Success Model Essays KSSR 2022 Year 4 5 6

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Grammar Notes & Practices 1–9 Model 20 Notes – Ways of Appreciating
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Improving Your Writing Skills 10 Others 32
SECTION A Information Transfer • Enrichment Practices 33-47
• Tips and Guidelines 12
SECTION B Information Transfer &
Model 1 Invitation to A Birthday Party 13 Guided Writing
Model 2 Library Reservation Form 14 • Tips and Guidelines 49-50
Model 3 School Trip 15 Model 1 Replying an Email 51
Model 4 Dental’s Appointment Model 2 An invitataion to buy
Booking 16 a gift 52

Model 5 Dance Show 17 Model 3 My Travel Blog 53
Model 6 Notes – Canteen 18 Model 4 A Postcard from Holiday 54
Model 7 Notes – Park 19 Model 5 Recipe of My Favourite
Dish 55
Model 8 Notes – Polluted Beach 20
Model 6 An invitation to a Party 56
Model 9 Notice – Fun with English 7 Joining a Sports Club 57-58
Night 21 Model
Model 8 Tasks to Do 59-60
Model 10 Recipe – Cooking Fried Rice 22
Model 9 Opening of a Shopping
Model 11 Text – Announcement of Mall 61-63
Canteen Closure 23
Model 10 Great Places to Go 64-65
Model 12 Flyer – A Healthy Restaurant 24
Model 11 Going Green 66-67
Model 13 Notes – Taxi Service 25
Model 12 Applying for Head
Model 14 Table – English Carnival Prefect 68-69
Competition 26
Model 13 Making a Card 70-71
Model 15 Notice – School Trip to Model 14 Eating Healthy 72-74
Melaka 27
Model 15 Avoiding Heatstroke 75-76
Model 16 Notes – An Internet Cafe 28
Model 16 Stopping Childhood
Model 17 Brochure – Sepilok Orangutan Obesity 77-78
Sanctuary 29
Model 17 Should Every Child Have
Model 18 Notes – The Koala 30 a Pet? 79
Model 19 Leaflet – Holiday English Model 18 Visiting a Night Safari 80-81
Programme 31 Model 19 Doing Household Chores 82-83

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Model 20 Getting a Pet 84-86 Model 10 A Shocking Experience 155-156
Model 21 Buying a Gadget 87-88 Theme: A Succesful Act
Model 22 Mother’s Day Gifts 89-90 Model 11 Overcoming Fear 157-158
Model 23 Outing to a Theme Park 91-92 Model 12 Poetry Recital 159-160
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Model 24 Replying an Email 93-94
Theme: Visit/ Outing
Model 25 Recommend a Book 95-96
Model 13 An Educational
Model 26 Photography Experience 161-162
Competition 97-98
Model 14 Trip to a Waterfall 163-164
Model 27 Buying a Magazine 99-100
Theme: Characters
Model 28 Trip to Melaka 101-102
Model 15 A New Challenge 165-166
• Enrichment Practices 103-120
Model 16 The Brave Taxi Driver 167-168
SECTION C Sentence Construction / Note Theme: School Life
Expansion
Model 17 SOP in class during
• Tips and Guidelines 122-123 Pandemic 169-170
• 10 Points to Excel in Writing
& Notes 124-136 Model 18 A Lesson on
Procrastination 171-172
Theme: A Good Deed
Theme: Hobbies
Model 1 Helping an old Man 137-138
Model 19 Gardening 173-174
Model 2 Helping a Little Lost Girl 139-140
Model 20 Keeping Pets 175-176
Model 3 Visit to an Old Folks’
Home 141-142 Theme: Travel and Places
Theme: A Lesson Model 21 An Oversea Trip 177-178

Model 4 Disobeying rules and Model 22 A Visit to Perak Museum 179-180
orders 143-144
Theme: Idioms
Model 5 Addicted to Computer
Games 145-146 Model 23 Better to be Alone than to
be in Bad Company 181-182
Model 6 A Failed Prank 147-148
Model 24 All Work and No Play Makes
Theme: An Accident Jack a Dull Boy 183-184
7 Beach Accident 149-150 Model 25 Better Safe Than Sorry 185-186
Model 8 An Irresponsible Brother 151-152 • Enrichment Practices 187-196
Writing Assessment 197-202
Theme: An Incident
Answers 203-212
Model 9 Food Poisoning 153-154 Appendix 213-220

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INFORMATION




TRANSFER









































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ips & Guidelines






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1. This Section A carries 10 marks.

2. You will have to study and use the information given to complete the text.


3. Study and understand the information before filling in the blanks.

4. To fill in the blanks correctly, read the sentence before and after the blanks
to get clues. Look for keywords.


5. Make sure to change the tenses or the structure of the phrase, if necessary,
to fit the sentences in the text.


6. Take note of your spelling, grammar and punctuation.

7. After you have filled in all the blanks, read the whole passage again to
ensure the overall flow.

8. You are advised to spend 15 minutes on this section.




Suggested marking scheme


The answers in this section are marked based on content and relevance of words
used.

