1. BI PENULISAN Guidelines Section B

UPSR
BAHASA INGGERIS

Section B (ii)
Formatted

Writing

Prepared by :
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July 2019

This module is designed for the GALUS
students which have D and E in their
result for Paper 2 especially those
who always get “zero” for Section C.

It is a scripted writing where students
need to memorize the templates. We
believe that later on, these students

will be able to construct the sentences
by themselves.

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CHAPTER 1

Section B (ii)
Formatted

Writing

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MY REFERENCE : YEAR 6 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 45)

A GOOD PARAGRAPH

MAIN IDEA
The key concept of a paragraph

SUPPORTING DETAIL
Explain the main idea by
providing details and examples

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MY REFERENCE : YEAR 6 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 56)

A GOOD PARAGRAPH

CONCLUDING SENTENCE
• Summarises the main idea of

the paragraph.
• Written in a single sentences

using your own words.
• The last sentence in a

paragraph.
• Should not introduce any new

ideas.
• May use linking words such as

so, thus, therefore and hence.

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MY REFERENCE : YEAR 6 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 99)

A GOOD COMPOSITION

Have a good organization of
paragraphs.

Usually have FIVE paragraphs.

1st paragraph : The Introduction

2nd , 3rd & 4th paragraphs :
The body

5th paragraph : The conclusion

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MY REFERENCE : YEAR 6 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 108)

Each Paragraph should contain :
Main Idea

Supporting Detail
Conclusion

A good composition should
have 5 paragraphs.

Each composition should
contain :

1st paragraph : The Introduction
2nd – 4th paragraph : The Body
5th paragraph : The Conclusion

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CHAPTER 2

Section B (ii)
Formatted

Writing

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SAMPLE QUESTION FOR SECTION B

SECTION B = 15 marks

B(i) = 3 marks :
Information transfer

B(ii) = 12 marks :
Formatted Writing

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MY REFERENCE : YEAR 6 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 47)

THE STEPS

Study the question given.

Elicit the keywords using the
F-T-C Method.

Write the draft using the
M-I-S-D Table.

Check spelling and grammar.
Write in the space provided.

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NOTES FOR GALUS PUPILS

For GALUS pupils, just focus on getting them
to write the main idea first.

They just need to write 1 to 3 paragraphs
only.

They need to memorize the templates with
the scripted sentences. In order to do that,

exercises should be given on weekly basis.

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CHAPTER 3

Section B (ii)
Formatted

Writing

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THE TYPES OF FOMATTED WRITING

Informal E-mail Message
Letter

Formal Postcard Notice
Letter

Speech

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CHAPTER 4

Section B (ii)
Formatted

Writing



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MY REFERENCE : YEAR 5 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 66)

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THE TEMPLATE : WRITING AN INFORMAL LETTER

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE
Salutation
Dear___________________ ,
1st Paragraph
(Greeting) How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am writing to tell
you about ___________________________________________________ .
2nd Paragraph (copy the keywords from the question given).
(Content)
MI
MI = Main Idea 1
SD = Supporting
Detail SD

MI
2

SD

MI
3

SD

3rd Paragraph That is all from me. Take care! Bye!

Signing off & Sincerely,
Name of the _____________
writer

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THE BLANK TEMPLATE : WRITING AN INFORMAL LETTER

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE
Salutation
1st Paragraph MI
(Greeting) 1

2nd Paragraph SD
(Content)
MI = Main Idea MI
SD = Supporting 2
Detail
SD
3rd Paragraph
MI
3

SD

Signing off &
Name of the
writer

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THE STEPS : F – T - C

THE STEPS F
1. Identify the format. T
2. Define the target of your writing (to whom). C
3. Identify the content.

1. The format : 2. The
informal letter target :
friend

Sample Question :

You and your family went to Kuala Terengganu last school holiday. Write
an informal letter to your friend about at least 3 places you have visited
there. Write your answer between 50 to 80 words.

3. The Content :
places visited

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THE SAMPLE ANSWER (MISD TABLE)

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE
Salutation
Dear Khalida,
1st Paragraph
(Greeting) How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am writing to tell
you about interesting places you can visit in Kuala
2nd Paragraph Terengganu. (taken from the question)
(Content)
MI Pasar Besar Kedai Payang
MI = Main Idea
SD = Supporting 1 SD shopped local products and tasted traditional
Detail food

MI Bukit Puteri
2

SD watch panaromic view

MI Batu Buruk Beach
3

SD flying kites and building sandcastles

3rd Paragraph That is all from me. Take care! Bye!

Signing off & Sincerely,
Name of the Aqeef
writer

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THE SAMPLE ANSWER No. 19, Kg. Kuala Teh,
27000 Jerantut,
Pahang.

3 July 2019

Dear Khalida,
How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am writing to tell you about
interesting places you can visit in Kuala Terengganu.

