IRRELEVANT SENTENCES By : Vanboyskoygirls
Irrelevant is a sentence not Related main idea
MY SISTER LIZ 1 Irralevant Sentences : Her favorite meal is a double cheeseburger with French fries, a milkshake,and an ice cream sundae. My sister Liz was born lucky. She has a beautiful smile. When she does something bad,she smiles and my parents are not angry. She eats a lot and does not get fat. Her favorite meal is a double cheeseburger with French fries, a milkshake,and an ice cream sundae. She does not study hard but always gets good grades. After school,she does her homework in five minutes while she watches television at the same time. In conclusion,I believe that some people are born lucky,and some are not. 1
2 Unity As you know, a good paragraph has three parts : a topic sentence, supporting sentences, and concluding sentence. But a good paragraph also has unity. Unity means that all of the supporting sentences are about the controlling idea in the topic sentence. Think about the model paragraph above. Topic sentence : My sister Liz was born lucky. ( Controlling idea) Main supporting sentence : She has a beautiful smile. She eats a lot and does not get fat. She does not study hard but always gets good grades. 1. 2. 3. This paragraph has unity. All the supporting sentences are about why she was born lucky. ORGANIZING
3 EXAMPLE : My sister jamie is very shy. When there are other people around,she speaks very little. Sometimes she does not speak at all and even runs away. She is very quiet at home and at school. You do not even know she is there sometimes. She is shy about her body,too. She never goes to the beach or swimming pool. But she likes ice cream and cookies. Irrelevant sentence : But she likes ice cream and cookies. The sentence “ But she likes ice cream and cookies. ’’ does not belong in the paragraph. It does not talk about why she is shy.
EXERCISE 1 1. George has not been lucky in school this year. He got sick and missed classes and could not take his finals. He also lost his books. These were not only his textbooks but also hit notebooks. Everybody likes George because he will go out of his way to help people. 4 Irrelevant sentence : Everybody likes George because he will go out of his way to help people. The sentence “ Everybody likes George because he will go out of his way to help people. ’’ does not belong in the paragraph. It does
EXERCISE 1 2. My roommate Tony is very untidy. He has brown hair and blue eyes. He leaves his laundry on the floor. When he cooks, he never washes the dishes. For a while, he had a bicycle on his bed. It is not surprising that Tony can never find anything. 5 Irrelevanr sentence : He has brown hair and blue eyes. The sentence “ He has brown hair and blue eyes. ’’ does not belong in the paragraph. It does
EXERCISE 1 3. My uncle Conrad is very clumsy. When he drinks coffee, he always spill some on his shirt. In the shopping mall, he walks into other people all time. He has size 14 feet. Last time he came to our house, he sat on the cat. 6 Irrelevant sentence : He has size 14 feet. The sentence “ He has size 14 feet. ’’ does not belong in the paragraph because the main idea is that my uncle Conrad is very clumsy.
EXERCISE 1 4. Aunt Dotty loves adventure. On her sixteenth birthday, she went mountain climbing in the Alps. On her seventieth birthday, she went on a trip to the North Pole. When she was eighty, she drove alone across the United States. She loves to eat chocolate. We all wonder what she will do when she is ninety. 7 Irrelevant sentence : She loves to eat chocolate. The sentence “ She loves to eat chocolate. ’’ does not belong in the paragraph because the main idea is that Aunt Dotty loves adventure.
lucky : โชคดี VOCABULARY LIST 8 VOCABULARY LIST parents : ผู้ปกครอง , พ่อแม่ conclusion : บทสรุป missed : พลาด roommate : เพื่อนร่วมห้อง untidy : ไม่เป็นระเบียบ,รก laundry : ซักผ้า clumsy : ซุ่มซ่าม spill : หก,กระฉอก climbing : การปีนป่าย across : ข้าม,ผ่าน adventure : ผจญภัย
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THIS MINI-BOOK IS MADE BY Miss Chalisa Miss Piyanuch Miss Chonlarat Miss Nurlira Miss Sanicha Thommaporn konsanit Nonsriprai Samae Phoolperm Class 6/2 Presented to Mr. Aliyah Mama as a project of English reading and writing 3 subject semester 1 / 2023 number number number number number 10 12 15 25 34
IRRELEVANT SENTENCES