48 Short Communicative Message as your mother is a voice coach. (7) for free. Third reason: Singing too can help (8) and (9) . Paragraph 2 • Ending: (10) the right decision. Closing: See you (11) ! Step 3: Write the essay Write the message and check for any spelling, grammar or punctuation errors. B Now, use all the information in the writing process to write the message to Nani in about 70 words. Write your answer below. Mulus PT3 English.indb 48 20/03/2023 08:58:07 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
49 Short Communicative Message Practice 4 Guided Email Read the postcard from your sister, Sheila, who is studying abroad. Hi Sis, I’m thinking of buying a book for Mother. Should I get her a recipe book, a storybook or an autobiography? What should I get her? Let me know your opinion! Bye! To, Ashwini Naidu, H12-2-4, Menara Condominium, Jalan PJ6/7, 46050 Petaling Jaya, Selangor. In about 80 words, write an email to Sheila giving her some advice. A Fill in the blanks to complete the writing process. Step 1: Analyse the question Who is the sender? • Your sister, Sheila. Why did she write the postcard? To seek advice on this question: • What book should she get for Mother? Step 2: Create the essay outline Beginning: • Fill in Sheila’s email address: (1) • Fill in your email address: (2) • Write an informal greeting: (3) Sheila, • Ask after your sister: (4) Middle: Paragraph 1 • Respond to your sister’s decision: I am pleased that you (5) for Mother. • What book should your sister buy? In my opinion, you should get her (6) . • Why should your sister buy this type of book? First reason: Firstly, I notice (7) and is always encouraging me to read them, too. STAMP Mulus PT3 English.indb 49 20/03/2023 08:58:07 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
50 Short Communicative Message Second reason: (8) as she finds them very inspirational. Third reason: Besides, reading (9) enables her to see the world (10) . Paragraph 2 • Ending: I hope my advice (11) . Closing: (12) and take care. Talk to you (13) ! Step 3: Write the essay Write the email and check for any spelling, grammar or punctuation errors. B Now, use all the information in the writing process to write an email to Sheila in about 80 words. Write your answer below. To: From: Mulus PT3 English.indb 50 20/03/2023 08:58:07 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
51 Short Communicative Message Practices Practice 1 Read the email from your friend, Rama. Hi, I’m thinking of earning some extra pocket money. Should I wash cars, babysit or be a peer tutor – or maybe do something else? What should I do? Help me decide what to do! Bye! In about 60 words, write an email to Rama giving him some advice. To: From: Mulus PT3 English.indb 51 20/03/2023 08:58:08 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
52 Short Communicative Message Practice 2 Read the message from your cousin, Kathy. Hi, My parents want to get an electronic gadget for my birthday. Should I ask them for a laptop, a mobile phone or a tablet? They have asked me for my opinion. What should I tell them? Do let me know what you think! Bye! In about 60 words, write a message to Kathy giving her some advice. Mulus PT3 English.indb 52 20/03/2023 08:58:08 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
53 Short Communicative Message Practice 3 Read the email from your friend, Devi. Hi, I would like to save my money which I earned from my part-time job. Should I save my money in a savings account, a money box, ask my older sister to keep my money – or maybe save in some other way? How should I save? Looking forward to your suggestion! Bye! In about 70 words, write an email to Devi giving her some advice. To: [email protected] From: Mulus PT3 English.indb 53 20/03/2023 08:58:08 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
54 Short Communicative Message Practice 4 Read the postcard from your pen pal, Leela from Australia. Hi, Lately, I have been thinking about my future. Should I be a doctor, an engineer or a scientist? What career should I choose? Please help me decide! Bye! To, Chris Heng, 23, Jalan Satu, Taman Satu, 47000 Puchong, Selangor Darul Ehsan. STAMP In about 70 words, write a postcard to Leela giving her some advice. To, STAMP Mulus PT3 English.indb 54 20/03/2023 08:58:08 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
55 Short Communicative Message Practice 5 Read the email from your friend, Edwin. Hi, I am thinking of getting a pet. As I am living in an apartment, the choices are quite limited. Should I get a fi sh, a rabbit or a bird? What pet should I get? Let me know what you think! Goodbye! In about 70 words, write an email to Edwin giving him some advice. To: From: Mulus PT3 English.indb 55 20/03/2023 08:58:08 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