DESCRIPTION MARKS

The information is correctly selected, placed and spelt. 2


Answers have punctuation, structural or spelling errors. 1

Distorted or no answers. 0






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1 Invitation to a Birthday Party


Read the invitation and the email. Fill in the information in Sofia’s notes.


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Come to a ‘All Pink’ From Sara
Birthday Party
To Belinda
On Saturday Shall we go to Farah’s birthday party
at together? My mum will send us in
Fancy Café her car but we ‘ll need to come back
Starts at 2.00 p.m. by LRT. We’ll fetch you at 1.00 p.m.
Text me soon to confirm if you are
Come and have lots of fun.
Let me know by Wednesday going with me. My mobile number is
(010 8111 777) or email me at
if you can or cannot come. [email protected].
Farah






Belinda’s Notes
‘All Pink’ Birthday Party


Person inviting: Farah


the day of the party Day: 1. Saturday


actual time of party Time: 2. 2.00 p.m.

time to going to fetch Fetch time: 3. 1.00 p.m.


transport to go there Travel there by: 4. car


mobile number Contact number: 5. 010 8111 7777






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2 Library Reservation Form


Read a note from a student who wants a book from a library. Fill in the information in
the Reservation Form.
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Maria Binti Abdullah,
Year 6 Beta. 5 May
To: SK Murni Librarian

My teacher, Mr Thomas has told me to read Write It Right by Catherine Chua before
my assessment on 15 May. I am on holiday in Kuala Lumpur at the moment but I’ll
return to my home at PT256, Jalan KK1/10, Bandar Baru, 16150 Kota Bharu, Kelantan
on 9 May. I would like to get the book the next day and keep it for one week.
Thank you.
Maria Abdullah






SK Murni Library
SK Murni Library
Reservation Form

Name of Book: Write It Right
the author’s name,
written by
Name of writer: 1. Catherine Chua
the date the student
wants the book When do you want the book?: 2. 10 May

duration the students
wants to borrow For how long?: 3. 1 week / 7 days
the book

name of borrower Student’s name: 4. Maria Bt Abdullah

The borrower’s home Student’s address: 5. PT256, Jalan KK1/10,
address Bandar Baru, 16150
Kota Bharu, Kelantan






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3 School Trip


Read the information about a school trip. Complete Nick’s notes.

Join us on a school trip to
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Dear pupils,
Terengganu
Museum Our trip to Terengganu Museum is on a
on long weekend. As there is a shortage of
Saturday 6 July bus, so we have decided to postpone the
trip to Sunday. We will relax on Pantai Batu
For breakfast, we will have a picnic near a Buruk in the evening instead of visiting the
waterfall. Then, we will join a guided tour of the Floating Market.
museum in the afternoon. In the evening, we
will visit the Floating Mosque before departing
for home. Arrival and departure time are the same.

Price: RM55 Puan Zarina Bt Zainal
Meet at school hall at 7.00 a.m.
Return 6.30 p.m. and expected to reach Teacher-in-charge
home in 2 hours.





Nick’s Notes

School Trip


Main itinerary Name of Place: 1. Terengganu Museum

Actual day of trip Day: 2. Sunday


Evening itinerary Place to drop by: 3. Pantai Batu Buruk
(evening)

Place to meet before
departure Meeting place: 4. School Hall

Time arrive home Arrival time: 5. 8.30 p.m.








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4 Dental’s Appointment Booking Form


Read these two notes on the dental appointments. Fill in the information on the
dental’s appointment form.
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Dear Johan,
Care Dental
I wish to inform you that your dental
15, Jalan Utama, Kuala Lumpur appointment for cleaning on Tuesday
Tel : 03 8312 3456 afternoon 3.00 p.m. is postponed to
4.00 p.m. on the same day.
Cleaning RM50 If you bring your student card, you can

get 10% discount for your treatment.
Fillings RM80
I've put your name in the appointment
Opening hours: book already. Call me if you’d like to
Monday - Friday 10% change your appointment.
9.00 a.m. – 5.30 p.m. discount for Thanks
students
Saturdays Khatijah
9.00 a.m. – 1 p.m.





Care Dental Clinic

Appointment Book


name of customer Customer: 1. Johan

actual day of Day: 2. Tuesday
appointment

type of treatment Treatment: 3. Cleaning
needed

discount given Discount: 4. 10%

actual time of Time: 5. 4.00 p.m.
appointment






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5 Dance Show


Read the notice and the email. Fill in the information in Eva’s notes.


Dance Show From Fiona
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Dance Show
To Eva
Friday
Starts: 3.00 p.m. Hi! Eva,
Would you like to go to the dance show
Entrance is FREE I told you about? We can go by bus and

But please bring RM25 to buy I can meet you at the station. Phone
me if you want to. My house number is
our T-shirt of the show!
09 7658333. My best wishes,


Call Wendy
012 2356 666 Fiona






Eva’s Notes

Dance Show

Day of the Dance
show Day: 1. Friday


Time the show starts Begins at: 2. 3.00 p.m.