Firstly, you must not miss visiting Pasar Besar Kedai Payang. You can shop
local products and tasted traditional food. Then, you can go to Bukit Puteri.
You can watch panaromic view there. Last but not least, you can go to Batu
Buruk Beach to see flying kites and building sandcastles.

That is all from me. Take care! Bye!

Sincerely,
Aqeef

(85 words)



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MY REFERENCE : YEAR 4 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 26)

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THE TEMPLATE : WRITING AN E-MAIL

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE
To : << email address >>
Subject : << refer to the question >>
Salutation Hi ___________________ ,
1st Paragraph
(Greeting) << use the information from the question >>

2nd Paragraph MI
(Content) 1
MI = Main Idea
SD = Supporting SD
Detail MI
2
3rd Paragraph SD
Signing off MI
3
SD
Thank you. Hope to see you soon.
<< name >>

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THE BLANK TEMPLATE : WRITING AN E-MAIL

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE
To :
Subject : MI
Salutation 1
1st Paragraph
(Greeting) SD

2nd Paragraph MI
(Content) 2
MI = Main Idea
SD = Supporting SD
Detail
MI
3rd Paragraph 3
Signing off
SD

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THE SAMPLE QUESTION

Read the flyer below. Answer the question that follow in the space provided.

Baca risalah di bawah. Kemudian jawab soalan-soalan yang berikutnya di ruang yang disediakan.

CHESS CLUB BADMINTON CLUB

• every Saturday and Sunday • every Wednesday and Friday
• 8.30 a.m. – 10.30 a.m. • 8.30 p.m. – 10.00 p.m.
• National Library • Community Hall
• RM80 monthly • RM50 monthly
• develop problem solving skills • build strength and stamina
• learn to be patient and focus • promote physical fitness
• teaching self-discipline • help to reduce stress

B (i) State three advantages of joining the Chess Club.

Nyatakan tiga kelebihan menyertai Kelab Catur.

(a)

(b)

(c)

[3 marks]

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SAMPLE QUESTION

B (ii) Your best friend is planning to choose a club. Write an e-mail to your friend to suggest him /
her the best club for him / her.
Write your answer between 50 and 80 words.

Kawan baik kamu sedang merancang untuk memilih sebuah kelab. Tulis emel kepadanya untuk mencadangkan
kelab yang terbaik untuknya.
Panjangnya jawapan kamu hendaklah antara 50 hingga 80 patah perkataan.

_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________

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THE STEPS : F – T - C

THE STEPS F
1. Identify the format. T
2. Define the target of your writing (to whom). C
3. Identify the content.

2. The 1. The
target : format :
best friend
e-mail

B (ii) Your best friend is planning to choose a club. Write an e-mail to your friend to suggest him /
her the best club for him / her.
Write your answer between 50 and 80 words.

Kawan baik kamu sedang merancang untuk memilih sebuah kelab. Tulis emel kepadanya untuk mencadangkan
kelab yang terbaik untuknya.
Panjangnya jawapan kamu hendaklah antara 50 hingga 80 patah perkataan.

______________________C__o3_n._tT_e_h_ne_t__: _________________________________________________
_______________________t_h_e__b_e__s_t__________________________________________________
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THE SAMPLE ANSWER (MISD TABLE)

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE
To :
Subject : [email protected]
Salutation Badminton Club
Hi Nita,
1st Paragraph
(Greeting) I heard that you are planning to choose a club. I would like
to suggest the Badminton Club.
2nd Paragraph (the red words were taken from the question)
(Content)
MI = Main Idea MI It starts at 8.30 p.m. and finishes at 10.30 p.m.
SD = Supporting 1
Detail
SD It is convenience to you.
3rd Paragraph MI It will be at the Community Hall.
Signing off 2
SD It is near to your house.
MI The fee is only RM50 monthly.
3
SD It is reasonable and worthy.
Thank you. Bye!
Nurul

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THE SAMPLE ANSWER

To : [email protected]
Subject : Badminton Club
Hi Nita,
I heard that you are planning to choose a club. I would like to
suggest the Badminton Club.

It starts at 8.30 p.m. and finishes at 10.30 p.m. It is
convenience to you. It will be at the Community Hall. It is
near to your house. The fee is only RM50 monthly. It is
reasonable and worthy.
Thank you. Hope to see you soon.
Nurul.

(67 words – starting from “Hi Nita”)

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MY REFERENCE : YEAR 4 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 79)

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THE TEMPLATE : WRITING A MESSAGE

1 PARAGRAPH TEMPLATE

Salutation & Name Dear ____________________ ,
of Receiver

1 Introduction : taken from the question

Content 2
(Refer to the 3
question)

4 Closing

Closing Sincerely
______________________
Name of the
writer

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THE BLANK TEMPLATE : WRITING A MESSAGE

1 PARAGRAPH TEMPLATE

Salutation & Name
of Receiver

1

Content 2
(Refer to the 3
question)

4

Closing

Name of the
writer

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THE SAMPLE QUESTION

Taken from : Praktis Standard DSKP English Year 6 KSSR
Terbitan Bestari

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THE SAMPLE QUESTION

Taken from : Praktis Standard DSKP English Year 6 KSSR
Terbitan Bestari

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THE STEPS : F – T - C

THE STEPS F
1. Identify the format. T
2. Define the target of your writing (to whom). C
3. Identify the content.