56 Short Communicative Message Practice 6 Read the message from your cousin, Xinde. Hi, I am thinking of going on a trip with my family during the school holidays. Father said we could go to Penang, Melaka or Sabah. Where should we go? Please help me decide since you have been to these places before. Bye! In about 80 words, write a message to Xinde giving him some advice. Mulus PT3 English.indb 56 20/03/2023 08:58:08 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
57 Short Communicative Message Practice 7 Read the message from your friend, Ashvin. Hi Ben, I have been thinking of organising an activity to help save the environment. Should I organise a tree planting day, a recycling campaign or a fundraising for an endangered species event? What should I do? Help me make a decision! Ashvin In about 80 words, write a message to Ashvin giving him some advice. Mulus PT3 English.indb 57 20/03/2023 08:58:08 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
58 Short Communicative Message Practice 8 Read the email from your friend, Rina. Hi Dev, My family and I are planning to go on an outing this weekend. Should we go to the National Planetarium, the National Science Centre or the Aquaria KLCC – or maybe somewhere else? Where should we go? Do let me know what you think! Bye! Rina In about 80 words, write an email to Rina giving her some suggestion. To: [email protected] From: Mulus PT3 English.indb 58 20/03/2023 08:58:08 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
59 Note Expansion Paper 2 (Writing): Part 2 Exam format and requirements 1 Part 2 in Paper 2 of the Pentaksiran Sumatif Bahasa Inggeris Menengah Rendah (UASA) is Note Expansion. There is only one question and it is compulsory. 2 You will be asked to write an essay which could be a recount, an opinion essay, an informal letter, a story, a review or a descriptive essay. Your answer must follow the correct style. The word count for each level is as follows: Form 1 − about 90 words; Form 2 − about 100 words; Form 3 − about 120 words. 3 Part 2 carries 20 marks. 4 It is suggested that you spend about 40 minutes on this question. Notes A Recounts 1 A recount essay talks about an incident that happened in the past. 2 The details in a recount may include what happened, who was involved, where it took place, when it happened and why it occurred. 3 A writer uses a recount to tell the reader about a story or describe a series of events of an experience. 4 Study the structure below to learn how to write a recount. yqParagraph 1 • The opening paragraph should set the scene of the recount. • The reader will know when and where the events happened and who was there. Beginning Paragraph 3 • Inform the reader how the event ended. • Write how you felt about the event. Ending Paragraph 2 • Write about the event in detail. • Inform the reader about what happened and in the order it occurred. • Make sure to write the verbs in the past tense. • When retelling the story, you must use ‘I’ or ‘We’. • In order to make the reader feel how you felt, use descriptive words. Middle Mulus PT3 English.indb 59 20/03/2023 08:58:11 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
60 Note Expansion 5 You may use the following words/phrases in your recount. Words/phrases to begin your recount Words/phrases to continue your recount Words/phrases to finish your recount • Last week, … • Last month, … • During the last school holidays, … • At first, … • First, … • Firstly, … • The next day, … • The following day, … • Then, … • Next, … • After that, … • As I/we … • All of a sudden/Suddenly … • Just then … • Later … • Lastly, … • At last, … • In the end, … • Finally, … • Eventually, … • At the end of the day, … B Descriptive Essays 1 In a descriptive essay, you must describe a person, place or thing. 2 This type of essay allows you to be creative. 3 The essay paints an image that is vivid and moving in the mind of the reader. People 1 Study the structure below to learn how to write a descriptive essay on people. Paragraph 1 • Provide general information about the person. For example, their name, occupation and how you know them. • Tell why you have decided to write about this person. Beginning Paragraph 3 • Provide a general comment about the person. • Write on what the person means to you and how you feel about them. Ending Paragraph 2 • Write about the person’s personality and character traits. • Provide examples to emphasize your opinion about the person’s personality/character. • Explain how the person has influenced you or other people. Middle Mulus PT3 English.indb 60 20/03/2023 08:58:11 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
