Steps Notes Date Prewriting Title: Why Students do not Further their studies? Target audiences: Peers, students, teachers, and parents Points: can’t afford fee, low interest, prefer working over study Information platform: journal, book and newspaper Drafting Introduction Nowadays, it is normal for teenagers to enter college or university in order to further their studies. However, there are also teenagers who are not into studies and work as soon as graduated from high school. Financial is one of the main factors why students don’t further their studies. Can’t afford college fee Some parents do not have enough money to pay the fee for college. They need to work hard in order to take care of their family. Low interest Students with bad SPM results will lose interest in studying. It is because of the thought that SPM is everything. It is not true, SPM is not the end but the beginning of the long term journey. We can always come back stronger. Prefer working over study Teenagers are easily being influence by peers. Some of teenagers start working in order to take care of family and some of them are excited to earn money by their own hustle. It is not bad but, this will not help students develop and increase their potential to be more successful in the future. Ways to prevent The government should lower the cost of college fee in order for those who can’t afford to further their studies. The government should also prepare a low-cost college for those who can’t afford to enter college Teachers also need to give advice to students about the important of studies
Parents should support their child in order for them to be more motivate to study and success in the future. Conclusion In conclusions, teenagers need to work hard for thei own goals. Revising Nowadays, it is common for teenagers to enter college or university in order to further their studies. However, there are also teenagers who are not into studies and prefer to work as soon as they finished school. There are lots of factors on why students don’t want to further their studies. Financial is one of the main factors why students don’t further their studies. Some parents do not have enough money to pay the fee for college. They need to work hard in order to take care of their family. As we know, it is very hard to survive in this advance world as we need to follow the development or we will be outdated by the society. According to My Metro (2023), the cost of living as well as the low savings and salary rates already existed before the pandemic and are now increasingly worrying which continue to constrain the progress of household recovery efforts. This is why some students who have potential can’t further their studies. In the other hand, there are also teenagers who came from a family that can afford the fee but low interest in studying. It is because they might not know the importance of study. Study not only to get a great job in the future, it is also for us to know more about this world such as the knowledge about certain subject which can be applied in life. According to Charrize (2023), knowledge develops critical thinking and teach a person on how to use logic when making decisions and interacting with people. This is why we need to study and gain knowledge in order to become a useful people in the future and help our country grow. There are also who prefer work as soon as they graduated from school. This is because they were blinded by the salary they received. It is not that bad but, we need to realize our own potential because some of us might have what it needs to be more successful in the future. According to Ayra (2023), there is No Career Guarantee: Without higher education qualifications, there is no career guarantee for those who work after SPM. They may face difficulties in finding a stable job and able to provide enough income to cover their lives. As example, during Lock down, there a lot of people who lost their jobs. So they need to
compete to get the job they applied for. This will make it harder for them to gain the momentum to stay stable in life. There are also ways to prevent this from happening so that everyone will get the opportunity to further their studies. Firstly, the government should lower the cost of college fee in order for those who can’t afford to further their studies. This way, everyone will get the chances to gain knowledge. Other than that, the government should also prepare a low-cost college for those who can’t afford to enter college. It is to help parents lower the burden that they had been facing. Teachers also need to give advices to students about the importance of study. It is to help them develop love in studying to be successful in the future. Lastly, parents should support their child in order for them to be more motivate to study and success in the future. It is because Family is the closest one to each of these students and their biggest support to succeed in life. In conclusion, everyone has their own. It is on ourselves wether it will stay stay as a dream or not. We must work hard in order to achieve our dreams. It is because Hardwork always pays off in the end. Editing Nowadays, it is common for teenagers to enter college or university in order to further their studies. However, there are also teenagers who are not into studies and prefer to work as soon as they finished school. There are lots of reasons why students don’t want to further their studies. Financial problem is one of the main factors why students don’t further their studies. Some parents do not have enough money to pay the college fee. They need to work hard in order to take care of their family. As we know, it is very hard to survive in this advance world as we need to follow the development or we will be outdated by the society. According to My Metro (2023), the cost of living as well as the low savings and salary rates which has existed before the pandemic and are now increasingly worrying which continue to constrain the progress of household recovery efforts. This is why some students who have potential can’t further their studies.