Price of T-shirt Cost of T-shirt: 3. RM25


Place to meet Fiona will be at the: 4. Bus station


House phone number Fiona’s number: 5. 09 7658333









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6 Notes - Canteen


Study the notes and picture below. Use the information to complete the following text.


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Based on the notes and picture given, complete the text below with the correct
information.

The words in bold are important key words that can be found in the visual stimulus.

It is recess time. The pupils are at the canteen. There are some
place
pupils queuing up patiently to buy food (1) at the food counter.
The canteen sells food such as fried noodles, sandwiches,
cupcakes and many others. There is a drink counter that sells
examples
a variety of drinks (2) such as soya bean, fruit juices and hot
drinks. There are some pupils who (3) are sitting on benches plural verb-to-be

to eat their food at the tables. There is also a group of pupils
singular verb-to-be
(4) standing around a fish pond nearby. (5) The school
gardener is feeding the fish in the pond. They like to watch a person
the colourful fish in the pond.


Tips
The highlighted words are also a
Remember to use capital letter to begin your answer guide to the contents / structure
if it is the blank is at the beginning of a sentence. of the expected answers.


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7 Notes - Park


Study the notes and picture below. Use the information to complete the following text.


Mr Theng
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– read
– newspaper
– sit
Others
– jog – lazy chair Daughter
– walk – shady tree – catch
– keep fit – butterfly
– net



Two sons Wife
– fish – prepare
– quietly – mat
– bring – take out
– baits – food
– pail – lay


Based on the notes and picture given, complete the text below with the correct
information.
The words in bold are important key words that can be found in the visual stimulus.


It is a Saturday. Mr Theng and his family are at the park
not far from their house. He is reading a newspaper
preposition
and sitting (1) on a lazy chair under a shady tree while
his wife is preparing food on a mat beside him. She is
verb +ing
(2) taking out the food and laying them on the mat to serve
her family. Their daughter is trying to catch a butterfly which
a tool
is fluttering above some flowers(3) with a net. His two sons
verb +ing
are (4) fishing quietly by the lake. They bring along some
baits and a pail. They are enjoying themselves. There are
activity
also others who (5) jog or walk in the park to keep fit.


Tips
The highlighted words are also a
Use conjunction ‘or’ if you are referring to guide to the contents / structure
a choice to join two words.
of the expected answers.

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8 Picture & Notes – Polluted Beach


Study the notes and picture below. Use the information to complete the following text.

Others Norin Jagjit
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– send – collect – pieces
– recyclable items – plastic – papers
– recycling centre – bottles – paper cups
– wish – containers
– improve enviroment








Kim Hock & Kinah
– pull Prawin
– fishing net – pick up
– out – aluminium
– sand – cans


Based on the notes and picture given, complete the text below with the correct
information.
The words in bold are important key words that can be found in the visual stimulus.


It is a public holiday. Norin, Jagjit, Kim Hock, Kinah and
Prawin are wearing gloves to collect rubbish on a polluted activity
beach. Prawin is (1) picking up aluminium cans and putting
them into a big sack. Norin is collecting plastic bottles and
items
containers from the beach. Jagjit is picking up (2) pieces of
papers and paper cups. Kim Hock and Kinah are pulling a from where
fishing net (3) out of the sand. They are planning to send all to a place
recyclable items (4) to the recycling centre. They work hard
root verb
together as they hope to (5) improve the environment.


Tips
The highlighted words are also a
Add conjunction ‘and’ when filling in the guide to the contents / structure
blank with more than 1 items. of the expected answers.


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9 Notice - Fun With English Night


Study the notice below and use the information to complete the text.


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SJKC CHUNG MING
FUN WITH ENGLISH NIGHT
Place : School Hall
Time : 6.00 p.m. – 10.00 p.m.
Date : 26 May 202_

Activities : • Public Speaking Competition
• Storytelling Competition
• Poetry Recitation Competition (Theme-Friendship)
• Tongue Twister Competition
• Get free balloons from the Balloon Clown
Pupils who are interested, please register with Miss Jenny Sheng
before 4 May 202_.
Many attractive prizes to be won!
Hurry and register! Don’t miss this golden opportunity.


Based on the notes and picture given, complete the text below with the correct
information.
The words in bold are important key words that can be found in the visual stimulus.

There will be a (1) Fun with English Night held at SJK(C) singular event

Chung Ming on 26 May. This function will be held at the
duration of time
school hall from (2) 6.00 p.m. till 10.00 p.m.. Students can
join competitions like (3) public speaking, storytelling, example
tongue twister and poetry recitation with the theme

of Friendship. Every pupil will be given a balloon by someone
(4) the Balloon Clown. The winners of the competitions will
root verb
(5) receive attractive prizes.