61 Note Expansion 2 You may use the following words to describe a person. Character traits • calm • cheerful • dishonest • lazy • loving • serious • smart • sociable • stingy • talkative • untidy • uptight • ambitious • bold • careful • creative • gullible • helpful • humble • independent • loyal • motivated • naughty • selfless 3 When describing a person, you may use idioms. Here are some examples of idioms. • born optimist – someone who always thinks positively • busybody – someone who is overly interested in the lives of others • eager beaver – an overly enthusiastic person who works very hard to get things done • early bird – someone who is early • go-getter – someone who is ambitious and pursues his goals • jack-of-all-trades – someone who can do several jobs instead of only being specialised in one • man of his word/woman of her word – someone who always does what he/she promises • mover and shaker – an influential person who makes things happen 4 When writing about the personality/character of a person, you should first mention it. Then, give examples to support your opinion. • Leela is the smartest person in my class. She always gets distinctions in all the examinations. Furthermore, she taught herself how to do coding. • Dave is the most helpful person that I know. When I forgot to bring my wallet to school, he bought food for me during recess time. Places 1 Study the structure below to learn how to write a descriptive essay on places. Paragraph 1 • Name the place. • State its location. Beginning Paragraph 3 • Write how you feel about the place. • State whether you recommend the place and why. Ending Paragraph 2 • Inform the reader about what is special or interesting about the place. • Provide a detailed description about the place. • Write about the things you can do at the place. Middle Mulus PT3 English.indb 61 20/03/2023 08:58:11 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
62 Note Expansion 2 You may use these adjectives to describe the place. City Town Statues/Monuments • bustling • clean • cosmopolitan • crowded • dirty • lively • noisy • touristy • boring • beautiful • charming • gloomy • peaceful • picturesque • pleasant • quiet • rural • seaside • ancient • bronze • carved • copper • historic • majestic • national • prominent • stone Buildings Walls Traffic • beachfront • crumbling • futuristic • high-rise • modern • old • run-down • towering • two-storey • brick • clean • crumbling rock • glass • graffiti-covered • marble • steel • stone • weather-beaten • bottleneck • congested • heavy • loud • slow • standstill • rush-hour • bumper-to-bumper • bad Things 1 Study the structure below to learn how to write a descriptive essay on things. Paragraph 1 • Name the thing. • Explain when you got or acquired it. Beginning Paragraph 3 • State why the thing is special. • Write how you feel about the thing. Ending Paragraph 2 • Provide a detailed description about the thing. • Inform the reader when you normally use the thing. • Write about what you can do with the thing. Middle Mulus PT3 English.indb 62 20/03/2023 08:58:11 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
63 Note Expansion 2 You may use these adjectives in order to describe the thing. Texture Fragrance Flavour • leathery • slippery • rough • sharp • silky • creamy • squishy • fluffy • grainy • crunchy • gooey • sticky • juicy • crisp • floral • earthy • fresh • citrusy • feminine • smoky • pungent • rotten • spiced • musty • fishy • subtle • nauseating • heavenly • savoury • sweet • sour • bitter • tangy • burnt • flavourless • stale • raw • hearty • cheesy • fried • tasty • flavourful Colours Shape Temperature • red • orange • yellow • green • cyan • azure • blue • violet • magenta • rose • broad • curved • deep • flat • hollow • low • narrow • round • square • steep • boiling • brisk • chilly • fair • frigid • lukewarm • mild • pleasant • refreshing • scalding C Opinion Essays 1 This is a formal essay in which you have to give an opinion on a topic. You may have to give several arguments/reasons/viewpoints on the topic and these will be supported by evidence and/or examples. In the end, you have to state which view you agree with. 2 Study the structure given to learn how to write an opinion essay. Mulus PT3 English.indb 63 20/03/2023 08:58:11 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
64 Note Expansion 3 You may use the phrases below to state the advantages, disadvantages, details and examples. Advantages Disadvantages • A benefit … • An advantage … • On the one hand, …. • A good point … • A positive aspect … • Another benefit/advantage is … • A drawback of … • A disadvantage … • On the other hand, … • A frequent criticism of … is … • A downside of … is … • A negative consequence/effect of … is … Providing details Providing examples • Additionally, … • In addition, … • Besides, … • Moreover, … • Furthermore, … • Firstly, … • For instance, … • For example, … • Therefore, … • … like … • … such as … • … in particular … 4 You can use the phrases below to provide an ending in the last paragraph. Stating your opinion • As far as I’m concerned, … • From my point of view, … • I have no doubt that … • I strongly believe that … • I believe … • I feel … • I’d suggest that … • In my experience, … • In my opinion, … • In my view, … • In conclusion, … Paragraph 1 • In this paragraph, you should introduce the topic and make a general statement. Beginning Paragraph 4 • State your opinion on whether you agree or disagree with the topic. Ending Paragraph 2 (Advantages) • State the advantages. • Make sure you provide details/explanation and examples for each advantage. Paragraph 3 (Disadvantages) • State the disadvantages. • Make sure you provide details/explanation and examples for each disadvantage. Middle Mulus PT3 English.indb 64 20/03/2023 08:58:12 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