In the other hand, there are also teenagers who come from a family that can afford to pay the fee but low interest in studying. It is because they might not know the importance of study. Study not only to get a great job in the future, it is also for us to know more about this world such as the knowledge about certain subject which can be applied in life. According to Charrize (2023), knowledge develops critical thinking and teach a person on how to use logic when making decisions and interacting with people. This is why we need to study and gain knowledge in order to become a useful people in the future and help our country grow. There are also who prefer to work as soon as they graduated from school. This is because they were blinded by the salary they received. It is not that bad but, we need to realize our own potential because some of us might have what it needs to be more successful in the future. According to Ayra (2023), there is No Career Guarantee: Without higher education qualifications, there is no career guarantee for those who work after SPM. They may face difficulties in finding a stable job and able to provide enough income to cover their lives. As example, during Lock down, there a lot of people who lost their jobs. So, they need to compete to get the job they applied for. This will make it harder for them to gain the momentum to stay stable in life. There are also ways to prevent this from happening so that everyone will get the opportunity to further their studies. Firstly, the government should lower the cost of college fee in order to give opportunity to those who can’t afford to further their studies. This way, everyone will get the chances to gain knowledge. Other than that, the government should also prepare a low-cost college for those who can’t afford to enter college. It is to help parents lower the burden that they had been facing. Teachers also need to give advices to students about the importance of study. It is to help them develop love in studying to be successful in the future. Lastly, parents should support their child in order for them to be more motivate to study and success in the future. It is because Family is the closest one to each of these students and their biggest support to succeed in life. In conclusion, everyone has their own. It is on ourselves weather it will stay as a dream or not. We must work hard in order to achieve our dreams. It is because hard work always pays off in the end.
Publishing Nowadays, it is common for teenagers to enter college or university in order to further their studies. However, there are also teenagers who are not into studies and prefer to work as soon as they finished school. There are lots of reasons why students don’t want to further their studies. Financial problem is one of the main factors why students don’t further their studies. Some parents do not have enough money to pay the college fee. They need to work hard in order to take care of their family. As we know, it is hard to survive in this advance world as we need to follow the development or we will be outdated by the society. According to My Metro (2023), the cost of living as well as the low savings and salary rates which has existed before the pandemic and are now increasingly worrying which continue to constrain the progress of household recovery efforts. This is why some students who have potential can’t further their studies. In the other hand, there are also teenagers who come from a family that can afford to pay the fee but low interest in studying. It is because they might not know the importance of study. Study not only to get a great job in the future, it is also for us to know more about this world such as the knowledge about certain subject which can be applied in life. According to Charrize (2023), knowledge develops critical thinking and teach a person on how to use logic when making decisions and interacting with people. This is why we need to study and gain knowledge in order to become a useful people in the future and help our country grow. There are also who prefer to work as soon as they graduated from school. This is because they were blinded by the salary they received. It is not that bad but, we need to realize our own potential because some of us might have what it needs to be more successful in the future. According to Ayra (2023), there is No Career Guarantee: Without higher education qualifications, there is no career guarantee for those who work after SPM. They may face difficulties in finding a stable job and able to provide enough income to cover their lives. As example, during Lock down, there a lot of people who lost their jobs. So, they need to
Prefrences Ayra, A. (2023, August 23). Sambung Belajar atau Kerja Lepas SPM 2023. Yuran.my. https://yuran.my/sambung-belajar-atau-kerja-lepasspm/#:~:text=Keburukan%20bekerja%20selepas%20SPM,- Keterbatasan%20Peluang%20Kerjaya&text=Tiada%20Jaminan%20Kerjaya%3A%20Tanpa%20kelayakan,c ukup%20untuk%20menampung%20kehidupan%20mereka. Kos sara hidup makin membimbangkan. (2023, October 13). Harian Metro. https://www.hmetro.com.my/utama/2023/10/1019878/kos-sara-hidup-makinmembimbangkan#google_vignette compete to get the job they applied for. This will make it harder for them to gain the momentum to stay stable in life. There are also ways to prevent this from happening so that everyone will get the opportunity to further their studies. Firstly, the government should lower the cost of college fee in order to give opportunity to those who can’t afford to further their studies. This way, everyone will get the chances to gain knowledge. Other than that, the government should also prepare a low-cost college for those who can’t afford to enter college. It is to help parents lower the burden that they had been facing. Teachers also need to give advices to students about the importance of study. It is to help them develop love in studying to be successful in the future. Lastly, parents should support their child in order for them to be more motivate to study and success in the future. It is because Family is the closest one to each of these students and their biggest support to succeed in life. In conclusion, everyone has their own. It is on ourselves weather it will stay as a dream or not. We must work hard in order to achieve our dreams. It is because hard work always pays off in the end.