will... 一个 制
性定 从句。
Composition 92 早起的鸟儿有食吃
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to
The Early Bird Catches thewrite a short essay entitled
Worm. You should write at least 120 words but no more than
180 words following the outline given below.
• Success goes to those who get an early start in their
day.
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• We should try our best to be prepared for everything in
advance.
审题立意
1.导 读：以“早起的 有食吃”为题 一 短 ， 述成
功 睐那些有 的人这一道 ， 我 应当事先为一切
。
2. 章 ： 释一下“早起的 有食吃”这个 的寓 ，
后联 自己的学习 活实际，举 单 的 子说 事都事
先。
写作思路
1. 一段 述“早起的 有食吃”这个 的寓 。
2. 二段承接上 ，举一个与自己学校 活相关的事 说 事
之前 。
3. 三段从反 指出“ 起的 没食吃”， 。
参考范文
The Early Bird Catches the Worm
We all agree that success always goes to those who get an
early start in their day.1 The foreign proverb “The early
bird catches the worm” is a precious lesson for most of us.2
It reminds us to be diligent and well-prepared before we plan
to do something.3 If we look around at those successful
people, we will find that almost all are well-prepared and
well-organized individuals. No one is to succeed with ease.3
Such being the case, whenever we are faced with a task,
we’d better start to prepare as early as possible.4 For
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example, if we want to land a good job upon graduation, we
should study hard to get good academic records. Meanwhile, we
should spend our weekends or holidays doing some part-time
jobs so as to be familiar with what qualifications companies
require of us. Of course, we should start to prepare resumes
and interviews even one year before we graduate.
In conclusion, we should avoid being the late bird that
will find nothing for it to catch.5
早起的鸟儿有食吃
家都 同，成功 睐那些一天中早启动的人。国 的
“早起的 有食吃”对我 人 都 一种宝贵的
训。该 提醒我 勤 ， 事前 分的 。看看周 那
些成功 人 ，我 就会发现，他 几乎都 事有 、有 的
人。没有人能随随 成功。
此，我 每 一件事 之前，最 尽早 。比 ，若
毕业后找个 工 ， 校 间我 努 力学习，取 成绩。同 ，
周末 应当 些兼 工 ，以了 社会用人单位的 求。当 ，
我 应当 毕业一年前就 历。
之，我 避 成为 起的 ，起 发现没有虫子可吃
了。
范文点评
1. get an early start这一 题。
2. 二句 ， 扣题目。
3. 具 述其含义，并 此 出 章的 。
4. 自 过渡到 学 早 这一 题。
5. 。
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要点用法
proverb n.
diligent adj. 勤
such being the case 此
meanwhile adv. 同
qualifications n. 位 求， 资格
句法点评
1.Such being the case, whenever we are faced with a task,
we’d better start to prepare as early as possible.
whenever 导让步 从句；had better do sth. 为“最
……”。
2.Meanwhile, we should spend our weekends or holidays
doing some part-time jobs so as to be familiar with what
qualifications companies require of us.
本句中，what 导宾 从句， 当介 with的宾 。
Composition 93 寻找终生兴趣，充实心灵
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no
more than 180 words following the outline given below.
• Lifelong interest is important to our life because it
benefits us a great deal.
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• How do you develop your lifelong interest?
审题立意
1. 导 读： 求 根据题目“寻找终 兴 ， 实 ”为
题撰 短 。提纲包含两 的 容， 一 终 兴 对每个人的重
性，二 求 说说 培养自己的终 兴 。
2. 章 ： 合自己的兴 ，先 为什么终 兴
重 ， 后 出自己
培养个人 终 兴 。
写作思路
1. 一段根据常 自己的个人兴 ， 述终 兴 的 。
2. 二段 述自己 培养 个兴 的。
3. 三段指出再成功的人 也 培养终 兴 。
参考范文
Pursuing a Lifelong Interest to Enrich Your Mind
Life-long interests, which may range from sports to
calligraphy, are of great importance to our life.1 They may
help us not only live more happily and meaningfully but also
spend our leisure time more pleasantly.2 Physical exercise is
my life-long interest. As a matter of fact, it has made me
happy, relaxed and even excited sometimes.