65 Note Expansion D Stories 1 A story narrates a sequence of incidents. 2 You need to include details such as the people involved, what they were doing, where the incidents took place, what happened and when the incidents took place. 3 Study the structure below to learn how to write a story. Paragraph 1 • Provide the background to your story (e.g. who, where and when). • Write an interesting introduction to capture the reader’s attention. Beginning Paragraph 4 • What happened in the end? End your story on a happy note, on a sad note, a description, a question or a mystery. Ending Paragraphs 2 and 3 • Write about what happened to the people in the story. • Describe the incidents in the order they appear in the story. • You can add interesting and vivid details. Middle 4 When writing a story, you can add words/phrases at the beginning of the sentence to show the sequence of events. Here are some examples of words/phrases which show sequence of events. Beginning Middle Ending • One day, … • Last night, … • In the beginning, … • Last month, … • First, … • Once there was … • After that, … • Later, … • Second, … • Meanwhile, … • At the same time, … • Suddenly, … • Lastly, … • Finally, … • As a result, … • Eventually, … • In the end, … • I wonder … Mulus PT3 English.indb 65 20/03/2023 08:58:12 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
66 Note Expansion E Informal Letters 1 An informal letter is written to family members and friends. 2 This is the format of an informal letter. 1 , , . 2 Dear , 3 4 5 6 7 , 8 1 Address of sender 2 Date 3 Greeting 4 Opening or Introduction 5 Paragraphs - main ideas of the letter 6 Ending and Closing 7 Signing off 8 Signature Greeting: Use an informal greeting. • Dear …, Friendly opening: Ask after the sender, apologise for not writing sooner and thank the sender for writing the letter. • How are you? I hope you and your family are in the pink of health. • Sorry that I couldn’t write to you sooner. I was very busy preparing for my sister’s wedding. • Thanks for your letter. • How are you keeping? • It’s good to hear from you. • I’m so pleased to receive your letter. • Thank you for the lovely gift. Mulus PT3 English.indb 66 20/03/2023 08:58:12 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
67 Note Expansion Paragraphs: Say why you are writing, respond to the sender’s news, give suggestions to the sender and describe your piece of news/experience. Responding to sender’s news Giving suggestions • Congratulations! • I’m really sorry to hear that. • That’s great news! • What exciting news! • How unfortunate! It must have been tough on you! • Why don’t you …? • How/What about …? • Don’t you think it’s a good idea to …? • Why don’t you …? • I suggest … • I think you should … Ending: Sending wishes to sender’s family, wishing the sender and asking the sender to keep in touch. • That’s all for now. • Write to me soon. • Send my best wishes to your family. • Send my regards to your family. • All the best. • Write to me when you have the time. • Keep in touch. • Send my love to your family. • Give my regards to ... Closing: Use a friendly/an informal ending. • Bye. • Bye for now. • Take care. • Bye and take care. Signing off • Your friend, • Love, • Love from, • With love, • Your • With best wishes, • Regards, • Best regards, • Best wishes, • Warm regards, Mulus PT3 English.indb 67 20/03/2023 08:58:12 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
68 Note Expansion F Reviews 1 Reviews are written to share an experience or to examine or judge a book, place, restaurant, movie, gadget, etc. 2 Make sure to start your review with a catchy title to attract the reader’s attention. 3 Study the structure given to learn how to write a review. Paragraph 1 • The opening paragraph should introduce the product or experience that you want to share. • For example, if you are reviewing a restaurant, mention the restaurant’s name and what it is famous for. If you are reviewing a film, state the film title and its producer. Beginning Paragraph 4 • Mention whether you recommend the place, product, movie, etc. to others. Ending Paragraphs 2 and 3 • Describe more about the product, place, book, etc. If it’s a restaurant, you can describe its location, how to get there, the interior and exterior of the building and ambience. • Inform the reader about the restaurant’s specialities, what you ate when you were there, what you liked about the place, etc. Middle 4 When writing a review, there are certain phrases and expressions that you can use to give your opinion or recommendation. Here are some phrases/expressions which you can use in your review. Giving your opinion Recommending/Not recommending • In my opinion, ... • I think … • If you like …, then this is the … for you. • One thing I liked about … is … • Another thing I really liked/disliked is … • The best thing about … is • I would definitely recommend … • I wouldn’t recommend … • I will surely recommend … • This is the worst …. I have been to/watched Mulus PT3 English.indb 68 20/03/2023 08:58:12 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
