ara-shurao-ahal e zouq

wow Very nice! bhaoot khoob likha hai aapne.
Nysha

« April 01, 2009, AM »
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Nice One Again Maqsood Ji,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.

Pardhne Ka Mazaa Milta Rahega,.
Nice One,.

Azeem Aarzu
« April 01, 2009, AM »

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aap sahiban ki mohabat mairay liay bari anmool hai.
Ehvar ki kirpa aap sab par bani rahay
Dr Maqsood Hasni

«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2009, 09:31:07 AM »

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/sonnay-main-aaya-hai-t45018.0.html

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Mein janta hoon
Tumharay aanay ki aasha

Din bhar,
Mujh ko zinda rakhti hai

Suraj kay sath
Mein bhi mar jata hoon

Suraj ki mirtu par
Gharab lahoo se obalta hai

Talu kay sath hi
Yaas ki lahad say

Aas,
Mujhy otha lati hai

Mairi aankhain
Mairi palkain
Jivan ki dehleez par
Saj sanwar kay
Baith jati hain

Mein janta hoon
Jab tum

Mairay kochay say
Gozro gay

Tumharay aanay ka wo pal
Mout ka pal ho ga

Tumharay na aanay ka
Yah pal

Sadyoon say
Jivan aur mirti kay bich
Diwar-e-chin ban kar

Hael chala aata hai
Tumharay aanay ki ommeed

Din bhar
Mujh ko zinda rahti hai

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sajid_ghayel
Bohat khoob Dr. Saheb aap ek bilkul naye andaz me apne kalam
pesh karte hain, jo kabile tareef hain. Aapki ek ghazal padhne ki
badi ummeed hain....
«Reply #1 on: April 01, 2009, 05:43:12 AM »

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Wow .. Lovely Thumbs UP

Roja
« April 01, 2009, AM »

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Bohot Khoob Hasni Ji

Celmira
« April 01, 2009, AM »

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Bohat Achche Maqsood Ji, Nice One,.

Azeem Aarzu
« April 01, 2009, 07 AM »

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aap dost mujhy apni yaad main rakhtay hain yah mairay liay
bohat bara izaz hai.

Allah aap sab ko kuch rakhy
Dr Maqsood Hasni

«April 01, 2009, 09:39:08 AM »

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/mein-janta-hoon-t45032.0.html

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Sadyoon say
Ankh somondar
Jaisay tabeer say oljha khaab
Paimanay say lipti sharaab
Lehrain samait kar soya somondar

Chop main khoya somondar
Magar bala ka chasham shanas

Khoon main dobi piyas
Dam toorti aas

Shanakht odas odas
Kinaray somondar kay

Pur sakoon sahi
Magar teh main samri ka bhachra

Aur saleeb-e- Essa
Ai kash koee aa ay
Bond bond piyas la ay

Rooh ki bhook mita ay
Kirishan kay geet sona ay
Magar boti boti anna ki maslihat ki qabr
Koch kay qaflay kohlu kay baiel

Bai himat hoslay
Zindgi ka qraz hain
Sadyoon say karbala
Odasi ka somondar

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wah wah,
Bahut hi khoob... Applause

{Angel}
«April 03, 2009, AM »

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Bohat Achche Maqsood Ji,.

Azeem Aarzu
« April 03, 2009, AM »

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banda'navazi k liay aap donoon ka shukarreya.

Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 03, 2009, AM »

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bahoot khoob DR. Ji
Nysha

« April 03, 2009, AM »
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bari bari meharbani janab.
« April 03, 2009, PM »
Dr Maqsood Hasni

http://www.yoindia.com/shayaaridab/shairi-e-zindagi/sadyoon-s
ay-t45050.0.html
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Teh karnay say pehlay

Yah teh karnay say pehlay
Kah ab doo rastoon par chaltay hain

Zara sochna
Dil say niklo gay kaisay

Yah bhi kah
Tairay mun aangan main
Mairi mohabatoon kay dairay hain

Soch ki sirioon par
Wafa kay naqash-e-marmarein

Phailay howay hain
Yah teh karnay say pehlay

Zara sochna
Rastay anjanay hain
Kahein iqrar kay somandar ki gehraeyaan
Kahein bai noqi inkar ki khaeyaan
Bhoji aankhoon kay sitaray