The highlighted words are also a
guide to the contents / structure
of the expected answers.


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10 Recipe - Cooking Fried Rice


Study the recipe below and use the information to complete the text.


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1. Heat up the wok and 2. Put in vegetables and 3. Add cooked meat.
add 2 teaspoons of oil. cook until tender.











4. Add 2 eggs and 5. Add cooked rice and 6. Stir everything swiftly until
scramble them. seasoning. the rice is well-coloured.

Based on the notes and picture given, complete the text below with the correct
information.
The words in bold are important key words that can be found in the visual stimulus.


Hasni wants to cook lunch for her family. Her daughter
food
suggests she cook (1) fried rice. First, she prepares all the
basic ingredients such as (2) cooked rice, meat, vegetables complete the list of
ingredients
and eggs. Next, she (3) heats up the oil in the wok. Then,
she (4) puts in vegetables and cooked meat. After that, she step to take
adds two eggs and (5) scrambles them. Finally, she adds the
cooked rice and stirs until it is well-coloured. Now, the fried
rice is ready to be served.


Tips
The highlighted words are also a
Look for key words before and after the blanks guide to the contents / structure
to help you to fill in the blanks correctly. of the expected answers.


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11 Text - Announcement of Canteen Closure

Study the text below and use the information to complete the text.


Attention all pupils,
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Good morning! I have an important announcement to
make. The school canteen will be closed for two days on
Wednesday and Thursday because of shortage of water
and some repair works.
I would like to advise you to bring your own food and
drinks from home. Tables and chairs will be placed in the
open hall for your convenience. You are only allowed to
eat and drink at the hall during recess. Please do not eat or
drink in the classroom. Thank you for your co-operation.


Based on the notes and picture given, complete the text below with the correct
information.

The words in bold are important key words that can be found in the visual stimulus.

Arif : Hello, may I speak to Johari?
Johari : Yes, speaking.
Arif : Arif here. You were absent today. The headmaster
noun with vowel
gave an (1) important announcement during the
assembly this morning. The canteen will not be
duration
open (2) for two days.
Johari : Really? Why?
reason
Arif : This is due to (3) shortage of water and some
repair works.
Johari : So how are we going to eat?
Arif : We have to bring our own food and drinks from
home.
Johari : Oh, I see. Are we going to eat in the classroom?
location
Arif : No, no! We must eat at (4) the open hall. Tables
and chairs will be provided for us.
Johari : On which days? I need to request my mum to
prepare food for me on these two days.
Arif : This coming (5) Wednesday and Thursday. The highlighted words
Johari : Thank you so much for calling me to inform me. are also a guide to the
See you in school tomorrow. contents / structure of
the expected answers.

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12 Flyer - A Healthy Restaurant


Study the notes below and use the information to complete the letter.


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HEALTHY FOOD CORNER
www.healthyfoodcorner.com.my
We offer breakfast & lunch only!! OPEN DAILY!
Breakfast Sets – RM9.90

Set A Set B
Egg muffin, Yogurt of your choice, Savory oatmeal with an egg, Garlic
Fresh milk / Fruit juice bread, Chocolate milk / Green tea
Lunch Sets – RM15.90
Set A Set B
Avocado, tomato, cheese & Chicken & Fruit salad, Two carrot buns,
Chicken burger, Organic soya milk Lemon juice



The words in bold are important key words that can be found in the visual stimulus.


Dear Sharmani,
I just saw a flyer that states (1) Healthy Food Corner is now
open at our housing area. It is open (2) seven days a week.

It offers Breakfast Sets (3) at RM9.90 and Lunch Sets at
RM15.90. The menu looks interesting and healthy. There are
number of sets
(4) two sets of menu for breakfast and lunch respectively.

Maybe we can have breakfast there this weekend.
I think you will like Set B which has savoury oatmeal selection of more
with an egg, garlic bread and a choice of (5) chocolate than one

milk or green tea.
The highlighted words
Love, are also a guide to the
Mum contents / structure of
the expected answers.






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13 Notes - Taxi Service


Study the notes below and use the information to complete the text.


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MY KL TAXI
TAXIS ON THE MOVE
SCHEDULE: FEATURES:

• Operates 7 days a • Experienced and
week trustworthy drivers –
• Including weekends safety guaranteed
and public holidays • Billingual drivers –
• Operates from 5.00 English and Bahasa
a.m. until midnight Malaysia

CONTACT INFO:

• Call us now at 03-2222777
• Download free app
• Book us online at [email protected]


The words in bold are important key words that can be found in the visual stimulus.


My KL Taxi service offers taxis on the move every day of the

week even on (1) weekends and public holidays. It operates
plural subject-verb
(2) from 5.00 a.m. to midnight.Their drivers (3) are experienced agreement

and trustworthy. Therefore, your safety is guaranteed. They
bilingual
can communicate well in two languages which is (4) English
after by, root verb
and Bahasa Malaysia. They can be contacted by (5) calling + ing
03-2222777 or booking online. You can also download the

app for free.