69 Note Expansion Guided Practices Practice 1 Guided Recount In your class, you have been talking about recovering from an illness. In about 90 words, write an essay about how you recovered from an illness. You must use the notes below to help you. Write your essay. A Fill in the blanks to complete the writing process. Step 1: Analyse the question What are you required to write? • A recount of how you recovered from an illness Step 2: Create the essay outline Use the notes given in the question and elaborate on them. Use the structure given to organise your ideas. An illness What was the illness What you did to overcome the illness How you felt after the illness Mulus PT3 English.indb 69 20/03/2023 08:58:13 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
70 Note Expansion Beginning: Paragraph 1 • What was the illness? a bad flu • How did you get the illness? got wet in a heavy rain Middle: Paragraph 2 • When did you start feeling ill? the next day • What were the symptoms of the illness? sneezing and felt feverish • What happened at school? started feeling worse • What did you do to overcome the illness? told my teacher, who then called my mother • Where did your mother take you? to the clinic • What did the doctor say? told me to rest and gave me flu medication Ending: Paragraph 3 • How did you feel after the illness? better Step 3: Write the draft Write a draft of the essay based on the points in Step 2. Add your own words to complete the sentences. Beginning: Paragraph 1 I suffered from (1) not too long ago. I got the flu because I (2) . Middle: Paragraph 2 (3) , I started (4) . Since I (5) , I decided to go to school. At school, (6) . I told my (7) who (8) . She picked me up and took me (9) . The doctor told me to rest and (10) . Ending: Paragraph 3 I followed the doctor’s advice and (11) within two days. Step 4: Write the essay Write the essay and check for any spelling, grammar or punctuation errors. Mulus PT3 English.indb 70 20/03/2023 08:58:13 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
71 Note Expansion B Now, use all the information in the writing process to write the essay in about 90 words. Write your answer below. Mulus PT3 English.indb 71 20/03/2023 08:58:13 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
72 Note Expansion Practice 2 Guided Opinion Essay In your class, you have been talking about shopping online. In about 120 words, write an opinion essay on online shopping. You must use the notes below to help you. Online Shopping • Fraudulent sellers • Cannot try out products Advantages Disadvantages • Convenient • Cheaper Write your opinion essay. A Fill in the blanks to complete the writing process. Step 1: Analyse the question What are you required to write? • An opinion essay on online shopping Step 2: Create the essay outline Use the notes given in the question and elaborate on them. Use the structure below to organise your ideas. Beginning: Paragraph 1 Introduce the topic and make a general statement: online shopping has become popular; there are many advantages and disadvantages. Middle: Paragraph 2 (Advantages) • Convenient: can shop anytime and anywhere • Prices are cheaper: manufacturers sell goods directly, do not have to pay middlemen Mulus PT3 English.indb 72 20/03/2023 08:58:13 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
73 Note Expansion Middle: Paragraph 3 (Disadvantages) • Fraudulent sellers: sell fake goods at a higher price or not send you the goods at all • Cannot try out products before buying: clothes, may not fit Ending: Paragraph 4 • State your opinion: advantages outweigh disadvantages; online shopping is more convenient and prices are cheaper Step 3: Write the draft Write a draft of the essay based on the points in Step 2. Add your own words to complete the sentences. Beginning: Paragraph 1 In recent years, (1) has (2) . However, there are (3) and (4) of online shopping. Middle: Paragraphs 2 and 3 On the one hand, online shopping is (5) . We (6) . Online shopping too offers (7) . Manufacturers (8) so we do not (9) . One the other hand, there are a lot of (10) online. They may (11) at a higher price or do not (12) at all. Another disadvantage is that you (13) that you want before buying them. For example, you cannot try out the (14) and they (15) . Ending: Paragraph 4 In conclusion, I am of the opinion (16) . Online shopping is (17) and the prices (18) . Step 4: Write the essay Write the essay and check for any spelling, grammar or punctuation errors. Mulus PT3 English.indb 73 20/03/2023 08:58:13 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
