SPM PAPER 2: Part 3 Extended Writing

Form 5


SMK Wira Penrissen,


Samarahan













SPM PAPER 2: Part 3







Extended Writing –








Writing a Story

Question 1


Write your answer in 200-250 words in an appropriate style.









You’re the only survivor in an air-crash. Based on your experiences, write your



story for a newspaper. The story must have the title:





An Unforgettable Experience





Your story should include:






• A description of your experiences in the air-crash




• How you survive





Write your story.

An Unforgettable Experience


24 March 2014, a date I’ll never forget in my life. I remember vividly that day I was at the Kuala Lumpur International

Airport, leaving for China to further my studies after getting my scholarship. I waved goodbye to my parents and boarded

the flight MH333. I sat alone at the window seat and looked out of it. As the plane was going up higher and higher, the

scene before me became smaller and smaller.


When the plane was up in the air for some time, I closed my eyes as my flight would take about six hours to arrive at

the destination. Suddenly, the plane jerked and shook frighteningly. The pilot warned us to stat at our seat the seat and

fastened our safety belts. Panics and screams from the passengers were heard when the plane started to go downward. My

heart was beating faster and faster. I was sure it was going to crash! I quickly said a prayer and the next second, I was
unconscious.


When I opened my eyes, I was lying on a bush in unknown jungle. There were absolute silence as dead bodies were

scattered around me. All the passengers and crews were dead except me. I had no pain, but my feet were completely numb.

I stood up and fell. Then, I stood up again and realised one of my legs was broken.


I walked limply and tried to find a mobile phone to make emergency call. I managed to find one but there was no

signal in the jungle. I took some food and water and tried to walk out of the jungle, I relied on wild fruits and dew when I

ran out of supplies. After struggling in the jungle for five days, I finally saw a village and a boy. But I was too weak and

collapsed.

When I opened my eyes again, I was lying on a bed. The doctor and nurses cheered happily when they saw me alive. I

was grateful and thankful to them for saving my life. I realise how lucky I am as I was the only survivor of the air crash. It

is really an unforgettable experience for me.

An Unforgettable Experience





24 March 2014, a date I’ll never forget in my life. I



remember vividly that day I was at the Kuala Lumpur




International Airport, leaving for China to further my




studies after getting my scholarship. I waved goodbye




to my parents and boarded the flight MH333. I sat



alone at the window seat and looked out of it. As the




plane was going up higher and higher, the scene before




me became smaller and smaller.

When the plane was up in the air for some time, I




closed my eyes as my flight would take about six




hours to arrive at the destination. Suddenly, the plane



jerked and shook frighteningly. The pilot warned us to




stay at our seat the seat and fastened our safety belts.




Panics and screams from the passengers were heard




when the plane started to go downward. My heart was



beating faster and faster. I was sure it was going to




crash! I quickly said a prayer and the next second, I




was unconscious.

When I opened my eyes, I was lying on a





bush in unknown jungle. There were absolute




silence as dead bodies were scattered around




me. All the passengers and crews were dead





except me. I had no pain, but my feet were




completely numb. I stood up and fell. Then, I





stood up again and realised one of my legs




was broken.

I walked limply and tried to find a mobile phone to




make emergency call. I managed to find one but there




was no signal in the jungle. I took some food and




water and tried to walk out of the jungle, I relied on




wild fruits and dew when I ran out of supplies. After



struggling in the jungle for five days, I finally saw a




village and a boy. But I was too weak and collapsed.

When I opened my eyes again, I was lying on a




bed. The doctor and nurses cheered happily when



they saw me alive. I was grateful and thankful to




them for saving my life. I realise how lucky I am




as I was the only survivor of the air crash. It is




really an unforgettable experience for me.

Question 2



Write your answer in 200-250 words in an appropriate style.




You had a weird dream recently. Write about it for a



magazine. The story must have the title:





A Weird Dream





Your story should include:





• a description of your dream




• express what you feel






Write your story.