In order to develop this hobby, I have kept jogging for
five years.3 At first,4 I felt tired and bored, almost giving
up this exercise. But whenever I found people, both young and
old, jogging in the open air or gym, I was moved by their
perseverance. Thus,4 I continued to jog although sometimes my
knees and feet felt painful. Two years later,4 those
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uncomfortable feelings disappeared. I became almost addicted
to jogging. Now, whenever I jog, I feel a sense of happiness
and self-realization because I can go farther without feeling
bored or exhausted.4
To sum up, it is worthy to pursue a lifelong interest
even if one is already financially successful.5
寻找终生兴趣，充实心灵
终 兴 包括运动、书法 ，对人的一 常重 。终 兴
不仅有助于我 过 加幸福、有 义， 且有助于我 乐
度过闲 光。锻 身 我的终 兴 。事实上，锻 我 到
乐、 放松，有 至 兴 。
为了培养这个 ，我已 五年了。起初，我 到 疲 又
，险些放弃了。 每当我看见人 ，不 老 ， 身房
， 被他 的毅力所 。 ，我又 持 下去了，尽 有
至会 到膝盖 脚部的疼痛 不适。两年后，那种不适 消
了。我几乎沉迷于 了。现 ，每当 ，我都有一种幸福
自我实现 ， 为我可以 越 越远，却不 到 疲。
之，就 一个人已 富有了，寻找一个终 兴 也
的。
范文点评
1. 终 兴 题，指出终 兴 的重 性。
2. 从两个层 对终 兴 的重 性展 述。
3. 以自身的 历 述 培养终 兴 。
4. 层层深 述了兴 培养的过程。
5. 最后一段加以 ，突出兴 的重 性。
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要点用法
meaningfully adv. 有 义
as a matter of fact 事实上，其实
be addicted to 沉 于
self-realization 自我实现
句法点评
1.Life-long interests, which may range from sports to
calligraphy, are of great importance to our life.
此 合句 用了一个which 导的 制性定 从句， 加
丰 。当 ，也可 虑用并 句 表达这两层 。
2.As a matter of fact, it has made me happy, relaxed and
even excited sometimes.
句中 用了make sb./sth.+adj.的 ， 为“ 人/
事……”。
Composition 94 学会控制自己的脾气
Directions: For Learnthis part, you taoreCoanltlrowoeldY3o0urmiTneumtpeesr.to
write a short essay entitled
You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180
words following the outline given below.
• Why is it necessary to control your temper?
• How will you control your temper?
审题立意
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1.导 读： 求 以“学会控制自己的脾气”为题 述为什
么 控制脾气， 样控制脾气。
2. 章 ： 述为什么我 控制自己的脾气及 样才能控制
脾气。这样的 章， 可以 一人称， 即自己的亲身 会 ，也可
以 家的 气（you we） 说。不 以 种 气 ，关键看自己
否能 流利表达。
写作思路
1. 一段 控制脾气的必 性。
2. 二段 控制脾气。
3. 三段强 为成年人 控制 住脾气，以 持良 的人际关
。
参考范文
Learn to Control Your Temper
Everyone loves those who are sunny, cooperative and good-
tempered.1 Whenever you become bad-tempered, those around you
will be offended.2 This is why it is necessary to control
your temper although sometimes you may feel very angry or
even mad with others.3 Some scientists have found that those
who are good-tempered tend to be more successful in their
career and family than those who easily lose their temper.4
Naturally, those good-tempered people are physically more
healthy.4
To control your temper, you need to bear these points in
your mind.5 First6, bad temper will hurt not only yourself
but others as well. Second6, if you are really very angry at
somebody or something, you should try to avoid them. Third6,
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if you cannot avoid them, you ’d better try to think of
something or somebody else that can make you happy.
As adults, we should be able to control our temper so as
to be on good terms with people around us.7
学会控制自己的脾气
家都喜欢那些阳光、合 、脾气 的人。每当 发脾气 ，周
的人就会受到 。 此，即 有 常 气 至 发疯 ，
须尽力控制住脾气。一些科学家已发现，脾气 的人比脾气不
的人 事业 家 容 成功。当 ，脾气 的人身 也
康。
控制脾气 注 以下几 。 先， 知道，发脾气 害自己
也 害他人。其次，若 真的对 人 事有气，可以尽量避 接
他 它。 三，若 实 不 不 对让 气的人 事 ， 最
努力 将自己的注 力转移到那些 兴的人 事 上。
为成年人，我 应能 控制住脾气，以同身边的人 持良 的
关。
范文点评
1. 句以 脾气的人受欢迎 铺 ，反衬脾气不 的坏 。
2. 采用反 法说 控制不 脾气的危害。
3. 衔接自 、流畅， 出提纲 求的 一个 ：控制脾气的必
性。
4. 从两个层 述 脾气的 。
5. 二段 句 出提纲的 二 ： 控制脾气。
6. 从三个 述 控制脾气。通过 用First, Second,
Third 述层次清晰，逻辑严 密。
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7. 尾段落再次强 控制脾气的重 性。
要点用法
cooperative adj. 合 的
good-tempered adj. 脾气 的
control temper 控制脾气
lose temper 发脾气
bear in mind 记住
句法点评
1.Everyone loves those who are sunny, cooperative and
good-tempered.
who 导定 从句，从句的表 三个 容 并 成。
2.Third, if you cannot avoid them, you’d better try to
think of something or somebody else that can make you happy.
you’d better后 接动 原 。that 导定 从句， 被 饰的
不定代 sb. sth.，所以必须 that 导。
Composition 95 微笑的力量
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to
The Power of Smile.write a short essay entitled You should
write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following
the outline given below.