74 Note Expansion B Now, use all the information in the writing process to write the essay in about 120 words. Write your answer below. Mulus PT3 English.indb 74 20/03/2023 08:58:13 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
75 Note Expansion Practice 3 Guided Descriptive Essay In your class, you have been talking about celebrities. In about 100 words, write an essay about a celebrity you admire. You must use the notes below to help you. A celebrity you admire Why do you admire him/her Where is he/she from When did he/she become famous Who is the celebrity Write your essay. A Fill in the blanks to complete the writing process. Step 1: Analyse the question What are you required to write? • A descriptive essay about a celebrity you admire Step 2: Create the essay outline Use the notes given in the question and elaborate on them. Use the structure given to organise your ideas. Beginning: Paragraph 1 • Who is the celebrity? Taylor Swift • What is her occupation? singer Mulus PT3 English.indb 75 20/03/2023 08:58:14 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
76 Note Expansion Middle: Paragraph 2 • Where is she from? West Reading • When did her family move to Nashville? when Taylor was a teenager • What is the reason her family moved to Nashville? for Taylor to pursue her music career • When did she get her big break? signed up at the age of 14 by the Sony/ATV Tree publishing house • When did she become famous? after her first album titled “Taylor Swift” was released Ending: Paragraph 3 • Why do you admire her? Can write her own songs; a generous person – donates money to the needy Step 3: Write the draft Write a draft of the essay based on the points in Step 2. Add your own words to complete the sentences. Beginning: Paragraph 1 A celebrity I admire is (1) . She is a well-known (2) . Middle: Paragraph 2 Taylor was born in (3) . However, when (4) , her whole family moved to Nashville so that (5) . Taylor still lives in Nashville. Taylor became the youngest songwriter ever (6) by the Sony/ATV Tree publishing house. She then became famous (7) was released. Ending: Paragraph 3 I admire Taylor Swift because she (8) . Apart from that, she is also (9) who (10) . Step 4: Write the essay Write the essay and check for any spelling, grammar or punctuation errors. Mulus PT3 English.indb 76 20/03/2023 08:58:14 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
77 Note Expansion B Now, use all the information in the writing process to write the essay in about 100 words. Write your answer below. Mulus PT3 English.indb 77 20/03/2023 08:58:14 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
78 Note Expansion Practice 4 Guided Review In your class, you have been talking about gadgets. In about 120 words, write a review of your favourite gadget for your school magazine. You must use the notes below to help you. My favourite gadget What is the gadget What you like about the gadget How the gadget looks like What you dislike about the gadget Would you recommend the gadget Write your review. A Fill in the blanks to complete the writing process. Step 1: Analyse the question What are you required to write? • A review of your favourite gadget Step 2: Create the essay outline Use the notes given in the question and elaborate on them. Use the structure below to organise your ideas. Title: The Coolest Gadget Beginning: Paragraph 1 • What is the gadget? Samsung tablet • How did you get the gadget? My parents – after I did well in my fi nal year examinations Mulus PT3 English.indb 78 20/03/2023 08:58:15 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
79 Note Expansion Middle: Paragraphs 2 and 3 • How does the gadget look like? size – neither too big nor too small; weight and colour – rather light and grey • What do you like about the gadget? I can use it for many things – check social media accounts, play games, watch videos, listen to music • What do you dislike about the gadget? available colours – limited Ending: Paragraph 4 • Would you recommend the gadget? yes – can be used to entertain and communicate Step 3: Write the draft Write a draft of the review based on the points in Step 2. Add your own words to complete the sentences. The Coolest Gadget Beginning: Paragraph 1 My favourite gadget is my (1) . I had been wanting a tablet for a very long time. (2) finally got one for me (3) in my final year examinations. Middle: Paragraphs 2 and 3 The tablet is (4) . It is (5) in colour. I like this tablet because I can use it (6) . I usually use it (7) . I also use it to (8) . Most of the games are rather addictive. I also (9) and (10) on my tablet. However, (11) are limited. Ending: Paragraph 4 I highly (12) to my family and friends as it can be used to (13) as well as (14) . Step 4: Write the essay Write the review and check for any spelling, grammar or punctuation errors. Mulus PT3 English.indb 79 20/03/2023 08:58:15 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