Tips
The tenses in the text may differ from those in the visual stimulus. The highlighted words are also a
guide to the contents / structure
Be aware of which tense (past, present or continuous) to use. of the expected answers.



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14 Table - English Carnival Competition


Study the table below and use the information to complete the text.


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ENGLISH CARNIVAL STATE LEVEL
PRIMARY SCHOOL
3 – 4 MAY
th
rd

ALL PARTICIPANTS MUST BE PRESENT 30 MINUTES BEFORE THE COMPETITION.

DAY ACTIVITY VENUE TIME DETAILS
1. Poetry Recitation School Hall 9.00 a.m. 15 pairs
3 May Competition
Wednesday 2. Storytelling Competition Library 9.30 a.m. 12 participants
3. Public Speaking Language Room 10.00 a.m. 15 participants
4 May 1. Action Song School Hall 8.30 a.m. Theme: Friendship
Thursday 2. Choral Speaking School Hall 11.30 a.m. Theme: Happiness



duration
1. How many days is the carnival? 2 days


2. How many competitions are there on the first day?
3 competitions

3. What is the theme for Action Song? Friendship

venue
4. Where is Public Speaking held? Language Room

time
5. What time is the Story Telling Competition? 9.30 a.m




The highlighted words
are also a guide to the
contents / structure of
the expected answers.





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15 Notice - School Trip to Melaka


Study the notice below and use the information to complete the text.

TRIP TO MELAKA
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Instructions:
1. Pupils must get their parents' permission.
2. Pupils must wear their school uniforms.
3. Payment must be made before 15 April 202_.
4. The bus will leave the school at 8.00 a.m. on 1 May 202_.



The words in bold are important key words that can be found in the visual stimulus.


Dear Dad,
I have great news to tell you. My History teacher, Mr
Ramesh, is organising a (1) trip to Melaka by bus on 1 of
st
referring to people
May. It is a day trip and (2) two teachers will accompany
us on this trip. The journey will begin at (3) 8.00 o'clock time
in the morning and ends at 5.00 o'clock in the evening. I

wish to go but I must first get (4) your permission. Do not
provide
worry about food as the school will give us (5) breakfast
and lunch. I’ll have to pay RM 50 for the trip.

Dad, please give your consent.

Regards, The highlighted words
are also a guide to the
Benny. contents / structure of
the expected answers.





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16 Notes - An Internet Cafe
.
Study the notes below and use the information to complete the text.

INTERNET CAFE
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- provides internet access to the public-
Other activities
Cafe attendant
• reading newspapers,
• serves and assists all
customers magazines or books
• registers and records • drinks and snacks
usage of computers








Surfing Internet
• search for information
• receive and send emails
• play online games



Based on the notes and picture given, complete the text below with the correct
information.

The words in bold are important key words that can be found in the visual stimulus.


An Internet Café is a place which (1) provides Internet
access to the public. It also serves snacks and drinks for
referring to a person
a fee. A (2) cafe attendant is at the information counter

to serve and assist all customers. He also keeps records
of (3) the usage of computers. Customers can perform a
number of tasks at the café such as using the computers
root verb
to (4) search for information, receive and send emails or

play online games. For a fee, customers can relax on
The highlighted words
The highlighted words
the sofa to eat or drink while reading (5) newspapers, are also a guide to the
are also a guide to the
contents / structure of
contents / structure of
magazines or books. the expected answers.
the expected answers.
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17 Brochure - Sepilok Orangutan Sanctuary

Study the brochure below and use the information to complete the text.


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SEPILOK ORANGUTAN
SANCTUARY
-Largest in the world-


OPEN DAILY





Opening hours : 8.00 a.m. – 5.00 p.m.
Admission Fee : RM5 (Malaysian), RM30 (Non-Malaysian)

Rules to observe: DO NOT MISS THE DAILY
- Do not disturb the animals
- Do not feed the animals FEEDING TIMES OF
- Must be accompanied by our guides THE ORANGUTANS –
10 A.M. AND 3 P.M





time open
1. The sanctuary opens at 8.00 a.m.

Malaysians
2. The admission fee is RM5 for local and RM30 for
foreigners.
do not
3. Visitors are not allowed to disturb and feed the animals.


4. The feeding times occur twice a day at 10 a.m. and
3 p.m.
The highlighted words
are also a guide to the
5. All tours must be accompanied by guides. contents / structure of
the expected answers.







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18 Notes - The Koala

Study the notes below and use the information to complete the text.



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Habitat: Diet:
• live in eucalyptus trees • feed on eucalyptus leaves
• eastern Australia • do not drink much water





Characteristics: Habits:
• marsupials - pouched • sleep during the day,
mammal up to 18 hours
• young - born premature • rarely leave the tree
- develop further in the • sharp claws keep them
safety of a pouch aloft



The words in bold are important key words that can be found in the visual stimulus.


