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Subject
1 2 3 4 5 6
Bahasa Melayu ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔
WRITING Tatabahasa ✔ ✔ ✔ Year


Penulisan ✔ ✔ ✔ PBD
SYOK! Praktis PBD series features the concept English ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔
of 'Practice Make Perfect' and is specifi cally designed 6
based on Classroom Assessment (Pentaksiran Bilik Grammar ✔ ✔ ✔
Darjah or DSKP).
Writing ✔ ✔ ✔

This series is designed with formative practices that Matematik /

focus on enhancing pupils' writing skills. Side features Mathematics ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ KSSR SEMAKAN

like Spot the Mistakes and Writing Tips assist pupils as Sains / ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔
they work on every section. Science WRITING Based on the
A set of Test that highlights the writing section is also Sejarah ✔ ✔ ✔
provided to evaluate pupils' improvement in their Pendidikan Islam ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ DSKP
writing skills. This series is indeed the best choice to WRITING
guide pupils to write well. Pelajaran Jawi ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔



© Penerbitan Pelangi Sdn. Bhd. 2023 Patricia Teoh
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Tel: 03-8922 3993 Fax: 03-8926 1223 / 8920 2366 E-mail: [email protected] FRC326223
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CONTENTS







VOCABULARY ENRICHMENT V1 – V2


Section
A


• Information Transfer 1
Practices 1 – 10



Section
B

• Guided Writing 11

Practices 1 – 10


Section

C


Question 1
• Sentence Construction

Practices 1 – 10 32
Spot the Mistake 1 – 10

Question 2

• Note Expansion
Practices 1 – 10 52

Spot the Mistake 1 – 10



Final Year Assessment 76 – 78



ANSWERS A1 – A8










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Section Writing Question 1

C Sentence Construction






MODEL QUESTION & ANSWER
[25 marks]

Write a story based on the pictures below. You may use the words given to help you.
Write your answer in the space provided. Write your story between 80 to 100 words.
















– organised – Open Day – children’s – gathered – opening ceremony –

work – displayed – worked hard officiated – exhibition hall – exhibits







Past tense verb
Past tense verb








– proud – show off – satisfied – success
headmaster praised


TIPS

1. Study all pictures (if more than 1)
-ask all these questions (Who/What/Where) to get the overview of the story
2. Read and understand all the words given.
3. Identify the verbs (v).
4. Identify tenses – Past Tense
5. Build a storyline using all the words given if possible but not necessary.
6. Name the main characters in the story.
7. Try to end the story with a good closure/ moral value.

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English Year 6 Section C – Sentence Construction




Last Saturday, Sekolah Kebangsaan Ceria organised
Always check all the verbs
an Open Day for all parents to visit the school to see used are consistent
their children’s work on display. The teachers and pupils
worked hard for the event as they wanted to put their best

foot forward to ensure a total success .
Good expression
On the Open Day, all teachers and pupils gathered

gradually at the main hall for the opening ceremony. After
the headmaster had officiated the event, the visitors were
Usage of adverb
invited to the exhibition hall to look at all the exhibits.


The pupils were very excited and felt proud to show off
their work. Their headmaster was very happy and satisfied Usage of idiom
with the success of the exhibition. He praised the teachers

and the pupils for their hard work. The teachers and pupils
were happy that their hard work paid off.













Extra Tips to get Extra Marks:
1. Make sure to write the story in at least 3 paragraphs.
2. Insert new vocab, adjectives and adverbs when necessary.
3. Try to insert idioms, proverbs, similes or interesting expressions correctly.
4. Finally, read the story again to ensure the flow.
5. Check your spelling, grammar and punctuation carefully.



















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English Year 6 Section C – Sentence Construction
Practice 1




Write a story based on the pictures below. You may use the words given to help you.
Write your answer in the space provided. Write 50 words or more.

