80 Note Expansion B Now, use all the information in the writing process to write the review in about 120 words. Write your answer below. Mulus PT3 English.indb 80 20/03/2023 08:58:15 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
81 Note Expansion Practice 5 Guided Story The Welfare Society members of your school visited an orphanage. In about 90 words, write an essay about the visit. You must use the notes below to help you. Visit to an Orphanage by Welfare Society members When they went How they felt What they did Write your story. A Fill in the blanks to complete the writing process. Step 1: Analyse the question What are you required to write? • A story about a visit to an orphanage Step 2: Create the essay outline Use the notes given in the question and elaborate on them. Use the structure given to organise your ideas. Mulus PT3 English.indb 81 20/03/2023 08:58:16 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
82 Note Expansion Beginning: Paragraph 1 • Where did they go? Sunshine Children’s Home • When did they go? Last Saturday • Who welcomed the members? Mr James, an officer from the home Middle: Paragraphs 2 and 3 • What did the members do? helped to clean up the home – painted the walls – swept the compound – had lunch at the home – members entertained children with songs – played games Ending: Paragraph 4 • How did the members feel? enjoyed thoroughly • When did the members leave? six in the evening Step 3: Write the draft Write a draft of the story based on the points in Step 2. Add your own words to complete the sentences. Beginning: Paragraph 1 Last (1) , twenty members of the Welfare Society visited the (2) . Mr James, an officer from the home, welcomed them. Middle: Paragraphs 2 and 3 After that, the members helped to (3) . Some of the members (4) while others swept the compound. After completing the work, everyone sat down to (5) . Later in the afternoon, the members (6) with a few songs. They also (7) with them. Ending: Paragraph 4 The Welfare Society members (8) thoroughly. They left the home at (9) . Step 4: Write the essay Write the story and check for any spelling, grammar or punctuation errors. Mulus PT3 English.indb 82 20/03/2023 08:58:16 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
83 Note Expansion B Now, use all the information in the writing process to write the story in about 90 words. Write your answer below. Mulus PT3 English.indb 83 20/03/2023 08:58:16 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
84 Note Expansion Practice 6 Guided Informal Letter You and your family have joined an aerobics class. In about 100 words, write a letter to your sister, who lives abroad, describing your experience. You must use the notes below to help you. • joined an aerobics class – with parents • instructor is Miss Sheila • warm-up exercises – reduce risk of injury • fun but intense Write your letter. A Fill in the blanks to complete the writing process. Step 1: Analyse the question What are you required to write? • A letter to your sister describing your experience at aerobics class Step 2: Create the essay outline Use the notes given in the question and elaborate on them. Use the structure below to organise your ideas. Beginning: Paragraph 1 • Write an informal greeting: Dear Sis, • Ask after your sister: How are you? must be cold since winter has started Middle: Paragraphs 2 and 3 • Who joined the aerobics class? Dad, Mum and I • When did you join the aerobics class? last month • When and where are the classes held? every Saturday from 8.00 a.m. to 9.30 a.m. – at the playground near house • What is your instructor’s name? Miss Sheila • What do you do before the aerobics exercises? warm-up exercises – reduce risk of injury • How are the aerobics class? fun but intense Mulus PT3 English.indb 84 20/03/2023 08:58:16 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
85 Note Expansion Ending: Paragraph 4 • What will your sister see? a leaner Mum and Dad • Write an informal ending: Do take care of yourself. Bye. Step 3: Write the draft Write a draft of the letter based on the points in Step 2. Add your own words to complete the sentences. 12, Jalan Kalsom, Taman Ipoh, 32000 Ipoh, Perak. 24 July 20__ Beginning: Paragraph 1 Dear Sis, (1) ? It must be cold since (2) . Middle: Paragraphs 2 and 3 Last month, (3) joined an aerobics class. The classes are held (4) from 8.00 a.m. to 9.30 a.m. at the (5) near our house. Our instructor’s name is (6) . Before we start the aerobic exercises, Miss Sheila asks us to do some (7) to reduce the (8) . After the warm-up exercises, we are ready for our aerobic exercises. It is (9) . Ending: Paragraph 4 When you return for your (10) , you will definitely see (11) . Do take care of yourself. Bye. Love, Diana Step 4: Write the essay Write the letter and check for any spelling, grammar or punctuation errors. Mulus PT3 English.indb 85 20/03/2023 08:58:16 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
86 Note Expansion B Now, use all the information in the writing process to write the letter in about 100 words. Write your answer below. Mulus PT3 English.indb 86 20/03/2023 08:58:16 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