Do you know that koalas live in eucalyptus trees in
place
(1) eastern Australia? They feed on eucalyptus leaves
and (2) do not drink much water because they get
moisture from the leaves. In Aboriginal language, the same meaning as

word ‘koala’ means ‘no water’. Koalas doze most of the sleep
time (3) during the day. They hardly leave the trees and
they use their (4) sharp claws to keep aloft. They are not
bears though they look like bears. They are marsupials

which means their young are born premature and
(5) develop further in the safety of a pouch.

Tips
Sometimes, words from the visual stimulus are replaced with The highlighted words are also a
synonymous words in the text. The words have the same guide to the contents / structure
of the expected answers.
meaning and acts as a keyword to answering the question.




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19 Leaflet - Holiday English Programme


Study the leaflet below and use the information to complete the text.


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FUN HOLIDAY PROGRAMME AT JOY TUITION CENTRE

21 NOV – 22 DEC

• Speaking English in Fun Class
• Computer Art Class
• English Drama Class
• Language Games
• Treasure Hunts
Fun & Interesting ways *20% DISCOUNT FOR EARLY
to master English… BIRDS!




The words in bold are important key words that can be found in the visual stimulus.


Dear mum and dad,

I wish to improve my English. I came across this

leaflet on (1) Fun Holiday Programme. It is run by Joy
Tuition Centre. They offer (2) fun and interesting ways to
length of time
master English. The duration of the course is (3) from 21
November to 22 December. The activities look interesting

and innovative. They have Speaking English in Fun Class,
list of classes
(4) Language Games, Treasure Hunts, English Drama
Class and Computer Art Class. If we register early, we
can (5) get a 20% discount. I hope to get your permission

to join this programme.
The highlighted words
Love, are also a guide to the
oJohari. contents / structure of
the expected answers.





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20 Notes - Ways of Appreciating Others


Study the notes below and use the information to complete the text.


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To mothers, teachers and friends Buy or make a gift
• Give flower or bouquet of • Simple
flowers • Thought that counts
Ways of
appreciating
others



Do tasks
Express gratitude
• Say 'Thank You' • Help or assist others
• Give 'Thank You' card • Lighten burden



The words in bold are important key words that can be found in the visual stimulus.

Good morning to my teacher and friends. Today I want
to give a talk on ‘Ways of Appreciating Others’. We can
add ‘a’ to nouns
(1) give a flower or a bouquet of flowers to our mothers,
teachers or friends to show our appreciation. Another the following
simple and direct way is (2) to buy or make them a gift. sentence gives a clue
to the answer
The gift can be something simple as it is (3) the thought

that counts. Besides, we can also (4) help or assist others
to do their tasks to lighten their burden. Last but not least, refer to tense in the
same sentence to
we can just express our gratitude by (5) saying 'Thank know which to use
you' or giving a ‘Thank you’ card. Whatever ways you

choose, remember to do it from the bottom of your heart. The highlighted words
Lastly, thank you for your kind attention. are also a guide to the
contents / structure of
the expected answers.


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A Good Deed



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1 Helping an old man
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Look at three pictures. Write the story shown in the pictures. Write 35 words or more.








– queuing – stall – stood – apart – waited















– bent down – mask – floor – pick















– offered – new – thanked









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One afternoon, Halim was queuing up to buy Paragraph 1
food at his favourite food stall. All the customers Introduction: Describe
stood a metre apart from each other in the line. He what Halim was doing.
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waited patiently for his turn.

Suddenly, the old man in front of him squatting Paragraph 2
down. His face mask dropped on the floor and he Describe what the old man
wanted to pick it up. do

Without thinking twice, Halim quickly offered
him a new face mask as he always carried extra Paragraph 3
face masks in his bag. He was thankful to Halim for Conclusion: How did Halim
help him and his feeling of
his thoughtfulness. gratefulness



Tips
• Think of the overall storyline before you start writing.
• Use the words given as a guide to develop the story.
• Add in extra words to make your story interesting.



WORD Bank
squatting down – to bend your knees and lower yourself towards the ground so that you balance
on your feet
thoughtfulness – consideration for the needs of other people




















 Moral Value
Always be willing to help people in need especially the senior citizens.


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2 Helping a Little Lost Girl



Model Question

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Write a story based on the pictures below. You may use the words given to help you.
Write your answer in the space provided. Your story should be between 80 and 100
words.


1. 2.
















3. 4.

















• Where was Fatin last Friday night?
• What did she see?
• How did she feel about the little girl?
• What did the little girl tell her?
• What did she do to help the little girl?
• What happened after the seller made an announcement?
• Who came to look for the little girl?
• How did Fatin feel about the incident?


