ENGLISH MODULE HALUS & GALUS English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor
Part 2: Guided Writing Part 1: Email Part 3: Extended Writing 1. 2. 3. CONTENTS English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor
ENGLISH SPM 1119/2 PART 1 EMAIL WRITING English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 1
PART 1: EMAIL WRITING FORMAT Email Writing Tips! Read the question carefully. Highlight the keywords. Identify the receiver of the email. Highlight the MAIN question(s) in the email Memorise the basic format of an email. Do a lot of email practice for you to score well in your examinations. English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 2
How an email question looks like in SPM? English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 3
Step 1: Read and identify the keywords Step 2: Plan the answers Where shall we go? --- Mersing Beach What can we do there? --- swimming camping building sandcastles What should we bring? tent sandwiches Main idea: Picnic with friends English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 4
Step 3: Write the email using the format English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 5
Type 1: Making Choice Types of Email Questions You received an email from your neighbour, Maria. Hi, What' s up? I heard that your sister ' s birthday party will be held next week. I' m thinking of giving her a smartwatch or a table lamp. Which one is better? Why? Please let me know! Maria Now, write an email to your neighbour in about 80 words. Write your answer below. To: maria@gmail.com Subject: Birthday present Dear Maria, How are you? I'm writing this email to help you choose a better birthday present. Firstly, I think a smart watch is better. You can buy a Samsung or Oppo smart watch. Secondly, there are some reasons why I choose this present. My sister likes smart watch functions such as heart rate monitor and games. She will be very happy when she gets it. I'm sure of it! That's all for now. Bye! Love, Wei Wei English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 6
Type 1: Making Choice Practice A You received an email from your good friend, Robert. Hi, How ' s life? The Movement Control Order (MCO) has made my life so boring. I plan to start a hobby. It' s between cycling and reading online newspapers. I like them both but need to choose one. Which one should I choose and why? Help me! Robert Now, write an email to your friend in about 80 words. Write your answer below. To: ______________________________________ Subject: __________________________________ _______________________ __________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ _________________________ English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 7
Type 1: Making Choice Practice B You received an email from your sister, Meera. Hi, Congratulations because you pass your final exam! I'll be home next week. I plan to buy a gift for you. It' s either a set of headphones or earphones. Which set do you like? Let me know the reasons too. Can 't wait to see you! Bye! Meera Now, write an email to your friend in about 80 words. Write your answer below. To: ______________________________________ Subject: __________________________________ _______________________ __________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ _________________________ English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 8
Type 2: Going to a Place Types of Email Questions You received an email from your friend, Suffi. Hi, Our school holiday has begun. Let' s go camping at a waterfall! I long for adventures. Which waterfall should we go? What can we do there? What should we bring? Suffi Now, write an email to your friend in about 80 words. Write your answer below. To: suffi@gmail.com Subject: Camping Dear Suffi, How are you? I'm writing this email to respond to your questions about our camping activity. Firstly, I think we should go to Gunung Ledang waterfall. It's near our house and the place is beautiful. I'm sure you'll like it. Secondly, we can swim and have a barbecue session there. At night, we can build a campfire too. Lastly, I think we should bring a big tent for sleeping and some sausages, chicken wings and matches for barbecue. That's all for now. Hope you like my idea. Bye! Love, Ally English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 9
Type 2: Going to a Place Practice A You received an email from your cousin, John. Hi, The school holiday is here. Let' s go shopping! Need to buy some stuff. Where should we go? How do we get there? Why must we go there? Let me know soon. See you! John Now, write an email to your cousin in about 80 words. Write your answer below. To: ______________________________________ Subject: __________________________________ _______________________ __________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ _________________________ English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 10
Type 2: Going to a Place Practice B You received an email from your cousin, Ariana. Hi, It' s been a long time since we last met. My mother plans to organise a family day next month. Please suggest us a location. What activities can be done there? What should we bring? . Thanks! Ariana Now, write an email to your cousin in about 80 words. Write your answer below. To: ______________________________________ Subject: __________________________________ _______________________ __________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ _________________________ English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 11
Type 3: Advice Types of Email Questions You received an email from your niece, Brenda. Hi, My exam is coming soon. I feel so worried and stressful. I need to pass the exam and make my family proud. I need your advice. What should I do to face this situation? Brenda Now, write an email to your niece in about 80 words. Write your answer below. To: brenda20@gmail.com Subject: Advice for you. Dear Brenda, How are you? I'm writing this email to advise you on how to face the situation. Firstly, you should calm down. Lie down and relax. Give yourself some time to feel better. Secondly, you'd better start studying now if you want to avoid any panic attacks. Thirdly, you should get enough sleep. Please manage your time well. That's all for now. Good luck for your exam! Bye! Love, Wanda English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 12
