Simple guided essay WS 6

1|Page GUIDED WRITING PN ELIZABETH/SK KEMENTAH

Identify and circle the mistakes. Write the correct answer in the box given.

Check your answers. Then write out the essay in your exercise book.

Practice 16 : Injury CORRECTION

CIRCLE THE MISTAKES
It was a cheary Sunday morning
Musa and his friends are playing ‘sepak takraw’.
They was practising for the ‘Inter School Sepak Takraw
Competition’ that will be took place soon.
Unfortunately, Musa accidentaly hurted his left knee when
he somersaulted to kicking the ball while playing.
His coach take him to the klinic.
The doctor bandage her knee.
In a day or two, Musa were fit and well to played again.
. He plays well in the finals and his school win and emerge
as champions.
His headmaster, teachers but parents was proud of him.
Musa and his friends was indeed very happy.

Practice 17: Mother’s Day

CIRCLE THE MISTAKES CORRECTION
Mother’s Day was come son.
Raisya plan to buy a present for her mother in the special
day.
She wants to buy his mother a purse.
However, she does not have enough moneys yet.
So, she decides to save her pocket money daily onto her
piggy bank.
Instead of buy food at the canteen, she bring her own food
and drinks to school.
After one month, she had save enough money.
She go to the supermarket and buys a leather purse for her
mother.
On Mother’s Day, Raisya give the leather purse to his
mother.
Her mother was surprising and touching by her gift.

2|Page GUIDED WRITING PN ELIZABETH/SK KEMENTAH

Identify and circle the mistakes. Write the correct answer in the box given.

Check your answers. Then write out the essay in your exercise book.

Practice 18 : A Fund Raising Fair

CIRCLE THE MISTAKES CORRECTION
Last week, Iman’s English teacher ask the class to did a
project.
Miss Sheila ask them to brought some materials to the class
the next day.
There were very exciting.
Miss Sheila teach Iman and his classmates on how to
maked a Beak Book.
She give them clear instructions to followed.
Later, Miss Sheila instructs them to write an story in the Beak
Book.
The pupils which wrote the good story would be given a
present.
The next day, Miss Sheila announce that Iman write the best
story.
He gave her a present and asked him to read his story to
the class.
Iman were on cloud nine because his effort was rewarding.

3|Page GUIDED WRITING PN ELIZABETH/SK KEMENTAH

Identify and circle the mistakes. Write the correct answer in the box given.

Check your answers. Then write out the essay in your exercise book.

Practice 16 : Injury

It was a cheery Sunday morning

Musa and his friends were playing ‘sepak takraw’.

They was practicing for the ‘Inter School Sepak Takraw Competition’ that will be taking

place soon.

Unfortunately, Musa accidentally hurt his left knee when he somersaulted to kick the

ball while playing.

His coach took him to the clinic.

The doctor bandaged his knee.

In a day or two, Musa was fit and well to play again.

He played well in the finals and his school won and emerged as champions.

His headmaster, teachers and parents were proud of him.

Musa and his friends were indeed very happy.

Practice 17: Mother’s Day

Mother’s Day was coming soon.
Raisya planned to buy a present for her mother for the special day.
She wanted to buy her mother a purse.
However, she did not have enough money yet.
So, she decided to save her pocket money daily into her piggy bank.
Instead of buying food at the canteen, she brought her own food and drinks to school.
After one month, she had saved enough money.
She went to the supermarket and bought a leather purse for her mother.
On Mother’s Day, Raisya gave the leather purse to her mother.
Her mother was surprised and touched by her gift.

Practice 18 : A Fund Raising Fair

Last week, Iman’s English teacher asked the class to do a project.
Miss Sheila asked them to bring some materials to the class the next day.
They were very excited.
Miss Sheila taught Iman and his classmates on how to make a Beak Book.
She gave them clear instructions to follow.
Later, Miss Sheila instructed them to write a story in the Beak Book.
The pupils who wrote the best story would be given a present.
The next day, Miss Sheila announced that Iman wrote the best story.
She gave him a present and asked him to read his story to the class.
Iman was on cloud nine because his effort was rewarded.