• What is the power of smile?
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• What will you do in order to keep smiling?
审题立意
1.导 读： 求 以“ 的力量”为题 一 短 ， 述
有什么 用， 能 持 。
2. 章 ：先 述 为什么 重 ， 后 合自身 会说说
样持 。
写作思路
1. 一段 的重 性，包括 可以 自己的 ，可以
决诸 人与人之间的矛盾，可以找到 工 。
2. 二段 持 的几 窍门，包括 有 ，学
会控制脾气，必 参加 务培训 。
3. 三段补 说 应有 利用 的力量。
参考范文
The Power of Smile
Smile is the best expression of human beings.1 It can2
make us look sunny and pleasant in others’ eyes. Smiling
can2 solve difficult and sophisticated problems concerning
interpersonal relations, or even international relations. Of
course, smiling can2 earn even more positive comments from
others so that smiling people tend to be better paid and get
quicker promotion in their jobs.
To keep smiling is not an easy job for us.3 We have to be
kind to others and be patient all the time.4 Moreover, we
have to get rid of bad moods.4 Of course, training on how to
smile is essential, too.4 I would suggest those who cannot
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smile naturally should take some training classes. You are
sure to benefit from such training.
All in all, the power of smile is within everyone’s
reach. The key is to learn to use this power in an effective
way.5
微笑的力量
人 最 的表 。 会 我 他人的眼里看上去阳
光、愉 。 可以 决人与人， 至 国家间各种 杂的问
题。当
， 至可以 人 受到他人 正 的 价， 此，
的人
工 中往往能获 的收 的 升 会。
持 对我 绝 事。我 必须 刻怀有 。
且，我 必须摆脱不良 绪。当 ， 训练也 必 的。我 议
不能自 的人去接受一些 的培训。 肯定能从这样的培
训中 受益。
之， 的力量每个人都 手可及。关键 学会有 利用这
种力量。
范文点评
1. 句 出： 人 最 的表 ， 扣 题。
2. 用排比句 述 的力量， 强行 气势。
3. 二段 句以退为进，指出 持 并 事。
4. 介 持 的具 法。
5. 指出应有 利用 的力量。
要点用法
expression adj. 表 ；表达
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sophisticated adj. 杂的
positive comments 正 价
promotion n. 升
essential adj. 必 的，至关重 的
句法点评
1.Of course, smiling can earn more positive comments from
others so that smiling people tend to be better paid and get
quicker promotion in their jobs.
本句中so that 导 从句。tend to be better paid表
示“往往会获 的收 ”，be better paid be well paid转化
， 比较级的运用，表示“获 的收 ”。
2.I would suggest those who cannot smile naturally should
take some training classes.
本句主干为I would suggest...句中suggest后 了省略了 导
that的宾 从句，suggest that... 表示“ 议……”，注 从句
中 用虚拟 气，即 动 用“should+动 原 ”的 ，
should可 以省略， 本句中的宾 从句 为should take，也可以
take。当suggest表示“ 示”含义 ，接 宾 从句不用虚拟
气。本句中who 导定 从句， 饰宾 从句中的主 those。
Composition 96 分享的重要性
Directions: For The Importance ofthis part, you are allowed 3S0hamriinnugt.esYotuo
write a short essay entitled
should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words
according to the following guidelines:
• What is about sharing?
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• Why is it important to share with others?
• How should I share with others?
审题立意
1. 导 读： 求 根据 题“分享的重 性”这一 题进行
述，并说 自己应 与他人分享。
2. 章 ：先给出分享的含义， 后指出与人分享的重 性，
最后表 自己应 与人分享。
写作思路
1. 一段 描述什么 分享。
2. 二段从两个 释分享的重 性。
3. 三段指 应 与人分享。
4. 段重申分享的重 性。
参考范文
The Importance of Sharing
Sharing is about possessing something with others rather
than by yourself. As the Chinese old saying goes: Give roses
to others and the lasting fragrance will remain in your hand.