1. The 2. The target :
format : cousin - Lily
message

3. The Content : the 37
Maryam’s birthday party

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THE SAMPLE ANSWER

1 PARAGRAPH TEMPLATE

Salutation & Name Dear Lily,

of Receiver (the name was taken from the question)

1 I would like to invite you to attend Maryam’s
birthday party with me.

Content 2 The party will be held on Sunday, April 22nd from 2.00
(Refer to the p.m. until 4.00 p.m. It is at Mutiara Hotel, Johor Bahru.
question)
It is a costume party. We will enjoy the musical
3 performance and the magic tricks there. There will

also be delicious party food.

4 I hope you can come with me. See you soon.

Closing Sincerely,
Name
Putri
(the name was taken from the question)

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TheKampungTeacher© THE SAMPLE ANSWER

Dear Lily,

I would like to invite you to attend Maryam’s birthday party
with me. The party will be held on Sunday, April 22nd from
2.00 p.m. until 4.00 p.m. It is at Mutiara Hotel, Johor Bahru.
It is a costume party. We will enjoy the musical
performance and the magic tricks there. There will also
be delicious party food. I hope you can come with me.
See you soon.

Sincerely,
Putri

(72 words)

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MY REFERENCE : YEAR 6 TEXTBOOK (PAGE 88)

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THE TEMPLATE : WRITING A FORMAL LETTER

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE

Sender’s Address

Date

Receiver’s Address

Salutation Dear___________________ ,

Subject << refer to the question >>

Body I am writing __________________________________________________
(refer to the question)
(capital letters for the 1st letter in each word)

Thank you.

Complementary Yours sincerely,
Closure << write in capital letters >>

Signature

Sender’s Name

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THE BLANK TEMPLATE : WRITING A FORMAL LETTER

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE
Sender’s Address
Date
Receiver’s Address
Salutation
Subject

Body

Complementary
Closure

Signature

Sender’s Name

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THE SAMPLE QUESTION

Taken from : Praktis Standard DSKP English Year 6 KSSR
Terbitan Bestari

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THE SAMPLE QUESTION

Taken from : Praktis Standard DSKP English Year 6 KSSR
Terbitan Bestari

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THE STEPS : F – T - C

THE STEPS F
1. Identify the format. T
2. Define the target of your writing (to whom). C
3. Identify the content.

1. The format : 2. The target :
formal letter other school

3. The Content : to join the
fund-raising carnival

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THE SAMPLE ANSWER

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE
Sender’s Address
Date SK Seri Setia,
Receiver’s Address Jalan Setia 6,
Salutation Taman Setia Indah,
Subject 46150 Petaling Jaya,
Selangor.
Body
27 May 2019

SK Bandar Baru Pulai,
Jalan Pulai Utama,
Bandar Baru Pulai,
55200 Kuala Lumpur.

Dear Headmaster,

Invitation to our Annual Fund-Raising Carnival

I am writing to inform you that our school is organizing
our Annual Fund-Raising Carnival. I wish to have your school
to join us at the event. The details are as follow :

Date : 10th June 2019
Event : Cooking contest
Venue : School Hall, SK Seri Setia
Teacher-In-Charge : Miss Nita (017-9071022)

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TheKampungTeacher© THE SAMPLE ANSWER

3 PARAGRAPHS TEMPLATE
2. We would like to invite 10 teachers with 40 pupils to the
Body event. The teachers and pupils can bring additional
contributions like books, clothes and toys.
Complementary
Closure Thank you.
Signature
Sender’s Name Yours sincerely,

Nita

(AZNITA AHMAD)

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TheKampungTeacher© THE SAMPLE ANSWER

SK Seri Setia, Date : 10th June 2019
Jalan Setia 6, Event : Cooking contest
Taman Setia Indah, Venue : School Hall, SK Seri Setia
46150 Petaling Jaya, Teacher-In-Charge :
Selangor. Miss Nita (017-9071022)

27 May 2019 2. We would like to invite 10 teachers
with 40 pupils to the event. The teachers
SK Bandar Baru Pulai, and pupils can bring additional
Jalan Pulai Utama, contributions like books, clothes and toys.
Bandar Baru Pulai, Thank you.
55200 Kuala Lumpur.
Yours sincerely,
Dear Headmaster,
Nita
Invitation to our Annual Fund-Raising
Carnival (AZNITA AHMAD)

I am writing to inform you that our 49
school is organizing our Annual Fund-
Raising Carnival. I wish to have your school
to join us at the event. The details are as
follow :