Type 3: Advice Practice A You received an email from your friend, Danial. Hi, How ' s your life now? I have a big problem. I think my addiction to online games is worsening. What should I do? I' m afraid this will affect my academic performance. Please give me some advice. Thanks! Danial Now, write an email to your friend in about 80 words. Write your answer below. To: ______________________________________ Subject: __________________________________ _______________________ __________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ _________________________ English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 13
Type 3: Advice Practice B You received an email from your friend, Dilla. Hi, I need your advice. I' m gaining so much weight within these three months. I' m worried if I'll get diabetes. What should I do to get an ideal weight? Please help me. Thanks! Dilla Now, write an email to your friend in about 80 words. Write your answer below. To: ______________________________________ Subject: __________________________________ _______________________ __________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ _________________________ English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 14
ENGLISH SPM 1119/2 PART 2 guided WRITING English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 15
PART 2: GUIDED WRITING Guided Writing Tips! Read the question carefully. Highlight the keywords. Identify the topic of the question. There will be three things asked about the topic. Plan your points for each question. Write them down before you start writing. Provide ideas, explanation and some examples where necessary. Do a lot of practice for you to score well in your examinations. How this question looks like in SPM? English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 16
what I would like to buy --- reasons for my choice --- I like to do sports like basketball and badminton If I have good sport shoes, then I can do the activities more comfortably. To study well, I need a complete set of stationery where do I usually buy these things--- sport shoes - Bata shop stationery - Popular Bookstore Main idea: what I would spend my money on sport shoes and some stationery Step 1: Read and identify the keywords Step 2: Plan the answers English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 17
Step 3: Write the essay Money is important in our lives. We need money to buy many things. As students, we get our money mainly from our parents. My class has been discussing how they spend their money and my teacher has asked me to write an essay about what I would spend my money on. To spend my money, I would like to buy a pair of sport shoes and some stationery. There are some reasons for my choice. Firstly, I choose a pair of sport shoes because I like to do some sports such as basketball and badminton. Secondly, if I have good sport shoes, I can do the activities more comfortably. Thirdly, regarding the stationery, I believe a student needs a complete set of stationery to study well. I usually buy them at the shops in my hometown. For the sport shoes, I prefer to buy them at a shoes shop called "Bata" and for my stationery, I like to buy them at Popular Bookstore located in Kluang Mall. In conclusion, spend your money wisely. Don't waste it. English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 18
_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Guided Writing Practice A what is the activity reasons for your choice where do you usually do this activity Your class has been discussing how they spend their free time during weekends and your teacher has asked you to write an essay about what you would do during weekends. In your essay, you should write about: Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 19
what is your action reasons for your action your opinion about people who refuse to follow the rules regarding COVID-19 SOP (Standard Operational Procedures) Your class has been discussing how they stay safe during COVID-19 pandemic and your teacher has asked you to write an essay about what have you done to stay safe during the pandemic. In your essay, you should write about: Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. Guided Writing Practice B _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 20
Guided Writing Practice C what is your action reasons for your action your opinion about people who refuse to respect others Your class has been discussing how they treat their friends well and your teacher has asked you to write an essay about what would you do to treat your friends well. In your essay, you should write about: Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 21
ENGLISH SPM 1119/2 PART 3 extended WRITING (introduction) English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 22
How Part 3 looks like in SPM? English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 23
In Part 3, SPM candidates need to choose only ONE question. The number of words is 200-250. 4 types of essay can be asked. Article Review Story / Narrative Report Choose the question you are most confident and comfortable with. Plan your points and write them down before you start writing. Provide ideas, explanation and some examples where necessary. Do a lot of practice for you to score well in your examinations. PART 3: EXTENDED WRITING Extended Writing Tips! English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 24
EXTENDEDARTICLE WRITINGEnglish Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 25
PARAGRAPH 1: INTRODUCTION Introduce the topic PARAGRAPH 2 what other types of food would I like to be served? - -- Western food and cakes what special facilities should my canteen have? --- a television a vending machine a radio PARAGRAPH 3 how can I improve my canteen?--- by putting up some cleanliness posters by setting up a reading corner PARAGRAPH 4: CONCLUSION Wrap up the topic --- give some comments / feelings / hope Title: My School Canteen Step 1: Read and identify the keywords Step 2: Plan the answers English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 26