 Do Dante and his family live near the Amazon River? TIPS
 What does his dad work as?
 How does his dad take the tourists out? • Look at all the pictures and the
 What does Dante do sometimes when he is not in school? questions given to think of the
overall story.
 Does his dad take the tourists to the best places to catch fish? • Add in extra ideas to make your
 Are all the fish good to eat? story interesting.
 Does his dad catch fish for the family to eat? • Add a simple conclusion/closure.

























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English Year 6 Section C – Sentence Construction
Practice 2




Write a story based on the pictures below. You may use the words given to help you.
Write your answer in the space provided. Write 50 words or more.
































➢ Where did Fatimah and her family go during the holiday?
➢ Who welcomed them with open arms?
➢ Did Fatimah meet up with her cousin?
➢ Were they happy to see each other after such a long time?
➢ Had they met up since the COVID-19 pandemic started in 2019?
➢ Did they share what they do during the pandemic lockdown?
➢ What did Fatimah and Siti do during the lockdown?
➢ Were Fatimah and Siti thankful that the pandemic was almost over?

























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English Year 6 Section C – Sentence Construction

Practice 3



Write a story based on the picture below. You may use the words given to help you.
Write your answer in the space provided. Write your story between 80 to 100 words.


































iron watching television movie interrupted adjust
carried away forgot totally smelt lifted up hole upset



Begin your story with:

One weekend, Melina was doing housework at home. She was helping her mother to ...















TIPS
• Usually in a single picture, the picture shows the climax of the story.
• Add in interesting expression or feelings to enhance the story.


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English Year 6 Section C – Sentence Construction

SPOT the Mistakes 1


Use the words given to write a sentence about the picture.
















used – wake – early - weekdays


Wrong answer:
I am used to wake up early on weekdays. 7

Do you know what is wrong with this sentence?
You do not need a verb-to-be before another verb for direct speech.
Correct answer:
I used to wake up early on weekdays. 3

SPOT the Mistakes 2


Use the words given to write a sentence about the picture.

















-often – mistakes – speak - English

Wrong answer:
I often do mistakes when I speak English. 7
Do you know what is wrong with this sentence?
Wrong usage of verb-make mistakes as it means to do something incorrectly.

Correct answer:
I often make mistakes when I speak English. 3

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English Year 6 Section C – Sentence Construction
SPOT the Mistakes 3


Use the words given to write a sentence about the picture.

















admitted – cheated – examination


Wrong answer:
The boy admitted he cheated in the examination. 7

Do you know what is wrong with this sentence?
A verb-to-be is needed to show Past Perfect Tense.

Correct answer:
The boy admitted he had cheated in the examination. 3

SPOT the Mistakes 4


Use the words given to write a sentence about the picture.
















drove – beach – car


Wrong answer:
Mr Samy drove his family to the beach by his new car. 7
Do you know what is wrong with this sentence?
Wrong usage of preposition by

Correct answer:
Mr Samy drove his family to the beach in his new car. 3

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English Year 6 Section C – Sentence Construction

Practice 4



Write a story based on the picture below. You may use the words given to help you.
Write your answer in the space provided. Write your story between 80 to 100 words.









– went – Cineplex – showing – long
queue – waiting
















– reached – counter – forgot – wallet
– embarrassed
















– met – neighbour – invited – join –
movie – thanked










TIPS

• Study the 3 picture to get the flow of the story.
• Try to add new ideas to make your story interesting.



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English Year 6 Section C – Sentence Construction















































































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English Year 6 Section C – Sentence Construction

Practice 5



Write a story based on the pictures below. You may use the words given to help you.
Write your answer in the space provided. Write your story between 80 to 100 words.



– Sports Day

– school field

– decorated

– parents to support

– took part

– ready


– daydreaming

– congratulated

– looked up

– alone

– starting line

– disappointed







TIPS
• Study all the pictures and
words given to develop
storyline for the story.
• Use suitable idiom like
butterflies in the stomach to
enhance your story.












