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6211151128 Miss Kunlayamon BANGNON

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Kunlayamon Bangnon 6211151128

First draft

Why should we have pets? (First draft)
Dogs, cats, birds, and rabbits, what do you think about this name? Some people think they
are animals, but some people think about pets. Pets are animals that have an owner and can bring
various benefits to you. First, they can help your health. You cannot deny playing with them, so
when you are doing that, you get an exercise. That will help you with blood pressure, decrease
cholesterol and anxious levels. Second, pets make you feel safe. For example, when you are home
alone, you feel lonely but, if you have a pet with you, you will never feel alone, because you have
a friend with you all the time. Third, they keep you active. When you are an owner of a pet, you
will be an energetic person. Pets have to eat, sleep and do activities. You cannot forget to take care
of them. Sometimes you talk to them to help you remember. These things keep you alive. Last,
pets bring happiness to you. When you decide to have pets, that is the time you have a new member
in your family. They will make you happy by everything they do. If you give them love, they will
love you back unconditionally. To summarize, pets give you many advantages, and they add
meaning to our and their life.

Second draft

Why should we have pet? (Second draft)
Dogs, cats, birds, and rabbits, what do you think when you see this name? Some people think
they are animals, but some people think they are pets. Pets are animals that have an owner and can
bring various benefits to you. First, they can help your health. You cannot deny playing with your
pet, so when you are doing that, you get an exercise. That will help you with decreasing blood
pressure, cholesterol and anxious levels. Second, pets make you feel safe. For example, if you stay
home alone, you will never feel lonely, because you have a pet with you all the time. Third, they
keep you active. When you are a pet’s owner, you will be an energetic person. Pets have to eat,
sleep and do activities. You cannot forget to take care of them. Sometimes you talk to them to help
you remember what you have to do. Last, pets bring happiness to you. On your bad day, your pet
is always there for you. It will make you feel better. If you give them love, they will love you back

unconditionally. To sum up, pets give you many advantages, and they add meaning to our and
their life.

Listing Assignment Final Draft

Why should we have pet?
Dogs, cats, birds, and rabbits, what do you think when you see this name? Some people think
they are animals, but some people think they are pets. Pets are animals that have an owner and
they can bring various benefits to you. First, pets can help your health. You cannot deny playing
with them, so when you are doing that, you get an exercise. That will help you decrease blood
pressure, cholesterol and anxious levels. Second, pets make you feel safe. For example, if you stay
home alone, you will never feel lonely, because you have a pet with you all the time. Third, they
keep you active. When you are a pet’s owner, you will be an energetic person. Pets have to eat,
sleep and do activities. You cannot forget to take care of them. Sometimes you talk to them to help
you remember what you have to do. Last, pets bring happiness to you. On your bad day, your pet
is always there and never going to leave you. It will make you feel better. If you give them love,
they will love you back unconditionally. To sum up, pets give you many advantages, and they add
meaning to our and their life.