That is to say, sharing benefits both you and others.1
It is very important to share with others.2 For one
thing, it is sharing that enriches our daily life.3 For
another, sharing brings us a sense of happiness and
satisfaction. Sharing your happiness with friends will make
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you both happy. Sharing your sadness with friends will make
you less sad.3
Therefore, I should keep sharing in mind and share smiles
and tears with my friends.4 Besides, I should participate in
charitable activities and be a volunteer to help others.4 In
addition, if I get the first prize in a contest I will tell
my friends.4
Anyway, sharing my emotion and things with others will
not only increase my happiness, but also give other people
the opportunity to taste the joyful moment I have
experienced.5
分享的重要性
分享 与人共享， 不 独自占有。正 中国古 所说：“ 人
,手有 。”也就 说，分享利己 利人。
与别人分享 常重 的。 先，分享丰富了我 的日常 活。
其次，分享给我 带 了幸福 。与 友分享 的 乐会让
乐加 ，与 友分享 的 会让 少 。
所以我应 记分享，与 友分担 乐 。 且，我应该参加
公益活动，担当志 去帮助别人。此 ， 比赛中我获 一
奖我会告诉我的 友 。
，与他人分享我的 事 不仅能 加我的 乐，也
让他人有 会 尝我 历过的欢乐 刻 。
范文点评
1. 按 提纲 求 描述分享的含义。
2. 释提纲 二 ： 述分享的重 性。
3. 从两个 述为什么分享 重 的， 扣 题。
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4. 从三个 表 自己应 与别人分享。
5. 末段再次强 分享的重 义。
要点用法
fragrance n. ，芬芳
enrich v. 丰富
keep...in mind 记， 记
participate in 参与，参加
charitable activities 活动，公益活动
句法点评
1.For one thing, it is sharing that enriches our daily
life.
本句 用了强 句 ，即“it is+被强 部分+that+其他”。
2.Anyway, sharing my emotion and things with others will
not only increase my happiness, but also give other people
the opportunity to taste the joyful moment I have
experienced.
本句采用了not only...but also...的并 平行 ， 为“不
仅…… 且……”。
Composition 97 空气污染
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to
Air Pollution.write a short essay entitled You should write
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at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the
outline given below.
• Talk about air pollution by citing examples.
• What kind of measures can be taken to tackle the
problem?
审题立意
1. 导 读： 求 以“空气污 ”为题 一 短 ，说 目
前空气污 的严重程度以及该采取 些 基本措 控制空气污 。
2. 章 ：空气污 越 越严重，天不再蓝了，PM2.5越 越
了，人 戴口罩出行了。 决空 气污 问题，政 、 业 个
人 应该采取措 。政 应加 投 治污， 法严 排污 ； 业应
自 排； 个人应 色出行， 用低能耗产 。三 成合力，
空气污 肯定能 到治 。
写作思路
1. 一段 举空气污 越 越严重的事实，包括蓝天越 越少，
污 指 上升，人 出行戴口罩 。
2. 二段 述治 空气污 的措 ，包括政 投资治污， 法
排污 ； 业 排；个人注 环 、 环 出行、 用节能产 。
3. 三段提出环 议，号召所有人为改 空气 量 出应有贡
。
参考范文
Air Pollution
Many people have come to realize that the air we breathe
is being seriously polluted.1 We cannot see as many blue
skies in big cities as we did dozens of years ago. PM2.5
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index, an indicator of air quality, has been going up
steadily. More and more city dwellers are equipped with masks
when they are in the open air.2
To tackle the air pollution problem, not only should the
government take effective measures, but also each enterprise
and city resident should join the efforts.3 The government4
should enforce stricter laws and regulations to crack down on
polluters. Enterprises4 should spend more money on reducing
emission of pollutants. For individuals4, we should try to
use the fuel-efficient means of transportation like bus and
subway, recycle and reuse materials, and purchase energy-
efficient goods.
All in all, it is every citizen’s duty to do something
to improve the air quality. Only when we form synergy in the
battle against air pollution can we enjoy better air quality
in the future.5
空气污染
人 到我 呼吸的空气被污 厉害。 市里，我
已 看不到几十年前那么 蓝天了。 衡量空气 量的PM2.5指
不 上升。 里人出门 戴口罩的越 越 。
为了 决空气污 问题，不 政 采取有 措 ，每个 业
市居民都应该参与治污。政 应实 严厉的法 法 打击那些污
。 业应投 的资金用于 少污 的排放。 对于个人
， 我 应尽量乘坐诸 公交、 铁 节能交通工具， 环利用
， 买节能产 。
之，每个公民都有责 为改 空气 量 些事 。只有我
控制污 的战 中 成合力，未 的空 气 量才能越 越 。
范文点评
1. 句直接 题，指出空气污 日益严重。
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2. 举蓝天少、PM2.5指 、戴口罩人 各种
述空气污 越 越严重的事实。
3. 二段 句 提纲 二 容： 治 污 。
4. 从政 、 业、个人三个 述治 空气污 的措 。
5. 采用 装句 ，表示强 ， 尾 有力量。
要点用法
PM 2.5(particulate matter 2.5) 直径小于2.5 的污
take measures 采取措
fuel-efficient adj. 节约 的
recycling n. 再 环
synergy n. 合力
句法点评
1.Many people have come to realize that the air we
breathe is being seriously polluted.
