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Published by Laurie Moore, 2019-11-22 14:20:29

My Great Trip!

Personal Narrative

By Tori

I was going to Six Flags. I was so excited. Dad could not go
because he had work and there were only two extra tickets.

My cousin Julia had two extra tickets so me and my mom could
go to Six Flags! Julia went too. She had a card to let her in.

Finally, we got there. I was so happy we got there because in
the car it was boring . Mom and me got inside with the tickets .

I got to go on my first ride, but I wanted to go on a different
ride. I was too short. (almost this whole time I was quiet )

We waited in line. I wanted to go on this ride too so we did. On
the ride I waved to every person that went by.

Next we went on a different ride. I thought the ride would be
fun but it hurt my cheek.

We had all day so we went on the Log Flume.There were 3
drops. The last drop was the biggest. WE GOT SOAKED! Next time
I will bring my bathing suit!

Me, Mom and Julia sat down to rest. I had pizza and I tried to
warm up in the hot sun.

Next, we went on a parachute-like ride just me and Julia
though. But the parachute had string which is how we got up and
down in the parachute.

After that, Julia’s mom, Aunt Tammy, came.
Together, we went to the section Movie Town, and I like my
movies!
We went on Julia’s favorite ride called Sleep Away. When we
got inside, we saw a screen to watch. I didn’t think it would be a
long wait for the ride, but when we went into a different room, I got

a glimpse of the next room and realized we had three rooms of
waiting.

This was the longest wait. In the third room there was a robot
and a big screen and a malfunction that made us wait even longer.

Finally, after at least an hour we got to go on the ride.
The ride was worth it ( but not all that waiting). The room was
dark. One time I looked back and one of the villains got
electricuted. Another time I looked at the side and saw a skull head
in the super hero ride. I guess they were getting ready for Fright
Fest.
One time we did go through a screen! I wanted to see if it was
a trick for our eyes by looking back, but I didn’t.
Next we went on a smaller ride.
On the way there, I said, “This is the second biggest wait. And
that was great!
Then another, another, and 2 more!
A ride I went on, I already went on somewhere else. Then I
went on a teapot ride (all this time I don't know the names of the
rides).
Then I went home. The way home was much sadder because
I didn’t want to leave the park. I will never forget that day I visited
Six Flags \ Great Adventure. I hope I go again!

THE END!


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