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English Year 6 Section C – Sentence Construction
SPOT the Mistakes 5


Use the words given to write a sentence about the picture.

















finally – found – kitten

Wrong answer:
When Lily finally found her kitten, she was so happy. 7

Do you know what is wrong with this sentence?
The pronoun she is not clear whether referring to Lily or the kitten.

Correct answer:
Lily was so happy when she finally found her kitten. 3

SPOT the Mistakes 6


Use the words given to write a sentence about the picture.
















Giraffe – tallest – animal – world


Wrong answer:
Giraffe is the most tallest animal in the world. 7
Do you know what is wrong with this sentence?
The word ‘most’ is not needed when it is a superlative adjective.
Correct answer:
Giraffe is the tallest animal in the world. 3


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English Year 6 Section C – Sentence Construction
Practice 6




Write a story based on the picture below. You may use the words given to help you.
Write your answer in the space provided. Write your story between 80 to 100 words.


– graveyard

– heard

– voice


– looked back

– old lady

– filthy hair

– stared

– walking towards

– stretch out

– screamed


– relieved

– nightmare


Begin your story with:

One night , after a hearty meal, I went out for a stroll. I was alone ...


TIPS

• Create climax of the story-
focus on describing the
scary situation.
• Use adjectives and adverbs
to make interesting
sentences.










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English Year 6 Answers

ANSWERS





SECTION A Practice 6
Practice 1 1. Laura Ingalls Wilder

2. Laura, father, mother, Mary and baby Carrie
1. Taiping
3. to a new town
2. The Peculiar Children
4. survival skills
3. RM33 5. family values, honesty and hard work
4. Kota Car Park
5. 6.30 p.m. Practice 7
Practice 2 1. shape of potato chips
2. drop the yam chips
1. Saturday 3. in the fridge
2. 3 / Three 4. deep enough oil
5. sieve them out
3. RM12
4. 7.30 p.m. Practice 8
5. 010 2432 545
1. Never discipline your child
Practice 3 2. get to know your child’s friends
3. in the car
1. enjoy the swings 4. believe what they say
2. on the monkey bars 5. behaviour or attitude
3. a slide Practice
4. sliding down happily 9
5. with pony tails 1. Toyotomi Hideyoshi
2. storeroom
Practice 4 3. on a platform
4. eight stories
1. show their appreciation 5. safeguard from enemies
2. a bouquet of roses
3. it is more useful and practical Section B
4. at Aeon Mall Practice 1
5. greetings and signatures
To [email protected]
Practice 5 From [email protected]
Hi!
1. of reading glasses Yes, I would like to visit James with you, thanks
2. some fertilizer for inviting me along. I heard that he fell when he was
3. with a ball playing football. I suggest that we buy him some fruit
like apples which is his favourite. We can go after school
4. is wearing a cap on Thursday as I’m free, I hope you are free too. Bye
5. under the shady tree and do update me.
Regards,
Nathan


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English Year 6 Answers

Practice 2 B (ii)

A very good morning to the headmaster, teachers and
To [email protected] friends. Our school is going to raise funds for our school
From project. There are several ways to do so.

Hi Lokman, Firstly, we can sell handicrafts like making book
So, you went to the mountains. I wasn’t so lucky. marks and key chains with seashells. They will be sold
I went to the art gallery with my grandfather but it at RM2 per piece and Madam Wong is in-charge of
wasn’t very interesting. We walked a lot and saw many this project. Secondly, we can sell second hand items
things but these things were boring. I think next time
I’ll go to the mountains with you! like books, clothes and toys. They will be sold for not
more than RM5 per item. Please refer to Mr Jonathan
Regards, for further details. Lastly, we can help to tutor our
… neighbours' kids for RM5 per hour during our free time.
You can refer to the notice board for further details
Practice 3 of the project. Thank you very much for your attention.