Dohaee dain gay
Lot aaoo

Tum kab doo rastoon kay rahi ho
Yah teh karnay say pehlay
Zara sochna
Mairay baichain rat jagay

Taira rasta rokain gay
Damun say pakrain gay
Chopa kar cehra tum apna
Mairi mohabatoon kay suraj say
Kayoon kar nikal pao gay?!
Yah teh karnay say pehlay
Kah ab doo rastoon par chaltay hain

Zara sochna
Mairi bahoon main aakash si vosatain hain

Tairay thakay qadmoon ko
Mairay hath sehlaein gay

Tairi garam sansoon ko
Aanch jazboon ko

Mairi chahat kay mashroob
Pinay ko milain gay
Phir kehta hoon

Yah teh karnay say pehlay
Kah ab doo rastoon par chaltay hain

Zara sochna
Kah ehal-e-wafa ka itbaar baqi rahay

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Bohot Khoob Hasni Ji

Celmira
« April 03, 2009, PM »

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janab ki tovajo aur mohabat k liay dil-o-jan say ehsan'mand

hoon.
Allah aap ko salamat rakhy.

Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 04, 2009, AM »

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wah wah kya baat hai Dr. ji. behad umda likha hai . keep writing

......
Nysha

«April 04, 2009, AM »
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mein janab ki tovajo mohabat aur hosla'afzae k liay shukar'gozar
hoon.

Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 04, 2009, AM »

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Bahut bahut khoobsurat shayri hai, har ek alfaaz dilko chhu

jaata hai...
{Angel}
« April 04, 2009, AM »

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bari bari mehar'bani janab.
Allah aap ko kush rakhy.

Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 04, 2009, AM »
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/teh-karna
y-say-pehlay-t44993.0.html

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Ik Pal

Ik pal nay
Aaksh aur dharti ko
Ik dhagay main bon kay

Rang dhanak ochalay
Doja pal

Jo bhik tha pehlay pal ki
Khisay say otra

Mathay ki raikha tehra
Kirpa aur dan ka pal
Phun chakar ka mara
Girta hai monh kay bal
Silwat say pak sahi

Phir bhi,
Hantal say karwa

Otran ka phal
Ulfat main,
Kuch day kar
Panay ki icha
Hatam say hai chal
Gairat say aari
Halaq main tapka
wo qatra,
Soqrat ka zahir
Na Ganga jal
Mehar mohabat say bhar poor

Neem ka pani
Na karwa na khara

Wo to
Aab-e-zam zam
Os main Rehman ka bal

Her farzana
Ehad say mokti chahay

Her diwana
Ehad ka bandi
Mar mitnay ki batain
Taltatay rehna

Kal ta kal
Jab bhi
Pal ki bigri kal
Dar Nanak kay baitha
Baikal, baikal
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Bohot Khoob Hasni Ji
Celmira
« March 29, 2009, PM »
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Good 1 Hasni ji

Roja
« March 29, 2009, PM »

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Nce one hasni ji

jannatjahan
« March 29, 2009, PM »

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Great, Hasni Ji !!!!!!!!!

karndhar
« March 30, 2009, AM »

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-Rahim-
«March 30, 2009, AM »

Nice one Hasni jee
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
« March 30, 2009, AM »
aap sab mairay liay bari maniviat rakhtay hain.
mein aap sab ki mohabat ka qaraz'dar hoon.
Palan'har aap sab ko kush rakhay

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Nysha

«March 30, 2009, AM »
Very NICe Hasni Ji
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Dr Maqsood Hasni

«March 30, 2009, AM »
bari bari meharbani janab

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Pooja
« April 06, 2009, PM »
bahoot khoob Hasni ji
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tovajo kay liay ehsan'mand hoon.
Eshvar aap par apni kirpa banay rakhy.

Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 06, 2009, PM »

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/ek-pal-t44961.0.html

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Jagtay rehn

Choor tairay sohaag ki choriaan chora na lay
Jagtay rehna

Chanda ki koe mast kiran aankhoon ki masti

Hontoon ki surkhi
Chora na lay
Jagtay rehna

Hawa ka koee jhonka
Tairay badan, tairay cehray
Haya-o-taqadas kay sab reshtay

Apnay na pak lams say
Choor choor na kar day

Jagtay rehna
Shab kay pechlay pehar ki anaetoon main

Khuda tujh ko bhi shareek kar lay

Jagtay rehna
Gholab chanda ki ragoon say
Sari shabnum nachoor na lay

Jagtay rehna
Raqeeb tujh ko tairi mohabatoon say

Mehroom na kar day
Jagtay rehna, Mairay dost

jagtay rehna
Jaagna hi zindgi,
Jagtay hi aazad hain

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sajid_ghayel
« April 13, 2009, AM »
Bohat khoob Doctor Saheb...

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aap ki mohabat aap ki tovajo mairay liay bari maneviat ki hamil

hai.
Allah aap ko kush rakhy

Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 13, 2009, AM »

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Wah wah Dr. Ji wah kya baat hai. bahoot khoob likha hai.

Nysha

«April 13, 2009, AM »
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janab nay apni mohabat anaet aur tovajo main rakha,
yahhi maira hasal hai.

Eshvar ki daya aur kirpa aap par bani rahay.
issi tara apni yaad main rakheay
Dr Maqsood Hasni
«April 13, 2009, AM »

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/jagtay-rehna-t45333.0.html

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Laaj

Fart-e-Jajbaat main jab tum nay
Anabi hont apnay

Hontoon par mairay rakh diay
Zidagi!
Mein to

Oon lamhoon ki laaj nibha raha hoon

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Azeem Aarzu
« April 17, 2009, »
Bohat Achche Maqsood Ji, Nice One,.

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Dr Maqsood Hasni

« April 17, 2009, PM »
shukarreya janab
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Rajesh Harish

«April 17, 2009, PM »
Nice one Hasni Ji
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Dr Maqsood Hasni

«April 17, 2009, PM »
shukarriya janab

Eshvar ki kirpa aap par bani rahay

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/laag-t45454.0.html

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Yaksaan

Taqat ki khudaee
Odher ho kah edhar

Kha jati hai
Reham aur kirpa kay shabad

Ozv-e-zaeef par
Yaksaan rehtay hain
Khizaan aur bahar kay mosam

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khamosh_aawaaz
«April 18, 2009, 01:02:06 AM »
VERY NICE LINES ....DR SB

K_A
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
«April 18, 2009, AM »
janab ki es tovajo aur mohabat k liay mumnoon hoon.
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Nysha

«April 18, 2009, AM »
Very Nice Dr , Maqsood Ji!

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Tanha(Saurabh)
Maqbool Shayar
« April 18, 2009, 10:15:17 AM »
bohat khoob Hasni ji!

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Dr Maqsood Hasni
«April 18, 2009, AM »
janab ki tovajo nay maira hosla boland kiya hai.

Allah Sahib aap ko kush rakhy.

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/yaksaan-t45460.0.html

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Sanjh

Bahmi ehtaram say nibh rahi hai
Bai luos sanjh hai hamari
Jab woh roth jatay hain
Hum mana laitay hain
Hum rothain to,
Raqeeb ki ban aati hai

Sar-e-Mehfal tohein kay dar say

Hum khud hi man jatay hain
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Azeem Aarzu

« April 17, 2009, PM »
Nice One Again Maqsood Bhai,.

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Rajesh Harish
«April 17, 2009, PM »
Nice one Hasni Ji

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Dr Maqsood Hasni

« April 17, 2009, PM »
navazesh,

meharbani janab
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khamosh_aawaaz
« April 18, 2009, AM »
NICE LINES............DR SB.

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Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 18, 2009, AM »
shukarreya janab

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Nysha
« April 18, 2009, AM »
Very Nice Dr, Ji! Keep writing................
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 18, 2009, AM »
janab nay hamaisha mairi hosla afzae farmae hai.
nahain janta aap ka kin alfaz main shukariya ada karoon.
Eshvar aap ko her moamla main safal rakhy.

