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Comparison and Contrast
Title: Apple vs Android
Purpose: Show different between Apple and Android.
Audience: People who consider about buying new phone between Apple and Android.
Topic sentence: Buying a new phone depends on an user's usage and a function of each phone.

Point 1. convenience
A. Apple has a centralized service like iTunes, Apple Store, and iCloud that allowed the users

can use various features with ease.
B. Android can freely customize the display or function to suit our preferences.

Point 2. Durable in long term
A. Apple tend to be more durable in long term because It is constantly updated and can

delete cash by yourself without loading application.
B. Android's performance will gradually decline because of junk and cash. It doesn't have

application to delete these. User have to install it by themselves.

Point 3. Camera Quality
A. Apple camera runs by iOS system which has more stability. The resulting photo will be

natural and realistic.
B. Android camera has a Space Zoom 100x and function that can modify the photo more

beauty.

Concluding: Both have their own pros and cons but I prefer Apple because of its more durable in
long term than android and centralized service that can made user use easier.

Draft#1

Apple vs Android

Nowadays, a phone is one of the items that everyone carries with them.
Whether a child or an adult, everybody has a phone. It looks like it is accessible
and has functions that suit everyone. But it's not entirely correct, it depends on
the user's usage too. So, when it comes to choosing a phone, some particular
phone might be more suitable than one another. There are 2 brands that are very
popular today, Apple and Android. Both have their own advantages that the other
does not have. So, the function, features and usage characteristics will help you
decide which one to buy.

Let's look at first comparison, convenience. Apple has a centralized service
like iTunes, Apple Store, and iCloud that allows the users to use various features
with ease while Android has a Play Store and can freely customize the display or
function to suit our preferences. Apple looks a little better because of Icare that
can help when the user has a problem. Next is durability. Apple tends to be more
durable in the long term because it is constantly updated and can delete cash by
itself without loading application while Android's performance will gradually
decline because of junk and cash. Users have to install the application to delete
junk and cash by themselves but because it is not an official application so it can’t
guarantee that the cash will be deleted. The last one is the camera quality. Apple
camera runs by iOS system which has more stability. The result photo will be
natural and realistic but Android camera can modify the photo to be more
beautiful and has an advantage at zooming, Android has developed a zoom
function that makes Android can zoom 100x while the photo quality is still good.

Overall, when buying a phone, you should consider about what you want
from the phone and make the decision base on your usage and preference, so that
you will get the most use of it without any regrets. Both have their own pros and
cons but I prefer Apple because of its more durable in long term than android and
centralized service that can made user use easier.

Words count: 363

Draft#2

Apple vs Android

Nowadays, a phone is one of the items that everyone carries with them.
Whether a child or an adult, everybody has a phone. It looks like it is accessible
and has functions that suit everyone. But it's not entirely correct, it depends on
the user's usage too. So, when it comes to choosing a phone, some particular
phone might be more suitable than one another. There are 2 brands that are very
popular today, Apple and Android. Both have their own advantages that the other
does not have. So, the function, features and usage characteristics will help you
decide which one to buy.

Let's look at first comparison, convenience. Apple has a centralized service
like iTunes, Apple Store, and iCloud that allows the users to use various features
with ease while Android has a Play Store and can freely customize the display or
function to suit our preferences. Apple looks a little better because of Icare that
can help when the user has a problem. Next is durability. Apple tends to be more
durable in the long term because it is constantly updated and can delete cash by
itself without loading application while Android's performance will gradually
decline because of junk and cash. Users have to install the application to delete
junk and cash by themselves but because it is not an official application so it can’t
guarantee that the cash will be deleted. The last one is the camera quality. Apple
camera runs by iOS system which has more stability. The result photo will be
natural and realistic but Android camera can modify the photo to be more
beautiful and has an advantage at zooming, Android has developed a zoom
function that makes Android can zoom 100x while the photo quality is still good.

Overall, Apple is better than Android at convenience and service while
Android is better at camera and customization. This comparation shows that both
brands have strong and weak points. when buying a phone, you should consider
about what you want from the phone and make the decision base on your usage
and preference, so that you will get the most use of it without any regrets.

Words count: 361

Chaivith Phanangnuwong
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Audience: People who are thinking about which brand of phone to buy.

Purpose: Give an advice to help people decide which phone brand to buy.