A Weird Dream



One sleepless night, my parents had gone for vacation, and I was alone in my room. I was burning the

midnight oil for my school examination that was just around the corner.


Suddenly, I heard a knock on my door. I opened the door, and I was frozen. I couldn’t believe my eyes as

there was an alien with seven-feet height who stood before me. He had one eye and he was wearing an armour

like Roman soldier. Before I could open my mouth, the alien gripped my arm and put a finger against its lip. It


closed the door and stepped inside my house. It scanned my house. I was flabbergasted and my heart was

beating faster than ever.


Outside my house, I heard noises. To my terror I saw even more aliens through the window. I struggled to

run away but the alien was so strong that it held me tightly. It brought me to the room and hid me in the


wardrobe. I could see the other aliens entered my house and fought with the Roman-like alien through the

crack. They fought fearlessly. Out of the blue, an alien suddenly opened the wardrobe and found me. It dragged

me outside and I screamed. The Roman-like alien heard me and came to my rescue.


Then I heard a gunfire, the aliens were distracted, and they went outside the house. The Roman-like took

me to flight immediately. We ran and ran until we reached the edge of the jungle. I was exhausted and I


couldn’t run anymore, so I fell unconsciously.


When I regained my consciousness, I was lying on my bed in my house. Nothing seemed had happened

before. I’m not sure if I was dreaming or if I had really met the alien. I’m really puzzled.

A Weird Dream




One sleepless night, my parents had gone for vacation, and I



was alone in my room. I was burning the midnight oil for my


school examination that was just around the corner.




Suddenly, I heard a knock on my door. I opened the door, and I



was frozen. I couldn’t believe my eyes as there was an alien with



seven-feet height who stood before me. He had one eye and he was



wearing an armour like Roman soldier. Before I could open my


mouth, the alien gripped my arm and put a finger against its lip. It



closed the door and stepped inside my house. It scanned my house.



I was flabbergasted and my heart was beating faster than ever.

Outside my house, I heard noises. To my terror I saw



even more aliens through the window. I struggled to run



away but the alien was so strong that it held me tightly. It



brought me to the room and hid me in the wardrobe. I



could see the other aliens entered my house and fought




with the Roman-like alien through the crack. They fought



fearlessly. Out of the blue, an alien suddenly opened the



wardrobe and found me. It dragged me outside and I



screamed. The Roman-like alien heard me and came to my



rescue.

Then I heard a gunfire, the aliens were distracted, and



they went outside the house. The Roman-like took me to



flight immediately. We ran and ran until we reached the



edge of the jungle. I was exhausted and I couldn’t run



anymore, so I fell unconsciously.





When I regained my consciousness, I was lying on my



bed in my house. Nothing seemed had happened before. I’m



not sure if I was dreaming or if I had really met the alien.



I’m really puzzled.

Question 3


Write your answer in 200-250 words in an appropriate style.





The English Society is organizing a story writing competition.


Write your story which is entitled:





A Mysterious Old Man




Your story should include:




• a description of the old man




• express how was the old man mysterious




Write your story.

A Mysterious Old Man






Sylvia could not really decipher what the doctor was saying. It was after that when she was

alone in her ward that everything sank in. She was in need of a new liver to keep her alive. It was


easy to say it like that like a good and healthy liver could be found in the next street corner.

Unfortunately, it was not so easy as she would first of all have to find a donor that would give away


part of his or her liver to her and next to ensure that the kind-hearted person was in fact a match.


Mother was in the next room and Sylvia could hear the muffled sound of her talking to her dad


in between sobs. She knew that it looked really bad and there was no way she could find a donor so


quicky. She knew she had to leave it to fate that will determine what happens after that. She was

also bracing herself for the worse when the phone rang. A living liver donor has been found. The

donor was an old man who was a complete stranger to her and her family.