B (i)
1. Theme Garden Practice 5
2. Knowledge Tree
B (i)
3. Language Corner
1. Pastry by Mr Foo
2. Cakes by Miss Sue
B (ii)
3. Buns by Madam Kuan
Dear Mum,
B (ii)
I will be joining the school project to beautify my Dear Sis,
school. I wish to join the Mural project. I have to go
I have exciting news for you. I saw an
to school every Saturday morning from 8.00 a.m. to 11 advertisement on cooking lessons. As you are always
a.m. to draw and colour the mural at the library. interested in learning cooking, I suggest you learn how
You know that I always like to draw and paint. to cook chicken chop from Mr Kent who is a well-known
chef. It is our favourite food, we can save cost in future
This is a golden opportunity to contribute to my school because you can cook for our family.
and leave some beautiful memories in my primary
The fee is only RM20 for class of 15. The number
school. I have to come out with a good motivation is just nice, not too many. The class is on Wednesday
quote for the mural too. I hope you allow me to be from 3.00 p.m. to 5.00 p.m. I know you are free on that
involved in this project. day.
You can invite your buddy, Damia, to join too. I
Your daughter, hope you will enjoy the class.
Qistina
Your sister,
Sarah
Practice 4 Practice 6


B (i) B (i)
1. old newspapers 1. Hiking up Penang Hill
2. cans 2. Walking along Heritage
3. plastic bottles 3. Horse Riding in the evening







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Year
SYOK! 6 FRC326223 Makes Perfect! PELANGI
Practice
PELANGI
PRAKTIS KSSR SEMAKAN SYOK!




PBD SYOK! Praktis PBD



Subject YEAR SYOK! Praktis PBD PRAKTIS
Subject
1 2 3 4 5 6
Bahasa Melayu ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔
WRITING Tatabahasa ✔ ✔ ✔ Year


Penulisan ✔ ✔ ✔ PBD
SYOK! Praktis PBD series features the concept English ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔
of 'Practice Make Perfect' and is specifi cally designed 6
based on Classroom Assessment (Pentaksiran Bilik Grammar ✔ ✔ ✔
Darjah or DSKP).
Writing ✔ ✔ ✔

This series is designed with formative practices that Matematik /

focus on enhancing pupils' writing skills. Side features Mathematics ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ KSSR SEMAKAN

like Spot the Mistakes and Writing Tips assist pupils as Sains / ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔
they work on every section. Science WRITING Based on the
A set of Test that highlights the writing section is also Sejarah ✔ ✔ ✔
provided to evaluate pupils' improvement in their Pendidikan Islam ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ DSKP
writing skills. This series is indeed the best choice to WRITING
guide pupils to write well. Pelajaran Jawi ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔ ✔



© Penerbitan Pelangi Sdn. Bhd. 2023 Patricia Teoh
All rights reserved. No part of this book may be reproduced, stored in a retrieval system, or transmitted in
any form or by any means, electronic, photocopying, mechanical, recording or otherwise, without the prior (Guru Cemerlang)
permission of Penerbitan Pelangi Sdn. Bhd.

First Published 2023 Year 6

Vocabulary Enrichment



www.PelangiBooks.com Spot the Mistakes

• Online Bookstore • Online Library •
Writing Tips

Enrichment Practices
Penerbitan Pelangi Sdn. Bhd. (89120-H)
Lot 8, Jalan P10/10, Kawasan Perusahaan Bangi, Bandar Baru Bangi, W.M: RM7.50 / E.M: RM7.80 Final Year Assessment
43650 Bangi, Selangor Darul Ehsan, Malaysia.
Tel: 03-8922 3993 Fax: 03-8926 1223 / 8920 2366 E-mail: [email protected] FRC326223
PELANGI
Enquiry: [email protected] ISBN: 978-967-0077-05-5
Complete Answers
Printed in Malaysia by The Commercial Press Sdn. Bhd.
Lot 8, Jalan P10/10, Kawasan Perusahaan Bangi, Bandar Baru Bangi, 43650 Bangi, Selangor Darul Ehsan, Malaysia..
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