Title: Apple vs Android

Apple vs Android

Nowadays, a phone is one of the items that everyone carries with them. Whether a child
or an adult, everybody has a phone. It looks like it is accessible and has functions that suit
everyone. But it's not entirely correct, it depends on the user's usage too. So, when it comes to
choosing a phone, some particular phone might be more suitable than one another. There are 2
brands that are very popular today, Apple and Android. Both have their own advantages that
the other does not have. So, the function, features and usage characteristics will help you decide
which one to buy.

Let's look at the first comparison, convenience. Apple has a centralized service like
iTunes, Apple Store, and iCloud that allows the users to use various features with ease while
Android has a Play Store and can freely customize the display or function to suit our
preferences. Apple looks a little better because of Icare, which know as a good service and it's
easy to find when compare to the Android, that can help when the user has a problem. Next
one is durability. Apple tends to be more durable in the long term because it is constantly
updated and can delete cache by itself without loading application while Android's performance
will gradually decline because of junk and cache. Users have to install the application to delete
junk and cache by themselves but because it is not an official application so it can’t guarantee
that the cache will be deleted. The last one is the camera quality. Apple camera runs by IOS
system which has more stability. The resulting photo will be natural and realistic, night mode
also good too. Android camera can modify the photo to be more beautiful and has an advantage
at zooming, Android has developed a zoom function that makes Android can zoom 100x while
the photo quality is still good, that has become one of the best features and another major selling
point.

Overall, Apple is slightly better than Android at convenience and service while Android
is better at camera and customization. This comparation shows us that both brands have strong
and weak points. When you have a plane to buy a phone, you should consider about what you
want from the phone and make the decision based on your usage and preference, so that you
will get the most use of it without any regrets.

Words count: 403

Peer-response Form for Writing assignments

Peer-Response Form for Author

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Writing assignment # ___3____ (Listing, Sequence, Compare-contrast, Cause-effect)

PART ONE: QUANTITATIVE ASSESSMENT

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PART TWO: QUALITATIVE ASSESSMENT
Directions: Please answer the following two questions and provide examples, evidence and suggestions
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1) What is the most valuable contribution your peer makes to your writing?
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Peer-response Form for Writing assignments

Peer-Response Form for Peer
Your Name: _W_a_n_v_is_a_U_b_o_lr_at_______________________________________________________
Author’s name: _C_h_a_iv_i_th_P_h_a_na_n_g_nu_w_o_n_g______________________________________________
Writing assignment # __3_____ (Listing, Sequence, Compare-contrast, Cause-effect)

PART ONE: QUANTITATIVE ASSESSMENT

üDirections: Check one box with for each of these areas.

Cooperative Learning Skills: (You as a peer) Strongly Agree Neutral Disagree Strongly

1. Gives constructive and useful feedback for agree disagree
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PART TWO: QUALITATIVE ASSESSMENT
Directions: Please answer the following two questions and provide examples, evidence and suggestions
as necessary.

1) What is the most valuable contribution you gave to the author?
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2) What is the most important thing you have learned from your peer’s writing?
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Portfolio Self-Assignment Form 2020
Name _Chaivith Phanangnuwong__________ Assignments # ____3____________________________
Course English writing___________________ Section ___180______ Date 3/11/2020

Short Description of the work samples:
This work will give the reader a difference between Apple and Android.
Why have I chosen these work samples for my portfolio? How do these works show my writing development?

Because I can organize the information really well so the reader can understand easily. This work help improve my
writing skill and that make me can organizing the information well.
What do these assignments show the writing skills I have learned? What are my strengths?
I have used a comparison-contrast to show reader the difference between Apple and Android. My strengths is I ca
create a writing that the reader can understand easily.

What is/are the domain(s) that I did very well in these pieces of writing? Rank 1 – 4 (1 = the most; 4 = the least)

____3_ Ideas and content __1___ Organization

___2__ Voice ___4__ Convention

What activities help you improve your writing skills? You can choose more than one.

⃞ First drafting ⃞ Journal writing ⃞ Portfolio Assessment

⃞ Peer response ⃞ Teacher-student conference ⃞ Pre-writing modeling

What is/are the domain(s) that I need to improve? You can choose more than one.

Ideas and content: Explain I think my content can’t attract people that much.

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Organization: Explain __________________________________________________________________

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Voice: Explain ________________________________________________________________________

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Convention: Explain ___________________________________________________________________

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To what extend does self-assessment help me improve my writing ability? Circle the number on the scale below.
Least 1 2 3 4 Most

Other comments, plan for improving your writing, or suggestions (You can write more on the other side)
Try to read more article to study techniques from that article. ___________________________________
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