本句中that 导宾 从句， realize的宾 ，该宾 从句中包含
一个 定性定 从句，省略了关 代 that， 为that 从句中 宾
。
2.To tackle the air pollution problem, not only should
the government take effective measures, but also each
enterprise and city resident should join the efforts.
本句中采用了not only...but also...并 平行 。 该句
中not only 位于句 ， 应 用部 分 装的 。 注 ，but
also 导的分句的 部分不用 装。
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3.Only when we form synergy in the battle against air
pollution can we enjoy better air quality in the future.
only 饰的 从句若放 句 ，句子（ 主句） 部
分应采用部分 装的 。
Composition 98 智能手机应用软件频繁更新
UpgrDaidriencgtioofnsS:maWrrti-tpehoaneshAoprpts.esYsoauy Onentitled Too Frequent
should write at least 120
words but no more than 180 words according to the following
guidelines:
• Nowadays, people become increasingly reliant on their
smart phones.
• Too frequent upgrading of smart-phone apps has annoyed
many users.
• What’s your opinion about excessive upgrading of
smart-phone apps?
审题立意
1. 导 读： 求 根据导 的 容就“ 能手 应用软件
新”这一 题进行 述，并发表自 己的看法。
2. 章 ： 能手 应用软件 新存 诸 。尽
能手 带给我
的手 及 求 ， 对于 新应 用软件，还应 性 根据自己
写作思路 出选择。
1. 一段， 描述 能手 应用软件 新的现 ， 后提
出观 ：自己不 成 新 能手 软件。
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2. 二段为主 段落，从三个 指出 新 能软件存 的
： 用版本不稳定，导致 种问题 ；手 样， 能软件并
不适用于所有手 ，导致不兼容问题； 新周
毒。 太短，容 导致病
3. 三段为 尾段落，呼应段 ，再次强 对于 能手 应
用软件应该有选择性 新，不宜一 新。
参考范文
On too Frequent Upgrading of Smart-phone Apps
Nowadays, we become increasingly reliant on our smart-
phones, which turn out to be the most indispensable
electronic gadget in our life. However, too frequent
upgrading of smart-phone apps has confused and annoyed many
users. In my view, I do not think it necessary to upgrade
smart-phone apps too frequently.1
It is apparent that frequent upgrading of smart-phone
apps may not bring the optimum user experience.2 In the first
place, the performance of trial versions may not be stable
enough, which will slow the processing speed of smart-phones
and lead to system instability.3 In the second place, the
issue of incompatibility may arise when apps designers fail
to take into consideration unique features of various
operating systems as well as different hardware
configurations of smart-phones.3 In addition, frequent
upgrading of apps may pose security risks to smart-phones,
which will become more vulnerable to viruses.3
To put it simply, we should think twice before upgrading
our smart-phone apps. The upgrading of apps should be based
on our actual needs instead of our desire to follow the
trend.4
智能手机应用软件频繁更新
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今，我 越 越 能手 ， ， 能手 成为我 活
中最必不可少的电子产 。 ， 能 手 应用软件太过 的 新
用户 到 烦 。就我 ，我不 成太过 新
能手 应用软件。
， 能手 应用软件的 新不能带 最 的用户 。
先， 用版本的性能可能不 稳定， 这会 低 能手 的运行速
度，导致 的不稳定性。其次，当应用软件设 虑不到不同操
及 能手 不同硬件 造的独 之 ，可能就会产 不兼容
性的问题。此 ， 新应用软件可能 会给 能手 带 安
险，令其 容 上病毒。
之， 新 能手 应用软件之前我 应当 重 虑。应用
软件的 新应当基于我 的实际 求， 不 为了 追求 尚的
。
范文点评
1. 题，指出 能手 新应用软件这一现 ，表 自
己不 成的态度。
2. 自 过渡，指出手 应用软件的 新不会带 最 的用户
。
3. 分三个层次 了自己的观 ， 清晰。
4. 末段 ，重申观 ，并指出我 性对待 能手 应
用软件的 新。
要点用法
upgrade v. 新，升级
trial version 用版本、测 版本
instability n. 不稳定性
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incompatibility adv. 不兼容性
put it simply 之
句法点评
1.It is apparent that frequent upgrading of smart-phone
apps may not bring the optimum user experience.