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Last Friday night, Fatin was strolling in the night
market near her neighbourhood when she saw a Paragraph 1
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little girl who was alone and crying. Fatin felt sorry Introduction: what did
Fatin see and do at the
for her and approached her. The girl told her that she night market
was lost and looking for her mother.
After comforting the little girl, Fatin took her to
look for her mother in vain. Then, she saw a seller Paragraph 2
with a loud speaker. She asked a favour from the What did Fatin do to help
the girl to look for her
helpful seller to make an announcement for the girl’s mother
mother.

Soon after the announcement, a desperate
looking woman rushed towards them. The little girl Paragraph 3
ran to her and hugged her happily. The mother Conclusion: what
thanked Fatin from the bottom of her heart. It was happened to the little girl
a meaningful day for Fatin because she had done a – end with a moral value
good deed.




WORD Bank
strolling – leisurely walk
desperate – hopeless, despair
bottom of her heart – with sincere and deep feeling
in vain – does not produce the result you word


















 Moral Value
Try to help someone in need whenever possible. You might save a life.


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3 Visit to an Old Folks' Home


Model Question


Write a story based on the pictures below. You may use the words given to help you.
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Write your answer in the space provided. Your story should be between 80 and 100
words.








– gathered – briefing – visiting – old
folks' home















– reached – cleaned – weeded – songs
– entertained














– left – delivered – goodies – enjoyed –
contribute









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Last weekend, Yakin and all the scouts gathered Paragraph 1
at the school hall. They listened to a briefing by their Introduction: what
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Scoutmaster before visiting the Caring Old Folks’ happened before the trip to
Home. They looked forward to the visit with great old folks’ home – describe
enthusiasm. their feelings
Once they reached, they worked in groups to
carry out various tasks. Some of them cleaned up Paragraph 2
the compound while some weeded the garden and What did the scouts do to
painted the walls. Yakin and a few others sang some help the residents of the old
melodious songs to entertain the residents of the old folks’ home
folks’ home.

Before they left, they helped their Scoutmaster
deliver some goodies to the residents. It was indeed Paragraph 3
Conclusion: what did they
a remarkable experience for each one of them. do before departing the
Although they were tired, they were very happy that home – end with a moral
they were able to contribute. value



Tips
You do not necessarily need to use all the words in the notes in your essay. You can use
synonymous words and phrases.



WORD Bank
enthusiasm – excited interest, eagerness
melodious – pleasant melody, tuneful
entertain – amuse
remarkable – extraordinary











 Moral Value
Everyone should help do something to contribute to the society.


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A Lesson



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4 Disobeying rules and orders
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Model Question


Look at three pictures. Write the story shown in the pictures. Write 35 words or more.







– pandemic – recess- masks – queued –
stand – metre apart














– end -line – pushed – teacher – fight















– sent – disciplinary – scolded –
apologised









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It was Covid 19 pandemic time. During recess, Paragraph 1
the pupils wore masks and queued up outside the Introduction: Describe how
classroom to go to the canteen. They had to stand did the pupils queue?
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one metre apart.

Nawi and his friend were the last two pupils in
the line. They started to get impatient and pushed Paragraph 2
one another. The teacher on-duty quickly went to Describe what happen
stop the fight.

The teacher sent them to the disciplinary
teacher. They were scolded badly for touching one Paragraph 3
another and not following the pandemic SOP. They Conclusion: how did they
feel when scolded by the
were ashamed and apologised to the teacher for disciplinary teacher
their actions.



Tips
• Use the words given as a guide to develop the story.
• Do not necessary use all the words given if you prefer to insert your own ideas



WORD Bank
pandemic – a disease that affects a wide geographical area and a large proportion of the
population
impatient – restless and intolerant of delays
disciplinary – for the purpose of imposing punishment
SOP – standard operating procedure
















 Moral Value
Always follow the rules and orders.


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5 Addicted to Computer Games


Model Question


Write a story based on the pictures below. You may use the words given to help you.
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Write your answer in the space provided. Your story should be between 80 and 100
words.








– engrossed – games – neglected –
studies















– before – examination – panic – studied
















– overslept – missed – regretted –
changed









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Last year, William was so engrossed in playing Paragraph 1
online games that he neglected his studies. He did not Introduction: what made
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bother to revise although his year-end examination him distracted from his
was around the corner. studies
The day before the examination, he started to
panic. His father had promised to buy him a new Paragraph 2
bicycle if he passed with flying colours. He studied What did he do before the
until the eleventh hour and fell asleep at the study examination
table.

The next morning, he overslept and had to rush
to the bus stop. Unfortunately, he missed the bus and
had to walk to school. When he reached the school, Paragraph 3
Conclusion: what
the first paper was over and his teacher was furious. happened on the day of
He regretted his actions and promised to change. examination - lesson he
From that day onwards, he turned over a new leaf learnt
and started to focus on his studies again.




Tips
You can start your essay by stating the time in which the incident/ story took place.




WORD Bank

engrossed – to give all your attention to something
neglected – failed to care for or attend to
around the corner – very near
the eleventh hour – at the last minute
turned over a new leaf – started behaving in a better way









 Moral Value
It is important to study consistently and do not do last minute preparation.


