Geec 1042 500 no 2 To: [email protected] From: [email protected] Subject: student education Dear Shah, I wanted to bring up a topic that has been on my mind lately, the financial struggles that many students face when trying to attend school. As you know education is often seen as the gateway to a better and brighter future, but for many students, the financial burden of attending school can be overwhelming, from tuition fees to living expenses. I think it's something that needs more attention and consideration, especially for those who may not understand just how difficult it can be. As a student, I have personally experienced the challenges of trying to make ends meet while pursuing my education. The cost of tuition, textbooks, and other educational expenses can be overwhelming, especially for those who come from low-income families. Many students are forced to work part-time jobs or take out loans in order to afford their education. It's a lot to handle, and it can be overwhelming at times, which can lead to additional stress and mental health issues. In addition, the rising cost of living in many cities makes it even more difficult for students to manage their finances. Rent, food, transportation, and other basic needs can consume a significant portion of a student's budget, leaving little room for educational expenses. This often results in students having to choose between paying for their education or covering their basic living expenses. More than the current unstable economy, the prices of all necessities are increasing. It’s will be more deficult than you are think I've seen firsthand how these financial struggles can impact a student's academic performance and overall well-being. It's not easy to focus on your studies when you're constantly worried about how you're going to pay your bills or afford food. And the sad reality is that some students are forced to drop out of school altogether because they simply can't afford to continue.
Furthermore, if you remember in the past the COVID-19 pandemic only worsened this financial challenge for many students. The sudden shift to online learning has created additional costs for technology and internet access, which many students cannot afford. Additionally, the economic downturn has caused job losses and financial instability for many families, making it more difficult for students to support themselves financially through school. I believe that as a society, we need to do more to support students who are facing these challenges. There are scholarships and financial aid options available, but they are often limited and competitive. I think there should be more resources and opportunities for students who are struggling financially, so that they can focus on their education without constantly worrying about money. I hope that we can continue to have these discussions and work towards making education more accessible for all. It's a vital part of ensuring that everyone has the opportunity to reach their full potential. Thanks for listening, and I hope we can work together to make a difference Your Friend, (Afif)
PROCESS OF WRITING FORM Name: MUHAMMAD AFIF IRFAN BIN AZROL Title of the Essay: EDUCATION Text type: EMAIL Step Notes Date Prewriting issue-students have financial problems to attend scholl -send email to Shah - tell about financial problem as former student -collect the content in the article -create an outline based on the content -make a email -seach a information from internet such - https://d1wqtxts1xzle7.cloudfront.net/51993245/Financial_behavior_and_pr oblems_among_university_s-libre.pdf?1488436815=&response-contentdisposition=inline%3B+filename%3DFinancial_behavior_and_problems_am ong_un.pdf&Expires=1700761529&Signature=EpALBI6jxoXUSJ5SS2qYzA 5w59hT6OjT4sKo20tj7enLdxAaAxKjmCxggkWx9vQAQftZb9MoNSxhwB8ntUZ~i~SKuAMIvRpWHxnceX00A~Ttac7vHzV7KnF6~iM74 2QuEefDus6jLu6Z6Yo7hOlinnTm2ZDvR~0SOUuQZGPqzjYHXE1d5GOGe oyJ5t9nRehxB60HXpjApEepFLBlwPRj6~sbKaxprkJFDlw3W91vBDJwMITC nVFJFmJhCSmH4VxciKQfaz7LDt9gsNYmRD6iZJeRIMwykUKUpdW0OV3t2ESk 1x33Unw1KiN8mf2cfW-URF~cvlZWZXgYKZFOVbjQ__&Key-PairId=APKAJLOHF5GGSLRBV4ZA -Financial Issues Experienced by Students in Private Higher Educat...: Ingenta Connect -23ecde36de8bc1cd7c4af9bd5b92cf6df050.pdf (semanticscholar.org) -Resilien-Akademik-dalam-kalangan-Murid-B40.pdf (researchgate.net) -Financial_behavior_and_problems_among_university_s-libre.pdf (d1wqtxts1xzle7.cloudfront.net) -https://jrmg.um.edu.my/index.php/JIIE/article/view/41118 -https://www.academia.edu/download/74954207/pdf.pdf -https://msocialsciences.com/index.php/mjssh/article/view/1653 - https://scholar.archive.org/work/nyf54yyjcnc7xf6xloq6apbdcq/access/wayba ck/https://ejournal.iainbengkulu.ac.id/index.php/alilmi/article/download/4074/ pdf - Drafting list the content • introduce what student feel when financial • tell as experienced student, cost for study and living from low income family • some student have to work part time job • will have mental issue • cost for food, basic needs and tuition fees
• financial will impact studies • in covid-19 era student are forced to money • suddently shif to online learning • parents loss job - there are have a society but not enough - limited offer for scholarship - hope there are have someone for help needes student chose issue make a email Revising Introduce -education is often seen as the gateway to a better, but for many students, the financial burden of attending school can be overwhelming, from tuition fees to living expenses experience as student and cost • student have to find job for survive for education and life • low income family problems • its will burn your mental health cost for living • food,transportation and basic needed • educational expenses • student need to choose educatition or living expenses • unstable economy • price all increasing financial can affect academic • it's not good to study while you are thinking from paying bils and food • some student forced to drop out his studies In covid 19 era • financial challenge for student • many people lost his job • economic down • financial instability for many family • its be more difficult for student society • scholarships and aid option available • but its limited and competitive • a contribution from any resources hope • to get everyone education full potential Editing make a grammar corection I wanted to bring up a topic that has been on my mind lately, the financial struggles that many students face when trying to attend school. As you know education is often seen as the gateway to a better and brighter future, but for many students, the financial burden of attending school can be overwhelming, from tuition fees to living expenses. I think it's something that needs more attention and consideration, especially for those who may not understand just how difficult it can be. As a student, I have personally experienced the challenges of trying to make ends meet while pursuing my education. The cost of tuition, textbooks, and
other educational expenses can be overwhelming, especially for those who come from low-income families. Many students are forced to work part-time jobs or take out loans in order to afford their education. It's a lot to handle, and it can be overwhelming at times, which can lead to additional stress and mental health issues. In addition, the rising cost of living in many cities makes it even more difficult for students to manage their finances. Rent, food, transportation, and other basic needs can consume a significant portion of a student's budget, leaving little room for educational expenses. This often results in students having to choose between paying for their education or covering their basic living expenses. More than the current unstable economy, the prices of all necessities are increasing. It’s will be more deficult than you are think I've seen firsthand how these financial struggles can impact a student's academic performance and overall well-being. It's not easy to focus on your studies when you're constantly worried about how you're going to pay your bills or afford food. And the sad reality is that some students are forced to drop out of school altogether because they simply can't afford to continue. Furthermore, if you remember in the past the COVID-19 pandemic only worsened this financial challenge for many students. The sudden shift to online learning has created additional costs for technology and internet access, which many students cannot afford. Additionally, the economic downturn has caused job losses and financial instability for many families, making it more difficult for students to support themselves financially through school. I believe that as a society, we need to do more to support students who are facing these challenges. There are scholarships and financial aid options available, but they are often limited and competitive. I think there should be more resources and opportunities for students who are struggling financially, so that they can focus on their education without constantly worrying about money. I hope that we can continue to have these discussions and work towards making education more accessible for all. It's a vital part of ensuring that everyone has the opportunity to reach their full potential. Thanks for listening, and I hope we can work together to make a difference Your Friend, (Afif) Publishing publish in internet