It is apparent that... 一个 定句 ， 为“ ……”，
that 导主 从句，it为 主 ，代 替该主 从句。
2.In the first place, the performance of trial versions
may not be stable enough, which will slow the processing
speed of smart-phones and lead to system instability.
which 导 制性定 从句，which指代前 的 个句子。
Composition 99 关于“偶像热”问题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to
Idol Craze.write a short essay entitled You should write at
least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the
outline given below:
• Idol craze hasn’t cooled down these years.
• Many argue that idol craze has more disadvantages than
advantages.
• What do you think about idol craze?
审题立意
1.导 读：导 中提到的 常见的“追 ”现 ，也就 “偶
崇拜”。这 当前社会中比较具有 争议性的 题。
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2. 章 ：“追 ”现 已 存 了 年。 饱受争议的同
，我 也不 不承 ，它的存 肯定 有一定的道 。 章 求
就此现 发表自己的观 。
写作思路
1. 一段 先说 “偶 ” 常出现 少年 中。
2. 二段说 人 对“偶 ”现 所持的两种观 ，并重
述反对 的观 及 ，为下一段 铺。
3. 三段承接上 ，表达自己的观 ：不应 容盲目崇拜。
参考范文
Idol Craze
Idol craze hasn’t cooled down these years.1 Idols mainly
gain their popularity among teenagers, who are obsessed with
their songs or movies.
Some people believe that idol craze may benefit teenagers
since it makes them passionate and energetic. What’s more,
teenagers can emulate their favorite idols’ good personality
traits.2 However, more people hold that idol craze does more
harm than good to teenagers.3 For instance, teenagers are
likely to spend beyond their means to show their support for
their idols. They may purchase all the albums or concert
tickets of their idols. Some teenagers may even be tempted to
imitate the undesirable behaviors of their idols, such as
drug-taking, smoking or drinking.4
From my perspective, teenagers should avoid becoming
crazy fans of idols since they are not sophisticated enough
to distinguish between right and wrong.5 At least, blind
worship of idols should be discouraged. It is necessary for
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those who worship idols to learn how to absorb the essence
and discard the dross.6
偶像热
近些年 ，偶 现 一直没有 却下 。偶 主 少年
中比较有人气，他 痴迷于偶 的歌 拍的电 。
一些人 为偶 可能 少年受益， 为它让 少年变
洋 活力。 且, 少年可以从他 钟 的偶 身上模 的
性格 征。 ， 人 为偶 对 少年 于利。 ，
少年 容 不 成本 支持他 的偶 。他 可能会 买偶 所有的
专辑 会门票。一些 少年 至可能 会受到 模 偶 吸毒、
抽 喝酒之 的不良行为。
从我个人的观 看， 为 少年还不完 具 辨 的能
力，所以他 应避 成为偶 的 的 丝。至少，盲目的偶 崇
拜现 不 提 。对于那些偶 崇拜 说，学会“取其 华，弃
其 ” 常有必 。
范文点评
1. 题，“偶 ”现 一直没有 却下 。
2. 二段 先 述支持 的观 。
3. 接着 述反对 的观 。
4.通过举 详细 述反对 的 ，为下 出自己的观 铺
。
5.承接上 ， 自己的观 。
6.最后一句对自己的观 进行补 ，避 让自己的观 过于
片。
要点用法
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craze n.
cool down 却
popularity n. 受欢迎；流行
be obsessed with 痴迷于
passionate adj. 的
energetic adj. 力 沛的
emulate v. 模
for instance
purchase v. 买
album n. 片集
be tempted to do sth. 被 事
imitate v. 模
undesirable adj. 不良的；不受欢迎的；讨厌的
perspective n. 观
distinguish between right and wrong 辨
absorb the essence and discard the dross 取其 华，弃其
句法点评
1.Idols mainly gain their popularity among teenagers, who
are obsessed with their songs or movies.
本句中who 导 制性定 从句，先行 为teenagers。
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2.For instance, teenagers are likely to spend beyond
their means to show their support for their idols.
本句中，for instance 出具 事 的表达 法，与for
example含义一致。spend beyond one’s means 为“ 前消费，
不 出 花钱”。
Composition 100 如何应对雾霾问题
DoneDitroecTtaicoknlse:tWhreitHeazae Problem?short essay entitled What Can Be
You should
write at least
120 words but no more than 180 words according to the
following guidelines:
• Many big cities are affected by severe hazy conditions.
• What has caused the problem?
• What kind of measures do you think can be taken to
solve the problem?
审题立意
1. 导 读： 求 根据导 容就“ 治 ”提出
议。
2. 章 ： 市的 已 成为老百姓最关注的问题之一，
它关 着我 的 活及 康，应采取措 治 ， 轻其危害。
写作思路
1. 段 描述 天气这一现 及其危害。
2. 二段具 分 天气产 的原 。
3. 三段指出应对 天气的措 议。
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参考范文
What Can Be Done to Tackle the Haze Problem?