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6 A Failed Prank


Model Question


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Write a story based on the pictures below. You may use the words given to help you.
Write your answer in the space provided. Your story should be between 80 and 100
words.









– threw – scare – shocked – laughing















– prank – loosened – chair – collapsed –
headmaster – relief














– fell – rushed – another – could not
understand – learnt









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Last Tuesday, Ee Ren threw a plastic snake at Paragraph 1
Amy to scare her. She was so shocked, she almost Introduction: what the boy
did to frighten a girl
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fell down. Ee Ren bent over laughing. He loved
playing pranks.
One day, he loosened the teacher’s chair so
that the chair would collapse if anyone sat on it. But Paragraph 2
instead of their teacher, it was their headmaster who What prank the boy decided
to play on the teacher
came to relief the class.
Ee Ren rushed to sit on the chair. He fell hard
and the chair clattered to the ground. Everyone was
shocked while Ee Ren rubbed his sore back and Paragraph 3
stood up. He mumbled an apology and got another Conclusion: what
chair for the headmaster. The headmaster could not happened when the
understand Ee Ren’s bizarre behavior. However, Ee headmaster entered the
class
Ren had learnt his lesson. It was a close shave and - lesson he learnt
that was his last prank.



Tips
Study each picture for an idea on how to expand the notes given.



WORD Bank

prank – mischievous trick, practical joke
clattered – a loud unpleasant sound
mumbled – speak softly
bizarre – very strange
close shave – come very close to a dangerous situation










 Moral Value
Think about the possible dangers that could occur when playing a prank on someone.


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GRAMMAR PRACTICE Practice 3
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1. A 6. B
Pronouns 2. B 7. A
Practice 1 3. B 8. A
1. He 9. She 4. A 9. B
2. She 10. She 5. A 10. A
3. It 11. They Past Tense
4. They 12. They
5. She 13. He Practice 1
6. She 14. He 1. reached 8. planned
7. He 15. He/She 2. collected 9. hoped
8. We 3. visited 10. cleaned
4. crawled 11. was
Practice 2 5. jogged 12. were
1. I 6. their 6. watched 13. had
2. She 7. Its 7. cried 14. left
3. him 8. her
4. us 9. mine/it Practice 2
5. them 10. you/you 1. brought
Practice 3 2. led
1. I 6. her 3. broke
2. us 7. they 4. had
3. him 8. us 5. climbed
4. they 9. me Identifying Mistakes
5. me 10. yours
Practice 1
Subject-verb agreement
Practice 1 Hock Beng is my brother.
1. are 6. is Everyday, he (1) walk to 1. walks
2. is 7. are school. He listens carefully to
3. is 8. is his teachers and studies hard
4. am 9. are (2) at school. 2. in
5. are 10. are In the afternoon, (3) I and 3. Hock Beng
Hock Beng help his father at and I
Practice 2 his farm. We feed the chickens
1. was 6. were and collect the egg.(4) In the 4. At
2. were 7. was night, Hock Beng revises his
3. was 8. was lessons. He also helps (5) her 5. his
4. was 9. was siblings with their homework.
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5. 10.00 a.m.
Firman was alone at home.
He (1) feels hungry and 1. felt Practice 3
wanted to eat some biscuits. 1. May
He (2) when to the kitchen. 2. went 2. RM15 voucher
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rat. He screamed loudly for 4. 11.00 p.m.
(3) helped. Then he realised 3. help 5. Proton MyVi
no one (4) were around. So he 4. was
took a ladle and threw at the Practice 4
rat. The rat ran away. When 1. Adlina bt. Abdullah
his parents returned home, he 2. 018-9199525
told (5) they about the incident. 5. them 3. 6 days
4. Type B
5. 20%
Practice 3
Practice 5
1. I Know All
(1) At the school holidays, 1. During 2. Sunday
Siti and her family went to 3. 3.00 p.m.
the Sekayu Waterfall for 4. Car
a picnic. They went there 5. 06-2280456
(2) with car. Siti went swimming 2. by
with her brother and sister. Practice 6
They (3) than ate fried rice 3. then 1. helping a blind man
and some fruits for lunch. 2. giving her seat
(4) At the evening, they 4. In 3. an honest boy
collected seashells by the 4. with her siblings
shore. Later, they packed 5. diligent to do well
their things and went home
(5) happy. 5. happily Practice 7
1. the first of its kind in Southeast Asia
2. in February 2012
3. a tourist attraction
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Practice 1 5. is parked upside down
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2. Wednesday 1. with pastel colour
3. 3.15 p.m. 2. A simple wall lamp
4. bicycle 3. with a musical baby mobiles
5. Madam Rozanne Lee
4. of a flower
Practice 2 5. beautiful and cute baby pictures
1. Tan Boon Theng Practice 9
2. 5012035539 1. Art Attack, Cow Case, Food Factory
3. 10.5.2021 2. Dino Detective


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