My School Canteen My school canteen is one of the best spots in my school. It is beautiful and comfortable. The food price is reasonable. My friends and I like to spend our time there during our recess. Currently, our school canteen serves Malaysian food like coconut rice, fried noodles and curry noodles. They are so delicious. In my opinion, Western food can also be served. They can sell chicken chops and some spaghetti. Other than that, cake slices like chocolate cakes would be nice. Some special facilities should be added. I would like to suggest that our canteen provides us with a television, a vending machine and a radio. These facilities will make the students very happy. A television with some educational shows is good. A vending machine will give more variety of drinks for students to choose. A radio will make the situation at the canteen not too noisy with students' voices. To improve my school canteen, firstly, I should put up some cleanliness posters. This will ensure all students to take care of the cleanliness whenever they are there. Secondly, I think I can set up a reading corner at the canteen. Students can read books during recess. In conclusion, canteen is an important spot during recess. I hope my canteen condition will be improved from time to time. Step 3: Write the essay English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 27
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EXTENDEDREVIEW (FILM / MOVIE/ BOOK) WRITINGEnglish Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 30
Step 1: Read and identify the keywords Step 2: Plan the answers Type 1 - Movie / Film / Book Review English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 31
PARAGRAPH 1: INTRODUCTION Give general information (title, type of film, director, leading actors) Kungfu Hustle, comedy, Stephen Chow, Stephen Chow and and Yuen Wah PARAGRAPH 2: PLOT Give brief summary about the movie about 2 men trying to join the Axe Gang. Not easy. Adentures and challenges. PARAGRAPH 3: COMMENTS Make comments about what you liked and disliked about the movie (plot, soundtrack, acting, special effects, costumes, ending) I like the plot as it is simple. This movie doesn't have any soundtracks. I like the kung fu acting as it's so real. The CGI is not too sharp and looks weird sometimes. The costumes are superb. The ending is nice too. PARAGRAPH 4: CONCLUSION State your general opinion about the movie and say whether you will recommend it to others or not. Overall, I like this movie so much because comedy is my preferred genre. This movie is so hilarious. For comedy lovers, this movie is definitely for you. I recommend you to watch it. Title of the Movie: Kungfu Hustle Step 1: Read and identify the keywords Step 2: Plan the answers English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 32
Kungfu Hustle Kungfu Hustle is a mandarin movie I have watched recently. This movie is a comedy. The director is Stephen Chow, a professional director who has produced a lot of interesting movies. The leading actors are Stephen Chow and Yuen Wah. Both of them are very famous. This movie is not a modern movie. Set in Canton, China in the 1940s, the story revolves in a town ruled by the Axe Gang, Sing who desperately wants to become a member. He stumbles into a slum ruled by eccentric landlords who turns out to be the greatest kungfu masters in disguise. Sing's actions eventually cause the Axe Gang and the slumlords to engage in an explosive kungfu battle. Only one side will win and only one hero will emerge as the greatest kungfu master of all. I like the plot as it is simple. This movie doesn't have any soundtracks. I like the lead actor's acting as it's so real. The CGI is not too sharp and looks weird sometimes. The costumes are superb. The ending is nice too. Overall, I like this movie so much because comedy is my preferred genre. This movie is so hilarious. For comedy lovers, this movie is definitely for you. I recommend you to watch it. Step 3: Write the essay English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 33
Review (Film/Movie) Practice A _________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ Write your own version of review. English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 34
_________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ Review (Film/Movie) Practice B You recently saw this notice in a newspaper. Reviews Required! Have you watched any interesting action film recently? Send us your film review. Tell us what you enjoyed about the film. Would you recommend this film to others? Why? The review will be published in our newspaper next month. Write your review. English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 35
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EXTENDEDREVIEW (PLACE) WRITINGEnglish Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 37
Sample Question & Answer from Download (Pg.118) Type 2 - Place Review You see this advert in an international travel magazine. Reviews wanted! Holidays for teenagers We want reviews of holidays designed for teenagers. Your review should include information about the place, the food and what activities there are. Would you recommend this holiday to other people your age? The best reviews will be published in our magazine. Write your review. English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 38
Sample Question from Download (Pg.119) Type 2 - Place Review You see this advert in an international travel magazine. Reviews wanted! Summer camps for teenagers We want reviews of summer camps for teenagers. Your review should include information about the place, the food and what you can do there. Would you recommend it to other people your age? The best reviews will be published in next month' s magazine. Write your review. English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 39