China has been increasingly hit with severe hazy
conditions since the beginning of this century. In many big
cities, where the pollutants in the air can’t be dispersed
without strong wind, the haze problem is worse. As a result,
the incidence of respiratory disease among city dwellers has
been on the rise.1
The cause of the haze is no mystery.2 With rapid
industrialization, many steel and power plants burn a lot of
coal.3 Without resorting to the clean technology, these
factories emit smoke and fume directly into the atmosphere.
The past decade has also witnessed a surge in the number of
private cars.3 This would not have posed an environmental
problem to the cities if the quality of gas is good and the
car engines meet the emission standard. With fast-paced
urbanization, the sand and dirt released from numerous
construction sites also contribute to the haze problem.3
In order to tackle this problem, we should reduce the use
of private cars and choose public transport.4 The government
should strictly enforce the environmental laws and severely
punish polluters.4
如何治理雾霾
自本世 初，中国越 越 受到严重 天气的 袭。
市，空气中的污 没有强 的 下 法散 ， 问题加
剧。 ， 市居民呼吸道疾病的发 不 上升。
的起 并不神秘。随着工业化的迅速发展， 钢铁厂 电
厂 烧 量的 。这些工厂没有采取 清洁技 ，将 直接排
气中。过去的十年已 见 了私家车 量的 。 汽油 、
汽车 发动 排放 ，私家车 量的 不会给 市带 环 问
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题。随着 市化的 速发展， 工 的沙尘也加剧了 问
题。
为了 决这一问题，我 应当 少私家车的 用，选择公共交通
工具出行。政 应当严格实 环 护 法，严厉 污 环 。
范文点评
1. 描述 这一现 及其危害。
2.过渡句， 出 的成 。
3.从三个 述 的成 。
4.提出两个应对措 。
要点用法
hazy adj. 的， 蒙蒙的
pollutant n. 污
disperse v. 分散， 散
respiratory disease 呼吸道疾病
on the rise 上升， 涨
industrialization n. 工业化
resort to 采取；诉诸，求助于
surge n.
urbanization n. 市化
句法点评
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1.In many big cities, where the pollutants in the air
can’t be dispersed without strong wind, the haze problem is
worse.
where 导 制性定 从句， 饰先行 big cities，起补 说
用。
2.This would not have posed an environmental problem to
the cities if the quality of gas is good and the car engines
meet the emission standard.
if 导 件 从句，pose a problem 为“造成问题， 发问
题”。
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3部分 附 ： 级 真题按题
分 摘选
一、 息、 景提示
真题
1二.套话真题题：作令文自）己最感兴趣的一门课程（2014. 12第
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to
write a short essay about a course that has impressed you
most in college. You should state the reasons and write at
least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
When it comes to the course that has impressed me most in
college, I would like to say it’ s Chinese Classical Opera
Appreciation.
What impresses me most is that the professor shows us a
marvelous world of Chinese classical operas. With her
excellent interpretation, we can learn how to appreciate the
brilliant operas in China. For example, we have learned that
every move by an actor or actress has a special meaning and
every type of facial masks represents a different kind of
characters in Beijing Opera, which really broaden our
horizons.
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The professor plays videos of masterpieces of all types
of Chinese operas in class. I remember that she once played
Wujiapo, a traditional play in Beijing Opera and I was deeply
touched by the actor in the video chanting “I travel alone
across the Xiliang frontier by riding a horse...”
The course has really raised my art taste to a higher
level and made me have a better understanding of the essence
of traditional Chinese operas. It is indeed a meaningful and
unforgettable course.
2第.二话套题）：向外国朋友推荐自己家乡的景点（2014. 6
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to
write a short essay on the following question. You should
write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your
hometown, what is the most interesting place you would like
to take him/her to see and why?
I would like to take David, my friend from the UK, to
visit Daqinggou National Nature Reserve if he comes to visit
my hometown Tongliao, a city in Inner Mongolia Autonomous
Region. I am sure that he will enjoy the beautiful, unique
scenery there as much as I do.
Firstly, Daqinggou National Nature Reserve owns a famous
broad-leaved forest with numerous varieties of rare plants,
and of course, some rare wild animals. When hiking to the
bottom of the valley, he is bound to be attracted by its
natural beauty and uniqueness. The striking contrast between
the forested valley and the boundless grassland around will
impress him profoundly. In addition, he can take part in many
entertainment projects such as racing a horse and drift
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exploration. The unique cultural performances and ethnic
foods of the Mongolia minority also should not be missed,
which provide good opportunities to experience the local
customs and food culture.