87 Note Expansion Practices Practice 1 In your class, you have been talking about birthdays. In about 90 words, write an essay about your favourite birthday. You must use the notes below to help you. Your favourite birthday When was the birthday How did you celebrate it Where was it celebrated Write your essay. Mulus PT3 English.indb 87 20/03/2023 08:58:17 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
88 Note Expansion Practice 2 In your class, you have been talking about playing video games. In about 120 words, write an opinion essay on playing video games. You must use the notes below to help you. Playing video games • Become anti-social • Become aggressive Advantages Disadvantages • Develop problem-solving skills • Relieve our stress Write your opinion essay. Mulus PT3 English.indb 88 20/03/2023 08:58:17 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
89 Note Expansion Practice 3 In your class, you have been talking about taking up a class. In about 90 words, write an essay about an interesting class you joined. You must use the notes below to help you. An interesting class you joined What was the class Why you took the class What you learned in the class Write your essay. Mulus PT3 English.indb 89 20/03/2023 08:58:18 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
90 Note Expansion Practice 4 You recently attended a talk on how to conserve water. In about 100 words, write an essay about ways to conserve water for your school newsletter. You must use the notes below to help you. turn off – tap – washing dishes avoid – watering – midday – windy set up – rainwater capturing system – rain barrel – water plants – wash drain Write your essay. Mulus PT3 English.indb 90 20/03/2023 08:58:18 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
91 Note Expansion Practice 5 You and your family went on a holiday to Pulau Langkawi. In about 120 words, write a letter to your friend describing your trip. You must use the notes below to help you. An enjoyable trip Where you went Where you stayed How long you stayed there Who you went with What you did there Write your letter. Mulus PT3 English.indb 91 20/03/2023 08:58:19 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
92 Note Expansion Practice 6 In your class, you have been talking about pets. In about 90 words, write an essay about your pet. My pet What animal is it Where you got the pet from How you take care of your pet Write your essay. Mulus PT3 English.indb 92 20/03/2023 08:58:19 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
93 Note Expansion Practice 7 Recently, your school’s Welfare Club organised a ‘Giving Aid to the Flood Victims programme. In about 100 words, write an essay about the programme. ‘Giving Aid to the Flood Victims’ programme What the members did When the programme was held What time the programme ended How the members felt Write your essay. ’ Mulus PT3 English.indb 93 20/03/2023 08:58:20 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
94 Note Expansion Practice 8 You and your family had a good experience dining at a new restaurant. In about 120 words, write a review of the restaurant for your school magazine. You must use the notes below to help you. A new restaurant What is the name of the restaurant What food did you order How does the restaurant look like Where is it located and what are the opening hours Would you recommend this restaurant Write your review. Mulus PT3 English.indb 94 20/03/2023 08:58:21 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
95 Note Expansion Practice 9 In your class, you have been sharing about ways to fi nd and make friends. In about 100 words, write an essay on this topic. You must use the notes below to help you. Ways to fi nd and make friends join – online forums – chat – topics attend – workshops – meet people – learn do – volunteer work – similar interests join – clubs – interest you Write your essay. Mulus PT3 English.indb 95 20/03/2023 08:58:21 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
96 Note Expansion Practice 10 In your class, you have been sharing about your experience in a natural disaster. In about 100 words, write an essay about a natural disaster you experienced. You must use the notes below to help you. A natural disaster When it happened What you did How it happened What happened in the end Write your essay. Mulus PT3 English.indb 96 20/03/2023 08:58:22 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.
97 Note Expansion Practice 11 In your class, you have been talking about endangered animals. In about 120 words, write an essay about an endangered animal. You must use the notes below to help you. An endangered animal How this animal looks like Where we can fi nd this animal What animal is it Why this animal has become endangered How we can save this animal Write your essay. Mulus PT3 English.indb 97 20/03/2023 08:58:22 PENERBIT ILMU BAKTI SDN. BHD.