On the day of surgery Sylvia could not contain her gratitude. The old man did not have to make


the sacrifice of going through the life-threatening surgery that saved her life. Th old man till the

resent day remained the mysterious old man as she only knew him by Uncle Ahmad the mas who


died so that she could live.

A Mysterious Old Man











Sylvia could not really decipher what the doctor was



saying. It was after that when she was alone in her ward that



everything sank in. She was in need of a new liver to keep her



alive. It was easy to say it like that like a good and healthy



liver could be found in the next street corner. Unfortunately, it



was not so easy as she would first of all have to find a donor



that would give away part of his or her liver to her and next to




ensure that the kind-hearted person was in fact a match.

Mother was in the next room and Sylvia could hear the




muffled sound of her talking to her dad in between sobs.




She knew that it looked really bad and there was no way




she could find a donor so quicky. She knew she had to



leave it to fate that will determine what happens after




that. She was also bracing herself for the worse when the




phone rang. A living liver donor has been found. The




donor was an old man who was a complete stranger to



her and her family.

On the day of surgery Sylvia could not contain her




gratitude. The old man did not have to make the



sacrifice of going through the life-threatening surgery




that saved her life. Th old man till the resent day




remained the mysterious old man as she only knew him




by Uncle Ahmad the mas who died so that she could



live.

Question 4


Write your answer in 200-250 words in an appropriate style.





Your teacher has asked you to write a story for the school




magazine. The title of the story is:





A Lucky Mistake




Your story should include:





• a description of the mistake




• how the mistake turned out to be a lucky one





Write your story.

A Lucky Mistake





I have never travelled by air before and when the time came for me to get a ticket and to fly on one,

the whole experience made me quite nervous. I am working in a pharmaceutical company and is a junior

manager of my branch. I have been lucky for so long until the time came when I had to attend a meeting in

Japan. That made driving impossible.



I booked my flight and chose the airline because it was a really good one as shown bt the passengers’

satisfaction ratings and by the record of never having any plane crash. I travelled in the economy class from

Kuala Lumpur International Airport and had to continue my journey on a connecting flight from Singapore

that would take me to Narita International Airport in Tokyo. However, to my dismay my name was not listed

in the list of passengers on the flight.



The airline admitted their mistake and apologized to me profusely. I was nervous because of this

mistake. I was alone in a strange country, with nowhere to go and not knowing where my luggage was at that

point. The mistake then turned out to be a lucky one as I was provided with a first-class hotel room for me to

wait in for my connecting flight which was going to be in 24 hours. The airline found my luggage and it was

sent to my room later that day. The good news did not just end there. My flight would also be upgraded to a


first-class seat. Also, my hotel room in Tokyo would also be upgraded to an executive suite all compliments of

the airline that made the lucky mistake.

A Lucky Mistake










I have never travelled by air before and when the time



came for me to get a ticket and to fly on one, the whole



experience made me quite nervous. I am working in a



pharmaceutical company and is a junior manager of my



branch. I have been lucky for so long until the time came




when I had to attend a meeting in Japan. That made driving



impossible.

I booked my flight and chose the airline because it




was a really good one as shown bt the passengers’



satisfaction ratings and by the record of never having




any plane crash. I travelled in the economy class from




Kuala Lumpur International Airport and had to continue




my journey on a connecting flight from Singapore that




would take me to Narita International Airport in Tokyo.



However, to my dismay my name was not listed in the




list of passengers on the flight.

The airline admitted their mistake and apologized to me



profusely. I was nervous because of this mistake. I was alone in a



strange country, with nowhere to go and not knowing where my



luggage was at that point. The mistake then turned out to be a



lucky one as I was provided with a first-class hotel room for me



to wait in for my connecting flight which was going to be in 24



hours. The airline found my luggage and it was sent to my room



later that day. The good news did not just end there. My flight



would also be upgraded to a first-class seat. Also, my hotel room



in Tokyo would also be upgraded to an executive suite all



compliments of the airline that made the lucky mistake.