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/sanjh-t45455.0.html

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Taraqqi

Tariki mehman bani ojaloon ki

« April 19, 2009, AM »
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wah ji wa kiya baat hai.
saaz_haldwanvi

« April 21, 2009, PM »
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ye mehman sahar hone tak hai
maqsood se mash-hoor hone tak hai

a-daab !
[saaz haldwanvi]
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 21, 2009, PM »
aap ki mohabat aur pazirie k sabab kuch na'kuch qalam say
nikal jata hai.
dua hai,
aap par sada Hazrat Barana ji ki kirpa ka hon barsta rahay aur
kushaan aap ka moqadar rahain.

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/taraqqi-t45485.0.html

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Door ofaq main

Jin ko hum pojtay thay
Ramooz-e-khuda'wandi say na aashna niklay

Mairay vote nay
Masnd-e-khudaee bakhshi thi jin ko

Aaj subh hi say
Door ofaq main
Roposh ho gay hain

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khamosh_aawaaz
« April 19, 2009, AM »
KYAA BAAT HAI DR SB............. NETAAON KAA YAHI HAAL

HAI
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
«April 19, 2009, AM »
shukariya janab
Eshvar aap ko her moamaly main safl rakhy.
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Tanha(Saurabh)
Maqbool Shayar

«April 20, 2009, AM »
bohat khoob kaha aapne hasni sahab.....

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Celmira
« April 20, 2009, AM »
Nice one Hasni Ji
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 20, 2009, AM »
aap donoon dostoon ki es mohabat aur inyat k liay mumnoon
hoon.

Allah Sahib aap ko kush rakhy.

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/door-ofaq-main-t45484.0.html

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Ab main tujhay

Ab main tujhay tairi ijazat say sochta hoon
Tairi Aankh ka kajal abhi phela nahain
Tairay boloon ki kalyaan abhi jowaan hain
Kalaee kay talaee churay ki khanak
Kab kal say joda hoee hai
Kuch bhi to badla nahain

Tairi donyan main koee aur tha
Main yah kaisay maan loon
Tu to wohi hai

Jis nay mairy soch kay darwazay par
Sabr ka phera batha rakha hai
Sochna yah hai
Kis karda jurm ki wo saza thi
Kah tu mujh say khafa thi
Ya yah koee annokhi adda thi?
Tu kayoon mujh say bai'parwa thi

Tum nay mujh ko sochnay nahain diya

Apni zaat kay jaziroon ko khojnay nahain diya
Band kowaroon kay pechay

Tujhy sochnay ki Aarzoo ka chehra
Kabhi jita tha kabhi marta tha
Main sochay hoon?!
Kaisay tum ko scoh sakoon ga
Mairi itni basaat kahaan

Tum wahaan ho jahaan main nahain
Main zarra tu paharoon ka badsha

Main zamein tu Aasmaan
Haan itni tashfi zaroor hai

Aakash ki shanakhat zamein hai
Main tairi shanakhat hoon
Aur tu mairy honay ka saboot

Ab main tujhay tairi ijazat say sochta hoon
Mon May 31, 2010 10:30 pm
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Alex9090
5 Star Member

It is a nice one, doc. Did you write it??
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Dr Maqsood Hasni

punjab
bari bari meharbani janab.

ji haan,
yah satrain mairay hi qalam se nikli thein.

Tue Jun 01, 2010 2:12 pm
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Alex9090

5 Star Member
That makes it even more brilliant. Very touching and not a bit of

it amateurish, NICE!
Tue Jun 01, 2010 9:42 pm

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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani

punjab
aap k qlam se nikle her lafz ne mujhy itabar diya hai. achy aur

khoob'surat log achi aur khoob'surat baat karte hain.
ab to dil chahta hai aisi hi aur chizain paish nkaroon.

Allah aap ko kush rakhy
Wed Jun 02, 2010 1:51 pm

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Aatish
Forum Family Member
V.nICe ShArIng G.!!!