Daqinggou National Nature Reserve is hailed as “the
pearl of desert” for its unique natural beauty. That’s why
I would like to introduce it to my foreign friend, David.
3第.三话套题）：向外国朋友推荐中国旅游目的地（2014.6
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to
write a short essay on the following question. You should
write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit
China, what is the first place you would like to take him/her
to see and why?
If a foreign friend of mine is coming to China, I would
like to take him or her to pay a visit to the capital city of
our country—Beijing. As is known to all, Beijing is not only
a modern international metropolis, but also an ancient
capital city with a long history of more than 3000 years.
Generally speaking, Beijing could be a good place for people
to learn about Chinese history and culture.
In Beijing, there are numerous places of interest, among
which the Summer Palace is a very popular one. The Summer
Palace was constructed during the Qing Dynasty. As an
important political and diplomatic center that is second only
to the Forbidden City, the royal park witnessed lots of
historic events that happened during the modern history of
China. By visiting places of historical meaning, my friend
can best learn Chinese history and typical culture.
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In addition to the city’s historical and cultural
values, Beijing can be a perfect interpretation of modern
China. I am sure everyone who comes to visit it will marvel
at its beauty.
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二、 画、图表 真题
1第.一话套题）：互联网对人们沟通方式的影响（2013.12
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to
write an essay based on the picture below. You should start
your essay with a brief description of the picture and then
comment on this kind of modern life. You should write at
least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
“Dear Andy — How are you? Your mother and I
are fi ne. We both miss you and hope you are
doing well. We look forward to seeing you again
the next time your computer crashes and you
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come downstairs for something to eat. Love, Mom
and Dad.”
2二.套话）题：教育不仅仅意味着获取信息（2013.12 第
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to
write a short essay based on the picture below. You should
start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the
Internet on learning and then explain why education doesn’t
simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write
at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
“Once I learn how to use Google, isn’t that
all the education I really need?”
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The impact of the Internet on learning is vividly
depicted in the picture: the student, holding a smart phone
in his hand, asks the teacher, “Once I learn how to use
Google, isn ’t that all the education I really need?”
However, does education simply mean learning to obtain
information? Obviously, the answer is “No.”
Education for people involves various aspects and it not
simply means obtaining information. It also helps people
enhance their competence in many other aspects such as:
mastering the scientific method, developing an optimistic
attitude and gaining a willing heart, etc. Just as the
proverb goes, “It takes three generations to make a
gentleman.” While it is convenient and useful to obtain
information from the Internet, that is by no means what
education should be all about. It takes a long time and all
kinds of training for one to receive a good education and
grow to be a man of tremendous promise.
As university students, we should have a right attitude
toward the Internet and make a proper use of it. At the same
time, I think university teachers and parents should guide
students to pay more attention to the cultivation of their
comprehensive qualities.
3. 话题（2013.12第三套）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to
write a short essay based on the picture below. You should
start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use
of the mobile phone in people’s life and then explain the
consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120
words but no more than 180 words.
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People are crossingthe street looking attheir
cell phones and using walking sticksin order to
see.
As is shown in the picture, people are crossing the
street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks
in order to see. The drawing reflects the increasing use of
the mobile phone in people’s life and the consequences of
overusing it. Though that might be a little bit exaggerated,
the meaning it presents is really thought-provoking.
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With the development of science and technology, the
mobile phone plays a more and more important role in
people’s daily life. However, the phenomenon of overusing it
also becomes very common. It seems to me that indulging in
mobile phones produces negative influences. First and
foremost, staring at your smart phone for too long
undoubtedly impairs your eyesight. In the second place,
overusing mobile phones is a waste of your time, distracting
you from your study, work and life. Last but not least, cell
phone addiction may hurt your interpersonal relationship
since you have less time to communicate face to face with
others.
In conclusion, the mobile phone is certainly a useful
tool in modern life, but people should use it wisely and
avoid overusing it.
4. 话题：从小事做起（2013.6）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to
write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief
description of the picture and then express your views on the
importance of doing small things before undertaking something
big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180
words.
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Start from the Minor Matter
As shown in the picture above, the son says, “Dad, I’m
a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste.” Pointing at
the full dustbin beside him, his father replies, “If you can
empty the dustbin here, you can do anything!” The picture
shows that the father intends to make his son understand that
he should do small things before undertaking big ones.
Doing small things is the necessary step to do something
big. By doing small things, people will gain experience and
skills, which can lead people to success. Taking Thomas
Edison for example, he tested more than 1,600 materials to
find the right filament. Those over 1,600 tests are small
things in other people’s minds; however, without them Thomas
Edison couldn ’t have invented the electric light bulb.
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