Mersing Beach Campsite: The best summer camp Searching for a place for a summer camp? Mersing Beach Campsite in Mersing, Johor is the best choice. This place is perfect for many exciting physical activities. This campsite provides a lot of facilities for campers such as barbecue pits, nice toilets and a big hall. The place can accommodate 200 campers per night. The hall can be used for camping assemblies and as a place to have meals. The place is near to a forest. Campers can get the chance to have camping near the beach but with forest activities. Mersing Beach Campsite provides campers with food. It is included in the package. Local food such as fried noodles, fish dishes with rice and local cakes are served daily. They are very delicious. Hunger will never be a problem during the stay. Teenagers will like everything served there. The campsite has facilities for outdoor activities too. Campers will get the chance to play beach volleyball and Frisbee. Since it is near the forest, everyone can go jungle trekking. The experience will be memorable as in the forest, they will test their endurance and patience. Overall, I would recommend Mersing Beach Campsite to all teenagers who loves outdoor activities but in a safe and secure condition. Write the essay You see this advert in an international travel magazine. Reviews wanted! Summer camps for teenagers We want reviews of summer camps for teenagers. Your review should include information about the place, the food and what you can do there. Would you recommend it to other people your age? The best reviews will be published in next month' s magazine. Write your review. English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 40
Review (Place) Practice A _________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ You see this advert in an international travel magazine. Reviews wanted! Summer camps for teenagers We want reviews of summer camps for teenagers. Your review should include information about the place, the food and what you can do there. Would you recommend it to other people your age? The best reviews will be published in next month' s magazine. Write your review. English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 41
Review (Place) Practice B _________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ You see this advert in your school magazine. Reviews wanted! Holidays for teenagers We want reviews of holiday spots for teenagers. Your review should include information about the place, the special features and what you can do there. Would you recommend it to other people your age? The best reviews will be published in the school magazine. Write your review. English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 42
EXTENDEDREVIEW (RESTAURANT) WRITINGEnglish Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 43
Type 3 - Restaurant Review You see this notice in your school magazine. Reviews required! Have you eaten at a good restaurant recently? Write us a review of that restaurant. What do you like about the restaurant? Why? Let us know whether you would recommend this restaurant to others. The best reviews will be published in the school magazine. Write your review. PARAGRAPH 1: INTRODUCTION Give general information about the place Benmael Restaurant, located in Kluang, Johor, Western food, owned by Ismail bin Ahmad PARAGRAPH 2: SUMMARY ABOUT THE PLACE Give brief summary about the place list of food served, crowded or not, decoration, quiet or noisy, etc. PARAGRAPH 3: COMMENTS Make comments about what you liked and disliked about the place about food - which food do you like the most, decoration, etc. PARAGRAPH 4: CONCLUSION State your general opinion about the restaurant and say whether you will recommend it to others or not. Overall, I like this restaurant so much because all food served is delicious. I will definitely recommend this restaurant to others. Title of the Review: Benmael Restaurant Plan the answers English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 44
Type 3 - Restaurant Review You see this notice in your school magazine. Reviews required! Have you eaten at a good restaurant recently? Write us a review of that restaurant. What do you like about the restaurant? Why? Let us know whether you would recommend this restaurant to others. The best reviews will be published in the school magazine. Write your review. Benmael Restaurant Benmael Restaurant is a new restaurant located in Kluang, Johor. It is near to the railway station and a good place for friend and family gatherings. This restaurant serves Western food. It is owned by Mr. Ismail bin Ahmad. The Western food served at this restaurant is chicken chop, lamb chop and burgers. The special menu is grilled chicken burger and lamb chop. The place is a bit crowded but the tables and chairs are always enough. The restaurant is painted orange and black. This makes the place looks lively and welcoming. Since there are many customers around, the place is a bit noisy but at an acceptable level. Firstly, I like Benmael Restaurant because the Western food served is so tasty. It appeals to my taste buds so much. Secondly, they will not let us wait too long for our food. The waiters are polite and efficient. They will help us whenever we ask them. Lastly, one thing about this restaurant that I dislike is the television is too small. I think they should provide a bigger television for every customer to view it clearly. Overall, I like this restaurant so much because all food served is delicious. I will definitely recommend this restaurant to others. I am sure once they try the food, they will crave for more. English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 45
You see this notice in your school magazine. Reviews required! Have you eaten at a good restaurant recently? Write us a review of that restaurant. What do you like about the restaurant? Why? Let us know whether you would recommend this restaurant to others. The best reviews will be published in the school magazine. Write your review. _________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ Write your own version of review. Review (Restaurant) Practice A English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 46
You see this notice in your school newsletter. Reviews required! Have you eaten at a traditional food restaurant recently? Write us a review of that restaurant. What do you like about the restaurant? Why? Let us know whether you would recommend this restaurant to others. The best reviews will be published in next month newsletter. Write your review. _________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ Review (Restaurant) Practice B English Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 47
EXTENDEDSTORY/ NARRATIVE WRITINGEnglish Panel SMK Jalan Kota Tinggi, Kluang, Johor 48